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Unit 1 Learn Words in Chunks
写作训练 | 广州教科版五年级上英语
主题:Learning English words and giving useful tips
写作目标
能围绕“学习英语单词的方法”介绍自己的学习习惯,也能给遇到困难的同学写简单建议。写作时按照“点明问题或主题 - 给出方法 - 举例说明 - 鼓励坚持”的顺序展开。
写作方法指引 - 原文指路
1. 点明学习主题
How do you learn new words?
开头可以直接提出“怎样学习新单词”这个话题。
2. 写出自己喜欢的方法
I like to learn words in chunks.
用 I like to... 写自己常用的学习方法。
3. 解释方法是什么
It's a group of words, like "join a club".
说明方法时,可以先解释意思,再举一个例子。
4. 写出方法的好处
It helps you remember words more easily.
用 It helps me/us to... 写这个方法的作用。
5. 给别人提出建议
You can also make word cards with pictures.
给建议时,可以用 You can... / You can also...。
6. 结尾鼓励坚持
Don't give up! Keep up the good work!
结尾可以写鼓励的话,让建议更温暖。
一、核心词汇
学习方法类:learn words in chunks, use pictures, make word cards, make stories, keep a diary
查找与练习类:look them up in the dictionary, practise with others, read them out loud, go over
语块与句子类:a group of words, put chunks together, use them in sentences, sentence, chunk
建议与鼓励类:try, useful, helpful, take your time, don't worry, don't give up, keep up the good work
问题表达类:too many words, keep forgetting, don't know how to use them, What should I do?
二、参考句型
基础句:介绍学习方法
I like to learn words in chunks.
I read new words out loud.
I make word cards with pictures.
进阶句:说明方法和作用
A chunk is a group of words.
It helps me remember words more easily.
I find it useful to use chunks in sentences.
提升句:给建议和鼓励
You can try to look them up in the dictionary.
You can also practise with others.
Don't worry. It takes time.
Keep up the good work!
建议信句:完整写作可用
Thank you for your questions.
Here are a few things you can do.
Hope this helps!
Find out what works best for you, and keep at it!
三、易错点提示
like to 后接动词原形:I like to learn words in chunks. 不要写成 I like learn words。
help 的用法:It helps me remember words. / It helps me to remember words. 两种都可以。
words 是复数:There are too many words to remember. 不要漏写 s。
advice 是不可数名词:Any advice? 不要写成 advices。
句子开头要大写,句末要有标点:How do you learn new words?
四、连词成句
1. learn / I / words / in chunks / like to / .
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2. a group of / is / words / a chunk / .
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3. helps / it / remember / me / words / more easily / .
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4. word cards / can / make / you / with pictures / .
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5. read / them / out loud / every day / you can / .
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6. don't / give up / please / .
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五、写作句型仿写
1. 替换仿写:例:I like to learn words in chunks. 仿:I like to ______________________________.
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2. 替换仿写:例:You can make word cards with pictures. 仿:You can ______________________________.
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3. 根据提示写句子:提示词:look them up in the dictionary
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4. 补全句子:It helps me to ______________________________.
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5. 连接句子:I know many words. I don't know how to use them. 请用 but 合并。
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6. 主题迁移:请写一句话给三年级同学提学习英语单词的建议。
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六、写作练习
写作一:How I Learn New Words
难度:基础
请介绍你平时怎样学习英语新单词。可以写你喜欢的方法,以及这个方法为什么有用。
要求:用 4-5 句话介绍自己的学习方法,不少于 40 词。
参考词:learn words in chunks, read out loud, make word cards, useful, helps me
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写作二:Useful Tips for Learning Words
难度:提高
请给同学介绍 2-3 个学习英语单词的好方法。要写清楚每个方法怎样做、有什么好处。
要求:注意使用 You can... / You can also... / It helps...,不少于 50 词。
参考词:use pictures, look them up in the dictionary, practise with others, remember, more easily
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写作三:A Letter to Young English Learners
难度:挑战
三位低年级同学觉得英语单词太多、容易忘,也不知道怎样使用单词。请你写一封简短建议信帮助他们。
要求:按照建议信格式写,有开头、正文和结尾,不少于 60 词。
参考词:Thank you for your questions, don't worry, here are a few things, first, also, hope this helps
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Unit 1 Learn Words in Chunks 写作训练
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七、参考范文一:How I Learn New Words
参考范文
I like to learn English words in chunks. A chunk is a group of words, like "read out loud". I also make word cards with pictures. It helps me remember words more easily. I think this way is useful and fun.
范文讲解
这篇是基础版,主要完成“我喜欢的方法 - 方法解释 - 方法好处”的表达。
文章使用了 I like to... 和 It helps me...,都是本单元核心句型。
例子 read out loud 很具体,比只写 words 更容易让文章清楚。
八、参考范文二:Useful Tips for Learning Words
参考范文
Learning new words can be hard, but you can try some useful tips. First, you can learn words in chunks. It helps you remember words more easily. You can also make word cards with pictures. Keep them with you and look at them often. If you don't know a word, look it up in the dictionary. Don't worry. It takes time.
范文讲解
这篇提高版加入了 First 和 also,让建议更有顺序。
文章写了三个方法:learn words in chunks、make word cards、look it up in the dictionary。
结尾 Don't worry. It takes time. 是鼓励句,适合建议类作文。
九、参考范文三:A Letter to Young English Learners
参考范文
Dear Yichen, Ting and Carl,
Thank you for your questions. Yes, learning new words can be hard. But don't worry! Here are a few things you can do. First, you can learn words in chunks. A chunk is a group of words, and it helps you use words in sentences. You can also make word cards with pictures and read them out loud every day. If you forget a word, look it up in the dictionary and go over it again. Hope this helps! Find out what works best for you, and keep at it!
Best,
Mulan
范文讲解
这篇挑战版采用建议信格式,有称呼、开头、正文、结尾和署名。
正文围绕三个问题给建议:单词多、容易忘、不会使用。
句式有变化:First..., You can also..., If you..., Hope this helps! 能连接方法和鼓励。
结尾 keep at it 表达坚持,能提升文章温度。
写作小结
U1 写作可以分成两类:学习方法介绍和学习建议信。学习方法介绍重点写“方法名称 + 具体做法 + 方法好处”;学习建议信重点写“回应问题 + 给出建议 + 说明好处 + 鼓励坚持”。写作时要多用教材中的 chunks 和 sentence stems,让句子更自然。
十、参考答案
四、连词成句
1. I like to learn words in chunks.
2. A chunk is a group of words.
3. It helps me remember words more easily.
4. You can make word cards with pictures.
5. You can read them out loud every day.
6. Please don't give up.
五、写作句型仿写
1. I like to read new words out loud. / I like to make word cards.
2. You can practise with others. / You can make stories with new words.
3. You can look them up in the dictionary.
4. It helps me to remember words more easily. / It helps me to use words in sentences.
5. I know many words, but I don't know how to use them.
6. You can learn words in chunks. / You can read English words out loud every day.
六、写作练习
写作一参考答案见“七、参考范文一:How I Learn New Words”。
写作二参考答案见“八、参考范文二:Useful Tips for Learning Words”。
写作三参考答案见“九、参考范文三:A Letter to Young English Learners”。
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