Unit 1 The Changing World 单元主题写作讲解、精练-2026-2027学年新人教版九年级英语上学期

本初中英语讲义聚焦“变化的世界”主题写作，系统梳理今昔对比所需的时态（used to、一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时）、描述性形容词（convenient、modern等）及连接词（but、however等），构建家乡变化、个人生活变化、变化的原因或影响三大写作方向的学习支架，辅以词汇句型分类积累、模板整理及写作前练习（句型转换、替换等），夯实写作基础。 该资料以核心素养为设计亮点，通过典例分析（如“Changes in My Hometown”范文）和结构化模板提升语言能力，结合肯尼亚蒙内铁路等中外案例培养文化意识，引导学生辩证看待发展与问题发展思维品质。课中助力教师系统教学，课后精练题目（如书信、发言稿写作）帮助学生巩固语言运用，查漏补缺，提升综合写作能力。

Unit 1 The Changing World 单元主题写作讲解、精练 目录 · 单元主题写作讲解梳理 单元写作要点讲解、素材梳理：系统分析单元主题写作的要点，写作方向和写作内容，总结归纳写作相关的素材，夯实基础，打牢根基，构建完整的写作体系。 · 单元写作精练 单元主题写作能力提升练：在系统梳理单元主题写作要点，归纳写作相关素材的基础上，通过典型的写作练习、体会词汇，句型在具体语境中的使用，锻炼谋篇布局，语言组织，词句运用和表情达意的能力，提升学生的综合写作能力。 单元写作要点讲解、素材梳理 一、单元主题和写作要求 1. 单元主题概括 本单元以“变化的世界”（The Changing World）为核心话题，围绕“变化”这一主题展开，内容涵盖家乡面貌、个人生活、交通方式、环境治理等多个维度的今昔对比。通过听、说、读、看、写等活动，引导学生观察并描述身边发生的变化，思考变化带来的影响，并学会用英语流畅地表达对比与变化。 2. 写作要求 学完本单元后，学生应能够： （1）正确使用 used to 结构、一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时来描述和对比今昔的变化； （2）运用本单元所学的描述性形容词（如 convenient, modern, clean, wide）和连接词（如 but, however, as a result, although），使表达更加丰富和连贯； （3）能围绕“变化”这一主题，完成一篇结构清晰、内容充实的短文，如描述家乡的变迁、个人生活的变化或探讨变化的原因； （4）运用 that 引导的宾语从句表达个人观点和信念。 【跨文化/素养目标】 （1）引导学生关注身边及世界范围内的积极变化（如家乡建设、交通发展、环境治理、科技进步等），增强对祖国和社会发展的认同感与自豪感； （2）通过对比中外发展案例（如肯尼亚的蒙内铁路），培养学生的国际视野，理解国际合作共赢的意义； （3）在讨论与写作中，引导学生辩证看待变化，既看到进步与发展，也关注发展中可能存在的问题（如环境压力、传统生活方式改变等），培养批判性思维。 二、出题方向和命题形式 1. 写作方向一：描述家乡的变化 （1）主要写作内容： 学生结合本单元所学的词汇和句型，描述自己家乡（或所在城镇）在交通、环境、住房、教育、医疗等方面的变化。通过今昔对比，展现家乡的发展与进步，并表达个人感受。 （2）可能的命题形式： ① 话题作文： 例如以 “Changes in My Hometown” 为题写一篇短文。 ② 材料作文： 给出一个关于家乡过去和现在对比的表格，要求学生根据表格信息完成一篇描述变化的短文。 （3）典例分析 你的家乡在过去的十年里发生了巨大的变化。请你以 “Changes in My Hometown” 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述这些变化。 Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a small town. Great changes have taken place here in the past ten years. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty. People used to ride bikes or walk to go out. There were no supermarkets or big hospitals. Students studied in old buildings with no modern equipment. Now, everything is different. The streets are wide and clean. Many families have their own cars. It is very convenient to go shopping in the new supermarket. The government has also built a modern hospital. Our school has a new library with many books and computers. I feel very happy and proud about these changes. I hope my hometown will become better and better. 范文分析： 分析维度 具体内容 语篇类型 话题作文/说明文。以第一人称叙述，描述家乡的变化。 篇章结构 三段式结构：第一段引入话题，点明变化；第二段从道路、交通、设施、学校等方面对比过去和现在；第三段表达个人感受和愿望。 词汇句型运用 ① 好词： great, narrow, dirty, modern, convenient, proud ② 好句： - Great changes have taken place here in the past ten years.（现在完成时开篇点题，简洁有力地引出话题。） - In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty.（用 in the past 引过去，were 呼应过去状态。） - People used to ride bikes or walk to go out.（used to 结构精准描述过去的习惯性行为。） - Now, everything is different.（一个简洁的短句，作为过渡句，巧妙地将内容从“过去”转向“现在”。） - I feel very happy and proud about these changes.（用简单句直接表达情感，真实自然。） 逻辑衔接过渡 运用 In the past... 和 Now... 进行清晰的时间对比；用 also 补充额外信息；用 I hope... 自然收束全文。 时态运用 一般过去时 (were, used to) 描述过去；现在完成时 (have taken place) 和一般现在时 (are, is, have) 描述现在和现状，时态转换清晰准确。 （4）模版整理 Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a ____________ (描述家乡的总体印象，如 small town / big city). Great changes have taken place here in the past ____________ (时间段，如 ten years). In the past, the ____________ (具体方面，如 roads / houses) were ____________ (过去的状态，如 narrow / old) . People used to ____________ (过去的行为或方式，如 walk to work / live in small flats). There was/were no ____________ (过去没有的事物，如 supermarkets / modern hospitals). Students ____________ (过去的学习条件，如 studied in old buildings). Now, everything is different. The ____________ (具体方面) are ____________ (现在的状态，如 wide and clean). Many families have their own ____________ (现在拥有的东西，如 cars / computers). The government has also built ____________ (新建的设施，如 a new park / a modern hospital). Our school has ____________ (学校的变化，如 a big library with many books). I feel ____________ (表达感受，如 happy and proud) about these changes. I hope my hometown will ____________ (表达期望，如 become better and better / be more beautiful). 2. 写作方向二：描述个人生活的变化 （1）主要写作内容： 学生描述自己从小学到初中在生活、学习、习惯等方面的变化。通过今昔对比，展现个人的成长，并感悟到某些不变的东西（如家人之间的爱、对未来的希望等）。 （2）可能的命题形式： ① 话题作文： 例如以 “Changes in My Life” 为题写一篇短文。 ② 读写结合： 阅读教材P9 “Changes in My Life” 一文后，模仿其结构和内容，写一篇关于自己生活变化的短文。 （3）典例分析 你的生活与小学时相比发生了很多变化。请以 “Changes in My Life” 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述这些变化。 Changes in My Life Now that I am a junior high school student, my life has changed a lot compared with that in primary school. When I was in primary school, my school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now, my school is far away, so I take a bus with my friends every day. I have made many new friends on the bus. My study habits have changed too. In the past, I used to study alone and I was a little shy. Now, I often discuss problems with my classmates. I have become more confident and active in class. I believe that teamwork helps us learn better. All in all, my life has changed in many ways. But one thing has never changed: my love for my family and my dream of becoming a good doctor. 范文分析： 分析维度 具体内容 语篇类型 话题作文/记叙文。以第一人称叙述个人生活的变化。 篇章结构 三段式结构：第一段引入话题，总起全文；第二段从上学方式和学习习惯两方面对比今昔；第三段总结并点明“不变”之处，升华主题。 词汇句型运用 ① 好词： changed a lot, compared with, far away, discuss, confident, active, teamwork ② 好句： - Now that I am a junior high school student, my life has changed a lot compared with that in primary school.（用 now that 引导原因状语从句，自然引出变化，compared with 准确表达对比关系。） - ...so I used to walk to school with my parents.（used to 描述过去的习惯，so 体现因果逻辑。） - I believe that teamwork helps us learn better.（用 that 引导的宾语从句表达观点，简洁有力。） - But one thing has never changed: my love for my family and my dream of becoming a good doctor.（用冒号引出具体内容，强调“不变”的核心，结构新颖，情感真挚。） 逻辑衔接过渡 使用 Now that... 引出背景；When I was... 和 Now... 对比过去和现在；In the past... 和 Now... 进一步具体化；All in all... 总结全文；But... 转折，引出“不变”的部分。 时态运用 全文以一般现在时 (is, have, take, discuss) 描述现状，用一般过去时 (was, used to) 和现在完成时 (have changed) 描述过去的经历和已发生的变化，时态运用准确。 （4）模版整理 Changes in My Life Now that I am ____________ (现在的身份，如 a junior high school student), my life has changed a lot compared with that in ____________ (对比的过去时段，如 primary school). When I was in ____________ (过去的时段), I used to ____________ (过去的行为或习惯). Now, I ____________ (现在的行为或习惯). I have also made ____________ (带来的新变化或收获). My ____________ (另一个方面，如 study habits / hobbies) have changed too. In the past, I ____________. Now, I ____________. I believe that ____________ (表达观点或感悟). All in all, my life has changed in many ways. But one thing has never changed: my ____________ (不变的事物，如 love for my family / dream). 3. 写作方向三：探讨变化的原因或影响 （1）主要写作内容： 学生根据本单元所学内容，结合自己的观察和思考，探讨某一具体变化（如环境改善、交通发展、生活水平提高等）的原因或它给人们生活带来的影响。 （2）可能的命题形式： ① 发言稿： 在班级举办的“我看家乡新变化”主题班会上，就某一变化发表看法。 ② 议论文： 例如以 “How Have New Roads Changed Our Lives?” 为题写一篇短文。 ③ 材料作文： 提供一个关于某地变化（如塞罕坝造林、蒙内铁路建设）的案例，要求学生分析变化的原因和影响。 （3）典例分析 假设你所在的城市修建了新的地铁线路。请你根据这一变化，写一篇发言稿，谈谈新地铁给人们生活带来的影响。 How Has the New Subway Changed Our Lives? Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to share my thoughts on how the new subway has changed our lives. Before the subway was built, it used to be very inconvenient to travel around the city. The roads were always crowded with cars and buses. It often took me more than an hour to get to school. People used to spend a lot of time on the road every day. Now, the new subway has made a big difference. First, it is much faster and more convenient. It only takes me 20 minutes to get to school. Second, the subway is clean and comfortable. More and more people choose to take the subway instead of driving. As a result, the traffic on the roads has become better. The air is getting cleaner too. In my opinion, the new subway has greatly improved our lives. It not only saves our time but also helps protect the environment. I hope our city will become more beautiful in the future. That's all. Thank you for listening. 范文分析： 分析维度 具体内容 语篇类型 发言稿。开头有称呼和问候语，结尾有致谢。 篇章结构 四段式结构：第一段问候并引入话题；第二段描述地铁修建前的状况；第三段阐述地铁带来的具体影响（速度、便利、环境）；第四段总结观点并表达期望。 词汇句型运用 ① 好词： inconvenient, crowded, spend, difference, comfortable, instead of, protect, environment ② 好句： - Today I'd like to share my thoughts on how the new subway has changed our lives.（发言稿标准引入句，自然得体。） - Before the subway was built, it used to be very inconvenient to travel around the city.（Before... 引导时间状语从句，used to 与主句配合，清晰勾勒出过去的状况。） - First... Second...（运用序数词，使阐述的要点层次分明。） - As a result, the traffic on the roads has become better.（As a result 连接因果，逻辑紧密。） - It not only saves our time but also helps protect the environment.（not only...but also... 连接并列谓语，强调地铁的双重好处，句式紧凑有力。） 逻辑衔接过渡 使用 Before... 和 Now... 进行时间对比；First... Second... 用于列举；As a result 引出结果；In my opinion... 表达个人观点；That's all. Thank you... 是发言稿的标准结束语。 时态运用 一般过去时 (was, used to, took) 描述过去；现在完成时 (has made, has become) 和一般现在时 (takes, choose, is) 描述现状和普遍事实。 （4）模版整理 How Has the New ____________ Changed Our Lives? Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to share my thoughts on how the new ____________ (变化的事物，如 subway / highway) has changed our lives. Before the ____________ was built/opened, it used to be ____________ (描述过去的状况). The ____________ (相关的事物) were ____________ (过去的缺点). It often took ____________ (具体时长) to ____________ (做某事). People used to ____________ (过去的行为或方式). Now, the new ____________ has made a big difference. First, it is ____________ (优点1). It only takes ____________ (具体时长) to ____________ (做某事). Second, it is ____________ (优点2). More and more people choose to ____________ (现在人们的选择). As a result, ____________ (带来的结果). ____________ is getting ____________ (其他方面的改善). In my opinion, the new ____________ has greatly improved our lives. It not only ____________ (好处1) but also ____________ (好处2). I hope ____________ (表达期望). That's all. Thank you for listening. 三、素材积累 1. 词汇素材（按主题分类） （1）描述变化的形容词： convenient 方便的，modern 现代的，wide/broad 宽阔的，clean 干净的 fresh 新鲜的，high-tech 高科技的，smart 智能的 rough 崎岖不平的，narrow 狭窄的，dirty 脏的，poor 贫穷的 （2）描述发展变化的名词： change 变化，development 发展，progress 进步，improvement 改善 environment 环境，transport/transportation 交通，education 教育 housing 住房，medical care 医疗，communication 通讯 product 产品，greenhouse 温室，railway 铁路，highway 公路 （3）与变化相关的动词短语： take place 发生，come back 回来，turn...into... 把……变成…… cut...to... 把……削减到……，benefit from 从……受益 get used to 习惯于，used to do 过去常常做 improve one's life 改善某人的生活，develop industry 发展工业 （4）连接词与过渡语： but / however 但是，然而；although 虽然；because 因为 as a result 因此；for example 例如 not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… both...and... 两者都…… First/First of all... Second... Finally... 首先……其次……最后…… All in all / In conclusion 总之 2. 句型句式素材（按功能分类） （1）引出主题 Great changes have taken place in my hometown.（我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。） My life has changed a lot compared with that in primary school.（我的生活与小学时相比改变了很多。） Today I'd like to talk about the changes in our daily lives.（今天我想谈谈我们日常生活的变化。） （2）描述过去的状态（used to / 一般过去时） There used to be no bridges over the river.（河上过去没有桥。） I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in public.（我过去很害羞，害怕在公众面前讲话。） The hills were covered with sand in the past.（过去山上覆盖着沙子。） We didn't have a supermarket down the street before.（我们以前在这条街上没有超市。） （3）描述现在的变化（现在完成时） The government has built thousands of kilometres of highways.（政府已经修建了数千公里的高速公路。） Our village has become a tourist attraction.（我们的村庄已经变成了一个旅游景点。） The new railway has cut the travel time to only a few hours.（新铁路已经把旅行时间缩短到仅仅几个小时。） I have become more confident in my studies.（我在学习上变得更加自信了。） （4）列举变化与影响（给出理由） First, the new road makes it easier for us to go to school.（第一，新路让我们上学更方便了。） Second, the new hospital provides better medical care.（第二，新医院提供了更好的医疗服务。） As a result, people now have more fresh food to eat.（因此，人们现在有更多的新鲜食物可吃。） For example, you may become confident if you successfully complete difficult tasks.（例如，如果你成功完成了困难的任务，你可能会变得自信起来。） （5）发表观点与感受（含宾语从句） I believe that the changes have made our lives much better.（我相信这些变化已经让我们的生活好多了。） I think that teamwork helps us learn better.（我认为团队合作帮助我们学得更好。） I'm very happy with the new railway built by our Chinese friends.（我对中国朋友修建的新铁路感到非常高兴。） In my opinion, the new subway not only saves our time but also helps protect the environment.（在我看来，新地铁不仅节省了我们的时间，而且有助于保护环境。） （6）衔接句子 In the past... Now,...（过去……现在……） However, everything has changed.（然而，一切都变了。） All in all, my life has changed in many ways.（总之，我的生活已经在很多方面发生了变化。） But one thing stays the same: ...（但是有一件事没变：……） 四、写作前练习 1. 句型转换（用所给连接词合并句子） ① The roads were narrow and dirty. The roads are wide and clean now. （but） ② The new railway is fast. The new railway is convenient. （not only...but also...） ③ The government has built new schools. The government has built new hospitals. （both...and...） 【参考答案】 ① The roads were narrow and dirty, but they are wide and clean now. ② The new railway is not only fast but also convenient. ③ The government has built both new schools and new hospitals. 2. 替换练习（替换句子中的部分词汇，使句子符合新的情境） 原句： In the past, my school was near my home, so I walked to school. Now, my school is far away, so I take a bus. ① 描述你的朋友Jimmy家的变化。他过去住在公寓里，现在住在带花园的房子里。 【参考答案】 In the past, Jimmy lived in a small flat. Now, he lives in a house with a big garden. ② 描述你所在城市交通方式的变化。过去人们主要骑自行车，现在很多人开电动汽车。 【参考答案】 In the past, people used to ride bikes to go out. Now, many people drive electric cars. 3. 扩写练习（在横线上补充内容，使句子更丰富） ① Great changes have taken place in ____________ (地点) in the past ____________ (时间段). 【参考答案】 Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the past ten years. ② In the past, the ____________ (事物) were ____________ (过去的缺点), but now they are ____________ (现在的优点). 【参考答案】 In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, but now they are wide and clean. ③ The new ____________ (设施/方式) has made our lives more ____________ (感受). 【参考答案】 The new subway has made our lives more convenient and comfortable. 4. 仿写练习（仿照范例写出新句子） 范例： My hometown has changed a lot. It used to be quiet, but now it is busy and modern. ① 仿写：描述你的一位朋友性格的变化。 【参考答案】 My friend Jack has changed a lot. He used to be shy, but now he is outgoing and active. ② 仿写：描述你所在城市交通方式的变化。 【参考答案】 The transport in our city has changed a lot. People used to take slow buses, but now they take the fast subway. 5. 连词成段练习（将下列句子连成一段连贯的话，用上适当的连接词） 句子：① In the past, there were few trees in our village. ② The environment was poor. ③ The government encouraged people to plant trees. ④ Our village has planted thousands of trees. ⑤ The environment is much better now. 【参考答案】（仅供参考，衔接方式不唯一）： In the past, there were few trees in our village, and the environment was poor. However, the government encouraged people to plant trees. As a result, our village has planted thousands of trees. Now, the environment is much better than before. 单元主题写作能力提升练 1．“变化”是生活中永恒的主题。请根据以下提示，以“Changes in My Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述你生活中发生的变化。 1. 过去的生活是怎样的(如：学习方式、兴趣爱好、日常生活等)； 2. 现在的生活发生了哪些变化； 3. 你对这些变化的感受。 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数80词左右。 参考词汇：used to, in the past, now, take place, change, improve ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Changes in My Life Great changes have taken place in my life over the past few years. I used to get up late and ride to school. I spent all free time playing computer games and often worried about my poor English grades. Now I get up early to read English every day. I learn through online videos and books. I also take fun outdoor sports with my friends on weekends. I’m really glad about these meaningful changes. They make me much better, and I expect more progress in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般过去时、一般现在时为主 明确要点：对比过去与现在自身生活的不同变化，说明改变带来的积极作用，展望未来持续进步 确定人称：第一人称 (I) 注意事项：词数 80 词左右，文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起，点明近几年我的生活发生了巨大变化 主体段：对比过去的坏习惯和现在的良好生活、学习状态 结尾段：抒发对这些改变的感受，展望未来会有更多进步 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：总起点题 Great changes have taken place in my life over the past few years/many amazing changes/during these years 要点二：今昔对比 过去状态：I used to get up late and ride to school. I spent all free time playing computer games and often worried about my poor English grades/stay up late/waste time on games/be weak in English 现在状态：Now I get up early to read English every day. I learn through online videos and books. I also take fun outdoor sports with my friends on weekends./morning reading/study online/do sports outdoors 要点三：感悟与展望 I’m really glad about these meaningful changes. They make me much better, and I expect more progress in the future./be satisfied with/become better/make greater progress later。 2．假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom想了解你家乡过去十年的变化。请根据以下提示，给他写一封回信，介绍你家乡的变化。提示词： 过去：老旧房屋、道路狭窄、沙地 现在：高楼大厦、宽阔道路、绿树成荫、高科技温室大棚、线上销售农产品 感受：…… 要求： 1. 语句通顺，语意连贯。 2. 必须包含所有提示内容，并可适当发挥。 3. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about the changes in my hometown. Let me tell you something about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】参考范文 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about the changes in my hometown. Let me tell you something about them. In the past, my hometown was very poor. People lived in old, small houses and walked on narrow, dirty roads. There was also a lot of dry, sandy land. However, great changes have taken place here. Now, we can see many tall buildings and wide roads. The sandy land has been covered with green trees. What’s more, farmers have built high-tech greenhouses and they can sell agricultural products online to make a better living. I am very proud of these changes and I believe my hometown will be even better in the future. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：应用文，描述过去用一般过去时，描述现在用一般现在时 明确要点：过去家乡的情况、现在家乡的变化、个人的自豪感受与展望 确定人称：第一人称（I/we/our） 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 开头段：开门见山，表达收到来信的喜悦并引出介绍家乡变化的主题（已给出） 主体段：对比家乡的过去与现在 结尾段：总结并表达对家乡巨变的自豪之情，同时对未来寄予美好展望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：过去家乡的情况 老旧房屋：lived in old, small houses/lived in old and run-down houses/used to live in small, dirty houses等 道路狭窄：walked on narrow, dirty roads/walked on narrow roads/had to walk on narrow paths等 沙质土地：dry, sandy land/sandy land/there was a lot of sandy land/covered with dry sand等 要点二：现在家乡的变化 高楼大厦：see many tall buildings/have built modern and tall buildings/now there are tall buildings everywhere等 宽阔道路：wide roads/the roads are very wide/the streets are wide enough for cars to pass easily等 绿树成荫：covered with green trees/there are green trees everywhere/surrounded by green trees and beautiful flowers等 温室大棚：built high-tech greenhouses/advanced greenhouses/modern glass greenhouses等 线上销售：sell agricultural products online to make a better living/sell their products on the Internet/sell fresh vegetables through the Internet等 要点三：表达个人感受 自豪骄傲：proud of these changes and believe my hometown will be even better in the future/very proud of the changes in my hometown/proud of my hometown’s development等。 3．假如你是 Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2.人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1.喜欢读书，每周花 6 个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2.空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 ……(自由发挥) 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 3.词数在 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考作文 Dear Amy, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony 【答案】例文 Dear Amy, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time.            In the past, our houses were small and old. The roads were dirty and narrow, and pollution was serious. We traveled by bike or bus and kept in touch mainly by letters. Now we’ve moved into new apartments. The environment is much better with more parks. The subway and Internet make our life more convenient.            In my free time, I spend about 6 hours a week reading books from the library. Reading helps me gain knowledge and open my eyes. I also love traveling to taste delicious food and experience different cultures. I plan to visit Shanghai Disneyland this May Day.            I’m proud of our new life and look forward to your visit. Yours Tony 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：电子邮件，全文以一般过去时、现在完成时、一般现在时、一般将来时为主 明确要点：①介绍家乡过去的样貌；②介绍家乡如今的变化；③介绍课余读书爱好及读书的好处；④介绍课余旅游爱好与五一出行计划；⑤自由抒发个人感受 确定人称：第一人称I (Tony) 注意事项：语法通顺、行文连贯；必须包含表格全部信息并适当拓展；词数90词左右，给定开头不计入总词数；文中不得出现真实校名、人名、地名 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：固定开篇句，自我介绍写信目的，告知将介绍家乡变化与课余生活 主体段第一层：分层对比家乡过去、现在的生活环境、交通、通信情况 主体段第二层：依次介绍两项课余生活，读书习惯与旅行爱好，补充细节与计划 结尾段：抒发个人内心感受，发出来访邀请，配套书信规范署名 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡变化 过去场景素材：small and old/dirty and narrow/in a terrible state等 过去状况描述：pollution was serious/travel by bike or bus/ride a bicycle等 过去通信方式：keep in touch by letters/send paper mails等 如今变化素材：new apartments/more parks/tall buildings等 便利设施说明：subway/Internet/airplane/chat online等 生活改善效果：make life more convenient/improve living environment等 要点二：课余读书生活 阅读时长素材：spend 6 hours a week/read every weekend等 借阅渠道选择：borrow books from library/borrow story books等 读书好处说明：gain knowledge/open my eyes/relax myself/broaden my mind等 要点三：课余旅游生活 旅行爱好素材：love traveling/travel around cities/visit scenic spots等 旅行体验：taste local delicious food/experience different cultures/get away from daily routines等 出行计划说明：visit Shanghai Disneyland/take a trip during holidays等 要点四：个人感受 内心评价素材：proud of new changes/happy with present life等 结尾表达内容：look forward to your visit/wait for your coming等 4．请以Great Changes in My Hometown为题，根据以下提示介绍你家乡发生的巨大变化。 1.过去：道路狭窄，出行不便，生活简单； 2.现在：道路宽阔，交通便利，环境优美，科技让生活更便捷； 3.谈谈你的感受与展望。 词数：100 词左右 提示词：narrow, convenient, be covered with, high-tech, digital payment 注意: 1.表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥； 2.词数100词左右。 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 Great Changes in My Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Great Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, the roads here were narrow and bumpy. People had inconvenient transportation and lived a simple and plain life with few forms of entertainment. However, things are totally different now. The streets have become wide and smooth, making our travel very convenient. The whole town is covered with green trees and colorful flowers, creating a beautiful environment. Besides, high-tech products make our life much easier. We can finish shopping and pay daily bills easily with digital payment anytime. I feel proud of these amazing changes. I believe my hometown will become even more wonderful in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：话题作文，一般现在时为主辅以一般过去时和一般将来时 明确要点：家乡的过去，家乡的现在，自己的感受和对未来的展望 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：100词左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校、地名等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开篇点题，指出家乡近些年发生巨变 主体段：详细介绍家乡的过去和现在 结尾段：表达自己的感受以及对未来的期望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡的过去 描述过去：the roads here were narrow and bumpy/had inconvenient traffic/lived a simple and plain life/with few entertainment ways/technologically backward等。 要点二：家乡的现在 描述现在：streets have become wide and smooth/making our travel very convenient/is covered with green trees and colorful flowers/creating a beautiful environment/high-tech products make our life much easier/finish shopping and daily bills easily/with digital payment/has ‌better environment‌/easier access to information等。 要点三：自己的感受和对未来的展望 自己的感受：feel proud of these amazing changes/love my hometown/feel happy等。 展望未来：will become even more wonderful/will become more beautiful等。 5．儿童是国家的未来，少年强则国强。随着中国的发展和社会的进步，中国儿童的生活发生了很大的变化。请根据下面表格内容和要求，写一篇英语短文，来介绍中国儿童生活发生的变化。 In the past Now 1. had no good food 2. couldn’t dress warmly 3. had no chance to go to school 4. … 1. have a balanced diet 2. wear different kinds of clothes 3. receive a good education 4. … 要求： 1. 短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. In the past, the lives of children were very difficult. They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly. Most of them had no chance to go to school because their parents had no money to pay for their education. But now everything has changed. Children can have a balanced diet. They can wear different kinds of clothes and receive a good education. What’s more, they have more chances to develop their hobbies. Thanks to these changes, they can now have a better life, which helps them create a better future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文，一般现在时和一般过去时 明确要点：围绕过去和现在的食物、衣服和学习机会这三个要点展开。 确定人称：第三人称 注意事项：词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数，不得出现真实校名、人名。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开头开门见山，说明孩子们的生活发生了很多变化，为下文详细解释作出铺垫； 主体段：围绕过去和现在的食物、衣服和学习机会来对比过去和现在的变化； 结尾段：总结全文，感谢这些变化。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：食物 过去：They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly./They suffered from hunger and cold because they had almost no food or warm clothes./With almost no food to eat and no warm clothes, they lived a hard life.等 现在：Children can have a balanced diet./It’s possible for children to have a balanced diet./Children can maintain a well-balanced diet.等 要点二：衣服 过去：They had almost no food to eat and couldn’t dress warmly./They hardly had any food to eat and had no warm clothes to wear./They had little food and lacked warm clothing.等 现在：They can wear different kinds of clothes./They are able to wear various kinds of clothes./Different kinds of clothes can be worn by them.等。 要点三：学习机会 过去：Most of them had no chance to go to school because their parents had no money to pay for their education./The majority of them were unable to go to school, for their parents couldn’t afford their education fees./Most of them were denied the opportunity of schooling because their families couldn’t cover educational costs.等。 现在：They can receive a good education. What’s more, they have more chances to develop their hobbies./Not only can they receive a sound education, but they also get more chances to cultivate their hobbies./It is possible for them to receive excellent education, and furthermore, they are provided with more chances to develop personal interests.等。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 The Changing World 单元主题写作讲解、精练 目录 · 单元主题写作讲解梳理 单元写作要点讲解、素材梳理：系统分析单元主题写作的要点，写作方向和写作内容，总结归纳写作相关的素材，夯实基础，打牢根基，构建完整的写作体系。 · 单元写作精练 单元主题写作能力提升练：在系统梳理单元主题写作要点，归纳写作相关素材的基础上，通过典型的写作练习、体会词汇，句型在具体语境中的使用，锻炼谋篇布局，语言组织，词句运用和表情达意的能力，提升学生的综合写作能力。 单元写作要点讲解、素材梳理 一、单元主题和写作要求 1. 单元主题概括 本单元以“变化的世界”（The Changing World）为核心话题，围绕“变化”这一主题展开，内容涵盖家乡面貌、个人生活、交通方式、环境治理等多个维度的今昔对比。通过听、说、读、看、写等活动，引导学生观察并描述身边发生的变化，思考变化带来的影响，并学会用英语流畅地表达对比与变化。 2. 写作要求 学完本单元后，学生应能够： （1）正确使用 used to 结构、一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时来描述和对比今昔的变化； （2）运用本单元所学的描述性形容词（如 convenient, modern, clean, wide）和连接词（如 but, however, as a result, although），使表达更加丰富和连贯； （3）能围绕“变化”这一主题，完成一篇结构清晰、内容充实的短文，如描述家乡的变迁、个人生活的变化或探讨变化的原因； （4）运用 that 引导的宾语从句表达个人观点和信念。 【跨文化/素养目标】 （1）引导学生关注身边及世界范围内的积极变化（如家乡建设、交通发展、环境治理、科技进步等），增强对祖国和社会发展的认同感与自豪感； （2）通过对比中外发展案例（如肯尼亚的蒙内铁路），培养学生的国际视野，理解国际合作共赢的意义； （3）在讨论与写作中，引导学生辩证看待变化，既看到进步与发展，也关注发展中可能存在的问题（如环境压力、传统生活方式改变等），培养批判性思维。 二、出题方向和命题形式 1. 写作方向一：描述家乡的变化 （1）主要写作内容： 学生结合本单元所学的词汇和句型，描述自己家乡（或所在城镇）在交通、环境、住房、教育、医疗等方面的变化。通过今昔对比，展现家乡的发展与进步，并表达个人感受。 （2）可能的命题形式： ① 话题作文： 例如以 “Changes in My Hometown” 为题写一篇短文。 ② 材料作文： 给出一个关于家乡过去和现在对比的表格，要求学生根据表格信息完成一篇描述变化的短文。 （3）典例分析 你的家乡在过去的十年里发生了巨大的变化。请你以 “Changes in My Hometown” 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述这些变化。 Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a small town. Great changes have taken place here in the past ten years. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty. People used to ride bikes or walk to go out. There were no supermarkets or big hospitals. Students studied in old buildings with no modern equipment. Now, everything is different. The streets are wide and clean. Many families have their own cars. It is very convenient to go shopping in the new supermarket. The government has also built a modern hospital. Our school has a new library with many books and computers. I feel very happy and proud about these changes. I hope my hometown will become better and better. 范文分析： 分析维度 具体内容 语篇类型 话题作文/说明文。以第一人称叙述，描述家乡的变化。 篇章结构 三段式结构：第一段引入话题，点明变化；第二段从道路、交通、设施、学校等方面对比过去和现在；第三段表达个人感受和愿望。 词汇句型运用 ① 好词： great, narrow, dirty, modern, convenient, proud ② 好句： - Great changes have taken place here in the past ten years.（现在完成时开篇点题，简洁有力地引出话题。） - In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty.（用 in the past 引过去，were 呼应过去状态。） - People used to ride bikes or walk to go out.（used to 结构精准描述过去的习惯性行为。） - Now, everything is different.（一个简洁的短句，作为过渡句，巧妙地将内容从“过去”转向“现在”。） - I feel very happy and proud about these changes.（用简单句直接表达情感，真实自然。） 逻辑衔接过渡 运用 In the past... 和 Now... 进行清晰的时间对比；用 also 补充额外信息；用 I hope... 自然收束全文。 时态运用 一般过去时 (were, used to) 描述过去；现在完成时 (have taken place) 和一般现在时 (are, is, have) 描述现在和现状，时态转换清晰准确。 （4）模版整理 Changes in My Hometown My hometown is a ____________ (描述家乡的总体印象，如 small town / big city). Great changes have taken place here in the past ____________ (时间段，如 ten years). In the past, the ____________ (具体方面，如 roads / houses) were ____________ (过去的状态，如 narrow / old) . People used to ____________ (过去的行为或方式，如 walk to work / live in small flats). There was/were no ____________ (过去没有的事物，如 supermarkets / modern hospitals). Students ____________ (过去的学习条件，如 studied in old buildings). Now, everything is different. The ____________ (具体方面) are ____________ (现在的状态，如 wide and clean). Many families have their own ____________ (现在拥有的东西，如 cars / computers). The government has also built ____________ (新建的设施，如 a new park / a modern hospital). Our school has ____________ (学校的变化，如 a big library with many books). I feel ____________ (表达感受，如 happy and proud) about these changes. I hope my hometown will ____________ (表达期望，如 become better and better / be more beautiful). 2. 写作方向二：描述个人生活的变化 （1）主要写作内容： 学生描述自己从小学到初中在生活、学习、习惯等方面的变化。通过今昔对比，展现个人的成长，并感悟到某些不变的东西（如家人之间的爱、对未来的希望等）。 （2）可能的命题形式： ① 话题作文： 例如以 “Changes in My Life” 为题写一篇短文。 ② 读写结合： 阅读教材P9 “Changes in My Life” 一文后，模仿其结构和内容，写一篇关于自己生活变化的短文。 （3）典例分析 你的生活与小学时相比发生了很多变化。请以 “Changes in My Life” 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，描述这些变化。 Changes in My Life Now that I am a junior high school student, my life has changed a lot compared with that in primary school. When I was in primary school, my school was near my home, so I used to walk to school with my parents. Now, my school is far away, so I take a bus with my friends every day. I have made many new friends on the bus. My study habits have changed too. In the past, I used to study alone and I was a little shy. Now, I often discuss problems with my classmates. I have become more confident and active in class. I believe that teamwork helps us learn better. All in all, my life has changed in many ways. But one thing has never changed: my love for my family and my dream of becoming a good doctor. 范文分析： 分析维度 具体内容 语篇类型 话题作文/记叙文。以第一人称叙述个人生活的变化。 篇章结构 三段式结构：第一段引入话题，总起全文；第二段从上学方式和学习习惯两方面对比今昔；第三段总结并点明“不变”之处，升华主题。 词汇句型运用 ① 好词： changed a lot, compared with, far away, discuss, confident, active, teamwork ② 好句： - Now that I am a junior high school student, my life has changed a lot compared with that in primary school.（用 now that 引导原因状语从句，自然引出变化，compared with 准确表达对比关系。） - ...so I used to walk to school with my parents.（used to 描述过去的习惯，so 体现因果逻辑。） - I believe that teamwork helps us learn better.（用 that 引导的宾语从句表达观点，简洁有力。） - But one thing has never changed: my love for my family and my dream of becoming a good doctor.（用冒号引出具体内容，强调“不变”的核心，结构新颖，情感真挚。） 逻辑衔接过渡 使用 Now that... 引出背景；When I was... 和 Now... 对比过去和现在；In the past... 和 Now... 进一步具体化；All in all... 总结全文；But... 转折，引出“不变”的部分。 时态运用 全文以一般现在时 (is, have, take, discuss) 描述现状，用一般过去时 (was, used to) 和现在完成时 (have changed) 描述过去的经历和已发生的变化，时态运用准确。 （4）模版整理 Changes in My Life Now that I am ____________ (现在的身份，如 a junior high school student), my life has changed a lot compared with that in ____________ (对比的过去时段，如 primary school). When I was in ____________ (过去的时段), I used to ____________ (过去的行为或习惯). Now, I ____________ (现在的行为或习惯). I have also made ____________ (带来的新变化或收获). My ____________ (另一个方面，如 study habits / hobbies) have changed too. In the past, I ____________. Now, I ____________. I believe that ____________ (表达观点或感悟). All in all, my life has changed in many ways. But one thing has never changed: my ____________ (不变的事物，如 love for my family / dream). 3. 写作方向三：探讨变化的原因或影响 （1）主要写作内容： 学生根据本单元所学内容，结合自己的观察和思考，探讨某一具体变化（如环境改善、交通发展、生活水平提高等）的原因或它给人们生活带来的影响。 （2）可能的命题形式： ① 发言稿： 在班级举办的“我看家乡新变化”主题班会上，就某一变化发表看法。 ② 议论文： 例如以 “How Have New Roads Changed Our Lives?” 为题写一篇短文。 ③ 材料作文： 提供一个关于某地变化（如塞罕坝造林、蒙内铁路建设）的案例，要求学生分析变化的原因和影响。 （3）典例分析 假设你所在的城市修建了新的地铁线路。请你根据这一变化，写一篇发言稿，谈谈新地铁给人们生活带来的影响。 How Has the New Subway Changed Our Lives? Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to share my thoughts on how the new subway has changed our lives. Before the subway was built, it used to be very inconvenient to travel around the city. The roads were always crowded with cars and buses. It often took me more than an hour to get to school. People used to spend a lot of time on the road every day. Now, the new subway has made a big difference. First, it is much faster and more convenient. It only takes me 20 minutes to get to school. Second, the subway is clean and comfortable. More and more people choose to take the subway instead of driving. As a result, the traffic on the roads has become better. The air is getting cleaner too. In my opinion, the new subway has greatly improved our lives. It not only saves our time but also helps protect the environment. I hope our city will become more beautiful in the future. That's all. Thank you for listening. 范文分析： 分析维度 具体内容 语篇类型 发言稿。开头有称呼和问候语，结尾有致谢。 篇章结构 四段式结构：第一段问候并引入话题；第二段描述地铁修建前的状况；第三段阐述地铁带来的具体影响（速度、便利、环境）；第四段总结观点并表达期望。 词汇句型运用 ① 好词： inconvenient, crowded, spend, difference, comfortable, instead of, protect, environment ② 好句： - Today I'd like to share my thoughts on how the new subway has changed our lives.（发言稿标准引入句，自然得体。） - Before the subway was built, it used to be very inconvenient to travel around the city.（Before... 引导时间状语从句，used to 与主句配合，清晰勾勒出过去的状况。） - First... Second...（运用序数词，使阐述的要点层次分明。） - As a result, the traffic on the roads has become better.（As a result 连接因果，逻辑紧密。） - It not only saves our time but also helps protect the environment.（not only...but also... 连接并列谓语，强调地铁的双重好处，句式紧凑有力。） 逻辑衔接过渡 使用 Before... 和 Now... 进行时间对比；First... Second... 用于列举；As a result 引出结果；In my opinion... 表达个人观点；That's all. Thank you... 是发言稿的标准结束语。 时态运用 一般过去时 (was, used to, took) 描述过去；现在完成时 (has made, has become) 和一般现在时 (takes, choose, is) 描述现状和普遍事实。 （4）模版整理 How Has the New ____________ Changed Our Lives? Good morning, everyone! Today I'd like to share my thoughts on how the new ____________ (变化的事物，如 subway / highway) has changed our lives. Before the ____________ was built/opened, it used to be ____________ (描述过去的状况). The ____________ (相关的事物) were ____________ (过去的缺点). It often took ____________ (具体时长) to ____________ (做某事). People used to ____________ (过去的行为或方式). Now, the new ____________ has made a big difference. First, it is ____________ (优点1). It only takes ____________ (具体时长) to ____________ (做某事). Second, it is ____________ (优点2). More and more people choose to ____________ (现在人们的选择). As a result, ____________ (带来的结果). ____________ is getting ____________ (其他方面的改善). In my opinion, the new ____________ has greatly improved our lives. It not only ____________ (好处1) but also ____________ (好处2). I hope ____________ (表达期望). That's all. Thank you for listening. 三、素材积累 1. 词汇素材（按主题分类） （1）描述变化的形容词： convenient 方便的，modern 现代的，wide/broad 宽阔的，clean 干净的 fresh 新鲜的，high-tech 高科技的，smart 智能的 rough 崎岖不平的，narrow 狭窄的，dirty 脏的，poor 贫穷的 （2）描述发展变化的名词： change 变化，development 发展，progress 进步，improvement 改善 environment 环境，transport/transportation 交通，education 教育 housing 住房，medical care 医疗，communication 通讯 product 产品，greenhouse 温室，railway 铁路，highway 公路 （3）与变化相关的动词短语： take place 发生，come back 回来，turn...into... 把……变成…… cut...to... 把……削减到……，benefit from 从……受益 get used to 习惯于，used to do 过去常常做 improve one's life 改善某人的生活，develop industry 发展工业 （4）连接词与过渡语： but / however 但是，然而；although 虽然；because 因为 as a result 因此；for example 例如 not only...but also... 不仅……而且…… both...and... 两者都…… First/First of all... Second... Finally... 首先……其次……最后…… All in all / In conclusion 总之 2. 句型句式素材（按功能分类） （1）引出主题 Great changes have taken place in my hometown.（我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。） My life has changed a lot compared with that in primary school.（我的生活与小学时相比改变了很多。） Today I'd like to talk about the changes in our daily lives.（今天我想谈谈我们日常生活的变化。） （2）描述过去的状态（used to / 一般过去时） There used to be no bridges over the river.（河上过去没有桥。） I used to be very shy and afraid of speaking in public.（我过去很害羞，害怕在公众面前讲话。） The hills were covered with sand in the past.（过去山上覆盖着沙子。） We didn't have a supermarket down the street before.（我们以前在这条街上没有超市。） （3）描述现在的变化（现在完成时） The government has built thousands of kilometres of highways.（政府已经修建了数千公里的高速公路。） Our village has become a tourist attraction.（我们的村庄已经变成了一个旅游景点。） The new railway has cut the travel time to only a few hours.（新铁路已经把旅行时间缩短到仅仅几个小时。） I have become more confident in my studies.（我在学习上变得更加自信了。） （4）列举变化与影响（给出理由） First, the new road makes it easier for us to go to school.（第一，新路让我们上学更方便了。） Second, the new hospital provides better medical care.（第二，新医院提供了更好的医疗服务。） As a result, people now have more fresh food to eat.（因此，人们现在有更多的新鲜食物可吃。） For example, you may become confident if you successfully complete difficult tasks.（例如，如果你成功完成了困难的任务，你可能会变得自信起来。） （5）发表观点与感受（含宾语从句） I believe that the changes have made our lives much better.（我相信这些变化已经让我们的生活好多了。） I think that teamwork helps us learn better.（我认为团队合作帮助我们学得更好。） I'm very happy with the new railway built by our Chinese friends.（我对中国朋友修建的新铁路感到非常高兴。） In my opinion, the new subway not only saves our time but also helps protect the environment.（在我看来，新地铁不仅节省了我们的时间，而且有助于保护环境。） （6）衔接句子 In the past... Now,...（过去……现在……） However, everything has changed.（然而，一切都变了。） All in all, my life has changed in many ways.（总之，我的生活已经在很多方面发生了变化。） But one thing stays the same: ...（但是有一件事没变：……） 四、写作前练习 1. 句型转换（用所给连接词合并句子） ① The roads were narrow and dirty. The roads are wide and clean now. （but） ② The new railway is fast. The new railway is convenient. （not only...but also...） ③ The government has built new schools. The government has built new hospitals. （both...and...） 2. 替换练习（替换句子中的部分词汇，使句子符合新的情境） 原句： In the past, my school was near my home, so I walked to school. Now, my school is far away, so I take a bus. ① 描述你的朋友Jimmy家的变化。他过去住在公寓里，现在住在带花园的房子里。 ② 描述你所在城市交通方式的变化。过去人们主要骑自行车，现在很多人开电动汽车。 3. 扩写练习（在横线上补充内容，使句子更丰富） ① Great changes have taken place in ____________ (地点) in the past ____________ (时间段). ② In the past, the ____________ (事物) were ____________ (过去的缺点), but now they are ____________ (现在的优点). ③ The new ____________ (设施/方式) has made our lives more ____________ (感受). 4. 仿写练习（仿照范例写出新句子） 范例： My hometown has changed a lot. It used to be quiet, but now it is busy and modern. ① 仿写：描述你的一位朋友性格的变化。 ② 仿写：描述你所在城市交通方式的变化。 5. 连词成段练习（将下列句子连成一段连贯的话，用上适当的连接词） 句子：① In the past, there were few trees in our village. ② The environment was poor. ③ The government encouraged people to plant trees. ④ Our village has planted thousands of trees. ⑤ The environment is much better now. 单元主题写作能力提升练 1．“变化”是生活中永恒的主题。请根据以下提示，以“Changes in My Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的英语短文，描述你生活中发生的变化。 1. 过去的生活是怎样的(如：学习方式、兴趣爱好、日常生活等)； 2. 现在的生活发生了哪些变化； 3. 你对这些变化的感受。 要求： 1. 短文必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名； 3. 词数80词左右。 参考词汇：used to, in the past, now, take place, change, improve ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你的笔友Tom想了解你家乡过去十年的变化。请根据以下提示，给他写一封回信，介绍你家乡的变化。提示词： 过去：老旧房屋、道路狭窄、沙地 现在：高楼大厦、宽阔道路、绿树成荫、高科技温室大棚、线上销售农产品 感受：…… 要求： 1. 语句通顺，语意连贯。 2. 必须包含所有提示内容，并可适当发挥。 3. 词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, I’m glad to hear from you. You asked about the changes in my hometown. Let me tell you something about them. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3．假如你是 Tony，最近收到来自外地表妹Amy的电子邮件，她想了解一下你家乡近些年的变化及你的课余生活，请根据表格的内容进行回复。 家乡变化 1.房子小而旧；道路脏而窄；环境污染严重；交通工具是……；通信方式主要是书信…… 2.人们搬进了新公寓；环境得到了改善；公园、地铁、因特网的使用等使生活更加…… 课余生活 1.喜欢读书，每周花 6 个小时左右阅读，主要从图书馆借阅，个人认为读书能增加人的知识，开阔人的眼界…… 2.空余时间里喜欢旅游，享受当地的美食，感受不同的文化；今年五一打算去上海迪士尼游玩。 个人感受 ……(自由发挥) 要求： 1.表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2.必须包含所有信息，并作适当发挥； 3.词数在 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考作文 Dear Amy, I’m glad to tell you about the changes in my hometown and my free time. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Tony 4．请以Great Changes in My Hometown为题，根据以下提示介绍你家乡发生的巨大变化。 1.过去：道路狭窄，出行不便，生活简单； 2.现在：道路宽阔，交通便利，环境优美，科技让生活更便捷； 3.谈谈你的感受与展望。 词数：100 词左右 提示词：narrow, convenient, be covered with, high-tech, digital payment 注意: 1.表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥； 2.词数100词左右。 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 Great Changes in My Hometown ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．儿童是国家的未来，少年强则国强。随着中国的发展和社会的进步，中国儿童的生活发生了很大的变化。请根据下面表格内容和要求，写一篇英语短文，来介绍中国儿童生活发生的变化。 In the past Now 1. had no good food 2. couldn’t dress warmly 3. had no chance to go to school 4. … 1. have a balanced diet 2. wear different kinds of clothes 3. receive a good education 4. … 要求： 1. 短文须包含上表中的所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺，条理清晰、意思连贯； 2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数90左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 With the development of China, children’s lives have changed a lot. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $