Unit5 Teamwork 写作专项：My teamwork experience 记叙文（团队合作经历）2026-2027学年沪教版（五四学制）八年级英语上册

该初中英语导学案以“Teamwork”为主题，聚焦记叙文写作专项，整体目标是掌握三段式结构、原因状语从句运用、一般过去时等单元核心知识点，完成80-120词完整叙事短文。导学设计通过写作分析、模板构建、范文示范、填空练习的递进式任务，构建从结构理解到语法运用再到实践输出的完整学习路径，体现知识建构的系统性和连贯性。 亮点在于“三段式写作模板+原因状语从句专项训练”的融合设计，结合“手工比赛合作经历”范文分析和填空练习，引导学生用because/as/since描述团队分工缘由，培养语言表达能力和逻辑思维品质。每环节设置具体语言支架，帮助学生从模仿到独立完成有感染力的结尾，既支持学生深度学习，又为教师单元写作复习提供清晰的教学指导。

沪教英语五四学制八年级上册 Unit5 Teamwork 写作专项： My teamwork experience 记叙文（团队合作经历） 一、写作题目 You are going to post your own teamwork story on the TEEN-Land Forum. Write a short story titled My teamwork experience about a time you worked with a team to finish a task. (80–120 words) 二、写作目标 1. 掌握记叙文三段结构：故事开头交代背景、正文描述合作过程、结尾写出收获感悟 2. 熟练使用原因状语从句 (because/as/since)（本单元核心语法）交代事件缘由 3. 时态搭配：一般过去时（叙述整件往事） 4. 学会写出有感染力的故事结尾，表达个人成长与团队精神 5. 完成 80-120 词叙事完整、语法贴合单元知识点的短文 三、写作分析 1. 人称与时态 · 人称：第一人称 I /my team /we · 时态：全文一般过去时（回忆过去的一次团队经历） · 核心语法：because /as/since 引导的原因状语从句 2. 思路点拨（三段式结构） 开头段：交代事件背景，点明是什么团队、要完成什么任务，简单铺垫遇到的困难 正文段：详细描写团队分工、互相配合的细节，用原因从句说明行动的理由 结尾段：交代最终结果，写出自己从这次经历学到的道理，升华团队合作的意义 四、写作模板（表格版） 段落 板块 参考句型 开头（背景） 交代事件 + 困境 Last month, our team took part in a ... At first, we met a big problem because ... 正文（过程） 团队配合 + 细节行动 We divided different work and helped each other. Since everyone knew their tasks well, we made progress quickly. When one member had trouble, others would give a hand right away. 结尾（收获） 结果 + 感悟 Finally we succeeded. I learned that we could only win as a whole team, not as separate people. 五、范文（英文 + 中文翻译） My teamwork experience Last month, our group joined the school handcraft competition. At first, we felt worried because we had different ideas and could not agree on our work. Our group leader asked us to talk calmly and divide tasks clearly. Since Lily was good at drawing, she designed the model. Tom was responsible for cutting materials while I put all parts together. Whenever someone made mistakes, we never blamed each other but fixed the problems together. Finally we won the second prize. I truly understand that success never comes from one person alone. Good teamwork is the key to getting through difficulties. 中文翻译 我的一次团队合作经历 上个月，我们小组参加了学校手工制作比赛。一开始我们十分发愁，因为大家想法不一，无法确定作品方案。 组长让我们冷静沟通、明确分工。莉莉擅长画画，负责模型设计；汤姆裁剪材料，我负责组装拼接。每当有人出错，我们不会互相指责，而是一起解决问题。 最后我们拿到了二等奖。我真切明白，成功从来不是一个人的功劳，良好的团队合作才是克服困难的关键。 六、核心素材（好词 + 佳句） 1. 高分好词 teamwork n. 团队合作；divide tasks 分工；handcraft n. 手工制品；blame v. 指责；responsible adj. 负责的；make progress 取得进步；get through difficulties 克服困难 2. 高分佳句（单元语法适配，原因状语从句） We failed at first because we did not cooperate well. Since everyone tried their best, our team finished the task ahead of time. As we trusted each other deeply, we solved all the problems together. 适配谚语 Many hands make light work. 众人拾柴火焰高。 七、填空练习版（学生随堂作业） My teamwork experience Last month, our group joined the school handcraft competition. At first, we felt worried ________(1. 因为) we had different ideas and could not agree on our work. Our group leader asked us to talk calmly and divide tasks clearly. ________(2. 既然) Lily was good at drawing, she designed the model. Tom was responsible for cutting materials while I put all parts together. Whenever someone made mistakes, we never blamed each other ________(3. 但是) fixed the problems together. Finally we won the second prize. I truly understand that success never comes from one person alone. Good ________(4. 团队合作) is the key to getting through ________(5. 困难). 参考答案 1. because 2. Since 3. but 4. teamwork 5. difficulties ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $