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写作的关键点是语言的规范和精确使用。 满分作文,即在规范拼写、规避简单错误的基础上,增添亮点表达。首先,词汇基础要扎实,能够灵活使用高级词汇和句式;其次,语法知识要系统,确保灵活、准确地使用各种语法结构。
关键点之锤词炼句——精准表达,增分提能
精准多样的动词
重点掌握
动词分为及物动词和不及物动词。精准的动词(短语)能够有效描述交际场景,多样化的动词(短语)能够增加文章的生动性,创造性地传递信息和表明态度。
【即时测试1】——词汇升级
(1)Last month, you kindly agreed to write an article about sports in Canada, and we're all expecting to read it.
→(2025·新高考全国卷Ⅱ)Last month, you kindly agreed to write an article about sports in Canada, and we're all looking__forward__to__reading it.
(2)I'm writing to politely ask about the progress of the article.
→(2025·新高考全国卷Ⅱ)I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of the article.
(3)Let's focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus.
→(2025·浙江卷1月)Let's devote__ourselves__more__to our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus.
(4)It might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our selfesteem when the videos don't get the expected response.
→(2025·浙江卷1月)It might also trigger unnecessary comparisons and affect our selfesteem when the videos don't get the expected response.
充满表达力的名词
重点掌握
名词是一切写作的基础。灵活使用一些充满表达力的名词,包括抽象意义的名词、常见动词的同根名词或名词词组,能够为文章增色,成为得分的亮点。
【即时测试2】——词汇升级
(1)As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which affect everyone's life.
→(2025·北京卷)As we know, the environment is facing serious problems, which have__an__effect/influence/impact__on everyone's life.
(2)I understand that random grouping can encourage communicating and interacting among students with each other to some extent.
→(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)I understand that random grouping can encourage communication and interaction among students with each other to some extent.
(3)If we can make more people aware of environmental protection and encourage them to take action, it will make a big difference.
→(2025·北京卷)If we can raise more people's awareness about environmental protection and encourage them to take action, it will make a big difference.
丰富多彩的形容词
重点掌握
形容词是用来描述人的特征、状态,或者事物的性质、属性的修饰性词汇,最主要的功能是修饰或者限定名词或代词。恰当使用形容词能够为文章增色不少。
【即时测试3】——词汇升级
(1)Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers' understanding of global sports culture, which will be good for us.
→(2025·新高考全国卷Ⅱ)Your insights into Canadian sports will surely enrich our readers' understanding of global sports culture, which will be beneficial to us.
(2)It was such a great experience that I would always keep it in my memory.
→(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)It was such an extraordinary__and__unforgettable experience that I would always keep it in my memory.
(3)From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has a massive development.
→(2024·全国甲卷)From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport, Chinese transport has a(n) enormous/tremendous/significant development.
(4)That's why it's important to get up and move around during the day, and one great way is jumping rope during your break between two classes.
→(2024·浙江卷1月)That's why it's essential/vital/crucial to get up and move around during the day, and one great way is jumping rope during your break between two classes.
灵活多变的副词
重点掌握
副词是在句中表示行为或状态特征的词汇,主要用来作状语,修饰动词、形容词、其他副词或句子。恰当使用副词能够提高得分的档次。
【即时测试4】——词汇升级
(1)Also, could I remind you that the deadline for submission is this Friday, June 14th?
→(2025·新高考全国卷Ⅱ)Moreover/Furthermore/Additionally,__could I remind you that the deadline for submission is this Friday, June 14th?
(2)Recently, some of us have been filming short videos on campus.
→(2025·浙江卷1月)Lately/Currently/Presently,__some of us have been filming short videos on campus.
(3)Representing those eager to make progress in English, I truly invite you to an interview in our program.
→(2022·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)Representing those eager to make progress in English, I sincerely invite you to an interview in our program.
短语优先原则和同义多词表达原则
重点掌握
(1)短语优先原则
尽可能多地使用短语、习语来代替一些单词,这样在表达时更具有力度,能够有效增加文采。
(2)同义多词表达原则
在表达相近或相同意思时,要尽量避免过多地重复使用某一个单词,应学会选择使用其他恰当的同义词(短语)或近义词(短语)来表达,或者利用构词法中的转换法,灵活运用同一词汇的不同词性。这样能让阅卷老师感觉词汇量丰富,表达手法多样。
【即时测试5】——词汇升级
(1)Personally, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks.
→(2025·浙江卷1月)In__my__opinion__(view)/As__far__as__I'm__concerned/From__my__perspective,__it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks.
