Unit 1 The Changing World（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“生活中的变化”主题写作，系统构建“总-分-总”结构支架，梳理一般过去时、现在完成时等时态运用规则，提供核心词汇、分类句型（开头/中间/结尾）及名言积累，通过基础与提升版范文对比分析优化策略，辅以多样化实战写作任务，形成从素材积累到技能提升再到实践应用的完整学习脉络。 该资料亮点在于以语言能力培养为核心，通过分类词汇与句型支架夯实表达基础，借助范文对比（如通勤时间数据对比、原因状语添加）提升思维品质，多样化实战任务（环境/科技/社会问题）助力学习能力发展。课中辅助教师系统授课，课后便于学生自主查漏补缺，有效提升写作综合素养。

Unit 1 The Changing World单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为“生活中的变化”, 属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群,涉及子主题“家乡和社会的变迁,历史的发展,对未来的畅想”。 该单元常见的写作任务是描述个人生活、家乡、校园等方面的今昔变化,阐述这些变化带来的感受与思考。体裁多为记叙文或说明文。 文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 核心词汇 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 development 发展 transportation 交通 environment 环境 condition 条件 progress 进步 pollution 污染 community 社区 convenient 便利的 wide 宽阔的 comfortable 舒适的 modern 现代化的 polluted 受污染的 核心短语 take place 发生 in the past 在过去 in recent years 近年来 living conditions 生活条件 public transport 公共交通 clean up 清理 make great progress 取得巨大进步 句型积累 【开头型】 1.Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past ten years.过去十年间，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。 2.My hometown is no longer the small village that it used to be.我的家乡已不再是过去的那个小村庄了。 3.Our hometown has changed and developed quickly in recent years.我们的家乡近年来发生了迅速的变化 4.Great changes have taken place in the world around us. 我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。 5.Our world is changing faster than ever before. 我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。 6.If we compare the past with the present, we can see many differences. 对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。 7.Times are changing and our life has changed a lot. 时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。 8.With time going by, the world has changed greatly. 随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。 【中间句】 1.There used to be narrow dirt roads and shabby low houses everywhere.过去到处都是狭窄的土路和破旧的低矮房屋。 2.We have built wide asphalt roads and many tall apartment buildings since 2016.自2016年以来，我们已修建了宽阔的沥青道路及众多高层公寓楼。 3.People used to walk or ride old bikes to go out, but most families have owned private cars now.过去人们出行多步行或骑旧自行车，但如今大多数家庭都拥有私家车。 4.There used to be clear rivers and fresh air around our community.我们社区周围曾经有清澈的河流和清新的空气。 5.We should take small daily actions to protect our beautiful hometown.我们应该每天采取一些小行动来保护我们美丽的家乡。 6.People used to go out on foot or by bike. 人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。 7.Now more people choose cars and high-speed trains to travel. 如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。 8.In the past, people communicated by letters. 过去人们靠书信交流。 9.Nowadays we chat online anytime and anywhere. 如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。 10.Life was simple but hard many years ago. 多年前生活简单却很艰苦。 11.At present, our life is much more comfortable and convenient. 现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。 12.Technology makes our daily life much easier. 科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。 13.Our hometown looks quite different from what it was before. 我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。 14.People’s lifestyle has changed completely over the years. 这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。 15.The rapid development brings us both advantages and new challenges. 快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。 【结尾句 】 1.I take great pride in every wonderful change that has appeared around us.我对周围发生的每一个美好变化都感到无比自豪。 2.I firmly believe my hometown will become cleaner and more lively in the coming years.我坚信，在未来几年里，我的家乡将会变得更加整洁、更加充满活力。 3.Let’s work together to make our changing hometown cleaner than ever.让我们共同努力，把不断变化的家乡建设得比以往更加清洁。 4.I’m proud of the great changes in our world. 我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。 5.I believe our world will become even better in the future. 我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。 6.We should accept changes and keep learning all the time. 我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。 7.Changes make our life colorful and meaningful. 变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。 8.As the world changes, we also need to improve ourselves. 世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。 【名言积累】 1.Be the change that you wish to see in the world.欲变世界,先变自身。 2.Change your thoughts and you change your world.改变想法,你就能改变世界。 3.Change is the opportunity to create a better future.改变是创造更美好未来的契机。 佳句仿写 1.1.Now that I am older,my life is different from when I was in primary school.【教材Section B 3a】 仿写：现在我们的社会发展很快,我的日常生活已经变得很不一样了。 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 2. 在过去的几年里,我的日常生活发生了巨大的变化。 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ 3. .For example,my primary school was near my home…【教材Section B 3a】 仿写：例如,过去我常常乘公共汽车上学。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.This makes my daily trip fast and comfortable.（用比较级升格,突出对比）_________________________________________________________________ 5 .如今,这片土地上绿树成荫,河流也清澈见底。【教材Section B 2c】 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ 6.Shopping is much easier now.（用besides升格,衔接上下文） _________________________________________________________________ 7.It has improved local lives.【教材Section A 2c】 仿写：所有这些变化极大地改善了我的日常生活。 _________________________________________________________________ 8. 他们比以前富裕多了,也快乐多了。 【教材Section A 4c】 翻译： __________________________________________________ （Unit 1 Section B 3d ） 审题指导 1. 文体：记叙文 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态：一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时 教材写作品读 ①Great changes have taken place in my life since primary school. My neighbourhood has changed quite a lot.②With support from the government,we have a new sports park. My grandma does square dancing there. And my little brother plays happily and I can exercise there.③As a result,our free time activities become richer. My school life is much better now. We ④used to have lots of homework and tests. Now,with the “double reduction” policy,we have more time for sports and hobbies after class. All students ⑤benefit from this great change. My way of studying has changed a lot too. We use smart whiteboards and digital tools in class. It is very convenient to learn,and we learn ⑥with ease. ⑦Although many things have changed,one thing has stayed the same. I still have warm love from my family,and they always give me strength in my heart. 教材原句 ①【Section A 4c】Now great changes have taken place.（take place发生） ②【Section B 2c】With support from the government,Wang Shanghai led a group of 369 people… （with support from…在……的支持下） ③【Section A 4c】As a result,the lives of local people improved.（as a result作结果状语） ④【Section A 2d】The area used to be covered with sand. （used to对比过去的动作或状态） ⑤【Section B 1b】Local Kenyans have benefited a lot from the new railway. （benefit from 从……中获益） ⑥【Section B 1b】I am able to…make business deals with ease.（with ease 轻而易举地） ⑦【Section B 1b】Although China and Kenya are far away…（although引导让步状语从句） 生活中处处都有变化。请你以“Changes in My Daily Life”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,描述2-3个你生活中发生的具体变化（比如出行、环境、购物、学习方式等）,并谈谈这些变化给你带来的感受。 【基础版】 Changes in My Daily Life Now that our society is developing fast, my daily life is not the same as before. For example, I used to take the bus to school. It often took me a long time to get there. Now our city has a new subway. It takes me only 15 minutes to go to school. It’s faster now. My living environment has also improved. Some places near my home were sandy before. But now there are many trees and flowers there. Besides, shopping is easier now. We have fresh fruit and vegetables all year. We can also buy things online. It’s convenient. These changes make my life better. I feel lucky to live in such a good time. 【提升版】 Changes in My Daily Life Now that our society is developing fast, my daily life has become quite different. For example, I used to take the bus to school. The trip often took a long time because of heavy traffic. Now our city has a new subway. It cuts my travel time from 40 minutes to just 15 minutes. This makes my daily trip much faster and more comfortable. My living environment has also improved. In the past,some areas near my home were sandy. But with greening efforts,now the land is covered with green trees and beautiful flowers. Besides,shopping is much easier now. High-tech greenhouses now provide fresh fruit and vegetables all year. We can also buy different products online. How convenient it is! All these changes have greatly improved my daily life. I feel lucky to live in such a wonderful time. 总体分析 基础版 ✅优点： 结构清晰，三段式逻辑（出行→环境→购物→总结），要点齐全； 词汇简单、句式简短，几乎没有复杂语法，通俗易懂，适合初中基础薄弱学生； 紧扣主题，无偏题，观点明确，语法错误少。 ❌不足： 句式单一，大量简单句堆砌，缺少细节，描写干瘪； 表达重复：多次使用 now；描述比较笼统，缺少对比数据； 缺少衔接升级、情感渲染，语言平淡，很难拿到高分。 提升版 ✅亮点： 细节扩充：增加堵车原因、通勤时长对比（40 分钟缩短至 15 分钟）、绿化工程、高科技大棚等细节，内容更充实； 句式丰富：并列句、原因状语、感叹句交替使用，摆脱清一色简单句； 用词升级，替换简单词汇；逻辑衔接更自然； 对比感更强，突出 “变化” 这一核心主题；结尾升华更有力度。 二、亮点词汇 & 短语对比 基础版普通表达 提升版升级替换 is not the same as before has become quite different It often took me a long time The trip often took a long time because of heavy traffic（增加原因） It’s faster now much faster and more comfortable（增加感受） there are many trees and flowers the land is covered with green trees and beautiful flowers shopping is easier now shopping is much easier now These changes make my life better All these changes have greatly improved my daily life such a good time such a wonderful time 提升版优化手法 增加原因状语 原：I used to take the bus to school. It often took me a long time. 改：I used to take the bus to school. The trip often took a long time because of heavy traffic. 巧用数据对比，强化 “变化” It cuts my travel time from 40 minutes to just 15 minutes. 加入人文背景，丰富内容 But with greening efforts, now the land is covered with green trees and beautiful flowers. 