摘要:
**基本信息**
练习以“以读促写”为核心,通过基础版与提升版分层设计,构建从句型仿写到语篇应用的知识巩固路径,培养语言表达能力与逻辑思维品质。
**分层设计**
|层次|知识覆盖|设计特色|
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|基础版|核心句型(it’s the first time for sb. to do等)、简单建议框架|提供模板化写作结构,如“了解社团+根据爱好选择+时间规划”,侧重基础考点直接应用|
|提升版|复杂句式(宾语从句)、过渡词(To begin with等)、综合建议逻辑|强化语篇连贯性,融入名言引用(Actions speak louder than words),实现从单一知识点到语篇输出的进阶|
内容正文:
Unit 8 Let’s Communicate!以读促写
A 教材主题分析
本单元写作核心情境:撰写邀请讲座书信、给朋友写建议类回信,属于 “人与社会” 主题,子主题为人际交往、亲子沟通。常考文体:书信、邮件等应用文;核心考点:邀请句型、提建议句型、if 条件状语从句、it 固定句型、look forward to、it’s the first time for sb. to do 等,时态以一般现在时为主。
A 教材写作解读
写作题目:A Letter to Invite Students and Parents to the Speech
审题指导
1. 文体: ________
2. 人称: ________
3. 时态: ________
4. 写作要点:① ________;② ________;③ ________;④ ________
预留答题要点:应用文;以第一人称为主;一般现在时;讲座举办时间;讲座主题;参与讲座的意义;发出邀约、表达期待
思路点拨
开头:We would like to invite all students and parents to take part in our school speech.
主体三层:讲座日期与具体时间、讲座主题、参与讲座的好处
结尾:送上祝福,期待大家到场
范文品读
Dear students and parents,
We would like to invite you to take part in a useful speech held in our school. The speech will start at 3 p.m. on March 20th in the school hall, and its theme is “Good Communication Between Parents and Kids”.
If you join this speech, you will find it easy to learn skills for better communication. It will be the first time for most families to listen to such professional sharing. All the skills we learn will help us build warmer family relationships.
We are fully confident that this speech will bring great changes to your family life. We are looking forward to meeting you there.
Best wishes!
句型对标单元考点
1. invite sb. to do sth. 邀请某人做某事:We would like to invite you to take part in a useful speech.
2. if 引导条件状语从句:If you join this speech, you will find it easy to learn skills for better communication.
3. find it + adj. + to do sth. 发现做某事……:you will find it easy to learn skills for better communication.
4. it’s the first time for sb. to do sth. 某人第一次做某事:It will be the first time for most families to listen to such professional sharing.
5. look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事:We are looking forward to meeting you there.
A 教材素材积累
开头句
教材原句:We would like to invite you to give a speech at our Education Talk event.
仿写任务:我们想要邀请你加入校园兴趣社团。
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中间句
6. 教材原句:It was the first time for my cousin to visit Beijing.
仿写:这是你第一次参加社团活动,一定要提前了解各个社团详情。
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7. 原句仿写基础版:This is the perfect way to join different clubs.
升格版(宾语从句):This is the perfect way to join clubs and discover hobbies that truly suit you.
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结尾句
教材原句:I hope you’ll be able to make it.
仿写:希望我的建议能够帮到你。
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名言积累
1. Actions speak louder than words. 事实胜于雄辩。
2. Smooth communication shortens the distance between people. 顺畅的沟通拉近人与人的距离。
A 教材写作应用
写作任务
假定你是李华,你的好友 Tom 来信倾诉:第一次参加校园兴趣社团,不知道如何挑选合适社团,请你给他写一封 80 词左右英文回信,给出实用建议。
Tom 来信参考:
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going? I plan to join school clubs this summer vacation. It’s my first time to join clubs, and I have no idea how to choose. Could you offer me some advice?
Tom
审题指导
1. 文体: ________
2. 人称: ________
3. 时态: ________
4. 写作要点:① ________;② ________;③ ________
预留答题要点:应用文;第二人称为主;一般现在时;写信目的(回应对方求助);挑选社团的多条具体建议;送上祝福、期待对方顺利选社团
思路提纲
开头:写明写信目的,安慰对方不必焦虑
主体建议三层:提前了解全部社团、根据自身爱好选择、合理规划社团活动时间,不耽误学业
结尾:表达祝愿,希望对方享受社团生活
可用写作素材:learn about all clubs;choose clubs based on hobbies;balance study and club activities
小试身手
基础版
Dear Tom,
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It’s common for new students to feel worried about choosing clubs. As the saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words.” Here are my suggestions for you.
First, you need to learn about every club’s activities clearly. It’s the first time for you to join clubs, so you must know all clubs well. Second, pick clubs that match your own hobbies. It’s the perfect way to join club groups. Besides, you should plan your time properly. Schoolwork is important, so never spend too much time on club activities.
I hope my advice can help you a lot.
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Yours,
Li Hua
提升版
Dear Tom,
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I’m sorry to hear you feel confused about club choices. Don’t avoid the problem, and I have some useful advice for you.
To begin with, you should learn full information about all school clubs. It’s the first time for you to join clubs, so make sure you know each club clearly. What’s more, think about your hobbies and choose suitable clubs. It’s the perfect way to join clubs and discover hobbies that truly suit you. Last but not least, make sure club time won’t conflict with your study. School lessons come first, so don’t take part in too many club activities.
All in all, I wish you can solve this problem easily and have fun in clubs.
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Yours,
Li Hua
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