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Unit 4 Helen Keller is my favourite writer
写作突破专项训练 | 湘鲁版六年级上册英语
主题:Favourite writers, favourite books and book reports
写作目标
能围绕“最喜欢的作家/书籍”进行介绍,按照“人物或书名 - 基本信息 - 主要经历/内容 - 喜欢的原因”的顺序写短文。练习从介绍作家,到介绍一本书,再到完整读书报告,难度逐步提升。
写作方法指引 - 原文指路
1. 点明最喜欢的作家
Helen Keller, a famous American writer. 介绍人物时,可以先写姓名和身份。
2. 说明闻名原因
She's famous for her books and experiences. 用 be famous for 写人物特点或成就。
3. 补充出生信息
She was born in 1880. / She was born in the US. 用 was born 写出生时间或地点。
4. 讲述重要经历
At a very young age, she fell ill. After that, she could not see or hear. 写人物经历时要有时间顺序。
5. 写出帮助与努力
Her teacher Anne Sullivan taught her to read and speak with her hands. She worked hard and never gave up. 写清楚人物怎样克服困难。
6. 表达阅读兴趣
I can't wait to read her books! / You can start with The Story of My Life. 结尾可以写自己的想法或推荐。
一、核心词汇
作家与书籍类:writer, book, story, report, title, character, The Story of My Life, World Book Day
人物信息类:be born in, American, famous, experiences, at a very young age, later
经历与品质类:fall ill, could not see or hear, teach, work hard, never give up, brave, amazing
读书报告类:The title of my favourite book is..., The main characters are..., In this book..., I like it because...
二、参考句型
基础句:介绍作家
• My favourite writer is Helen Keller.
• She was a famous American writer.
• She was born in 1880.
进阶句:介绍经历
• At a very young age, she fell ill.
• After that, she could not see or hear.
• Anne Sullivan taught her to read and speak with her hands.
提升句:表达原因和想法
• She worked hard and never gave up.
• I want to be as brave as her.
• I like her because she was brave and strong.
读书报告句
• The title of my favourite book is The Story of My Life.
• The main character is Helen Keller.
• In this book, Helen tells us about her life.
• I like it because it is moving and helpful.
三、易错点提示
• be born 的搭配:She was born in 1880. / She was born in the US. 不要写成 She born in 1880.
• be famous for 后接名词或名词短语:She is famous for her books and experiences.
• could not 后接动词原形:She could not see or hear. 不要写成 could not saw。
• 介绍书籍时要分清 writer, title, character:writer 是作者,title 是书名,character 是人物。
四、写作练习
写作一:My Favourite Writer
难度:基础
请介绍你最喜欢的一位作家。可以写他/她是谁,来自哪里,为什么有名,你为什么喜欢他/她。
要求:用 4-5 句话介绍人物基本信息和喜欢的原因,不少于40词。
参考词:writer, famous, was born in, books, experiences, brave, like...because...
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写作二:Helen Keller
难度:提高
请根据本单元内容介绍 Helen Keller。写清楚她的身份、重要经历、老师的帮助和她的品质。
要求:注意使用时间顺序和一般过去时,不少于50词。
参考词:American writer, was born in 1880, fell ill, could not see or hear, Anne Sullivan, worked hard, never gave up
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写作三:My Favourite Book Report
难度:挑战
请写一篇读书报告,介绍你最喜欢的一本书。写清楚书名、主要人物、主要内容和你喜欢它的原因。
要求:按照读书报告格式写,句式要有变化,不少于60词。
参考词:The title of..., main characters, In this book..., tells us, I like it because..., moving, interesting
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五、参考范文一:My Favourite Writer
参考范文
My favourite writer is Helen Keller. She was a famous American writer. She was born in 1880. She is famous for her books and experiences. I like her because she worked hard and never gave up. I want to be as brave as her.
范文讲解
• 这篇是基础版,句子短,主要完成“是谁 - 什么身份 - 为什么有名 - 为什么喜欢”的表达。
• 文章用了 She was born in... 和 She is famous for...,都是本单元核心句型。
• 结尾 I want to be as brave as her 表达自己的想法,比只写 I like her 更具体。
六、参考范文二:Helen Keller
参考范文
Helen Keller is my favourite writer. She was a famous American writer. She was born in 1880. At a very young age, she fell ill. After that, she could not see or hear. Her teacher Anne Sullivan taught her to read and speak with her hands. Helen worked hard and never gave up. She wrote many books. I think she was brave and amazing.
范文讲解
• 这篇难度比第一篇高,因为它加入了人物经历,并按照 At a very young age, After that 的顺序展开。
• 文章写出了老师 Anne Sullivan 的帮助,也写出 Helen worked hard and never gave up,内容更完整。
• 结尾 I think she was brave and amazing 是对人物品质的评价,适合人物介绍类作文。
七、参考范文三:My Favourite Book Report
参考范文
The title of my favourite book is The Story of My Life. The writer is Helen Keller. The main character is Helen. In this book, Helen tells us about her life. She could not see or hear after she fell ill, but she learned to read and write in a special way. Her teacher Anne Sullivan helped her a lot. I like this book because Helen was brave and strong. The story tells me to work hard and never give up.
范文讲解
• 这篇是挑战版,形式是 book report,开头直接写 The title of my favourite book is...,符合课文中的读书报告框架。
• 正文写了 writer, main character 和 what the book is about,信息比普通人物介绍更完整。
• 句式有变化:In this book..., after she fell ill, but..., because...,能把内容和原因连起来。
• 结尾写 The story tells me...,把读书感受提升为收获,读书报告会更有深度。
写作小结
U4 写作可以分成两类:人物介绍和读书报告。人物介绍重点写“基本信息 + 重要经历 + 品质评价”;读书报告重点写“书名 + 作者 + 主要人物 + 内容 + 喜欢原因”。参考范文已新起一页,便于学生先完成练习,再对照学习。
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