陈述句改为感叹句，增强情感 It’s convenient. → How convenient it is! 时态升级：一般现在时 → 现在完成时（加分语法） These changes make my life better. → All these changes have greatly improved my daily life. 1（25-26九年级上·河南驻马店·期中）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华, 你校英语俱乐部正以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示： 要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years.________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是中学生李华，你校将举办“科技改变生活”征文活动，请你根据以下表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈AI产品对青少年学习和生活的影响，词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 I’m Li Hua from Grade 9. I want to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．改革开放以来，中国已飞速发展，但同时也存在一些问题，假如你是新时代的中学生Leo，请你根据以下图表的提示写一封信给市长，简要介绍中国的发展变化，分析当前存在的社会问题，并提出你的建议。 Changes in China Amazing achievement modern, richer, convenient Problems we face traffic environment job opportunities For a better future take measures, offer, public transportation we students… 要求： 1. 内容完整，语句通顺，结构清晰； 2. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear Mayor, I’m Leo, a middle school student. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生着巨大的变化，尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等方面。John是你的一位美国朋友，他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”，尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴趣。请你以“The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me”为题，写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。 Feeling … 注意事项： （1）必须包含所有图中提示信息，可适当发挥，词数80左右； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around me ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．“双减”政策实施后，同学们的课余活动有了变化。某英文网站正面向全市中学生开展以“Changing Free-time Activities”为主题的征文活动，请用所给提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述所发生的变化及你的感受。 In the past: do my homework; no time for free-time activities; attend many training courses; Now: develop hobbies; do the housework; do some volunteer work; ... Benefits (益处): relax; learn knowledge and skills; ... Your opinions: 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Changing Free-time Activities ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．假如你是Tom，请根据下表的提示，写一封信给你的笔友Mary，谈谈福州的变化。 概况 历史悠久，人口800多万。 过去 1.空气清新，鸟语花香； 2.生活清贫，道路狭窄。 现在 1.工厂多，为许多年轻人提供了工作机会； 2.超市多，购物方便； 3.公共交通发达。 现存问题 ……（至少一点） 建议 ……（至少一点） 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，可适当发挥； （3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mary, I have been in Fuzhou for ten years. Now let me tell you something about it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom 8．假如你是Tom，请根据下表的提示，给你的笔友Mary写一封信，谈谈福州的变化。 Basic information A long history, a population of over 8.5 million Past ●Fresh air, nice flowers ●A poor life, narrow roads Now ●More jobs ●Many supermarkets ●Convenient transportation Problems ……（至少一点） Advice ……（至少一点） 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，可适当发挥； （3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； Dear Mary,      I have been in Fuzhou for ten years. Now let me tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom $ Unit 1 The Changing World 单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为“生活中的变化”, 属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“社会服务与人际沟通”这一主题群,涉及子主题“家乡和社会的变迁,历史的发展,对未来的畅想”。 该单元常见的写作任务是描述个人生活、家乡、校园等方面的今昔变化,阐述这些变化带来的感受与思考。体裁多为记叙文或说明文。 文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 核心词汇 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 development 发展 transportation 交通 environment 环境 condition 条件 progress 进步 pollution 污染 community 社区 convenient 便利的 wide 宽阔的 comfortable 舒适的 modern 现代化的 polluted 受污染的 核心短语 take place 发生 in the past 在过去 in recent years 近年来 living conditions 生活条件 public transport 公共交通 clean up 清理 make great progress 取得巨大进步 句型积累 【开头型】 1.Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past ten years.过去十年间，我的家乡发生了翻天覆地的变化。 2.My hometown is no longer the small village that it used to be.我的家乡已不再是过去的那个小村庄了。 3.Our hometown has changed and developed quickly in recent years.我们的家乡近年来发生了迅速的变化 4.Great changes have taken place in the world around us. 我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。 5.Our world is changing faster than ever before. 我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。 6.If we compare the past with the present, we can see many differences. 对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。 7.Times are changing and our life has changed a lot. 时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。 8.With time going by, the world has changed greatly. 随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。 【中间句】 1.There used to be narrow dirt roads and shabby low houses everywhere.过去到处都是狭窄的土路和破旧的低矮房屋。 2.We have built wide asphalt roads and many tall apartment buildings since 2016.自2016年以来，我们已修建了宽阔的沥青道路及众多高层公寓楼。 3.People used to walk or ride old bikes to go out, but most families have owned private cars now.过去人们出行多步行或骑旧自行车，但如今大多数家庭都拥有私家车。 4.There used to be clear rivers and fresh air around our community.我们社区周围曾经有清澈的河流和清新的空气。 5.We should take small daily actions to protect our beautiful hometown.我们应该每天采取一些小行动来保护我们美丽的家乡。 6.People used to go out on foot or by bike. 人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。 7.Now more people choose cars and high-speed trains to travel. 如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。 8.In the past, people communicated by letters. 过去人们靠书信交流。 9.Nowadays we chat online anytime and anywhere. 如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。 10.Life was simple but hard many years ago. 多年前生活简单却很艰苦。 11.At present, our life is much more comfortable and convenient. 现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。 12.Technology makes our daily life much easier. 科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。 13.Our hometown looks quite different from what it was before. 我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。 14.People’s lifestyle has changed completely over the years. 这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。 15.The rapid development brings us both advantages and new challenges. 快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。 【结尾句 】 1.I take great pride in every wonderful change that has appeared around us.我对周围发生的每一个美好变化都感到无比自豪。 2.I firmly believe my hometown will become cleaner and more lively in the coming years.我坚信，在未来几年里，我的家乡将会变得更加整洁、更加充满活力。 3.Let’s work together to make our changing hometown cleaner than ever.让我们共同努力，把不断变化的家乡建设得比以往更加清洁。 4.I’m proud of the great changes in our world. 我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。 5.I believe our world will become even better in the future. 我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。 6.We should accept changes and keep learning all the time. 我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。 7.Changes make our life colorful and meaningful. 变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。 8.As the world changes, we also need to improve ourselves. 世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。 【名言积累】 1.Be the change that you wish to see in the world.欲变世界,先变自身。 2.Change your thoughts and you change your world.改变想法,你就能改变世界。 3.Change is the opportunity to create a better future.改变是创造更美好未来的契机。 佳句仿写 1.1.Now that I am older,my life is different from when I was in primary school.【教材Section B 3a】 仿写：现在我们的社会发展很快,我的日常生活已经变得很不一样了。 _________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________ 2. 在过去的几年里,我的日常生活发生了巨大的变化。 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ 3. .For example,my primary school was near my home…【教材Section B 3a】 仿写：例如,过去我常常乘公共汽车上学。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.This makes my daily trip fast and comfortable.（用比较级升格,突出对比）_________________________________________________________________ 5 .如今,这片土地上绿树成荫,河流也清澈见底。【教材Section B 2c】 翻译： ___________________________________________________________ 6.Shopping is much easier now.（用besides升格,衔接上下文） _________________________________________________________________ 7.It has improved local lives.【教材Section A 2c】 仿写：所有这些变化极大地改善了我的日常生活。 _________________________________________________________________ 8. 他们比以前富裕多了,也快乐多了。 【教材Section A 4c】 翻译： __________________________________________________ 答案：1.Now that our society is developing fast, my daily life has become quite different. 2.Great changes have taken place in my daily life over the past few years. 3.For example, I used to take the bus to school. 4.This makes my daily trip much faster and more comfortable. 5.Now, the land is covered with green trees and the rivers are clean and fresh. 6.Besides, shopping is much easier now. 7.All these changes have greatly improved my daily life. 8.They are much richer and happier than they once were. （Unit 1 Section B 3d ） 审题指导 1. 文体：记叙文 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态：一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时 教材写作品读 ①Great changes have taken place in my life since primary school. My neighbourhood has changed quite a lot.②With support from the government,we have a new sports park. My grandma does square dancing there. And my little brother plays happily and I can exercise there.③As a result,our free time activities become richer. My school life is much better now. We ④used to have lots of homework and tests. Now,with the “double reduction” policy,we have more time for sports and hobbies after class. All students ⑤benefit from this great change. My way of studying has changed a lot too. We use smart whiteboards and digital tools in class. It is very convenient to learn,and we learn ⑥with ease. ⑦Although many things have changed,one thing has stayed the same. I still have warm love from my family,and they always give me strength in my heart. 教材原句 ①【Section A 4c】Now great changes have taken place.（take place发生） ②【Section B 2c】With support from the government,Wang Shanghai led a group of 369 people… （with support from…在……的支持下） ③【Section A 4c】As a result,the lives of local people improved.（as a result作结果状语） ④【Section A 2d】The area used to be covered with sand. （used to对比过去的动作或状态） ⑤【Section B 1b】Local Kenyans have benefited a lot from the new railway. （benefit from 从……中获益） ⑥【Section B 1b】I am able to…make business deals with ease.（with ease 轻而易举地） ⑦【Section B 1b】Although China and Kenya are far away…（although引导让步状语从句） 生活中处处都有变化。请你以“Changes in My Daily Life”为题,写一篇100词左右的短文,描述2-3个你生活中发生的具体变化（比如出行、环境、购物、学习方式等）,并谈谈这些变化给你带来的感受。 【基础版】 Changes in My Daily Life Now that our society is developing fast, my daily life is not the same as before. For example, I used to take the bus to school. It often took me a long time to get there. Now our city has a new subway. It takes me only 15 minutes to go to school. It’s faster now. My living environment has also improved. Some places near my home were sandy before. But now there are many trees and flowers there. Besides, shopping is easier now. We have fresh fruit and vegetables all year. We can also buy things online. It’s convenient. These changes make my life better. I feel lucky to live in such a good time. 【提升版】 Changes in My Daily Life Now that our society is developing fast, my daily life has become quite different. For example, I used to take the bus to school. The trip often took a long time because of heavy traffic. Now our city has a new subway. It cuts my travel time from 40 minutes to just 15 minutes. This makes my daily trip much faster and more comfortable. My living environment has also improved. In the past,some areas near my home were sandy. But with greening efforts,now the land is covered with green trees and beautiful flowers. Besides,shopping is much easier now. High-tech greenhouses now provide fresh fruit and vegetables all year. We can also buy different products online. How convenient it is! All these changes have greatly improved my daily life. I feel lucky to live in such a wonderful time. 总体分析 基础版 ✅优点： 结构清晰，三段式逻辑（出行→环境→购物→总结），要点齐全； 词汇简单、句式简短，几乎没有复杂语法，通俗易懂，适合初中基础薄弱学生； 紧扣主题，无偏题，观点明确，语法错误少。 ❌不足： 句式单一，大量简单句堆砌，缺少细节，描写干瘪； 表达重复：多次使用 now；描述比较笼统，缺少对比数据； 缺少衔接升级、情感渲染，语言平淡，很难拿到高分。 提升版 ✅亮点： 细节扩充：增加堵车原因、通勤时长对比（40 分钟缩短至 15 分钟）、绿化工程、高科技大棚等细节，内容更充实； 句式丰富：并列句、原因状语、感叹句交替使用，摆脱清一色简单句； 用词升级，替换简单词汇；逻辑衔接更自然； 对比感更强，突出 “变化” 这一核心主题；结尾升华更有力度。 二、亮点词汇 & 短语对比 基础版普通表达 提升版升级替换 is not the same as before has become quite different It often took me a long time The trip often took a long time because of heavy traffic（增加原因） It’s faster now much faster and more comfortable（增加感受） there are many trees and flowers the land is covered with green trees and beautiful flowers shopping is easier now shopping is much easier now These changes make my life better All these changes have greatly improved my daily life such a good time such a wonderful time 提升版优化手法 增加原因状语 原：I used to take the bus to school. It often took me a long time. 改：I used to take the bus to school. The trip often took a long time because of heavy traffic. 巧用数据对比，强化 “变化” It cuts my travel time from 40 minutes to just 15 minutes. 加入人文背景，丰富内容 But with greening efforts, now the land is covered with green trees and beautiful flowers. 陈述句改为感叹句，增强情感 It’s convenient. → How convenient it is! 时态升级：一般现在时 → 现在完成时（加分语法） These changes make my life better. → All these changes have greatly improved my daily life. （Unit 1 Section B 3d ） 审题指导 2. 文体：记叙文 2.人称：第一人称 3.时态：一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时 教材写作品读 ①Great changes have taken place in my life since primary school. My neighbourhood has changed quite a lot.②With support from the government,we have a new sports park. My grandma does square dancing there. And my little brother plays happily and I can exercise there.③As a result,our free time activities become richer. My school life is much better now. We ④used to have lots of homework and tests. Now,with the “double reduction” policy,we have more time for sports and hobbies after class. All students ⑤benefit from this great change. My way of studying has changed a lot too. We use smart whiteboards and digital tools in class. It is very convenient to learn,and we learn ⑥with ease. ⑦Although many things have changed,one thing has stayed the same. I still have warm love from my family,and they always give me strength in my heart. 教材原句 ①【Section A 4c】Now great changes have taken place.（take place发生） ②【Section B 2c】With support from the government,Wang Shanghai led a group of 369 people… （with support from…在……的支持下） ③【Section A 4c】As a result,the lives of local people improved.（as a result作结果状语） ④【Section A 2d】The area used to be covered with sand. （used to对比过去的动作或状态） ⑤【Section B 1b】Local Kenyans have benefited a lot from the new railway. （benefit from 从……中获益） ⑥【Section B 1b】I am able to…make business deals with ease.（with ease 轻而易举地） ⑦【Section B 1b】Although China and Kenya are far away…（although引导让步状语从句） 1（25-26九年级上·河南驻马店·期中）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华, 你校英语俱乐部正以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示： 要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years.________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时 明确要点：过去和现在的环境状况，对家乡美好未来的期待 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明核心主题——家乡近些年发生巨大的变化 主体段：今昔对比，描述过去落后的环境状况和现在家乡环境改善后的结果 结尾段：展望未来，表达对家乡变得更加美丽和生活更加美好的期待 【范文欣赏】 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, and the air wasn’t fresh. There were few trees, so birds seldom came. But now, everything has changed! The roads have become clean and wide, with colorful flowers on both sides. We’ve planted many trees, and the air is fresh again. Birds sing in the green parks every morning. In the future, I hope my hometown will be more beautiful. Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment. Factories will use clean energy, and rivers will be clearer. I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here! Let’s work together to make it happen. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，围绕单元话题生活中的变化，介绍家乡今昔变迁； ②时态：综合运用一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时、一般将来时。一般过去时描述家乡过去的面貌；现在完成时体现多年来产生的变化；一般现在时描写家乡当下景象；一般将来时畅想家乡未来； ③提示：写作围绕 “今昔对比” 展开，梳理过去、现在、未来三层内容，合理运用多种时态进行对比，适当增添环境细节增强画面感，做到逻辑清晰，情感自然流露。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总起全文，引出主题：自我介绍，开门见山点明家乡近些年发生了巨大变化； 第二步，分层对比，展开主体：先描述家乡过去落后的环境状况，再描写如今道路、绿化、空气等方面焕然一新的景象，通过今昔对照凸显变化； 第三步，展望未来，升华结尾：畅想家乡今后的发展蓝图，表达美好愿景并发出倡议。 [亮点词汇] change greatly 变化巨大 narrow and dirty 狭窄脏乱 on both sides 在两边 protect the environment 保护环境 clean energy 清洁能源 [高分句型] In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, and the air wasn’t fresh.（一般过去时，并列句，描写过去状况，用于今昔对比） The roads have become clean and wide, with colorful flowers on both sides.（现在完成时 + with 复合结构，描绘当下崭新景象） I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here!（宾语从句，表达内心期许，升华文章主旨） 要点一：过去的环境 the roads were narrow and dirty/the air wasn’t fresh/There were few trees/birds seldom came/Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere等 要点二：现在的环境 The roads have become clean and wide/with colorful flowers on both sides/We’ve planted many trees/the air is fresh again/Birds sing in the green parks every morning/The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are cleaner and the sky is bluer等 要点三：未来的展望 美好期望：I hope my hometown will be more beautiful/I hope our living environment will get much better等 提出建议：Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment/Factories will use clean energy/rivers will be clearer/we will set up more community gardens等 信心表达：I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here/I believe the future of my hometown will be better and better等 发出呼吁：Let’s work together to make it happen/Let’s take small actions together to protect our lovely hometown等 2．假如你是中学生李华，你校将举办“科技改变生活”征文活动，请你根据以下表格提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈AI产品对青少年学习和生活的影响，词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所提示的信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。 I’m Li Hua from Grade 9. I want to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 I’m Li Hua from Grade 9. I want to talk about how AI changes teenagers’ lives. AI brings many positive influences. It helps us with study—we can get quick explanations for difficult problems. Also, it makes daily life more interesting, like AI-powered games that keep us entertained. But we need to use AI properly. First, control the time we spend on AI products. Second, we should be careful about wrong answers from AI. What’s more, avoid over-relying on AI for schoolwork. In a word, AI is helpful, but we need to use it wisely. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：是“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接已给的开头，引出话题； 第二步，介绍AI带来的积极影响，提出合理使用建议； 第三步，结尾总结。 [亮点词汇] ①talk about谈论 ②be careful about小心 ③in a word总之 [高分句型] Also, it makes daily life more interesting, like AI-powered games that keep us entertained. (定语从句) 3．改革开放以来，中国已飞速发展，但同时也存在一些问题，假如你是新时代的中学生Leo，请你根据以下图表的提示写一封信给市长，简要介绍中国的发展变化，分析当前存在的社会问题，并提出你的建议。 Changes in China Amazing achievement modern, richer, convenient Problems we face traffic environment job opportunities For a better future take measures, offer, public transportation we students… 要求： 1. 内容完整，语句通顺，结构清晰； 2. 词数80左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)； 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 Dear Mayor, I’m Leo, a middle school student. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 例文： Dear Mayor, I’m Leo, a middle school student. I’m writing to share my thoughts about our city. China has made amazing progress. Our life is more modern, richer and convenient. However, we also face problems like traffic jams, environmental pollution and fewer job opportunities. To build a better future, I suggest taking measures. The government can offer more public transportation to reduce traffic. Also, we students promise to protect the environment by planting trees and saving energy. I believe our city will become more beautiful if we work together. Yours sincerely, Leo 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信体应用文，写给市长的一封信； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已明确给出，考生应注意不要遗漏图表中关于中国的发展变化、当前存在的社会问题以及建议的要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“I’m writing to share my thoughts about our city.”来引出后文重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。先介绍中国的发展变化，如生活更现代化、更富裕、更便利；接着分析当前存在的社会问题，如交通拥堵、环境污染和就业机会减少；最后提出建议，如政府提供更多公共交通、学生保护环境等； 第三步，书写结语。表达“相信城市会更美好”的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①amazing progress惊人的进步 ②traffic jams交通拥堵 ③environmental pollution环境污染 ④fewer job opportunities更少的就业机会 ⑤take measures采取措施 [高分句型] ①However, we also face problems like traffic jams, environmental pollution and fewer job opportunities.（使用“like”列举问题，使句子结构清晰，易于理解。） ②I believe our city will become more beautiful if we work together.（“if”引导条件状语从句，表达对未来的美好期望。） 4.马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has had great changes. Now let me share some with you. The environment has changed a lot. The houses are newer and brighter, and the roads are wide and clean with beautiful flowers on both sides. As for people, they live a happier life. They are more confident and kind. Our farm products are rich and sell well online, bringing more money to us. I am proud of these changes. I love my hometown and hope it will become more and more beautiful in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：人们的变化、房屋道路的变化、农产品变化、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（李华） 注意事项：不得透露真实人名和校名，内容积极向上 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出家乡变化（已给出） 主体段：分点描述人们、房屋道路、农产品的具体变化 结尾段：表达感受与展望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：people 变化描述：happier / more confident / kinder / more hardworking / more united等 具体表现：wear nicer clothes / smile more often / help each other / work together / live a better life等 要点二：houses, roads 房屋变化：newer / brighter / taller / more beautiful / modern等 道路变化：wider / cleaner / smoother / lined with trees / with street lights等 位置/环境描述：on both sides of the road / in front of houses / around the village等 要点三：farm products 产品种类：rice / fruits / vegetables / tea / honey / flowers等 销售方式：sell well online / shipped to big cities / sold in supermarkets / exported abroad等 带来好处：bring more money / improve living standards / make farmers proud等 要点四：your feelings 感受词汇：proud / happy / excited / hopeful / thankful / amazed等 5．随着社会的快速发展，我们的生活发生着巨大的变化，尤其是在居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动等方面。John是你的一位美国朋友，他是一名不折不扣的“中国迷”，尤其对近些年来中国的变化非常感兴趣。请你以“The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me”为题，写一篇短文向他详细介绍这些变化。 Feeling … 注意事项： （1）必须包含所有图中提示信息，可适当发挥，词数80左右； （2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； （3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。 The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around me ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 The Great Changes Have Taken Place Around Me With the rapid development of society, great changes have taken place around me, especially in living environment, transportation, shopping and leisure activities.        In the past, people lived in small houses. Now, many tall buildings have been built. For transportation, in the old days, people mainly rode bicycles. But now, there are various means of transportation like planes, trains and cars. When it comes to shopping, people used to go to small shops. Now, large supermarkets are everywhere, making shopping more convenient. In terms of leisure activities, people used to listen to the radio or play chess. Now, people can surf the Internet, travel and do many other interesting things.        I feel very happy and lucky to live in such a wonderful time. I believe our life will become better and better in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇看图作文； ②时态：以现在完成时、一般过去时和一般现在时为主； ③提示：文章围绕 “身边的巨大变化” 展开，清晰涵盖居住环境、交通、购物、休闲活动四个维度的对比，逻辑连贯，细节丰富，突出了 “变化” 这一核心要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题； 第二步，按 “过去——现在” 的对比结构，分别阐述四个维度的具体变化：； 第三步，结尾抒发个人感受，表达对当下生活的喜悦与幸运，并展望未来生活越来越好。 [亮点词汇] ①with the rapid development of随着…… 的快速发展 ②in the past 在过去 ③in terms of 就……而言 [高分句型] ①Now, large supermarkets are everywhere, making shopping more convenient.（现在分词短语作结果状语） ②I believe our life will become better and better in the future.（省略that的宾语从句） 6．“双减”政策实施后，同学们的课余活动有了变化。某英文网站正面向全市中学生开展以“Changing Free-time Activities”为主题的征文活动，请用所给提示写一篇英语短文投稿，讲述所发生的变化及你的感受。 