摘要:
该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了劝慰信这一高频应用文考点,按照文体概述(三大核心板块)、必备词汇表达、常用句子翻译、必背范文解析、实战训练的逻辑构建知识网络,通过问题导向的审题谋篇任务(如分析文体、人称、时态、要点布局)引导学生自主梳理写作框架,形成从基础表达到综合应用的层次化认知。
亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养,如必备词汇和句子的英汉互译练习夯实语言能力,实战训练中“审题谋篇”环节引导学生分析写作要点与逻辑布局,参考答案与范文提供即时反馈。每个模块均设计任务驱动式学习活动(如翻译练习、范文仿写),帮助学生自主发现薄弱点并针对性提升,教师可通过学生的审题分析和写作成果精准指导,有效培养学生的自主复习能力与语言表达素养。
内容正文:
高考英语应用文专项——劝慰信导学案
一、文体概述:
劝慰信(又称安慰信/慰问信)多用于对对方遭遇不幸、挫折、困难或疾病时表示同情、安慰与鼓励,是高考应用文高频文体之一。写作三大核心板块:
1. 开门见山表示慰问,说明得知对方的不幸遭遇,表达真诚的关心与同情
2. 安慰鼓励对方,说明困难是暂时的,提供具体建议或实际帮助
3. 再次表达支持与期待,愿意随时提供帮助,鼓励对方早日恢复
二、必备词汇和表达英汉翻译:
听到……我深感难过 ___________________________________
express my sincere sympathy ___________________________________
早日康复 ___________________________________
be faced with difficulties ___________________________________
克服挫折 ___________________________________
stand by you ___________________________________
振作起来 ___________________________________
a temporary difficulty ___________________________________
伸出援手 ___________________________________
lose heart ___________________________________
从长远来看 ___________________________________
be of great help ___________________________________
应对压力 ___________________________________
take it easy ___________________________________
重建信心 ___________________________________
look on the bright side ___________________________________
渡过难关 ___________________________________
a shoulder to cry on ___________________________________
保持积极心态 ___________________________________
emerge stronger and wiser ___________________________________
全心全意的支持 ___________________________________
turn failure into motivation ___________________________________
三、常用句子英汉翻译:
得知你在这次重要考试中未能取得理想成绩,我深感难过。
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I quite understand how you feel now, and it is understandable that you sink into sorrow.
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我写信是想向你表达我诚挚的慰问,并给你一些建议。
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The failure in this exam is just a temporary setback, which doesn't mean you are not good enough.
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你一定要振作起来,不要因为一次失败就灰心丧气。
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If there is anything I can do to help you, please don't hesitate to let me know.
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从长远来看,这次经历会让你变得更强大、更睿智。
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I firmly believe that you will get through this hard time and emerge stronger than ever.
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我们都在你身边支持你,随时准备伸出援手。
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Try to look on the bright side and maintain a positive attitude towards life.
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希望你能尽快从这次失败的阴影中走出来,重新开始。
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Please accept my deepest sympathy and let me know if you need any help.
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四、必背范文:
范文1(模拟高考·安慰考试失利的朋友)
假定你是李华,你的好朋友王明在最近的高考模拟考试中发挥失常,情绪很低落。请你给他写一封邮件安慰他,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰和理解 2. 分析原因并给出建议 3. 鼓励并表达支持
Dear Wang Ming,
I am terribly sorry to hear that you didn't perform well in the recent mock exam and have been feeling upset these days. I quite understand how you feel, and I am writing to give you some comfort and advice.
Actually, the failure in this exam is just a temporary setback. It doesn't mean you are not good enough. There are many reasons that may lead to this result, such as improper exam strategies or too much pressure. What you should do now is to cheer up and analyze your mistakes carefully. In addition, try to maintain a positive attitude and don't lose heart. Remember, failure is the mother of success.
I firmly believe that you will get through this hard time and make great progress in the next exam. If there is anything I can do to help, please don't hesitate to tell me. I am always here for you.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文2(模拟高考·慰问生病的同学)
假定你是李华,你的同班同学Tom因生病住院了,落下了很多功课。请你给他写一封邮件表示慰问,内容包括:
1. 表示关心和慰问 2. 提供学习上的帮助 3. 祝愿早日康复
Dear Tom,
I am terribly sorry to hear that you are ill and have been in hospital for several days. All of us are very concerned about you and miss you very much. I am writing to express our sincere concern and let you know that we are all here to help you.
Please don't worry about your studies. We have taken detailed notes for you in each class, and we will help you catch up with the lessons when you come back. In addition, our teachers also ask me to send their best wishes for your speedy recovery.
The most important thing now is to take good care of yourself and follow the doctor's advice. Try to stay positive and don't push yourself too hard. We are all looking forward to your quick recovery and seeing you back at school soon.
If there is anything you need, just let me know. Get well soon!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、实战训练:
假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter在最近的学校演讲比赛中未能获奖,感到非常沮丧。请你给他写一封邮件安慰他,内容包括:
1. 表示安慰和理解;2. 肯定他的努力并分析收获;3. 鼓励他继续努力
注意:1. 词数80词左右;开头、结尾已给出;2. 可适当增添细节,保证行文流畅连贯。
写作过程:
1.审题谋篇:
(1)文体:_________________ (2)人称:_________________
(3)时态:_________________
(4)要点:________________________________________________________
(5)布局:一段:________________________________________________
二段:________________________________________________
三段:________________________________________________
2.写作:
Dear Peter,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
二、 必备词汇和表达英汉翻译
1. I was deeply saddened to hear that...
2. 表达我诚挚的慰问
3. a speedy recovery
4. 面临困难
5. overcome the setback
6. 支持你,站在你这边
7. cheer up
8. 暂时的困难
9. give a helping hand
10. 灰心丧气
11. in the long run
12. 有很大帮助
13. deal with pressure
14. 放松点,别紧张
15. rebuild confidence
16. 往好的方面看
17. get through the hard time
18. 可以倾诉的对象
19. maintain a positive attitude
20. 变得更强大更睿智
21. wholehearted support
22. 将失败转化为动力
三、 常用句子英汉翻译
1. I was deeply saddened to learn that you didn't get the desired result in this important exam.
2. 我非常理解你现在的感受,你陷入悲伤是可以理解的。
3. I am writing to express my sincere sympathy and offer you some advice.
4. 这次考试的失败只是暂时的挫折,并不意味着你不够优秀。
5. You must cheer up and don't lose heart because of one failure.
6. 如果有什么我能帮忙的,请尽管告诉我。
7. In the long run, this experience will make you stronger and wiser.
8. 我坚信你会渡过难关,并且变得比以往更强大。
9. We are all standing by you and ready to give a helping hand at any time.
10. 试着往好的方面看,对生活保持积极的态度。
11. I hope you can get out of the shadow of this failure as soon as possible and start over.
12. 请接受我最深切的慰问,如果需要任何帮助请告诉我。
五、 实战训练
1.审题谋篇标准答案
(1)文体:英文劝慰邮件(应用文书信)
(2)人称:第一人称I,第二人称you
(3)时态:一般现在时、一般过去时、一般将来时
(4)要点:①安慰Peter比赛失利;②肯定他的努力并分析收获;③鼓励他继续努力
(5)布局:一段:开篇问候,得知比赛失利表示安慰和理解
二段:肯定他的努力,分析比赛中的收获,说明失败是暂时的
三段:再次鼓励,相信他下次会成功,表达支持
2.实战写作范文
Dear Peter,
I am terribly sorry to hear that you didn't win a prize in the school speech contest and have been feeling very frustrated. I quite understand how you feel, and I am writing to cheer you up.
Actually, you have already done a great job. I know you have been practicing very hard for this contest for a long time. The fact that you didn't win doesn't mean your efforts were in vain. You have gained valuable experience and improved your public speaking skills through this process. In addition, you have learned how to deal with pressure, which will be of great help in your future life.
Please don't lose heart. Failure is the mother of success. I firmly believe that if you keep practicing, you will definitely succeed next time. I am always here to support you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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