(2)As students, we often spend long hours sitting in class, which can cause health problems such as obesity and back pain.
→(2024·浙江卷1月)As students, we often spend long hours sitting in class, which can lead__to/bring__about/contribute__to/give__rise__to health problems such as obesity and back pain.
(3)We were tasked to draw or paint something that impressed us most.
→(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)We were tasked to draw or paint something that left/made__the__strongest__impression__on us.
(4)We are greatly excited at the knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us.
→(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)We are overwhelmed__with__excitement at the knowledge that an oral English class will be arranged for us.
关键点之文心雕句——精雕细琢,彰显风采
使用多样化的句式会使文章表达更有张力和逻辑性。因此,恰当地使用各种定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句、非谓语动词及特殊句式等语法结构,能为写作增色添彩。
简而不凡的简单句
【即时测试1】——完成句子
(1)演讲比赛前,英语老师帮我润色稿子、纠正发音错误。(主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语)
Before the speech contest, our__English__teacher__helped__me__polish__my__draft__and__correct__my__pronunciation__mistakes.
(2)科学实验前,实验室助手向学生们讲解了安全使用显微镜的方法。(主语+谓语+间接宾语+直接宾语)
Before the science experiment,the__lab__assistant__explained__to__the__students__the__way__to__use__the__microscope__safely.
(3)本周五下午学校礼堂将举办一场环保主题讲座。(there be句型)
There__will__be__a__lecture__on__environmental__protection in the school hall this Friday afternoon.
(4)上周末,我们班在学校操场组织了一场慈善捐书活动,为山区孩子募集图书。(主语+谓语+宾语+状语)
Our__class__organized__a__charity__book__drive__in__the__school__playground__last__weekend to collect books for children in mountainous areas.
(5)学生在学校图书馆这类安静的环境中学习效率更高。(主语+谓语+状语)
Students__study__more__efficiently__in__a__quiet__environment__like__the__school__library.
光彩夺目的定语从句
【即时测试2】——完成句子
(1) (2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)我描绘了公园的景致:柳枝在微风中轻舞,几只鸭子在河中悠然自得地游弋。
I painted the scenery of the park,where__the__willow__branches__were__dancing__in__the__breeze__and__several__ducks__were__swimming__in__the__river__peacefully__and__happily.
(2)(2024·全国甲卷)今天,我想和大家聊聊几项改变生活的重大进步——包括共享单车、高铁和新能源车。
Today I'd like to focus on some major developments, which__include__shared__bicycles,__highspeed__trains__and__new__energy__vehicles.
(3)(2024·全国甲卷)众所周知,交通方式的变革将深刻改变人们的生活。
As__we__all__know/As__is__known__to__us__all,__changes in transportation will bring great changes to people's lives.
(4)(2023·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)此外,为确保我们的口语练习顺利进行,我建议将三四名学生分为一组,每组设一名组长,这样我们就能进行更深入的交流。
Additionally, to ensure that our oral practice goes smoothly,I suggest that you put three to four students together, with one as the group leader, in__which__case__we__can__communicate__with__each__other__at__a__great__depth.
(5)(2026·湖北部分高中协作体一模)终于到了他要登台的重要日子。
Then came the big day when__he__would__go__on__stage.
丰富多彩的名词性从句
【即时测试3】——完成句子
(1)(2022·全国甲卷)首先,我们能做的就是重视日常行为。
First of all, what__we__can__do is to place importance on our daily actions.
(2)(2025·新高考全国卷Ⅱ)你方便告诉我事情进展如何吗?
Would you mind letting me know how__it's__going?
(3)(2026·烟台二模)最让我们动容的是你如何将平凡的周末变成非凡的旅程——无论是去动物收容所做志愿者、尝试数字艺术创作,还是记录当地的文化遗产。
What__touches__us__most is how__you__transform__ordinary__weekends__into__extraordinary__journeys
—whether through volunteering at animal shelters, experimenting with digital art or documenting local cultural heritage.
(4)(2026·梅州模拟)作为一名中学生,我认为运动在我们的日常生活中扮演着至关重要的角色。
Being a high school student, I hold the view that__sports__play__a__vital__role__in__our__daily__lives.
(5)(2026·宁波十校模拟)为保护海洋,强烈建议立即采取行动。
To protect the ocean, it is highly recommended that__immediate__action__(should)__be__taken.
(6)(2026·潍坊二模)我注意到大多数同学都觉得这个活动有趣又有创意,尤其是它能通过情感表达来帮助我们提升发音这一点。
I noticed that__most__classmates__found__the__activity__engaging__and__creative,__especially how__it__improved__our__pronunciation__through__emotional__expression.
画龙点睛的状语从句
【即时测试4】——完成句子
(1)(2024·浙江卷1月)这是一项极其简单且低成本的活动,无论在哪都能开展,哪怕空间狭小也不受影响。
It's such a simple and inexpensive activity that__you__can__do__it__anywhere,__even in a small space.
(2)(2024·浙江卷1月)所以,下次你在课堂上感觉有些无精打采时,记得站起来伸个懒腰!
So, next__time__you__feel__a__bit__sluggish__during__class,__remember to stand up and stretch!
(3)(2024·北京卷)那么,“一带一路”倡议这类项目便是很好的讨论话题,因为它展现了中国与世界共建人类命运共同体的决心。
Then, projects like the Belt and Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because__it__showcases__China's__determination__to__build__a__shared__future__with__the__world.
(4)(2026·滨州二模)这段经历让我明白,只要我们坚持不懈,就能克服困难。
This experience taught me that as__long__as__we__persevere,__we can overcome difficulties.
(5)(2026·合肥示范中学三模)如今,春节依然发挥着至关重要的作用。它时刻提醒着我们家庭的重要性,无论我们有多忙碌。
Today, the Spring Festival still plays a vital role. It reminds us of the importance of family, no__matter__how/however__busy__we__are.
(6)(2026·沧州一模)第三,围绕选定的资源制定学习计划,这样我们才能确保学习的系统性。
Third, create a study plan around the selected resources so__that__we__can__ensure__systematic__learning.
亮人眼球的非谓语动词
【即时测试5】——完成句子
(1)(2024·全国甲卷)此外,中国高铁网络已高效连通各大城市,大幅缩短出行时间并推动经济发展。
Besides, China's highspeed railway network has connected various cities effectively, greatly__saving__travel__time__and__promoting__economic__development.
(2)(2024·浙江卷1月)这也有助于提升你的协调性、柔韧性和平衡能力。
It is also helpful to__improve__your__coordination,__flexibility,__and__balance.
(3)(2024·新高考全国卷Ⅰ)受这绝美的景色所启发,我决定画一幅水彩画描绘公园池塘上的小桥,周围是盛开的花朵。
Inspired__by__the__fantastic__scenery,__I decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's pond, surrounded__by__blooming__flowers.
(4)(2026·济南一模)本次活动的目的是鼓励学生探索并表达自己对儒家思想及其当代意义的理解。
The purpose of this event is to__encourage__students__to__explore__and__express their understanding of Confucius's teachings and their relevance in today's world.
(5)(2026·临沂二模)上周日,我们学校组织了一场有意义的社会实践活动。
Last Sunday witnessed a meaningful social practice activity organized__by__our__school.
彰显文采的特殊句式
【即时测试6】——完成句子/句型转换
(1)就是在那个节日里,你跟大家分享了很多关于你们国家的趣事,我也从中学到了不少关于你们国家饮食、文化和历史的知识。
It__was__at__that__festival__that__you__shared__so__many__interesting__things__about__your__country__with__everyone,__through which I learned a lot about your country's food, culture and history.
(2)(2026·江苏新高考基地学校模拟)通过这次活动,我不仅学会了包饺子,还明白了要把爱传递给身边人的意义。
Through this activity, not__only__did__I__learn__how__to__make__dumplings,__but I also understood the meaning of passing on love to those around us.
(3)(2026·济宁二模)This experience taught me that every effort, even if it was imperfect, brings me closer to victory. (改为省略句)
→This experience taught me that every effort, even__if__imperfect,__brings me closer to victory.
(4)(2026·山东九五高中协作体质检)It is a blessing to have Honey join in our family. (改为感叹句)
→What__a__blessing__it__is__to__have__Honey__join__in__our__family!
(5)(2026·浙江金丽衢十二校联考)We can unlock greater academic potential only by blending AI's efficiency with human creativity. (改为倒装句)
→Only__by__blending__AI's__efficiency__with__human__creativity__can__we__unlock__greater__academic__potential.
(6)He didn't realize how important confidence was until he had failed in the job interview.
→It__was__not__until__he__had__failed__in__the__job__interview__that__he__realized__how__important__confidence__was.(强调黑体部分)
→Not__until__he__had__failed__in__the__job__interview__did__he__realize__how__important__confidence__was. (改为倒装句)
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