In the past: do my homework; no time for free-time activities; attend many training courses; Now: develop hobbies; do the housework; do some volunteer work; ... Benefits (益处): relax; learn knowledge and skills; ... Your opinions: 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Changing Free-time Activities ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Changing Free-time Activities In the past, I had to do my homework and attend many training courses. There was no time for any free-time activities. But since the Double Reduction policy was carried out, things have changed. I can develop my hobbies, such as reading and painting. I also help my parents do the housework. Sometimes, I do some volunteer work. These changes are really great. I can relax myself and learn knowledge and skills from different activities. For example, when I do volunteer work, I can communicate with different people and learn how to get along with them. All these changes make my life more colorful and meaningful. I hope this kind of life can continue. Moreover, I will make good use of my free time to improve myself. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包含所有提示要点，可适当补充细节，使文章内容充实；行文时多使用第一人称，适当运用短语和多样句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，对比铺垫——呈现“双减”前的课余状态； 第二步，核心转折——阐述“双减”后的课余变化； 第三步，价值升华——分析课余变化带来的积极意义； 第四步，总结展望——表达对现状的期待与未来的行动。 [亮点词汇] ①carry out 实施；执行 ②make good use of 充分利用 [高分句型] ①I hope this kind of life can continue.  (宾语从句) ②For example, when I do volunteer work, I can communicate with different people and learn how to get along with them. (when引导的时间状语从句) 7．假如你是Tom，请根据下表的提示，写一封信给你的笔友Mary，谈谈福州的变化。 概况 历史悠久，人口800多万。 过去 1.空气清新，鸟语花香； 2.生活清贫，道路狭窄。 现在 1.工厂多，为许多年轻人提供了工作机会； 2.超市多，购物方便； 3.公共交通发达。 现存问题 ……（至少一点） 建议 ……（至少一点） 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，可适当发挥； （3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； （4）不得使用真实姓名和校名。 Dear Mary, I have been in Fuzhou for ten years. Now let me tell you something about it. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom 【答案】例文 Dear Mary, I have been in Fuzhou for ten years. Now let me tell you something about it. Fuzhou is a city with a long history and a population of over 8 million. In the past, the air was fresh, with birds singing and flowers blooming. However, people lived a poor life and the roads were narrow. Now, there are many factories that provide job opportunities for many young people. There are also lots of supermarkets, making shopping very convenient. Besides, the public transportation is well-developed. But there are still some problems. The air quality is not as good as before. I hope you can come to Fuzhou one day and see these changes for yourself. Yours, Tom [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时、一般过去时和现在完成时； ③提示：需涵盖福州的历史人口、过去状况、现在变化、现存问题及建议，不得遗漏，可适当增加细节使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开头说明在福州的时间，引出介绍福州变化的主题。 第二步：介绍福州的历史和人口概况，对比过去的环境、生活和道路状况。 第三步：阐述现在福州在工厂、超市和公共交通方面的发展变化。 第四步：指出福州现存的空气质量问题。 第五步：结尾表达希望笔友来福州亲眼看看这些变化的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①a city with a long history历史悠久的城市 ②birds singing and flowers blooming鸟语花香 ③job opportunities工作机会 ④air quality空气质量 [高分句型] ①Now, there are many factories that provide job opportunities for many young people. (that引导定语从句，说明工厂的作用) ②There are also lots of supermarkets, making shopping very convenient. (现在分词making作结果状语，体现超市的便利) 8．假如你是Tom，请根据下表的提示，给你的笔友Mary写一封信，谈谈福州的变化。 Basic information A long history, a population of over 8.5 million Past ●Fresh air, nice flowers ●A poor life, narrow roads Now ●More jobs ●Many supermarkets ●Convenient transportation Problems ……（至少一点） Advice ……（至少一点） 要求： （1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； （2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，可适当发挥； （3）词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； Dear Mary,      I have been in Fuzhou for ten years. Now let me tell you something about it. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tom 【答案】例文 Dear Mary,      I have been in Fuzhou for ten years. Now let me tell you something about it. Fuzhou has a long history and a population of over 8.5 million.      In the past, people lived a poor life with narrow roads, but there was fresh air and nice flowers.      In recent years, great changes have taken place here. More jobs come from new factories, many supermarkets make shopping easy, and transportation has become convenient.      However, as the city develops, it has problems, such as air pollution, noise pollution and so on. I think we need strict rules to protect the environment.      I believe with the help of our government, Fuzhou will become more beautiful. Yours, Tom 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，承接短文开头，介绍福州的概况； 第二步，介绍福州的过去； 第三步，介绍福州的现在； 第四步，介绍现存问题和建议。 第五步，书写总结， 表达祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①a long history历史悠久 ②take place发生 ③strict rules严格的规则 ④with the help of 在……的帮助下 [高分句型] ①In recent years, great changes have taken place here. (现在完成时) ②I think we need strict rules to protect the environment. 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