Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm.（写作提升）-2026-2027学年九年级英语上册基础知识专项讲练（新教材人教版）

**基本信息** 以“音乐”为主题，构建“方法-素材-实战”三维写作提升体系，系统提炼不同写作对象（歌曲/乐器/音乐家）的结构化表达策略及时态人称规范。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |典例导引|1|分对象构建写作框架：“结缘/评价→影响/贡献→意义/影响”，明确时态（一般过去时/现在时）和人称（一/三人称）|从写作结构到语言规范，形成“内容组织-语法运用”递进逻辑| |典例剖析|1|通过冼星海范文提炼“one of+最高级”“spend...doing...”等核心句型|以典型人物为例，示范方法落地，强化知识迁移| |素材宝库|20词汇/15短语/20句型|提供音乐主题词块及开头-中间-结尾功能句型|语言要素支撑写作内容，形成“词汇-短语-句型”三级素材链| |专项训练|10题|覆盖音乐家介绍、音乐类型、音乐作用等中考常见写作任务|从单一介绍到综合论述，实现方法应用梯度提升|

Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm . (写作提升） 音乐 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题是“音乐”，与此相关的写作任务是介绍一首歌曲或一种乐器，也可以介绍一位著名的音乐家。写作歌曲或乐器时，首先要介绍自己是如何与该歌曲或乐器结缘的，然后介绍该歌曲或乐器是如何对自己产生影响的，最后总结其对自己的积极意义；写作时，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写著名的音乐家首先对其作出总体评价，然后介绍其生平求学经历及音乐贡献，最后介绍其对当今社会的影响；写作时，时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。 [教材典句] Frederic Chopin (1810-1849)was one of the greatest musicians in history. I spent the next several months learning to play the guitar. Chopin was not only a great pianist,but also a respected piano teacher. ...that's why I liked Butterfly Lovers more. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 洗星海是中国最伟大的作曲家之一。请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇关于洗星海的介绍文章。 1.他于1905年出生于澳门，于1945年去世。 2.曾经在巴黎学习音乐。 3.在1939年用六天时间写出了《黄河大合唱》(The Yellow River Cantata) 4.他把中国音乐和西方音乐融合在一起，使全世界的人了解了中国音乐。 5.他写了许多歌曲，这些歌曲鼓舞了所有中国人，也使他闻名全国。 6.他被称为“人民音乐家(People's Musician)”。现在他的许多歌曲仍很受欢迎。 要求：l.不能逐句翻译。 2.词数不少于90。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ ⭐范文介绍⭐ Xian Xinghai was one of the greatest musicians in China. He was born in Macao in1905.He once studied music in Paris.Xian was famous for the song The Yellow River Cantata.He wrote it in 1939.He spent only six days finishing it.He was good at mixing Chinese music with Western music.His music made people all over the world learn more about Chinese music.He wrote many songs.And the songs not only inspired all the Chinese but also made him famous in China.That's why he was called "People's Musician". He died in 1945.Up to now,some of his songs have been popular. [亮点点评] ①用“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”这一结构对洗星海作出总体评价。 ②用spend..doing..结构介绍冼星海创造《黄河大合唱》的用时。 ③用not only..but also.结构介绍冼星海的歌曲的作用。 ④用“That's why.”句式介绍洗星海被称为“人民音乐家”这一荣誉。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 核心词汇积累 ① music /ˈmjuːzɪk/ n. 音乐 ② musician /mjuˈzɪʃn/ n. 音乐家；乐手 ③ instrument /ˈɪnstrəmənt/ n. 乐器 ④ rhythm /ˈrɪðəm/ n. 节奏；韵律 ⑤ melody /ˈmelədi/ n. 旋律；曲调 ⑥ lyrics /ˈlɪrɪks/ n. 歌词 ⑦ classical /ˈklæsɪkl/ adj. 古典的 ⑧ pop /pɒp/ n. 流行音乐 adj. 流行的 ⑨ folk /fəʊk/ adj. 民间的；民俗的 ⑩ jazz /dʒæz/ n. 爵士乐 ⑪ compose /kəmˈpəʊz/ v. 作曲；创作 ⑫ perform /pəˈfɔːm/ v. 演奏；表演 ⑬ talented /ˈtæləntɪd/ adj. 有天赋的 ⑭ creative /kriˈeɪtɪv/ adj. 有创造力的 ⑮ touching /ˈtʌtʃɪŋ/ adj. 动人的；感人的 ⑯ inspiring /ɪnˈspaɪərɪŋ/ adj. 鼓舞人心的 ⑰ traditional /trəˈdɪʃənl/ adj. 传统的 ⑱ admire /ədˈmaɪə(r)/ v. 钦佩；欣赏 ⑲ relaxed /rɪˈlækst/ adj. 放松的 ⑳ unforgettable /ˌʌnfəˈɡetəbl/ adj. 难忘的 高频短语积累 ① play a musical instrument 弹奏乐器 ② sing along with music 随音乐哼唱 ③ dance to the rhythm 跟随节奏跳舞 ④ classical music 古典音乐 ⑤ folk music 民间音乐；民乐 ⑥ pop music 流行音乐 ⑦ have a talent for music 有音乐天赋 ⑧ be famous for music 因音乐闻名 ⑨ touch people’s hearts 触动人心 ⑩ make people relaxed 使人身心放松 ⑪ pass down from generation to generation 代代相传 ⑫ write original songs 创作原创歌曲 ⑬ give a concert 举办音乐会 ⑭ full of positive energy 充满正能量 ⑮ in my spare time 在我的空闲时间 句型积累 开头引入句 ① Music is an important part of our daily life. 音乐是我们日常生活中重要的一部分。 ② Among all kinds of art, music is my favorite. 在所有艺术形式中，音乐是我的最爱。 ③ I’d like to introduce my favorite song/instrument/musician to you. 我想向大家介绍我最喜欢的一首歌/一种乐器/一位音乐家。 ④ There is a kind of music that always warms my heart. 有一种音乐总能温暖我的内心。 ⑤ Many great musicians have made great contributions to the world of music. 许多伟大的音乐家为音乐界做出了巨大贡献。 中间描述句 ① This song has soft melody and simple but meaningful lyrics. 这首歌旋律轻柔，歌词简洁却富有深意。 ② The musical instrument has a history of hundreds of years. 这种乐器拥有数百年的历史。 ③ He showed great musical talent when he was a little child. 他小时候就展现出了过人的音乐天赋。 ④ I love this music because it can calm me down when I feel upset. 我喜欢这首音乐，因为它能在我失落时让我平静下来。 ⑤ The musician devotes most of his time to creating new music. 这位音乐家将大部分时间都投入到创作新音乐中。 ⑥ Folk music carries the culture and feelings of local people. 民间音乐承载着当地人的文化与情感。 ⑦ I often play this instrument to relax myself after studying. 学习过后，我常常弹奏这个乐器放松自己。 ⑧ His works are full of hope and always inspire young people. 他的作品充满希望，一直激励着年轻人。 ⑨ This piece of music is popular with people of all ages. 这首音乐深受各个年龄段的人喜爱。 ⑩ By learning music, I have learned to be patient and creative. 通过学习音乐，我学会了耐心和创新。 结尾总结句 ① This song/instrument/musician means a lot to me. 这首歌/这个乐器/这位音乐家对我意义非凡。 ② I hope this beautiful music will be passed down forever. 我希望这美妙的音乐能够永远传承下去。 ③ Music enriches my life and brings me endless happiness. 音乐丰富了我的生活，带给我无尽的快乐。 ④ I will keep loving music and learn more about it in the future. 未来我会一直热爱音乐，深入了解它。 ⑤ It is truly a treasure in the field of art. 它确实是艺术领域中的一笔财富。 谚语名句 ① Music is the language of the soul. 音乐是心灵的语言。 ② Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. 音乐能洗去日常生活中灵魂的尘埃。 ③ Life without music is like a bird without wings. 人生没有音乐，如同鸟儿没有翅膀。 ④ Good music can touch everyone’s heart. 好的音乐能够触动每一个人的心灵。 ⑤ Music has the power to heal and inspire. 音乐拥有治愈人心、催人奋进的力量。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．音乐将世间万物带进了美好的时空，它在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，每听到音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。你校英语俱乐部在下周的主题例会上会对喜欢的音乐进行讨论，作为俱乐部成员，请你根据下面的提示写一篇文章和大家分享。 1. 要点提示： (1) What kinds of music do you like? And why? (描述三种不同类型的音乐及原因) (2 )Which do you like best and what have you got from it? (3) As a middle school student, are you supposed to listen to music in your spare time? What are your opinions and the reasons? 2. 写作要求： (1) 短文要包含所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； (3) 字数80-120。 My Favourite Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】    My Favourite Music       Music plays an important role in my life. I like pop music because it is lively. I also enjoy classical music which makes me calm. Besides, folk music tells beautiful stories. Among them, I like pop music best. It encourages me when I am down. As a middle school student, I think we should listen to music in spare time. It helps us relax after studying hard. However, we shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long. Music makes life colorful. Let’s enjoy music properly. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]    确定文体：介绍性记叙文，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：描述三种音乐及原因、说明最喜爱的音乐及收获并阐述中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 确定人称：第一人称(I/my) 注意事项：文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校        [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构：    开头段：总起句点明音乐在生活中的重要性，引出下文 主体段：依次介绍三种音乐及原因、最喜欢的音乐及收获、对中学生在课余听音乐的看法与理由 结尾段：总结音乐的作用，发出合理享受音乐的倡议，升华主题        [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：三种不同类型的音乐及原因 音乐选择：pop music/classical music/folk music/country music等 具体原因：lively/makes me calm/tells beautiful stories/happy等 要点二：最喜欢的音乐及收获 选择：pop music/country music等 收获：encourages me when I am down/makes me confident等 要点三：中学生课余听音乐的观点与理由 观点：listen to music in spare time/listen properly等 理由：helps relax after studying/shouldn’t listen too loudly or too long/balance listening to music and study properly等    2．音乐在我们的生活中起着很重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，至少用两个定语从句。 要点提示： 1.放松身心，缓解压力； 2.振奋并鼓舞人心； 3.抚慰心灵，帮助走出困境； 4.帮助更好地了解不同的文化。 注意：可根据自己对音乐的理解适当发挥。 The Role of Music ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Role of Music Music plays an important role in our daily life. It is a powerful tool that can help us relax our mind and reduce stress. There is also music which can cheer us up and inspire us. When we feel sad or face difficulties, music that soothes our souls can help us find a way out. Furthermore, music is a bridge through which we can better understand different cultures. In short, life without music would be dull and colorless. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明类短文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍音乐放松减压、鼓舞人心、治愈心灵、了解文化四大作用，必须使用至少两个定语从句 确定人称：第三人称为主 注意事项：80词左右，句式高级、包含定语从句、无真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起全文，点明音乐在生活中至关重要 主体段：分层列举音乐的四大功能，全程使用定语从句提升句式 结尾段：简单总结，升华音乐让生活精彩美好 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：总体地位 核心表达：play an important role in daily life/be an essential part of our life 要点二：放松减压 功能表达：relax our body and mind/reduce daily stress/relieve tired feelings 要点三：鼓舞人心 功能表达：cheer us up/inspire us to move forward/give us courage 要点四：治愈心灵 功能表达：soothe our souls/comfort sad feelings/help us get out of difficulties 要点五：了解文化 功能表达：serve as a cultural bridge/help us learn different cultures/enrich our horizons 3．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”这足以体现音乐对人类发展的影响。请你根据以下要点和要求，以“Music”为题，写一篇短文。 要点： 1.音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐； 2.没有音乐，生活就没有乐趣； 3.你最喜欢的音乐及原因； 4.你不能忍受的音乐及原因。 要求： 1.短文必须包括所有要点内容，可适当增加细节； 2.词数100左右。 Music _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Music Music is like a good friend that makes us happy and full of energy. Just think, without music, life would be so boring! My favorite music is pop music because it’s usually catchy and easy to understand. It also reminds me of my friends and the good times we have. However, I don’t like music that is too loud or has a lot of noise. It can hurt my ears and make it hard to concentrate. Music is important to me. It’s a beautiful way to express feelings and it makes the world a more interesting place. 例文二 Music Music is a wonderful gift that brings happiness and energy to our lives. Without music, the world would be a very dull place. My personal favorite is pop music. I love how it’s easy to listen to and often has fun, memorable lyrics.  On the other hand, I find it hard to enjoy music that is too harsh or filled with noise. I prefer music that has a clear rhythm and a tune that I can hum along to. In conclusion, music is a universal language that speaks to people of all ages and cultures. It has the power to bring people together and create shared experiences. 【详解】写作步骤   [第一步：审题立意]   确定文体：议论文，时态以一般现在时为主 明确要点：音乐的重要性、最喜欢和不能忍受的音乐及原因   确定人称：第一人称和第三人称 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：介绍音乐的重要性 主体段：介绍你最喜欢和不能忍受的音乐及原因 结尾段：总结，再次强调音乐的重要性 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：音乐的重要性 重要性：make us happy and full of energy/make any moment more fun/make us feel alive and excited/without music, life would be so boring等 要点二：最喜欢的音乐及原因 音乐：pop music/classical music等   原因：catchy and easy to understand/remind me of my friends and the good times we have/relaxing等   要点三：不能忍受的音乐及原因 音乐：music that is too loud or has a lot of noise/music with a lot of heavy metal or aggressive sounds等   原因：hurt my ears and make it hard to concentrate/overwhelming and not pleasing to the ears等 4．每个人心中都有一首自己最喜欢的歌。假如某英文报正在举办以“My favorite song”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文参加此次征文活动，和大家一起分享你最喜欢的那首歌。 内容包括：1. What’s the name of it? 2.Who sang it? 3.Why do you like it? 要求：1. 恰当运用本单元所学语法——关系代词引导的定语从句；2. 内容要全面、紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；3. 词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 My favorite song My favorite song is _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you’re interested in it, you can listen to it in your spare time. 【答案】 My favorite song   My favorite song is “Yesterday Once More”, which was sung by the famous band called The Carpenters.   I first heard it when I was ten years old. The melody is so sweet that I can’t help singing along with it. I like it because the lyrics which talk about old memories touch my heart deeply. Whenever I feel sad or very tired, this song that brings me peace and courage makes me feel much better. It teaches me to cherish the good old days and love life. Music is a loyal friend who always stays with us. I hope you can enjoy it too.   If you’re interested in it, you can listen to it in your spare time. 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：[审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：介绍最喜欢的歌曲名称；介绍歌曲的演唱者/乐队；说明喜欢这首歌的原因；恰当运用关系代词引导的定语从句 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数不少于100（不含已给开头结尾） ， 需自然融入定语从句，保证语句通顺连贯 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明最喜欢的歌曲名称及演唱者，用定语从句补充说明歌曲信息。 主体段：分点阐述喜欢这首歌的原因，结合旋律、歌词、自身经历展开，多处使用定语从句。 结尾段：升华主题，说明歌曲对自己的影响，发出邀请（呼应已给结尾）。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：歌曲信息 歌曲名：“Yesterday Once More”/“Thank You”等 要点二：喜欢原因 原因：the lyrics which talk about old memories touch my heart deeply/brings me peace and courage makes me feel much better/its warm lyrics that tell people to be thankful for the love around them等 要点三：主题升华 结尾升华：Music is a loyal friend who always stays with us/teaches me to be a person who is always thankful and kind to others等 5．《二泉映月》（ “The Moon over a Fountain” ）是中国民间音乐家阿炳（Ah Bing） 的代表作，是中国著名传统乐曲。以下是有关阿炳的简介，请根据以下要点提示， 简单介绍一下他。 写作要点： 1. 阿炳出生于 1893 年，逝世于 1950 年； 2. 家乡：江苏省无锡市； 3. 个人经历：早年丧母，后来跟随父亲学习鼓、二胡，12 岁时可以演奏多种乐器； 4. 34岁时失明，但并没有放弃演奏，因《二泉映月》而出名。 写作要求： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 2. 70—80 词。 参考词汇：instrument 乐器；lose one’s eyesight 失明；give up 放弃 erhu 二胡 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】   Abing was one of the greatest Chinese folk musicians. He was famous for his The Moon Over a Fountain. He was born in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province in 1893 and died in 1950. His mother died when he was young. And he started to learn to play the drums and erhu from his father. At the age of twelve, he could play all kinds of instruments. When he was thirty-four, he lost his eyesight, but he didn’t give up playing. What a great man! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山介绍阿炳是中国最伟大的民间音乐家之一； 第二步，从出生及去世时间、家乡、个人经历等方面具体介绍阿炳； 第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……而著名 ②be born in出生在某地 ③give up放弃 [高分句型] ①When he was thirty-four, he lost his eyesight, but he didn’t give up playing. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②What a great man!(what引导的感叹句) 6．你一定听说过贝多芬(Beethoven) 这位伟大的音乐家吧。请根据以下信息写一篇80词左右的短文介绍他。 提示： (1)贝多芬是世界上最伟大的音乐家之一； (2)1770 年12 月出生于波恩(Bonn)； (3)五岁开始学习弹钢琴，七岁开始当众(in public)演奏； (4)年轻时开始失去听觉(deaf 聋的)； (5)1827 年去世。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Beethoven is one of the greatest musicians in the world. He was born in Bonn, Germany in December, 1770. When he was 5 years old, he began to learn to play the piano. At the age of 7, he began to play the piano in public. He was slowly becoming deaf when he was young. He died in 1827. We still remember this famous musician today. People all over the world are still enjoying his beautiful music today. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍音乐家贝多芬，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题； 第二步，根据题干中的提示信息介绍贝多芬的生平； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①one of the+最高级+名词复数   最……的……之一 ②at the age of在……岁时 ③all over the world全世界 [高分句型] When he was 5 years old, he began to learn to play the piano.(when引导时间状语从句) 7．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike想了解中国的钢琴家郎朗，根据以下信息写一篇英文邮件，介绍一下郎朗。 要点： (1) 1982年6月14日出生于沈阳； (2) 三岁的时候开始学钢琴，五岁到十岁之间获得了许多比赛冠军； (3) 1997年去美国学习，并在白宫成功举行音乐会； (4) 已经成为世界上最著名的钢琴家之一。 参考词汇：比赛 competition；钢琴家 pianist；白宫 the White House 要求： (1) 结合要点，适当发挥； (2) 语法正确，书写工整； (3) 词数在70左右，邮件的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike,     I’m happy to hear from you. You want to know about Lang Lang. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, I’m happy to hear from you. You want to know about Lang Lang. Let me tell you something about him. He was born in Shenyang on June 14, 1982. He began to learn piano when he was a three-year-old boy. He won many championships between the ages of five and ten. In 1997, he went to the United States to study and successfully held a concert in the White House. He has become one of the most famous pianists in the world. We should also learn from him and work hard to realize our dreams. If we do so, we will be successful like Lang Lang. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，是一封电子邮件； ②时态：本文主要用一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，交代写作目的，给你介绍郎朗； ②第二步，从出生日期，个人经历以及现在的地位等方面来介绍郎朗； ③第三步，表明我们应向郎朗学习什么。 [亮点词汇] ①tell sb about sth告诉某人关于某事 ②begin to do开始做某事 ③hold a concert举办一场音乐会 ④one of+最高级+名词复数“最……的……之一” [高分句型] ①He began to learn piano when he was a three-year-old boy. (when引导的时间状语从句) ②If we do so, we will be successful like Lang Lang. (if引导的条件状语从句) 8．假如你是李华，你的外国好友Mike给你发来邮件，想要了解你最喜爱的音乐。请根据以下提示，写一封回信，内容包括： (1)你最喜欢的音乐类型及原因； (2)分享一个你和音乐之间的故事； (3)你对音乐的感受。 注意： (1)词数80~100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)语言准确，层次清晰，书写规范； (4)邮件中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mike, How is everything going?_________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】 Dear Mike, How is everything going? My favorite music is light music, because it’s soft and peaceful, and always helps me relax after a busy day. Last year, I failed an important exam and felt really upset. Then I listened to a gentle light music piece every night before bed. It calmed me down and gave me the courage to keep working hard. Now I still listen to it often when I feel tired or stressed. For me, music is like a warm friend. It can cheer me up and make my days feel brighter. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文 (电子邮件)，以一般现在时为主，叙述个人故事时用一般过去时 明确要点：最喜欢的音乐类型及原因、分享一个与音乐之间的故事、感受 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) 注意事项：80~100词，开头和结尾不计入总词数；不得透露真实姓名和学校信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：以给出的问候句引入话题，自然过渡到音乐主题 主体段：依次介绍音乐类型与原因、个人与音乐的故事 结尾段：表达对音乐的整体感受，收束全文 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：喜好缘由 关键表达：light music/soft and peaceful/helps me relax/after a busy day等 要点二：音乐故事 关键表达：failed an exam/felt upset/listened to music every night/calmed me down/gave me courage/feel tired or stressed等 要点三：个人感悟 关键表达：like a warm friend/cheer me up/make my days brighter等 9．音乐在我们的生活中起着很重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你喜欢的音乐类型（古典乐、摇滚乐……）； 2. 你的理由（放松身心，缓解压力；抚慰心灵，帮助走出困境……）。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100（标题已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 The Role of Music in My Life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 The Role of Music in My Life Music has always been an important part of my life. I enjoy listening to pop music because it energizes me and helps me stay positive. Whenever I feel stressed or upset, a soothing melody can help me relax. Music also inspires my creativity, especially when I’m studying or working on projects. One of my favorite memories is performing a guitar solo at my school’s talent show. That experience taught me the power of music to bring people together and create unforgettable moments. Music truly enriches my life in many ways. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章完整覆盖核心要点，包含“音乐在生活中的重要地位、喜欢流行音乐的原因、音乐对情绪和创造力的作用、才艺表演的难忘回忆、音乐的最终价值”，信息全面，逻辑连贯，从日常影响到具体事例层层递进。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题：直接点明“音乐是我生活中重要的一部分”，快速锁定文章核心主题，奠定全文的情感基调； 第二步，分述音乐的日常作用：先说明自己喜欢流行音乐的原因，再讲音乐在缓解压力、平复情绪、激发创造力方面的具体作用，从不同维度展现音乐的价值； 第三步，补充具体事例升华主题：回忆在校园才艺表演中弹吉他独奏的经历，点明这段经历让自己懂得音乐凝聚人心的力量，最后总结音乐从多方面丰富生活，收束自然有力。 [亮点词汇] ①an important part of重要的一部分 ②energize sb.使某人充满活力 ③stay positive保持积极 ④soothing melody舒缓的旋律 ⑤inspire creativity激发创造力 [高分句型] ①I enjoy listening to pop music because it energizes me and helps me stay positive.（because引导原因状语从句） ②Whenever I feel stressed or upset, a soothing melody can help me relax.（whenever引导让步状语从句） ③One of my favorite memories is performing a guitar solo at my school’s talent show.（使用“one of+复数名词”固定结构） 10.假如你是李华，很喜欢音乐，你的加拿大笔友Julie和你有相同的爱好，她想了解你的具体情况。请你根据下列写作要点写一封电子邮件回复她。 写作要点： 1. Why do you like music? 2. What kind of music do you prefer? 3. Which song do you like best? Why do you like it? 要求： 1. 内容应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Julie, I’m happy that we have the same hobby and we can talk about music together. _______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Dear Julie, I’m happy that we have the same hobby and we can talk about music together. First, I love music because it brings me great joy and helps me relax after a long day of studying. It makes me feel energetic and happy. Second, I prefer pop music. It has nice and fun tunes and meaningful words, so I often listen to it while I am doing homework. Third, my favorite song is “Imagine” by John Lennon. I like it because it talks about peace and hope, which inspires me a lot. I hope we can share more songs soon. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材： 本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“写作要点”中关于音乐喜好、原因及具体歌曲的介绍要点，适当增加细节，使文章重点突出。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，表明与对方有相同爱好并可一起谈论音乐，为下文介绍自己的音乐喜好作铺垫； 第二步，具体介绍自己爱音乐的原因、偏好的音乐类型及原因、最喜欢的歌曲及原因等内容； 第三步，结尾表达希望，希望很快能分享更多歌曲。 [亮点词汇] ①great joy极大的快乐 ②relax after a long day of studying在长时间学习后放松 ③nice and fun tunes朗朗上口且有趣的旋律 ④meaningful words有意义的歌词 ⑤talks about peace and hope谈论和平与希望 [高分句型] ①It has nice and fun tunes and meaningful words, so I often listen to it while I am doing homework. (so连接因果关系的两个句子，while引导时间状语从句) ②I like it because it talks about peace and hope, which inspires me a lot. (because引导原因状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句) $Unit 7 Feel the Rhythm . (写作提升） 音乐 ⭐典例导引⭐ 本单元的话题是“音乐”，与此相关的写作任务是介绍一首歌曲或一种乐器，也可以介绍一位著名的音乐家。写作歌曲或乐器时，首先要介绍自己是如何与该歌曲或乐器结缘的，然后介绍该歌曲或乐器是如何对自己产生影响的，最后总结其对自己的积极意义；写作时，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。写著名的音乐家首先对其作出总体评价，然后介绍其生平求学经历及音乐贡献，最后介绍其对当今社会的影响；写作时，时态以一般过去时为主，人称以第三人称为主。 [教材典句] Frederic Chopin (1810-1849)was one of the greatest musicians in history. I spent the next several months learning to play the guitar. Chopin was not only a great pianist,but also a respected piano teacher. ...that's why I liked Butterfly Lovers more. ⭐典例剖析⭐ 洗星海是中国最伟大的作曲家之一。请根据下面的提示内容，写一篇关于洗星海的介绍文章。 1.他于1905年出生于澳门，于1945年去世。 2.曾经在巴黎学习音乐。 3.在1939年用六天时间写出了《黄河大合唱》(The Yellow River Cantata) 4.他把中国音乐和西方音乐融合在一起，使全世界的人了解了中国音乐。 5.他写了许多歌曲，这些歌曲鼓舞了所有中国人，也使他闻名全国。 6.他被称为“人民音乐家(People's Musician)”。现在他的许多歌曲仍很受欢迎。 要求：l.不能逐句翻译。 2.词数不少于90。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ⭐思维导图⭐ ⭐范文介绍⭐ Xian Xinghai was one of the greatest musicians in China. He was born in Macao in1905.He once studied music in Paris.Xian was famous for the song The Yellow River Cantata.He wrote it in 1939.He spent only six days finishing it.He was good at mixing Chinese music with Western music.His music made people all over the world learn more about Chinese music.He wrote many songs.And the songs not only inspired all the Chinese but also made him famous in China.That's why he was called "People's Musician". He died in 1945.Up to now,some of his songs have been popular. [亮点点评] ①用“one of the+形容词最高级+可数名词复数”这一结构对洗星海作出总体评价。 ②用spend..doing..结构介绍冼星海创造《黄河大合唱》的用时。 ③用not only..but also.结构介绍冼星海的歌曲的作用。 ④用“That's why.”句式介绍洗星海被称为“人民音乐家”这一荣誉。 ⭐素材宝库⭐ 词汇积累 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 核心词汇积累 ① music /ˈmjuːzɪk/ n. 音乐 ② musician /mjuˈzɪʃn/ n. 音乐家；乐手 ③ instrument /ˈɪnstrəmənt/ n. 乐器 ④ rhythm /ˈrɪðəm/ n. 节奏；韵律 ⑤ melody /ˈmelədi/ n. 旋律；曲调 ⑥ lyrics /ˈlɪrɪks/ n. 歌词 ⑦ classical /ˈklæsɪkl/ adj. 古典的 ⑧ pop /pɒp/ n. 流行音乐 adj. 流行的 ⑨ folk /fəʊk/ adj. 民间的；民俗的 ⑩ jazz /dʒæz/ n. 爵士乐 ⑪ compose /kəmˈpəʊz/ v. 作曲；创作 ⑫ perform /pəˈfɔːm/ v. 演奏；表演 ⑬ talented /ˈtæləntɪd/ adj. 有天赋的 ⑭ creative /kriˈeɪtɪv/ adj. 有创造力的 ⑮ touching /ˈtʌtʃɪŋ/ adj. 动人的；感人的 ⑯ inspiring /ɪnˈspaɪərɪŋ/ adj. 鼓舞人心的 ⑰ traditional /trəˈdɪʃənl/ adj. 传统的 ⑱ admire /ədˈmaɪə(r)/ v. 钦佩；欣赏 ⑲ relaxed /rɪˈlækst/ adj. 放松的 ⑳ unforgettable /ˌʌnfəˈɡetəbl/ adj. 难忘的 高频短语积累 ① play a musical instrument 弹奏乐器 ② sing along with music 随音乐哼唱 ③ dance to the rhythm 跟随节奏跳舞 ④ classical music 古典音乐 ⑤ folk music 民间音乐；民乐 ⑥ pop music 流行音乐 ⑦ have a talent for music 有音乐天赋 ⑧ be famous for music 因音乐闻名 ⑨ touch people’s hearts 触动人心 ⑩ make people relaxed 使人身心放松 ⑪ pass down from generation to generation 代代相传 ⑫ write original songs 创作原创歌曲 ⑬ give a concert 举办音乐会 ⑭ full of positive energy 充满正能量 ⑮ in my spare time 在我的空闲时间 句型积累 开头引入句 ① Music is an important part of our daily life. 音乐是我们日常生活中重要的一部分。 ② Among all kinds of art, music is my favorite. 在所有艺术形式中，音乐是我的最爱。 ③ I’d like to introduce my favorite song/instrument/musician to you. 我想向大家介绍我最喜欢的一首歌/一种乐器/一位音乐家。 ④ There is a kind of music that always warms my heart. 有一种音乐总能温暖我的内心。 ⑤ Many great musicians have made great contributions to the world of music. 许多伟大的音乐家为音乐界做出了巨大贡献。 中间描述句 ① This song has soft melody and simple but meaningful lyrics. 这首歌旋律轻柔，歌词简洁却富有深意。 ② The musical instrument has a history of hundreds of years. 这种乐器拥有数百年的历史。 ③ He showed great musical talent when he was a little child. 他小时候就展现出了过人的音乐天赋。 ④ I love this music because it can calm me down when I feel upset. 我喜欢这首音乐，因为它能在我失落时让我平静下来。 ⑤ The musician devotes most of his time to creating new music. 这位音乐家将大部分时间都投入到创作新音乐中。 ⑥ Folk music carries the culture and feelings of local people. 民间音乐承载着当地人的文化与情感。 ⑦ I often play this instrument to relax myself after studying. 学习过后，我常常弹奏这个乐器放松自己。 ⑧ His works are full of hope and always inspire young people. 他的作品充满希望，一直激励着年轻人。 ⑨ This piece of music is popular with people of all ages. 这首音乐深受各个年龄段的人喜爱。 ⑩ By learning music, I have learned to be patient and creative. 通过学习音乐，我学会了耐心和创新。 结尾总结句 ① This song/instrument/musician means a lot to me. 这首歌/这个乐器/这位音乐家对我意义非凡。 ② I hope this beautiful music will be passed down forever. 我希望这美妙的音乐能够永远传承下去。 ③ Music enriches my life and brings me endless happiness. 音乐丰富了我的生活，带给我无尽的快乐。 ④ I will keep loving music and learn more about it in the future. 未来我会一直热爱音乐，深入了解它。 ⑤ It is truly a treasure in the field of art. 它确实是艺术领域中的一笔财富。 谚语名句 ① Music is the language of the soul. 音乐是心灵的语言。 ② Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life. 音乐能洗去日常生活中灵魂的尘埃。 ③ Life without music is like a bird without wings. 人生没有音乐，如同鸟儿没有翅膀。 ④ Good music can touch everyone’s heart. 好的音乐能够触动每一个人的心灵。 ⑤ Music has the power to heal and inspire. 音乐拥有治愈人心、催人奋进的力量。 ⭐专项训练⭐ 1．音乐将世间万物带进了美好的时空，它在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色，每听到音乐，我们就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。你校英语俱乐部在下周的主题例会上会对喜欢的音乐进行讨论，作为俱乐部成员，请你根据下面的提示写一篇文章和大家分享。 1. 要点提示： (1) What kinds of music do you like? And why? (描述三种不同类型的音乐及原因) (2 )Which do you like best and what have you got from it? (3) As a middle school student, are you supposed to listen to music in your spare time? What are your opinions and the reasons? 2. 写作要求： (1) 短文要包含所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； (2) 文中不能出现真实的姓名和学校； (3) 字数80-120。 My Favourite Music _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．音乐在我们的生活中起着很重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music”为题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，至少用两个定语从句。 要点提示： 1.放松身心，缓解压力； 2.振奋并鼓舞人心； 3.抚慰心灵，帮助走出困境； 4.帮助更好地了解不同的文化。 注意：可根据自己对音乐的理解适当发挥。 The Role of Music ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．作家雨果说过：“开启人类智慧的钥匙有三把，一是字母，二是数字，三是音符。”这足以体现音乐对人类发展的影响。请你根据以下要点和要求，以“Music”为题，写一篇短文。 要点： 1.音乐使人充满活力，让人快乐； 2.没有音乐，生活就没有乐趣； 3.你最喜欢的音乐及原因； 4.你不能忍受的音乐及原因。 要求： 1.短文必须包括所有要点内容，可适当增加细节； 2.词数100左右。 Music _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．每个人心中都有一首自己最喜欢的歌。假如某英文报正在举办以“My favorite song”为题的征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文参加此次征文活动，和大家一起分享你最喜欢的那首歌。 内容包括：1. What’s the name of it? 2.Who sang it? 3.Why do you like it? 要求：1. 恰当运用本单元所学语法——关系代词引导的定语从句；2. 内容要全面、紧扣主题，语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；3. 词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。 My favorite song My favorite song is _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ If you’re interested in it, you can listen to it in your spare time. 5．《二泉映月》（ “The Moon over a Fountain” ）是中国民间音乐家阿炳（Ah Bing） 的代表作，是中国著名传统乐曲。以下是有关阿炳的简介，请根据以下要点提示， 简单介绍一下他。 写作要点： 1. 阿炳出生于 1893 年，逝世于 1950 年； 2. 家乡：江苏省无锡市； 3. 个人经历：早年丧母，后来跟随父亲学习鼓、二胡，12 岁时可以演奏多种乐器； 4. 34岁时失明，但并没有放弃演奏，因《二泉映月》而出名。 写作要求： 1. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确； 2. 70—80 词。 参考词汇：instrument 乐器；lose one’s eyesight 失明；give up 放弃 erhu 二胡 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．你一定听说过贝多芬(Beethoven) 这位伟大的音乐家吧。请根据以下信息写一篇80词左右的短文介绍他。 提示： (1)贝多芬是世界上最伟大的音乐家之一； (2)1770 年12 月出生于波恩(Bonn)； (3)五岁开始学习弹钢琴，七岁开始当众(in public)演奏； (4)年轻时开始失去听觉(deaf 聋的)； (5)1827 年去世。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike想了解中国的钢琴家郎朗，根据以下信息写一篇英文邮件，介绍一下郎朗。 要点： (1) 1982年6月14日出生于沈阳； (2) 三岁的时候开始学钢琴，五岁到十岁之间获得了许多比赛冠军； (3) 1997年去美国学习，并在白宫成功举行音乐会； (4) 已经成为世界上最著名的钢琴家之一。 参考词汇：比赛 competition；钢琴家 pianist；白宫 the White House 要求： (1) 结合要点，适当发挥； (2) 语法正确，书写工整； (3) 词数在70左右，邮件的开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mike,     I’m happy to hear from you. You want to know about Lang Lang. _____________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 8．假如你是李华，你的外国好友Mike给你发来邮件，想要了解你最喜爱的音乐。请根据以下提示，写一封回信，内容包括： (1)你最喜欢的音乐类型及原因； (2)分享一个你和音乐之间的故事； (3)你对音乐的感受。 注意： (1)词数80~100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)语言准确，层次清晰，书写规范； (4)邮件中不能出现自己的真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mike, How is everything going?_________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 9．音乐在我们的生活中起着很重要的作用。请根据以下提示，以“The Role of Music in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 你喜欢的音乐类型（古典乐、摇滚乐……）； 2. 你的理由（放松身心，缓解压力；抚慰心灵，帮助走出困境……）。 注意： 1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数80~100（标题已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 The Role of Music in My Life __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.假如你是李华，很喜欢音乐，你的加拿大笔友Julie和你有相同的爱好，她想了解你的具体情况。请你根据下列写作要点写一封电子邮件回复她。 写作要点： 1. Why do you like music? 2. What kind of music do you prefer? 3. Which song do you like best? Why do you like it? 要求： 1. 内容应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥； 2. 不少于80词，电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，但不计入总词数。 Dear Julie, I’m happy that we have the same hobby and we can talk about music together. _______________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $