Unit 2 Inspiring People（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

本讲义聚焦“介绍鼓舞人心的人物”写作核心知识点，系统梳理写作结构（人物基本情况、贡献或品质、启发意义）、体裁（说明文或应用文）、人称（第三人称）及时态（一般过去时）。通过词汇积累（核心单词、必备短语）、句型支架（开头、中间、结尾句）、谚语名句及佳句仿写，结合教材范例分析，帮助学生构建从基础到提升的写作框架。 该资料特色在于以核心素养为导向，语言能力方面提供鲜活词汇与多样句型（如定语从句、感叹句）助力准确表达，思维品质上通过基础版与提升版范例对比引导句式优化。设计多主题实战任务（伟人、运动员、身边人），课中辅助教师系统教学，课后帮助学生迁移应用，弥补表达短板，提升写作能力。

Unit 2 Inspiring People.单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为 “写一篇帖子介绍你认为鼓舞人心的人物”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“历史、社会与文化” 这一主题群,涉及子主题“对世界、国家、人民和社会进步有突出贡献的人物”。 该单元常见的写作任务是常见的写作任务是介绍榜样人物、励志人物等。既可以是为国家和社会做出突出贡献的科学家、发明家等杰出人物，也可以是我们身边熟悉的父母、老师、同学等普通人。他们身上的优秀品质与感人事迹都能带给我们温暖与力量。体裁多为说明文或应用文。 文章通常可以先介绍人物的基本情况，清晰地说明其出生时间、地点、求学经历或者成长中的相关经历，接着具体介绍人物所做出的贡献、取得的成就，或者其身上值得学习的闪光点，最后说明这位人物带给我们的启发与教育意义。整篇写作一般采用第三人称，在讲述人物的过往经历与相关事迹时，时态上主要采用一般过去时。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 词汇积累 核心单词 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 inspire v. 鼓舞；激励 inspiring adj. 鼓舞人心的 hero n. 英雄；榜样 brave adj. 勇敢的 strong adj. 坚强的 diligent adj. 勤奋的 honest adj. 诚实的 modest adj. 谦逊的 effort n. 努力 success n. 成功 spirit n. 精神 example n. 榜样 struggle v. 拼搏；奋斗 overcome v. 克服 difficulty n. 困难 achieve v. 实现；达成 wisdom n. 智慧 kindness n. 善良 admire v. 钦佩；仰慕 influence v. 影响 必备短语 ① set a good example 树立好榜样 ② encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 ③ never give up 永不放弃 ④ overcome difficulties 克服困难 ⑤ make great efforts 付出巨大努力 ⑥ hold on to dreams 坚守梦想 ⑦ full of positive energy 充满正能量 ⑧ learn from sb. 向某人学习 ⑨ face challenges bravely 勇敢面对挑战 ⑩ have a deep influence on 对…… 影响深远 ⑪ try one’s best 竭尽全力 ⑫ stick to doing sth. 坚持做某事 ⑬ achieve one’s dream 实现梦想 ⑭ keep moving forward 奋勇前行 ⑮ cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 句型积累 开头句 1、There are many inspiring people in our daily life. 日常生活中有许多鼓舞人心的人。 2、Everyone has someone who can encourage them. 每个人都有能够激励自己的人。 3、An inspiring person lights up my life road. 鼓舞人心的人照亮我的人生道路。 4、I deeply admire a person who always moves me. 我十分敬佩一位时常打动我的人。 5、Some people’s spirits always push me to make progress. 有些人的精神一直督促我进步。 中间句 1、He keeps working hard no matter what happens. 无论发生什么，他始终努力拼搏。 2、He met many troubles but never lost heart. 他遭遇诸多困境，却从未灰心丧气。 3、He is always ready to help people around him. 他总是乐于帮助身边的人。 4、His strong will leaves a deep impression on me. 他顽强的意志给我留下深刻印象。 5、He taught me how to deal with difficulties rightly. 他教会我正确应对困难。 6、He sticks to his goal and never stops trying. 他坚守目标，从未停止努力。 7、He often gives me useful advice when I am in trouble. 我遇困境时，他常给我有用建议。 8、His words always make me full of confidence. 他的话语总能让我充满自信。 9、He spends plenty of time improving himself. 他花费大量时间提升自我。 10、His noble qualities are worth learning for all. 他高尚的品质值得所有人学习。 11. He/She is a person who has strong perseverance.（定语从句）他/她是一位意志坚定的人。 12. He/She used to live a hard life but never lost hope.（used to 句型）他/她曾经历过艰难的生活，却从未失去希望。 13. He/She works hard to realize his/her dream.（不定式目的状语）他/她为实现梦想而不懈努力。 14. Their spirit always inspires me to keep moving forward.他的/她的精神始终激励我不断前行。 15.There are many inspiring people around us, and ___ influences me most.我们身边有许多鼓舞人心的人，其中___对我的影响最为深远。 16.He/She used to face many difficulties but never gave up.他/她曾面临诸多困难，却从未放弃。 17.I will learn from him/her and become a better person.我会向他/她学习，成为更好的人。 18.Role models are people who bring us positive energy.榜样是指能为我们带来正能量的人。 19.Many successful people used to meet huge difficulties but finally succeeded.许多成功人士都曾遭遇巨大困难，但最终取得了成功。 20.Let’s learn from inspiring role models and improve ourselves.让我们从鼓舞人心的榜样身上学习，不断提升自我。 21.We should keep on trying when we face difficulties.当我们遇到困难时，应该持续努力。 结尾句 1、I will take him as my role model all the time. 我会一直把他当作我的榜样。 2、He is the most inspiring person in my heart. 他是我心中最鼓舞人心的人。 3、I will follow his steps and become better. 我会追随他的脚步，变得更加优秀。 4、His power encourages me to keep going bravely. 他的力量激励我勇敢前行。 5、Thanks to him, I become more mature and confident. 多亏了他，我变得更加成熟自信。 谚语名句 1、Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 2、Nothing is difficult to a determined mind. 心有定力，万事不难。 3、A good example is the best sermon. 身教胜于言传。 4、Persistence leads you closer to success. 坚持方能靠近成功。 5、Great spirits influence people deeply. 伟大的精神拥有深远力量。 6、Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 7、Great hopes make great men.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。 佳句仿写 1.最鼓舞我的人不是一位名人,而是我的父亲。【教材Section A 3a】 翻译： ______________________________________________________ 2. We call him the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.（用be known as升格） __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. .I admire him because he worked secretly on submarines for over 30 years and didn’t tell his family.（用spend…doing和without doing升格） __________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.His words show his deep love for our nation.（用that引导的宾语从句升格） _________________________________________________________________ 5 .First,we should be brave enough to face challenges.（用so that升格） _________________________________________________________________ 6.他对工作和研究的热爱在他的学生们身上代代相传。【教材Section B 1b】 翻译： ____________________________________________________ 7.我认为他对许多人来说仍然是一个极大的鼓舞。【教材Section B 3a】 翻译： ________________________________________________ 8. He is truly a great person.（用what引导的感叹句升格） _________________________________________________________________ （Unit 1 Section B 3d ） 审题指导 1. 文体：应用文 2. 人称：第三人称 3. 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时 教材写作品读 ①To me,one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Li Bai. He was a great poet.②It is talented of him to create hundreds of poems that still touch people today. Li Bai loved travelling. He walked through mountains and sailed on rivers.③In order to express his love for nature and freedom,he wrote poems like Thoughts on a Tranquil Night（about missing home） and Drinking Alone with the Moon（about finding joy in quiet moments）.He ④succeeded in making poetry a way to share joy and sadness. His words are ⑤full of passion and imagination,making readers feel like they’re right there with him. He ⑥is best known for his romantic writing style. Though he faced troubles,his poems always carry hope. Even now,when we read his poems about the sky,rivers,or friends,we remember to slow down and enjoy the beauty around us. Li Bai isn’t just a poet. He’s also a friend who teaches us to love life. 教材原句 ①【Section B 3a】To me,one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Mozi.（To sb.,one of the most inspiring people is…表示“对某人来说,最鼓舞人心的人之一是……”） ②【Section A 3a】It’s really very nice of him to support and encourage my exchange study here. （It is+adj.+of sb.+ to do sth.某人做某事真是太……了） ③【Section A 4c】In order to help defeat his enemies,Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty sent Zhang Qian to find the Yuezhi people.（in order to do sth.为了做某事） ④【Section A 4c】…and he finally succeeded in finding the Yuezhi people.（succeed in doing sth.成功做成某事） ⑤【Section B 2c】Amelia Earhart was always a brave child,full of courage.（full of充满） ⑥【Section B 2c】Earhart is best known for being a flight pioneer as the first woman to fly on her own…（be known for因……而出名） 榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年学习的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列提示，写一篇100词左右的短文谈谈你心中的榜样并分享你的体会。 提示： 1.Who is your role model? 2.Why is he/she your model? 3.What can you learn from him/her? 4.What can you do to be better? 参考词汇：nuclear submarine核潜艇；technical 技术的 搭建框架 【基础版】My Role Model Everyone has a role model,and so do I.My role model is Huang Xuhua. He is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. I admire him because he worked secretly on submarines for over 30 years and didn’t tell his family. Even when facing technical difficulties,he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said,“I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation. From him,I’ve learnt two important things. First,we should be brave enough to face challenges,just as he did during research. Second,we must always put the country’s needs first. He is truly a great person. I will learn from him,and never give up when I meet difficulties. 【提升版】 My Role Model Everyone has a role model,and so do I.My role model is Huang Xuhua,who is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties,he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said,“I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show that he loves our nation deeply. From him,I’ve learnt two important things. First,we should be brave so that we can face challenges,just as he did during research. Second,we must always put the country’s needs first. What a great person he is!I will learn from him,and never give up when I meet difficulties. 总体分析 基础版 ✅优点 文章结构标准：引出榜样→介绍事迹 + 精神→收获感悟→结尾表态，要点完整，完全贴合初中英语写作要求； 词汇浅显，句式简单，以简单句、基础复合句为主，容易背诵，不易出现语法错误； 紧扣主题，素材典型，逻辑清晰，无语法错误，可保证基础得分。 ❌不足 句式种类偏少，部分表达直白，缺少定语从句、状语从句等加分句型； 部分句子表达方式普通，句式改造空间大； 结尾平铺直叙，缺少情感张力，很难冲击高分档。 提升版 ✅亮点 语法升级：引入非限制性定语从句，开篇立刻拉开档次，是中考书面表达热门加分句型； 句式优化重组，同义转换，避免生硬直译；灵活使用 so that 目的状语从句替换基础简单句； 句式多样化：陈述句结尾升级为感叹句，增强情感表达； 二、词汇 & 短语对比 基础版原版表达 提升版优化改写 优化说明 He is known as… who is known as… 改为定语从句，合并句子，避免短句割裂，高分语法点 worked secretly on submarines for over 30 years and didn’t tell his family spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family spend…doing 固定句型；用介词短语替代并列句，语言更简洁地道 His words show his deep love for our nation. His words show that he loves our nation deeply. 使用宾语从句；形容词 deep 修饰名词 → 副词 deeply 修饰动词，用词更规范 we should be brave enough to face challenges we should be brave so that we can face challenges so that 引导目的状语从句，丰富句式类型 He is truly a great person. What a great person he is! 陈述句改为感叹句，增强抒情效果，结尾更有感染力 句式层面详细解析 1. 开篇优化 基础版： My role model is Huang Xuhua. He is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. 两个独立简单句。 提升版合并： My role model is Huang Xuhua, who is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. 考点：非限制性定语从句，初中英语写作核心加分句型。 2. 人物事迹句子改写 基础版：he worked secretly…and didn’t tell his family（并列句） 提升版：he spent over 30 years working secretly…without telling his family 使用 spend time doing + without 介词结构，句式更加紧凑，避免过多 and 连接句子。 3. 感悟句句型升级 基础版：we should be brave enough to face challenges 提升版：we should be brave so that we can face challenges enough to do（基础句型）VS so that 目的状语从句（进阶句型），丰富全文句式结构，阅卷老师不会觉得句式单调。 4. 结尾情感升级 平铺直叙陈述句 → What a great person he is! 文章收尾更有感染力，符合人物品质类作文抒情要求。 1.看着日新月异、逐渐富强的中国，相信每一个中国人的心中，都会升起无以言喻的自豪感。而中国能够摆脱战乱，在短短的几十年时间里发展成为现在的样子，其实离不开中国伟人。英语课上即将进行“中国伟人”为主题的分享活动。请你根据以下图示信息，写一篇英语短文介绍三位中国伟人（请从杨利伟、刘翔和钟南山中选择一位进行补充），并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1．内容须包括所提示的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4．不得抄袭试卷原文。 参考词汇：malaria 疟疾；COVID-19 新冠肺炎；110 meters hurdles 110米跨栏 Today, I am honored to introduce three great Chinese to you. They are ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.为了树立榜样，促进学生成长，我校学生会近日开展主题为“A Young Model in My Mind”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范青年”孙颖莎。内容提示如下： 要求： 1)须包含提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥，内容要条理清晰，有逻辑; 2)词数：100-120词(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。 3)参考词汇：奥运冠军 Olympic champion   乒乓球 table tennis A Young Model in My Mind My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce a young model to you______________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．根据要求完成大作文，词数：80~100。 习近平总书记在多次讲话中强调“新时代，呼唤英雄”。其实，英雄就在我们身边。这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、同学、朋友、老师……请介绍一下你心中的“小人物，大英雄”。 提示：①你心中的英雄是谁。 ②记述你印象深刻的一件事。 ③对你的影响。 要求：①语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚。 ②文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 ③文章开头已开出，不计入总词数。 A Hero in My Heart Everybody has a hero in his heart. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．不论哪个时代，哪个行业，都会有永驻人心的英雄，因而诗人说：“英雄儿女耀千秋”。你的心中也一定有一位英雄，他也许是阅兵场上的军人，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是一位感动大家的普通人，亦或是你身边的守护者。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题，写写你心中这位英雄的故事以及他 (她) 对你的影响。 1. 简单介绍这位英雄 (如姓名、所处时代等基本信息)； 2. 描述他/她的主要成就、贡献或故事； 3. 说明他/她身上哪些品质让你钦佩，以及对你产生了怎样的影响。 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3. 词数在100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 A Hero in My Heart When it comes to heroes, opinions are different from person to person. As for me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是李华，你要写一篇短文介绍屠呦呦的生平与贡献。请根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的短文。 提示： 1.屠呦呦是一位伟大的药理学家，2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 2.她出生于1930年，带领团队研究传统中药。 3.1971年，她发现了青蒿素，有效治疗疟疾。 4.她的发现拯救了数百万人的生命，尤其是在发展中国家。 5.她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖的中国女性，我们都很敬佩她。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： 1. Who is your role model?    2. Why is he/she your model? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ) 7．张桂梅，丽江华坪女子高级中学书记、校长。她数十年如一日行善助学，爱生如子，被评为“感动中国2020年度人物”，并荣获“全国脱贫攻坚楷模”荣誉称号。现在请你根据以下信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍张桂梅老师。 姓名 张桂梅 生日 1957年6月 出生地 黑龙江 主要事迹 1990年，开始在云南一所中学任教； 丈夫去世后，决定继续教书； 2001年，计划兴建女子中学； 2008年，成立华坪女中——全国第一所全免费的女子高中； 13年来，尽管身体每况愈下，但仍帮助了1800名贫困女孩走进大学。 要求：1. 须包含所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．体育锻炼使我们开心和放松，也让我们保持健康。假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部近日开展主题为“My Favourite Player”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你最喜欢的运动员全红婵。 要求如下： 1. 适当自由发挥, 80词以上。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 提示词： diver 跳水运动员         Comment 评价    My Favourite Player—Quan Hongchan Hello, I’m Li Hua, I like doing sports. _______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9．孔子 (Confucius) 是中国古代最有智慧的人之一。他是一名杰出的教育家。请根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社投稿。 出生时间 551BC 地点 鲁国 (山东省) 经历 3岁父亲离世，和母亲相依为命，生活艰难； 15岁开始学音乐和其他科目； 30岁成为老师，拥有自己的学校，一生大概有3000名学生 成就和影响 主张人人都应该有受教育的机会；提倡仁和礼 你的评价 …… 要求： 1. 语言通顺，观点明确，书写工整； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，可适当发挥。 参考词汇： 鲁国: the kingdom of Lu; 仁: kindness; 礼: good manners Confucius was one of the greatest minds in China. _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．自苏超赛事举办以来，泰州队作为一匹让人意外的 “黑马”，成功走进了全国人民的视线；不管是在赛场上努力的运动员，还是指导他们的教练，都是我们泰州人心中的英雄。假如你班将要开展一次以“The hero in my heart”为主题的英语班会。请你根据下面的要点与要求写一篇英语发言稿。 要点： (1) 你心中的英雄是谁? (2) 你为什么认为他/她是你心中的英雄? (3) 你从他/她那里学到了什么? 要求： (1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名： (2) 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。 The hero in my heart Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening. 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Inspiring People 单元同步写作讲义 本单元教材写作情境为 “写一篇帖子介绍你认为鼓舞人心的人物”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴中“历史、社会与文化” 这一主题群,涉及子主题“对世界、国家、人民和社会进步有突出贡献的人物”。 该单元常见的写作任务是常见的写作任务是介绍榜样人物、励志人物等。既可以是为国家和社会做出突出贡献的科学家、发明家等杰出人物，也可以是我们身边熟悉的父母、老师、同学等普通人。他们身上的优秀品质与感人事迹都能带给我们温暖与力量。体裁多为说明文或应用文。 文章通常可以先介绍人物的基本情况，清晰地说明其出生时间、地点、求学经历或者成长中的相关经历，接着具体介绍人物所做出的贡献、取得的成就，或者其身上值得学习的闪光点，最后说明这位人物带给我们的启发与教育意义。整篇写作一般采用第三人称，在讲述人物的过往经历与相关事迹时，时态上主要采用一般过去时。 词汇积累 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 词汇积累 核心单词 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 inspire v. 鼓舞；激励 inspiring adj. 鼓舞人心的 hero n. 英雄；榜样 brave adj. 勇敢的 strong adj. 坚强的 diligent adj. 勤奋的 honest adj. 诚实的 modest adj. 谦逊的 effort n. 努力 success n. 成功 spirit n. 精神 example n. 榜样 struggle v. 拼搏；奋斗 overcome v. 克服 difficulty n. 困难 achieve v. 实现；达成 wisdom n. 智慧 kindness n. 善良 admire v. 钦佩；仰慕 influence v. 影响 必备短语 ① set a good example 树立好榜样 ② encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事 ③ never give up 永不放弃 ④ overcome difficulties 克服困难 ⑤ make great efforts 付出巨大努力 ⑥ hold on to dreams 坚守梦想 ⑦ full of positive energy 充满正能量 ⑧ learn from sb. 向某人学习 ⑨ face challenges bravely 勇敢面对挑战 ⑩ have a deep influence on 对…… 影响深远 ⑪ try one’s best 竭尽全力 ⑫ stick to doing sth. 坚持做某事 ⑬ achieve one’s dream 实现梦想 ⑭ keep moving forward 奋勇前行 ⑮ cheer sb. up 使某人振作起来 句型积累 开头句 1、There are many inspiring people in our daily life. 日常生活中有许多鼓舞人心的人。 2、Everyone has someone who can encourage them. 每个人都有能够激励自己的人。 3、An inspiring person lights up my life road. 鼓舞人心的人照亮我的人生道路。 4、I deeply admire a person who always moves me. 我十分敬佩一位时常打动我的人。 5、Some people’s spirits always push me to make progress. 有些人的精神一直督促我进步。 中间句 1、He keeps working hard no matter what happens. 无论发生什么，他始终努力拼搏。 2、He met many troubles but never lost heart. 他遭遇诸多困境，却从未灰心丧气。 3、He is always ready to help people around him. 他总是乐于帮助身边的人。 4、His strong will leaves a deep impression on me. 他顽强的意志给我留下深刻印象。 5、He taught me how to deal with difficulties rightly. 他教会我正确应对困难。 6、He sticks to his goal and never stops trying. 他坚守目标，从未停止努力。 7、He often gives me useful advice when I am in trouble. 我遇困境时，他常给我有用建议。 8、His words always make me full of confidence. 他的话语总能让我充满自信。 9、He spends plenty of time improving himself. 他花费大量时间提升自我。 10、His noble qualities are worth learning for all. 他高尚的品质值得所有人学习。 11. He/She is a person who has strong perseverance.（定语从句）他/她是一位意志坚定的人。 12. He/She used to live a hard life but never lost hope.（used to 句型）他/她曾经历过艰难的生活，却从未失去希望。 13. He/She works hard to realize his/her dream.（不定式目的状语）他/她为实现梦想而不懈努力。 14. Their spirit always inspires me to keep moving forward.他的/她的精神始终激励我不断前行。 15.There are many inspiring people around us, and ___ influences me most.我们身边有许多鼓舞人心的人，其中___对我的影响最为深远。 16.He/She used to face many difficulties but never gave up.他/她曾面临诸多困难，却从未放弃。 17.I will learn from him/her and become a better person.我会向他/她学习，成为更好的人。 18.Role models are people who bring us positive energy.榜样是指能为我们带来正能量的人。 19.Many successful people used to meet huge difficulties but finally succeeded.许多成功人士都曾遭遇巨大困难，但最终取得了成功。 20.Let’s learn from inspiring role models and improve ourselves.让我们从鼓舞人心的榜样身上学习，不断提升自我。 21.We should keep on trying when we face difficulties.当我们遇到困难时，应该持续努力。 结尾句 1、I will take him as my role model all the time. 我会一直把他当作我的榜样。 2、He is the most inspiring person in my heart. 他是我心中最鼓舞人心的人。 3、I will follow his steps and become better. 我会追随他的脚步，变得更加优秀。 4、His power encourages me to keep going bravely. 他的力量激励我勇敢前行。 5、Thanks to him, I become more mature and confident. 多亏了他，我变得更加成熟自信。 谚语名句 1、Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成。 2、Nothing is difficult to a determined mind. 心有定力，万事不难。 3、A good example is the best sermon. 身教胜于言传。 4、Persistence leads you closer to success. 坚持方能靠近成功。 5、Great spirits influence people deeply. 伟大的精神拥有深远力量。 6、Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。 7、Great hopes make great men.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。 佳句仿写 1.最鼓舞我的人不是一位名人,而是我的父亲。【教材Section A 3a】 翻译： ______________________________________________________ 2. We call him the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”.（用be known as升格） __________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. .I admire him because he worked secretly on submarines for over 30 years and didn’t tell his family.（用spend…doing和without doing升格） __________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.His words show his deep love for our nation.（用that引导的宾语从句升格） _________________________________________________________________ 5 .First,we should be brave enough to face challenges.（用so that升格） _________________________________________________________________ 6.他对工作和研究的热爱在他的学生们身上代代相传。【教材Section B 1b】 翻译： ____________________________________________________ 7.我认为他对许多人来说仍然是一个极大的鼓舞。【教材Section B 3a】 翻译： ________________________________________________ 8. He is truly a great person.（用what引导的感叹句升格） _________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1.My biggest inspiration is not a famous person. It’s my father. 2.He is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. 3.I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. 4..His words show that he loves our nation deeply. 5..First,we should be brave so that we can face challenges. 6.His love for his job and research lives on in his students. 7.I think he is still a great inspiration to many people. 8.What a great person he is! （Unit 1 Section B 3d ） 审题指导 1. 文体：应用文 2. 人称：第三人称 3. 时态：一般过去时、一般现在时 教材写作品读 ①To me,one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Li Bai. He was a great poet.②It is talented of him to create hundreds of poems that still touch people today. Li Bai loved travelling. He walked through mountains and sailed on rivers.③In order to express his love for nature and freedom,he wrote poems like Thoughts on a Tranquil Night（about missing home） and Drinking Alone with the Moon（about finding joy in quiet moments）.He ④succeeded in making poetry a way to share joy and sadness. His words are ⑤full of passion and imagination,making readers feel like they’re right there with him. He ⑥is best known for his romantic writing style. Though he faced troubles,his poems always carry hope. Even now,when we read his poems about the sky,rivers,or friends,we remember to slow down and enjoy the beauty around us. Li Bai isn’t just a poet. He’s also a friend who teaches us to love life. 教材原句 ①【Section B 3a】To me,one of the most inspiring people in Chinese history is Mozi.（To sb.,one of the most inspiring people is…表示“对某人来说,最鼓舞人心的人之一是……”） ②【Section A 3a】It’s really very nice of him to support and encourage my exchange study here. （It is+adj.+of sb.+ to do sth.某人做某事真是太……了） ③【Section A 4c】In order to help defeat his enemies,Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty sent Zhang Qian to find the Yuezhi people.（in order to do sth.为了做某事） ④【Section A 4c】…and he finally succeeded in finding the Yuezhi people.（succeed in doing sth.成功做成某事） ⑤【Section B 2c】Amelia Earhart was always a brave child,full of courage.（full of充满） ⑥【Section B 2c】Earhart is best known for being a flight pioneer as the first woman to fly on her own…（be known for因……而出名） 榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年学习的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下列提示，写一篇100词左右的短文谈谈你心中的榜样并分享你的体会。 提示： 1.Who is your role model? 2.Why is he/she your model? 3.What can you learn from him/her? 4.What can you do to be better? 参考词汇：nuclear submarine核潜艇；technical 技术的 搭建框架 【基础版】My Role Model Everyone has a role model,and so do I.My role model is Huang Xuhua. He is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. I admire him because he worked secretly on submarines for over 30 years and didn’t tell his family. Even when facing technical difficulties,he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said,“I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation. From him,I’ve learnt two important things. First,we should be brave enough to face challenges,just as he did during research. Second,we must always put the country’s needs first. He is truly a great person. I will learn from him,and never give up when I meet difficulties. 【提升版】 My Role Model Everyone has a role model,and so do I.My role model is Huang Xuhua,who is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties,he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said,“I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show that he loves our nation deeply. From him,I’ve learnt two important things. First,we should be brave so that we can face challenges,just as he did during research. Second,we must always put the country’s needs first. What a great person he is!I will learn from him,and never give up when I meet difficulties. 总体分析 基础版 ✅优点 文章结构标准：引出榜样→介绍事迹 + 精神→收获感悟→结尾表态，要点完整，完全贴合初中英语写作要求； 词汇浅显，句式简单，以简单句、基础复合句为主，容易背诵，不易出现语法错误； 紧扣主题，素材典型，逻辑清晰，无语法错误，可保证基础得分。 ❌不足 句式种类偏少，部分表达直白，缺少定语从句、状语从句等加分句型； 部分句子表达方式普通，句式改造空间大； 结尾平铺直叙，缺少情感张力，很难冲击高分档。 提升版 ✅亮点 语法升级：引入非限制性定语从句，开篇立刻拉开档次，是中考书面表达热门加分句型； 句式优化重组，同义转换，避免生硬直译；灵活使用 so that 目的状语从句替换基础简单句； 句式多样化：陈述句结尾升级为感叹句，增强情感表达； 二、词汇 & 短语对比 基础版原版表达 提升版优化改写 优化说明 He is known as… who is known as… 改为定语从句，合并句子，避免短句割裂，高分语法点 worked secretly on submarines for over 30 years and didn’t tell his family spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family spend…doing 固定句型；用介词短语替代并列句，语言更简洁地道 His words show his deep love for our nation. His words show that he loves our nation deeply. 使用宾语从句；形容词 deep 修饰名词 → 副词 deeply 修饰动词，用词更规范 we should be brave enough to face challenges we should be brave so that we can face challenges so that 引导目的状语从句，丰富句式类型 He is truly a great person. What a great person he is! 陈述句改为感叹句，增强抒情效果，结尾更有感染力 句式层面详细解析 1. 开篇优化 基础版： My role model is Huang Xuhua. He is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. 两个独立简单句。 提升版合并： My role model is Huang Xuhua, who is known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. 考点：非限制性定语从句，初中英语写作核心加分句型。 2. 人物事迹句子改写 基础版：he worked secretly…and didn’t tell his family（并列句） 提升版：he spent over 30 years working secretly…without telling his family 使用 spend time doing + without 介词结构，句式更加紧凑，避免过多 and 连接句子。 3. 感悟句句型升级 基础版：we should be brave enough to face challenges 提升版：we should be brave so that we can face challenges enough to do（基础句型）VS so that 目的状语从句（进阶句型），丰富全文句式结构，阅卷老师不会觉得句式单调。 4. 结尾情感升级 平铺直叙陈述句 → What a great person he is! 文章收尾更有感染力，符合人物品质类作文抒情要求。 1.看着日新月异、逐渐富强的中国，相信每一个中国人的心中，都会升起无以言喻的自豪感。而中国能够摆脱战乱，在短短的几十年时间里发展成为现在的样子，其实离不开中国伟人。英语课上即将进行“中国伟人”为主题的分享活动。请你根据以下图示信息，写一篇英语短文介绍三位中国伟人（请从杨利伟、刘翔和钟南山中选择一位进行补充），并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1．内容须包括所提示的全部信息，可适当发挥； 2．文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称； 3．80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4．不得抄袭试卷原文。 参考词汇：malaria 疟疾；COVID-19 新冠肺炎；110 meters hurdles 110米跨栏 Today, I am honored to introduce three great Chinese to you. They are ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Today, I am honored to introduce three great Chinese to you. They are Zhan Tianyou, Tu Youyou and Zhong Nanshan. Zhan Tianyou is the father of Chinese Railway. He built China’s first railway—the Beijing Zhangjiakou Railway. Tu Youyou is a great scientist and she found new drugs to fight malaria, and her spirit of never giving up is worth people’s learning. Zhong Nanshan is a respiratory specialist in China. Seventeen years ago, he did his best to “fight against SARS”. In early 2020, a disease called Novel coronavirus pneumonia hit Wuhan. As soon as Zhong Nanshan heard the news, he rushed to Wuhan in person in January 2020. He led the medical staff to contain the epidemic and encouraged the people of the country to build confidence to overcome the difficulties. As students, we should learn from them. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。   [写作步骤]   第一步，介绍三位伟人的名字；   第二步，介绍他们的伟绩； 第三步，要向他们学习。   [亮点词汇]   ①give up放弃   ②do one’s best to do sth尽某人最大努力做某事   ③in person亲自   [高分句型]   ①As soon as Zhong Nanshan heard the news, he rushed to Wuhan in person in January 2020.（as soon as引导时间状语从句）   2.为了树立榜样，促进学生成长，我校学生会近日开展主题为“A Young Model in My Mind”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你心目中的“模范青年”孙颖莎。内容提示如下： 要求： 1)须包含提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥，内容要条理清晰，有逻辑; 2)词数：100-120词(开头已经给出，不计入总词数)。 3)参考词汇：奥运冠军 Olympic champion   乒乓球 table tennis A Young Model in My Mind My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce a young model to you______________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Young Model in My Mind My dear fellow students, Today I’m glad to introduce a young model to you—Sun Yingsha, a remarkable table tennis player. She was born on November 4, 2000, in Shijiazhuang, Hebei Province. At the age of 5, she started playing table tennis. Since then, she has been training for more than 8 hours every day. Even when she got injured, she never gave up and kept going. At 21, she became an Olympic champion, which made her a shining star in the sports world. I’m deeply moved by her perseverance and hard work. From her, I learn that success comes from endless efforts and a strong will. No matter how difficult the journey is, we should stick to our dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、承接开头，引出介绍对象孙颖莎； 第二步、分点介绍她的出生背景、训练经历与成就； 第三步、抒发个人感受，提炼从她身上学到的品质。 [亮点词汇] ①more than超过 ②gave up放弃 ③stick to坚持 [高分句型] No matter how difficult the journey is, we should stick to our dreams.(no matter how引导的让步状语从句) 3．习近平总书记在多次讲话中强调“新时代，呼唤英雄”。其实，英雄就在我们身边。这些“英雄”可能是我们的亲人、同学、朋友、老师……请介绍一下你心中的“小人物，大英雄”。 提示：①你心中的英雄是谁。 ②记述你印象深刻的一件事。 ③对你的影响。 要求：①语意连贯，层次清晰，书写清楚。 ②文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。 ③文章开头已开出，不计入总词数。 A Hero in My Heart Everybody has a hero in his heart. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】One possible version： A Hero in My Heart Everybody has a hero in his heart. My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up. Once she would have a difficult exam. To pass it, she must read four books. But my mother did not have so much time because she had to take care of me. One night, when I woke up suddenly at 2 o’clock, I found her staying up late to read her books. I was shocked by my mother. My mother always sets a goal and manages to finish it. She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard. 【详解】这是一篇命题作文。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点、跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上。此篇作文需要用一般过去时态进行叙述心目中英雄的事情，人称为第三人称。注意动词过去式的形式要正确。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，可以使用大量的固定句式和短语，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。 【点睛】这篇短文使用的主从复合句比较多，比如“when I woke up suddenly at 2 o'clock, I found her staying up late to read her books”，按照动作发生的先后顺序，使得句子更加有层次感，文章避免单纯的重复，使短文既通俗易懂又逻辑清楚。让我们对作者的母亲有了比较全面的了解，不失为一篇上等作文。 【高分案例一】My hero is my mother, because she has been working hard all the time and never gives up.（我的英雄是我的母亲，因为她一直努力工作，从不放弃。）because引导的原因状语从句引出我的英雄是我妈妈的原因。【高分案例二】She is a hero in my heart and encourages me to work hard.（她是我心中的英雄，鼓励我努力工作。）鼓励某人做某事的结构encourage sb. to do sth.用不定式结构使得句子结构更加清晰，表达更加明了。 4．不论哪个时代，哪个行业，都会有永驻人心的英雄，因而诗人说：“英雄儿女耀千秋”。你的心中也一定有一位英雄，他也许是阅兵场上的军人，也许是攻克难题的科学家，也许是一位感动大家的普通人，亦或是你身边的守护者。请以“A Hero in My Heart”为题，写写你心中这位英雄的故事以及他 (她) 对你的影响。 1. 简单介绍这位英雄 (如姓名、所处时代等基本信息)； 2. 描述他/她的主要成就、贡献或故事； 3. 说明他/她身上哪些品质让你钦佩，以及对你产生了怎样的影响。 要求： 1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2. 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥； 3. 词数在100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。 A Hero in My Heart When it comes to heroes, opinions are different from person to person. As for me, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 A Hero in My Heart When it comes to heroes, opinions are different from person to person. As for me, the hero in my heart is Qian Xuesen. He was a great scientist who lived in the 20th century. He is considered the pioneer of China’s space technology programme. Though he faced many difficulties, he never gave up. He worked hard to help China build its rockets and satellites. What I admire most about him is his love for his country and his strong will. His story teaches me to keep working hard and never lose heart when facing problems. I will learn from him and become a better person. 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般现在时和一般过去时为主 明确要点：英雄的基本信息、主要成就/故事、敬佩的品质及对自己的影响 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my) + 第三人称 (he/his) 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名和地名，词数100词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：承接已给出的句子，点明心中的英雄是谁 主体段：介绍英雄的基本信息、主要成就与贡献 结尾段：说明敬佩的品质，以及对自己的影响与感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：英雄基本信息与主要成就 人物选择：Qian Xuesen/Zhang Guimei/Yuan Longping等 信息描述：He was a great scientist who lived in the 20th century./He is considered the pioneer of China’s space technology programme./She is widely known for founding the first free high school for girls in China./He is known as the “Father of Hybrid Rice”.等 具体贡献：Though he faced many difficulties, he never gave up./He worked hard to help China build its rockets and satellites./She has helped thousands of girls from poor families go to college and change their lives./He worked hard to develop high-yield hybrid rice, which helped feed millions of people around the world.等 要点二：敬佩的品质与个人影响 品质说明：His love for his country and his strong will./Her selfless love for students and her unyielding spirit are what I admire most./His love for his country and his strong will to solve hunger problems are truly inspiring.等 影响说明：His story teaches me to keep working hard and never lose heart when facing problems./I will learn from him and become a better person./Her story teaches me to care for others and never give up on helping people in need./I will learn from him to pursue my dreams and help others in the future.等 5．假设你是李华，你要写一篇短文介绍屠呦呦的生平与贡献。请根据以下提示写一篇90词左右的短文。 提示： 1.屠呦呦是一位伟大的药理学家，2015年获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 2.她出生于1930年，带领团队研究传统中药。 3.1971年，她发现了青蒿素，有效治疗疟疾。 4.她的发现拯救了数百万人的生命，尤其是在发展中国家。 5.她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖的中国女性，我们都很敬佩她。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Tu Youyou is a great Chinese pharmacologist who won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015. She was born on 30 December 1930 in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province. In the 1960s, she led a team to research traditional Chinese medicine to find a cure for malaria. After many experiments, they discovered artemisinin in 1971, which can treat malaria effectively. Her discovery has saved millions of lives around the world, especially in developing countries. She is the first Chinese woman to win a Nobel Prize in science, and we all admire her deeply. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇人物介绍，以李华的视角介绍屠呦呦的生平与贡献； ②时态：以一般过去时为主，介绍屠呦呦的生平与成就； ③提示：需涵盖身份与奖项、出生年份与研究方向、青蒿素的发现与作用、贡献影响、敬佩之情，内容完整且符合词数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍身份与奖项：屠呦呦是一位伟大的药理学家，在2015年获得了诺贝尔生理学或医学奖； 第二步，讲述生平与研究：她出生于1930年，在20世纪60年代带领团队研究传统中药，寻找治疗疟疾的方法； 第三步，说明成就与影响：1971年发现青蒿素，能有效治疗疟疾，这一发现拯救了数百万人的生命，尤其是在发展中国家； 第四步，表达敬佩：她是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖的中国女性，我们都非常敬佩她。 [亮点词汇] ①pharmacologist药理学家 ②Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine诺贝尔生理学或医学奖 ③traditional Chinese medicine传统中药 ④artemisinin青蒿素 ⑤developing countries发展中国家 [高分句型] ①Tu Youyou is a great Chinese pharmacologist who won the Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine in 2015. (who引导定语从句，清晰介绍人物身份与成就) ②After many experiments, they discovered artemisinin in 1971, which can treat malaria effectively. (which引导非限制性定语从句，补充说明青蒿素的作用) 6．榜样的力量是无穷的。核潜艇之父黄旭华、潜心研究AI的梁文锋、机器人之父王兴兴、弃医从艺的饺子、遨游太空的女工程师王浩泽等都是青少年的榜样。成长的过程中，每个人都有自己的榜样。学校英文报正在开展以“My Role Model”为主题的征文活动。请根据下列提示谈谈你心中的楷模并分享你的体会。 提示： 1. Who is your role model?    2. Why is he/she your model? 3. What can you learn from him/her? 要求： 1. 要点齐全，并适当发挥； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名； 3. 90 词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Role Model Everyone has a role model, so do I. My role model is Huang Xuhua, known as the “Father of China’s Nuclear Submarines”. I admire him because he spent over 30 years working secretly on submarines without telling his family. Even when facing technical difficulties, he never gave up. What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” His words show his deep love for our nation. From him, I’ve learned two important things. First, we should be brave enough to face challenges, just as he did during research. Second, we must always put the country’s needs first. Whenever I feel tired in study, I think of his spirit and keep going. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要是“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当拓展，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“我的榜样是黄旭华”引出下文。 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。表明我把他当作榜样的原因。 第三步，书写结语。表明我可以从他身上学到什么，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①admire仰慕 ②give up放弃 ③brave勇敢的 [高分句型] What touches me most is that he once said, “I’m willing to be silent for the country’s future.” (that引导宾语从句) 7．张桂梅，丽江华坪女子高级中学书记、校长。她数十年如一日行善助学，爱生如子，被评为“感动中国2020年度人物”，并荣获“全国脱贫攻坚楷模”荣誉称号。现在请你根据以下信息提示，用英语写一篇短文介绍张桂梅老师。 姓名 张桂梅 生日 1957年6月 出生地 黑龙江 主要事迹 1990年，开始在云南一所中学任教； 丈夫去世后，决定继续教书； 2001年，计划兴建女子中学； 2008年，成立华坪女中——全国第一所全免费的女子高中； 13年来，尽管身体每况愈下，但仍帮助了1800名贫困女孩走进大学。 要求：1. 须包含所给信息，可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文： Zhang Guimei was born in Heilongjiang in June, 1957. In 1990, she started to teach in a middle school in Yunnan. When her husband died, she decided to continue teaching. In 2001, she came up with the idea of starting a girls’ middle school. She believes education is very important to the girls. She tried her best and never gave up in the face of difficulties. Seven years later, Zhang set up Huaping Girls High School, the first free high school for girls in China. In the past thirteen years, Zhang has helped 1,800 girls from poor families achieve their university dreams. However, Zhang is in poor health because of years of hard work. Zhang is the greatest teacher I have ever seen. I’d like to be a teacher like her when I grow up. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点明确给出，需包含姓名、生日、出生地、主要事迹等信息，不能遗漏，同时可适当发挥，使文章内容更丰富 。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇介绍张桂梅老师的基本信息，即出生时间和地点。 第二步：具体阐述主要事迹。按照时间顺序依次描述她开始任教、丈夫去世后继续教书、计划兴建女子中学、成立华坪女中以及帮助贫困女孩上大学等经历，体现她的奉献精神。 第三步：书写结语。表达对张桂梅老师的赞美以及以她为榜样的愿望，升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①was born in出生于 ②decided to决定做…… ③came up with想出，提出 ④set up建立 ⑥achieve their university dreams实现她们的大学梦想 [高分句型] ①When her husband died, she decided to continue teaching.（when引导的时间状语从句） ②Zhang is the greatest teacher I have ever seen.（最高级句型，定语从句） 8．体育锻炼使我们开心和放松，也让我们保持健康。假如你是李华，你校英语俱乐部近日开展主题为“My Favourite Player”的英语演讲大赛，写一篇演讲稿介绍你最喜欢的运动员全红婵。 要求如下： 1. 适当自由发挥, 80词以上。 2. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 3. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。 提示词： diver 跳水运动员         Comment 评价    My Favourite Player—Quan Hongchan Hello, I’m Li Hua, I like doing sports. _______________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Favourite Player—Quan Hongchan Hello, I’m Li Hua. I like doing sports, and my favourite player is Quan Hongchan, a great diver.  She was born in Guangdong on March 28th, 2007. She started diving training at 7, and her talent was soon noticed. At the Tokyo Olympics, she won the gold medal and broke the record—she’s one of the youngest divers to win an Olympic gold! She trains so hard that injuries never stop her.  Quan is successful not just because of her skills, but also her strong will. She makes China proud, and I’ve learned to keep trying from her. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：讲稿； ②时态：一般现在时+一般过去时； ③提示：涵盖自己的姓名、爱好，介绍全红婵的身份、出生信息、训练经历、奥运成就、刻苦精神，以及她成功的原因和对自己的启发，内容完整，符合介绍人物的场景。   [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇介绍自己及爱好，点明最喜欢的运动员是跳水运动员全红婵； 第二步：讲述全红婵的基本信息、训练起点、奥运成就及刻苦训练的表现； 第三步：分析她成功的原因，说明她让中国骄傲，以及自己从她身上学到坚持努力的品质。   [亮点词汇] ①diver跳水运动员 ②talent天赋 ③gold medal金牌 ④record纪录 ⑤strong will坚强意志   [高分句型] ①She trains so hard that injuries never stop her.（用“so…that…”结构，强调她训练的刻苦程度，突出其毅力） ②Quan is successful not just because of her skills, but also her strong will.（用“not just…but also…”结构，全面说明她成功的原因，逻辑清晰） 9．孔子 (Confucius) 是中国古代最有智慧的人之一。他是一名杰出的教育家。请根据以下信息，写一篇英语短文，向某英语报社投稿。 出生时间 551BC 地点 鲁国 (山东省) 经历 3岁父亲离世，和母亲相依为命，生活艰难； 15岁开始学音乐和其他科目； 30岁成为老师，拥有自己的学校，一生大概有3000名学生 成就和影响 主张人人都应该有受教育的机会；提倡仁和礼 你的评价 …… 要求： 1. 语言通顺，观点明确，书写工整； 2. 80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现真实的姓名和校名，可适当发挥。 参考词汇： 鲁国: the kingdom of Lu; 仁: kindness; 礼: good manners Confucius was one of the greatest minds in China. _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】     Confucius was one of the greatest minds in China. Born in 551 BC in the kingdom of Lu (now Shandong Province), he lost his father at 3 and depended on his mother. Though life was hard, he began learning music and other subjects at 15. At 30, he became a teacher and founded his own school, teaching about 3,000 students in his life. He believed everyone should have the chance to be educated and stressed kindness and good manners. I think his ideas still inspire people today. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇人物介绍类说明文； ②时态：主要时态为一般过去时； ③提示：需整合表格信息，用简洁语言概括孔子生平，结尾需补充个人评价。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇点题； 第二步：介绍出生、经历、成就； 第三步：发表个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①depend on依靠 ②stress强调 ③inspire激励 [高分句型] ①Though life was hard, he began learning music and other subjects at 15. （让步状语从句） ②He believed everyone should have the chance to be educated and stressed kindness and good manners. （宾语从句） 10．自苏超赛事举办以来，泰州队作为一匹让人意外的 “黑马”，成功走进了全国人民的视线；不管是在赛场上努力的运动员，还是指导他们的教练，都是我们泰州人心中的英雄。假如你班将要开展一次以“The hero in my heart”为主题的英语班会。请你根据下面的要点与要求写一篇英语发言稿。 要点： (1) 你心中的英雄是谁? (2) 你为什么认为他/她是你心中的英雄? (3) 你从他/她那里学到了什么? 要求： (1) 文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名： (2) 词数100左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。 The hero in my heart Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you for listening. 【答案】 The hero in my heart Good afternoon, everyone! I’m glad that I have the chance to tell you about the hero in my heart—It’s the famous scientist Yang Zhenning. As a Nobel Prize winner, he made great achievements in physics. He put forward the revolutionary theory of parity non-conservation and won the Nobel Prize in 1957. His “Yang-Mills theory” even became the foundation of modern physics. Besides, he returned to China in his old age and donated money to support China’s science development. He also taught us to be down-to-earth with his motto “be honest rather than tricky”. From him, I learn to dare to question authority and persist in pursuing goals. His love for science and country makes him a true hero. That’s all. Thank you for listening. 【总体分析】①题材：本文是一篇讲稿； ②时态：时态主要为一般现在时 ； ③提示：需介绍心中英雄、说明原因、阐述所学内容。 【写作步骤】第一步：直接点明英雄身份，简要描述其特点。 第二步：用具体事例或品质说明为何视其为英雄，如努力工作、鼓励队员。 第三步：总结从英雄身上学到的道理，如坚持、团队合作，并联系自身。 【亮点词汇】①make great achievements取得巨大成就 ②put forward提出 ③ down-to-earth脚踏实地的 ④ persist in pursuing goals坚持追求目标 【高分句型】①He put forward the revolutionary theory of parity non-conservation and won the Nobel Prize in 1957.（运用了and连接的并列谓语动词） ②Besides, he returned to China in his old age and donated money to support China’s science development.（不定式作目的状语） 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $