必修第三册 读后续写——夯基赋能·直击高考（课件PPT）-【精微方案】2027年高考一轮总复习讲义·英语（人教版）

该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦读后续写专题，依据高考评价体系梳理了情节逻辑、人物塑造、主题升华等核心考查维度，结合2025浙江卷1月真题分析，明确情节衔接（40%）、语言表达（35%）的高频考点，构建“通读-架构-衔接-表达”的完整答题体系。 课件亮点在于“真题实战+步骤化指导+素养融合”，以Kevin勇寻真相真题为例，详解“四轮定位”衔接法和句式合并技巧（如on/upon doing结构），培养学生思维品质（逻辑推理）和语言能力（精准表达）。特设“易错点警示”和“范文赏析”，助力学生掌握续写技巧，教师可据此开展针对性教学，提升复习效率。

读后续写——夯基赋能•直击高考 少年凯文勇寻真相 阅读下面的材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 (2025·浙江卷1月)Kevin was pretty bored.His mother was at work, and his father had been away on business.Therefore，he was left in the care of Mrs.Hill，an old lady who lived next door.His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy.He never got into trouble, though sometimes he wanted to do risky things.Mrs.Hill was asleep. Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen. Suddenly, a movement outside caught his eye. Mrs.Hill's front window faced Mr.and Mrs. Green's house across the street.The couple had both gone to work, so it was strange that someone was over there.Kevin stared at the man at their front door. Suddenly, the man jumped through an open window into the house.With his heart in his mouth, Kevin grabbed Mrs.Hill's home phone and called the police. Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived，Kevin decided to do something.He rushed out of Mrs.Hill's house and crossed the street quickly.Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree，he jumped in through the window.“Stop right there！You must leave right now！” he called out, holding the branch with both hands. The man froze for a second，but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief.“Hey，kid，put that down.It was my home.My parents used to live here and my father's watch was here，” he explained, trying to lift a floorboard. At that moment，the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air.The man stood up in a panic，then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out.Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened.They pursued and arrested the man. Kevin went back to Mrs.Hill's house.Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing.“What if he has told the truth？” he thought to himself.The man's words sounded pretty convincing. 注意：续写词数应为150个左右。 When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home，Kevin went to talk to them.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．读情节：12岁的凯文(Kevin)因父母忙于工作暂由邻居希尔夫人照看，偶然发现邻居格林夫妇(Mr. and Mrs. Green)家有陌生人________。他立刻报警并手持树枝上前________，陌生人辩称此处曾是自己父母的住所，前来寻找父亲藏在地板下的________，却在警车赶到时________________。凯文协助警方逮捕对方后，暗自思忖对方说的话，决定探寻真相。格林夫妇回家后，凯文便去找他们讨论。 Step 1 通读原文，获取信息 阻止 闯入 手表 仓皇逃离 2．读人物： 凯文：12 岁少年，乖巧懂事、反应敏捷，富有________，同时具备________精神，在不确定真相时会自我怀疑，主动________真相。 格林夫妇：凯文的邻居，________________，愿意配合凯文核实情况，助力真相大白。 陌生男子：因贸然闯入格林夫妇现居房屋以取回父亲的手表而引发________，最终得到理解与帮助。 警察：及时出警，________执法，通过核实信息还原真相。 正义感 反思 探寻 通情达理 误会 公正 3．读时态：全文围绕过去发生的事件展开，以_____________为主。 4．读冲突： (1)内在冲突：凯文的________ (认为陌生男子是小偷并报警阻止)与________________；(担心误判无辜者)之间的心理冲突。 (2)外在冲突：凯文的________与陌生男子的________之间的行为冲突；陌生男子想要取回父亲的遗物的________________与闯入他人住宅的________________之间的矛盾；真相未明时 ________________与 ________________的事实冲突。 一般过去时 正义感 自我怀疑 阻止 辩解 合理需求 不当行为 小偷作案 寻找遗物 5．读情绪发展：独处时的________→________发生令人兴奋的事→发现闯入者的________→报警以及亲身阻止的________→闯入者辩解后的________→不确定是否误判的________→主动探寻真相的________→真相大白后的________与自豪 6．读主题：_________________________________________________ _________________ 无聊 期待 紧张 勇敢 疑惑 犹豫 坚定 释然 勇气不仅意味着在危险中勇敢行动，还意味着勇于探寻真相。 1．第一段：根据第一段首句和第二段首句可知，本段可描写：凯文向格林夫妇详细讲述陌生男子闯入的_______、对方的_______以及自己的_______，格林夫妇_______起前房主的相关情况，随后他们按陌生男子所说的位置检查地板并找到_______，凯文确定了真相，他们决定一同前往警察局给那名陌生男子送表。 Step 2 分析首句，确定架构 经过 辩解 行动 回忆 手表 2．第二段：根据第二段首句和正能量原则可知，本段可描写：凯文与格林先生向警方详细_______情况并移交_______，警方通过官方记录核实了陌生男子的身份_______与手表的来源，陌生男子见到手表后______________，警方赞扬了凯文，凯文领悟到_______的真正含义。 说明 手表 信息 感激不已 勇气 第一段首句：When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. 1．(与第一段首句衔接：who引导非限制性定语从句)他毫不犹豫地将整件事和盘托出——他如何看到一个陌生人闯入空屋、随后立刻报警并与那个声称来寻找父亲手表的男子对峙。 He poured out the ins and outs without hesitation—how he had seen a stranger break into the empty house, then called the police promptly, and confronted the man，____________________________________ ____________________． Step 3 “四轮定位”，巧妙衔接 who claimed he had come for his father's watch 2．(与第二段首句衔接：定语从句＋现在分词作状语)很快他们想起了前房主曾提过有个儿子，于是格林先生检查了那个男子试图撬动的地板。他发现里面有一块被小心藏在下面的布满灰尘的旧手表，然后他们当即决定带着这块手表前往警察局。 They soon recalled that the previous owner had mentioned a son, so Mr. Green checked the floorboard __________________________，___________________________________________________, and then they decided to take the watch to the police station at once. that the man had tried to lift finding a dusty old watch carefully hidden underneath 第二段首句：Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. 3．(与第二段首句衔接：as soon as引导时间状语从句)一到那里，他们就向警官们详细解释了事情的来龙去脉，并移交了那块旧手表。 __________________________, they explained the situation in detail to the officers and handed over the old watch. As soon as they arrived 4．(呼应主题：现在分词作状语＋that引导宾语从句＋not only...but also...)凯文笑了，领悟到勇气不仅意味着在危险中勇敢行动，还意味着勇于探寻真相——这对 12 岁的他来说，是一堂宝贵的人生课。 Kevin smiled, ________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________—a valuable life lesson for his 12-year-old self. realizing that courage means not only acting bravely in danger but also being brave enough to seek the truth 1．当格林夫妇听到这些，他们交换了震惊的眼神。 __________________________, Mr. and Mrs. Green exchanged shocked glances. 2．他们和凯文一样对事情的真相感到不确定。 They were _______________________________________． Step 4 遣词造句，打磨语言 When they heard this as uncertain about the truth as Kevin was 3．用“on/upon doing...”和“as...as...”结构作状语合并句1和句 2 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．男子将这块保存完好的手表轻轻捧在掌心，感激的泪水涌上眼眶。 The man held the well-preserved watch gently in his palms, and __________________________ in his eyes. On/Upon hearing this, Mr. and Mrs. Green exchanged shocked glances, as uncertain about the truth as Kevin was. tears of gratitude welled up 5．泪水顺着他的脸颊滑落。 The tears __________________________． 6．用as引导时间状语从句＋现在分词作伴随状语合并句4和句5 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．警方还称赞了凯文的敏捷思维与责任感。 The police also ______________________________________________ __________________． streamed down his cheeks As the man held the well-preserved watch gently in his palms, tears of gratitude welled up in his eyes, streaming down his cheeks. praised Kevin for his quick thinking and sense of responsibility When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Step 5 梳理思路，完成正文 One possible version： When Mr. and Mrs. Green got home, Kevin went to talk to them. He poured out the ins and outs without hesitation—how he had seen a stranger break into the empty house, then called the police promptly, and confronted the man，who claimed he had come for his father's watch. On/Upon hearing this, Mr. and Mrs. Green exchanged shocked glances, as uncertain about the truth as Kevin was. They soon recalled that the previous owner had mentioned a son, so Mr. Green checked the floorboard that the man had tried to lift，finding a dusty old watch carefully hidden underneath, and then they decided to take the watch to the police station at once. Kevin and Mr. Green took the watch they had found to the police station. As soon as they arrived, they explained the situation in detail to the officers and handed over the old watch. After verifying the man's information and the watch's origin through official records, the police confirmed the man's identity. As the man held the well-preserved watch gently in his palms, tears of gratitude welled up in his eyes，streaming down his cheeks. The police also praised Kevin for his quick thinking and sense of responsibility.Kevin smiled, realizing that courage means not only acting bravely in danger but also being brave enough to seek the truth—a valuable life lesson for his 12-year-old self. $