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小作文·应用文
一、书信类(邀请/建议/感谢/道歉/申请/咨询)
首段:问候(必要时加自我介绍)+直接点明写作目的
中段:核心信息展开(2-3个要点,用逻辑词衔接),为得分主体
尾段:情感表达+礼貌收尾(期待回复/重申意愿)+落款
◆邀请信:中段必写「活动时间十地,点十核心内容十邀请对方的理由」
◆建议信:中段必写「2一3条具体建议十每条建议的合理性/益处」
◆感谢信:中段必写「对方帮助的具体细节十帮助带来的积极影响」
◆道歉信:中段必写「道歉的具体原因+可行的弥补方案」
◆申请信:中段必写「个人优势(能力/经历)十与申请项目的匹配度」
对点练习
(一)申请信邀请信感谢信道款信
申请信
【高频语块】
1.apply for
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2.graduate from
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3.major in
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4.be skilled in/at...
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5.be good at......be expert in..
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6.have a good command/knowledge
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7.be competent for.
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8.be fit/
/be qualified for
『造句练习」
9.have rich working experience
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10.cooperate with
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11.come out top
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12.be bound to...
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13.good grades
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14.be paid by the hour
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15.present address
『造句练习」
16.working experience
『造句练习」
17.a win-win activity
『造句练习」
【参考答案】
1.申请,I plan to apply for a scholarship to support my further study.
2.从…毕业,She will graduate from Peking University next year.
3.主修;My cousin majors in computer science at Tsinghua University.
4..:He is skilled in playing the piano and often performs at school events.
5.擅长…/精通…,Lily is good at drawing and is expert in traditional Chinese
painting.
6.精通,掌握,As an interpreter,she has a good command of both English and French.
7.i能胜任;With years of experience,he is competent for the position of project
manager.
8,qualified;适合/胜任;After training,she is fit./qualified for the demanding
job in the marketing department.
9.有丰富的工作经验,This candidate has rich working experience in international trade,
which makes her stand out.
l0.与…合作,We need to cooperate with other teams to finish this complex task
on time.
1l.名a列前茅,Through hard work,he came out top in the final exam of his grade.
l2.一定…,If you keep practicing every day,you are bound to improve your oral
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English.
L3,好成绩,To get into a top university,students must maintain good grades throughout
high school.
l4.按小时计酬,Part-time workers in this caféare paid by the hour,with a rate
of 15 yuan per hour.
l5.目前地址,Please write down your present address clearly on the application form.
l6.工作经验;Many employers value working experience more than academic
qualifications when hiring
17.一项双赢的话动,The volunteer program between our school and the local community
is a win-win activity.
【高频句型】
l.I am writing to apply for the post of…advertised in兹申请刊登在…上的.
工作。
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2.In reply to your advertisement in.,I beg to apply for the post of.in your
company.见…上刊登的贵公司广告,我谨申请应聘贵公司的…职务。
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3.I would like to apply for admission to your college.我想申请入贵校学习。
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4.I would like to further my studies in...Department of your university.
在贵校…系继续深造。
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5.My major is.,and I understand your university has a good program in this
fild.我的专业是…,我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
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6.Born in.in...,I graduated from..University majoring in..I have been working
in...since my graduation,and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field......
年,我出生于…,毕业于…大学…专业。毕业后一直在…工作,因此积累了该领域
丰富的经验。
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7.That's why I am applying for..这就是我为什么申请的原因。
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That is the very reason why I submit my application for...(This accounts for
my application for...)
8.I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.如能给我这个机
会,我将不胜感激。
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9.I hope you can offer me the opportunity.希望能给我这个机会
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l0.I hope I can be accepted as a member of.我希望,能够成为..,的一员。
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Ll.I hope you will kindly send me an application form.希望贵校能给我寄来空
白申请表。
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12.I should be pleased to attend an interview at your convenience,when I could
give you further details concerning myself..我将乐意在您方便时接受面试,届时我将进
一步介绍自己。
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【参考答案】
1.I am writing to apply for the post of editor advertised in China Daily.
2.In reply to your advertisement in People's Daily,I beg to apply for the post of
sales manager in your company.
3.I would like to apply for admission to your graduate school.
4.I would like to further my studies in the Computer Science Department of your
university.
5.My major is biology,and I understand your university has a good program in this
field.
6.Born in Shanghai in 1995,I graduated from Fudan University majoring in economics.
I have been working in a multinational company since my graduation,and I have
therefore attained rich experience in this field.
7.That's why I am applying for this scholarship.
8.I will be very grateful if you can give me this internship opportunity.
9.I hope you can offer me the opportunity to attend the seminar.
10.I hope I can be accepted as a member of the research team.
11.I hope you will kindly send me an application form.
12.I should be pleased to attend an interview at your convenience,when I could provide
more information concerning myself.
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做
志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
One Possible Version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua,an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.I'm
delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition
to be held in the local art gallery.Now I'm writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows.First of all,having been exposed
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to foreign teachers since a young age,I can communicate freely with others in English.
What's more,years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer,which will help
a lot to keep the exhibition in order.The most important factor is that my related
knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art
form.
All in all,my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.I'd
appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启
事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival,which will be held on June 15-17,2019,is now looking
for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English
Debate.If you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience
to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aer.com.
写作要点:
1.表示写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的;
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根
据情况增加细节,使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms.Chen
I'm Li Hua,a student from Class2,Grade 3.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Ms.Chen,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Class2,Grade 3.I'm writing to apply for the position
as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,
I will be able to improve my organizational ability,communication skills as well as
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my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such
a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,
which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if
you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【总结】
申请信通常包括三部分内容:
1.简要介绍自已,说明信息来源,并提出申请:
2.突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由;
3.请求给予机会,期望尽快回复。
邀请信
【高频语块】
1.
举办:hold/organize/host(举办)、
(举行)
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2.时间:
(安排)、last from..to..(持续)
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3.地点相关:auditorium(礼堂)、playground(操场)、studio((演播室)
『造句练习」
4.形式相关:take the form of(以…形式)、
(…环节)
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5.邀请某人做某事
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6.代表某人
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7.为了做某事
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8.计划/打算做某事
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9.拓展某人的视野」
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10.丰富某人的生活」
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11.接受某人的邀请
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12.玩得开心
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13.在学校会议厅
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14.表演节目
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15.举办晚会
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16.学生会
『造句练习」
17.参加
『造句练习」
18.给某人留下深刻的印象
『造句练习」
【参考答案】
1.举行:stage,Our school will stage a sports meeting next Friday.
2.安排:schedule;The meeting is scheduled for9a,m.tomorrow.
3.地,点相关:auditorium(礼堂)、playground(操场)、studio(演播室):;The graduation
ceremony will be held in the school auditorium.
4.
…f环节:session;The activity includes an interactive session.
5.邀请某人做某事:invite sb.to do sth.;We invited her to sing at the party.
6.代表某人:on behalf of sb.;I'm writing to you on behalf of the whole class..
7.为了做某事:in order to do sth.;In order to pass the exam,he studies hard every
day.
8.计划/打算做某事:plan to do sth.;They plan to visit the museum next week.
9.拓展某人的视野:broaden one's horizons,Traveling can broaden our horizons.
l0.丰富某人的生活:enrich one's life,Reading can enrich our life.
ll.接受某人的邀请:accept one's invitation;He accepted our invitation to attend the
lecture.
l2.玩得开心:have a great time;The children had a great time at the party.
l3.在学校会议厅:in the school conference hall,The speech will be held in the school
conference hall.
l4.表演节目:put on performances,The students will put on performances at the evening
party.
l5,举办晚会:hold an evening pa1rty;Our school will hold an evening party for the
New Year.
l6.学生会:the Student Union;The Student Union is organizing a charity event,
l7.参加:take part in;Many students took part in the sports meeting
l8.给某人留下深刻的印象:leave a deep impression on sb.,The wonderful performance
left a deep impression on us.
【高频句型】
开篇句型模板
1.Knowing/Hearing that you are enthusiastic about/are passionate about...,
I'm writing to invite you to participate in .
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2.In order to do/With the purpose of/With the aim of...,...holds the activity,
..(话动名称).So/Therefore,.as part of it,I'm writing to invite you to..
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3.It is so great to inform you that ...a well-organised event arranged by...,
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is approaching.I'm writing for the purpose of inviting you to take part in ...
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【参考答案】
1.Hearing that you are passionate about traditional Chinese calligraphy,I'm writing
to invite you to participate in the calligraphy exhibition to be held in our school
next week.
2.With the aim of promoting cultural exchange between China and foreign countries,
our school holds the activity "International Culture Festival".Therefore,as part
of it,I'm writing to invite you to give a speech about your country's folk customs
3.It is so great to inform you that the "Nature Exploration Camp",a well-organised
event arranged by the Students'Union,is approaching.I'm writing for the
purpose of inviting you to take part in this meaningful activity.
正文句型模板(时间、地点、活动)
1.The activity,...,will take place/will be held in the lecture hall of our school
from10:00to15:00 on March20th,lasting for5 hours.(时间可灵活更换)
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2.As is scheduled,..will start at 9 a.m.
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【参考答案】
1.The activity,the English speech contest,will be held in the school auditorium from
14:00 to 17:00 on April 15th,lasting for 3 hours.
2.As is scheduled,the spring sports meeting will start at 8:30 a.m.this Saturday.
正文句型模板(活动内容)
1.Not only can you appreciate...,but you can also...,which will allow you
to do...
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2.During...,there will be a wide range of/varieties of/a diversity of activities
(that)you are fascinated by/are fond of/are keen on,including sth,sth and so on.
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3.There are a number of/plenty of activities.First of all,we will admire...
What's more,all participants will....Furthermore,we will taste...
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【参考答案】
1.Not only can you appreciate the beautiful scenery of the ancient town,but you
can also learn about its long history and unique culture,which will allow you to
gain a deeper understanding of traditional Chinese architecture.
2.During the summer camp,there will be a wide range of activities that you are
fond of,including hiking,camping,and team-building games and so on.
3.There are plenty of activities.First of all,we will admire the amazing works of
art in the local museum.What's more,all participants will have the chance to
communicate with famous artists.Furthermore,we will taste delicious local snacks
at the nearby food street.
正文句型模板(活动意义)
1.(the activity),which will promote/improve/enhance your ..
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2.(the activity),in which you can..
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3.Not only can it ...but also it can....
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4.意义类常用:enrich students'campus life;broaden students'horizons;arouse
students'passion for...:raise one's awareness of...:lead a healthy lifestyle;
strengthen one's sense of ..
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【参考答案】
1.The reading sharing session will enhance your literary appreciation ability.
2.The outdoor hiking activity allows you to get close to nature and relax yourself.
3.Not only can it strengthen your environmental awareness,but also it can cultivate
your sense of social responsibility.
4.The International Culture Festival greatly enriches students'campus life and
broadens students'horizons
结尾句型模板
1.Let me know as soon as possible if you can come!
『仿句练习」
2.We'd appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience
『仿句练习」
3.Looking forward to your early reply!
『仿句练习」
4.I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.
『仿句练习」
5.Hope to meet you at the....
『仿句练习」
【参考答案】
1.Let me know as soon as possible if you can attend the meeting!
2.We'd appreciate it if you could send the document to us soon.
3.Looking forward to your wonderful performance!
4.I do hope you will join our party if it is convenient for you.
5.Hope to meet you at the school gate.
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,你校近期即将举办一场别开生面的趣味运动会。请给你的英国交换生朋
友David写一封邮件,邀请他参加这次活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;2.活动介绍;3.邀请他有机会来参加
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
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写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear David,
In order to increase students'interest in sports and build up their body,my school
will hold the activity,Fun Sports.So I'm writing to invite you to take part in it.
Let me tell you more details.
The activity will take place on the playground of our school from 10:00 to 15:00
on March 20th,lasting for 5 hours.During the day,there will be a wide range of
activities you are fascinated by,including race,basketball and so on.What interests
me most is the game which involves students and teachers.From my perspective,
the activity is so meaningful.Not only can it arouse student passion for sports,but
also it allows students to take a break from their busy studies.
I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.Looking forward
to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2019全国高考真题)假定你是李华,你校将举幼音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国
朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1.时间;2.活动安排,3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数100左右:2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Allen,
Knowing that you are a big fan of music,I am writing to invite you to attend
the school music festival to be held next Friday afternoon in our school hall.
The festival will consist of a variety of wonderful performances,including singing,
dancing and instrumental shows.It is also a great chance for music lovers to communicate
and share their passion for art.Since you are skilled at singing,we would be extremely
delighted if you could put on a performance at the festival.
I sincerely hope you can join us.I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
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开篇:问候、交代写信背景/原因和写作目的
正文:活动主题、时间地,点、具体流程与安排
结尾:期待对方接受邀请,期盼回信
感谢信
【高频语块】
1.thank sb.for sth./doing sth.
『造句练习」
2.be grateful to sb.for sth.
因某事而感激某人
『造句练习」
3.show/express/
convey my sincere thanks
to sb.for sth.
向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
『造句练习」
4.in trouble
陷入困境
『造句练习」
5.make great./good progress取得很大的进步
『造句练习」
6.in/during,/over the past/,last four years过去四年
『造句练习」
7.be admitted to into a university
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8.say thanks to you for helping me谢谢你帮助我
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9.How time flies!时间过得真快!
『造句练习」
l0.As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by随着时间的推移
『造句练习」
11.thanks to/
/because of your help多亏了你的帮助
『造句练习」
12.enjoy myself玩得高兴
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13.
去参观,拜访
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l4.have a better understanding of.…对…有更好的理解
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15.a place of interest
『造句练习」
【参考答案】
1.
因某事/做某事而感谢某人;Thank you for helping me with my English
2.I am grateful to my teacher for her patient guidance.
3.extend;gratitude:I would like to extend my sincere gratitude to you for your
support.
4.When I was in trouble,my friends always came to help me.
5.With the teacher's help,I have made great progress in math.
6.In the past four years,our school has changed a lot.
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T.被一所大学录取,After hard work,he was admitted to a key university.
8.I want to say thanks to you for helping me finish the task.
9.How time flies!It's already the end of the semester.
10.As time goes by,I gradually understand the importance of learning.
11.owing to;Thanks to your help,I finally solved this difficult problem.
12.I enjoyed myself very much at the party last night.
13.pay a visit to:We plan to pay a visit to our former teacher this weekend.
14.After reading this book,I have a better understanding of history.
l5.名胜古迹,There are many places of interest in this ancient city.
【高频句型】
l.My true gratitude is beyond any words,/description.任何语言都无法表达我真
挚的谢意。
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2.We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us.我们非常感
激你为我们做的一切。
『仿句练习」
3.I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken
English.我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。
『仿句练习」
4.Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to
seeing you soon..再次感谢你的盛情招待,我非常期待不久会看到你。
『仿句练习」
5.I'd like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely
help and assistance.我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持
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6.Thank you so much for your generous help.非常感谢您慷慨的帮助:
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7.I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
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8.I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.我很感谢你为我所做
的一切。
『仿句练习」
9.I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.我想感谢你的帮
助。
『仿句练习」
10.For this reason,I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
『仿句练习」
ll.Thanks to your help,I have made rapid progress in,.,多亏了你的帮助,在..
我取得了了飞速的进步。
『仿句练习」
12.Without/But for your help(If it were not for your help),I would not have made
so much progress in my English.要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
『仿句练习」
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l3.I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor,我太感谢你的帮助
了。
『仿句练习」
l4.I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.如你能接受我诚
挚的感谢,我不胜感激。
『仿句练习」
l5.Your kindness and help will always be remembered..我将永远铭记你的善意和
帮助。
『仿句练习」
【参考答案】
1.My gratitude to you is beyond any description.
2.I thank you and am very grateful for what you did for me.
3.I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me prepare for the exam.
4.Thank you again for your warm hospitality and I am looking forward to hearing
from you soon.
5.I'd like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely
guidance.
6.Thank you so much for your selfless help.
7.I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely support.
8.I am so grateful to you for what you have done for us.
9.I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind advice.
10.For this reason,I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you for
your help.
11.Thanks to your help,I have made rapid progress in math.
12.Without your help,I would not have made so much progress in physics.
13.I extend you again a thousand thanks for your kind help.
14.I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks for your help.
15.Your kindness and support will always be remembered.
【好题链接】
(2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友A1lx即将返回自己的国
家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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The Possible Version
Dear Alex,
Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon,I'm eagerly writing
to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking,it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning
skills.Under your professional guidance,I have made such unbelievable progress in
English.It's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English
speech contest.Whenever I encounter difficulties,you always cheer me up and help
me out,which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous
confidence.No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,交换生Tracy刚刚结束在你们学校的学习生活,已经返回英国。作为
班长,请你根据以下内容用英语写一分感谢信,感谢她一学期以来带给大家的美好回忆:
1.怀念与她相处的快乐时光;
2.感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助;
3.感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍;
4,
欢迎她有机会再来中国。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Tracy,
I am writing to extend my heart-felt thanks for all the beautiful memory that you
have brought to us during last term on behalf of our class.The most important reasons
for our gratitude are as follows.For one thing,thank you for spending so much time
and effort in helping us to learn English.For another,we would like to thank you
for all the English books that you have donated to our class.
We really enjoyed the great time that we spent together,and we must thank you
again for your generous assistance.If you come back to China again,please let us know.
We shall appreciate it very much if you can give us a chance to return your kindness.
Again,I would like to express our warm thanks to you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,正在美国交流学习。你的美国老师Ay邀请你下周五下午3点到她
的班里为美国小学生上一节课,介绍中国传统艺术国画。请给她回复一封电子邮件,要点如
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下:
1.接受邀请,表示感谢;
2.国画简介:
3.课前学生需做的准备。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Amy,
I feel honored to be invited to your class to introduce Chinese painting.It is
appreciated that you would like to offer me this precious chance to share our traditional
culture with your primary students.
Chinese traditional painting refers to paintings painted on Xuan paper or silk in
ink by brush made of animal hair.Known as "guo hua",it is an enduring art form
with a 2000-year-long history.For Chinese,painting serves the purpose of conveying
thoughts and showing the beauty of the lines.It is not only a practical technique for
writing Chinese characters,but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.
Before the class,students are expected to prepare a special brush.Besides,special
paper is also needed.Hope we'll have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因;(点明主题)
第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;(说明感谢的原因)
第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。(再次致谢)
【拓展训练】
假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信,以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状
病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员,请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1.表达谢意;
2.个人感受:
3.表达信心。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,3.开头语和结束语已为
你写好。
参考词汇:流行病epidemic疫情epidemic situation新型冠状病毒novel corona virus
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『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua,a high middle school student in Shanxi.I'm writing to express sincere
gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Corona
Virus.
In this epidemic,it is you who,despite the lack of equipment and the potential
of infection,desperately rescue those infected but striving for life.It is also you who
have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat
it.It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.It's
widely believed that with our joint efforts,China will win the battle and make a quick
recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
道歉信
【高频语块与句型】
1.因某事向某人道歉
『造句练习」
2.向…说对不起
『造句练习」
3.接受我的道歉
『造句练习」
4.为某事原谅某人
『造句练习」
5.并非故意做某事
『造句练习」
6.弥补;赔偿
『造句练习」
7.赔偿;偿还
『造句练习」
8.给你带来不便
『造句练习」
9.给你带来许多麻烦
『造句练习」
10.更加小心
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11.犯这样愚蠢的错误
『造句练习」
12.应当受到责备
『造句练习」
13.承担责任
『造句练习」
14.难以接受的后果
『造句练习」
15.下不为例
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16.我写这封信是因…向你致歉。
『仿句练习」
17.请接受我真诚的道歉。
『仿句练习」
18,对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要…
『仿句练习」
19.我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑,并接受我的道歉。
『仿句练习」
20.对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。
『仿句练习」
21.道歉:apologize,
forgiveness(宽恕;原谅),
make up for...
『造句练习」
22.原因:
unexpected event,prior commitment,
『造句练习」
23.补救:reschedule,
,alternative plan...
『造句练习」
【参考答案】
1.
apologize to sb.for sth.:I apologize to you for my late arrival.
2.say sorry to...:You should say sorry to your deskmate for breaking his pen.
3.accept my apology:I hope you can accept my apology for forgetting your birthday.
4.forgive sb.for sth.:Please forgive me for not replying to your message in time.
5.didn't mean to do sth.:I didn't mean to hurt your feelings when I said that.
6.make up for;I will buy you a new book to make up for the one I lost.
7.pay for:You need to pay for the damage you caused to the window.
8.cause you inconvenience;I'm sorry to cause you inconvenience by changing the
meeting time.
9.bring you a lot of trouble:My carelessness brought you a lot of trouble during
the trip.
10.be more careful:You should be more careful when crossing the busy street.
11.make such a stupid mistake;I regret making such a stupid mistake in the math
exam.
12.be to blame;No one but he is to blame for the project's failure.
13.take responsibility;As the team leader,I must take responsibility for the team's
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performance.
14.unacceptable consequences:His reckless decision led to unacceptable consequences
for everyone.
15.not do it again:I promise not to do it again after this mistake.
16.I am writing this letter to apologize to you for...;I am writing this letter to
apologize to you for missing your party.
17.Please accept my sincere apology.Please accept my sincere apology for the delay
in delivering your package.
18.I am truly sorry for what I said/did.But please believe that I didn't mean to...;
I am truly sorry for what I did yesterday.But please believe that I didn't mean
to ignore you.
19.I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/put yourself in my shoes and
accept my apology.I sincerely hope you can put yourself in my shoes and accept
my apology for being late.
20.I apologize again for the inconvenience caused.I apologize again for the
inconvenience caused by the last-minute change.
21.apology:regret:He offered a sincere apology and tried to make up for his mistake.
22.unavoidable reason:emergency:Due to an unexpected event,I had to cancel our
appointment.
23.compensate:apologize in person:We need to reschedule the meeting and come up
with an alternative plan.
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob的
音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信,要点如下:
1.对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。
2.提出解决的办法。
3.再次请求原谅。
注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语
已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
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Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for having forgotten to return a music
CD which I borrowed from you last week.Yesterday I came back from England and
found it in my luggage.I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.
The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England,so I believe you can find
another one in your local store.How about your buying another CD by yourself and
I will pay for it?If you cannot find a similar one,I would send it back to you through
a post office.And if there are any other solutions you like,please let me know.
I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness.Please forgive me for any inconvenience
caused.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr.Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。
你因你的父亲去北京出差,母亲生病住院需要人照顾,故不能参加。请你写一封信向M.
Evans道歉并说明情沉。要点如下:
1.表示歉意。
2.说明原因。
3.询问是否有录音,以便补听讲座。
注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语
已为你写好。
Dear Mr.Evans,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Mr.Evans,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won't be able to attend the lecture on English
history tomorrow afternoon.My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last
night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now.I am afraid that I will have
to take care of her these days.
However,I am actually very interested in English society and history.I wonder
if it is possible for the talk to be recorded,and if so,could I borrow the tape?It would
mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Please allow me to say sorry again.I sincerely hope that you will be able to
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understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2021·四川成都摸底测试)假定你是李华。你原定下个周去英国参加笔友Kvin的高中
毕业典礼,现因故无法成行。请给他发一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.深表歉意;2.解释原因;3.衷心祝福。
Dear Kevin,
Yours,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Kevin.
I'm writing to make an apology to you for not being able to attend your graduation
ceremony as promised.
My classmate got hurt while helping some children,and we are going to visit him
next week.That is why I cannot attend punctually.Although I can't come,I would
like to send my best wishes to you.I also want to recommend you to make full use
of your vacation to enrich yourself.
I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies and enjoy yourself at the
ceremony.Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
第一部分:自我介绍,开门见山表明写作意图(表达歉意)
第二部分:详述描述导致需要道歉的事情,具体事件1,具体事件2(说明自己的错误
或不当之处)
第三部分:表达歉意、弥补措施以及希望得到原凉的期待
难度提升◇高考对接
1.(2022年新高考I&II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人
李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按邮件标准格式作答。
Dear.Caroline,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【解题】审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
【参考范文(一)】
Dear Caroline,
I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview held by "Talk and Talk",
which is an English programme in our school broadcasting station.高分句型一(节目
介绍)】
As you know,our programme starts at 10 a.m.and ends at 11 a.m.every Tuesday.
高分句型二Besides,the topic is about how to
improve our spoken English.You can give us some suggestions about it.It is certain that
all students will benefit much from your speech.(访谈的时间和话题)
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward
to your early reply.(感谢)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文(二)】
Dear Caroline,
I'm Li Hua,a student in charge of(负责,主管)the"Talk and Talk"column
of the school radio station.Designed to facilitate(促进,使便利)light--hearted
dialogues,our program endeavors to(努力,竭力做某事)present diverse cultural
insights and life stories,enjoying widespread popularity among teachers and students
alike(=-finding favor with both teachers and students_得到师生的喜爱,青睐),
We earnestly invite you to join us at the radio station for an interview this Friday
afternoon,precisely(精准地_)at4p.m.We'll focus on"Fun and Gains in
Cross-Cultural Communication".I'm firmly convinced that(我坚信,我深信..)your
abundant experiences and insightful perspectives will bring the listeners inspiration and
enjoyment.
Looking forward to your favorable reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的卡罗琳老师:
您好!我是校广播站“谈话”栏目的负责人李华。我们的节目旨在通过轻松的对话,分享多
元文化视角与人生故事,深受师生喜爱。
现诚挚邀请您于本周五下午4,点,光临广播站参与我们的访谈。此次访谈的主题为“跨文化
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交流中的趣事与收获”,相信您的丰富经历和独到见解定能为听众带来启发与乐趣。
期待您的回复!
李华
2.(2025年闵行一模)假如你是高三学生李华,你校这学期邀请外教T做系列的英语讲
座,上周Tm做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座,同学们感觉很有收获。请你给Tim写一封邮
件,内容包括:
(1)表达感谢并说明原因;(2)建议下周讲座的内容。
Dear.Tim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tim,
I'm Li Hua,a Senior Three student.On behalf of (my classmates,I'm
writing to convey our sincere thanks(表达我们诚挚的感谢)for your lecture on
English vocabulary learning last week.
The practical strategies you introduced,such as contextual memory(语境记忆_)and
word formation rules,have rid us of inefficient(rid sb.of sth.使某人摆脱某物)
rote memorization(死记硬背)and remarkably improved our learning efficiency.
As most of us are weak in English writing,we sincerely hope your next lecture
can centre on(以.为中心/聚焦于.)practical writing skills,especially advanced
sentence patterns and paragraph organization.
We are eagerly looking forward to your next wonderful lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
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对点练习
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小作文·应用文
一、书信类(邀请/建议/感谢/道款/申请/咨询)
首段:问候(必要时加自我介绍)+直接点明写作目的
中段:核心信息展开(2-3个要点,用逻辑词衔接),为得分主体
尾段:情感表达+礼貌收尾(期待回复/重申意愿)+落款
◆邀请信:中段必写「活动时间十地,点十核心内容十邀请对方的理由」
◆建议信:中段必写「2一3条具体建议十每条建议的合理性/益处」
◆感谢信:中段必写「对方帮助的具体细节+帮助带来的积极影响」
◆道歉信:中段必写「道歉的具体原因十可行的弥补方案」
◆中请信:中段必写「个人优势(能力/经历)十与申请项目的匹配度」
对点练习
(一)申请信邀请信感谢信道款信
申请信
【高频语块】
1.apply for
『造句练习」
2.graduate from
『造句练习」
3.major in
『造句练习」
4.be skilled in/at...
『造句练习」
5.be good at...../be expert in..
『造句练习」
6.have a good command/knowledge
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7.be competent for.
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8.be fit/
be qualified for
『造句练习」
9.have rich working experience
『造句练习」
10.cooperate with
『造句练习」
11.come out top
『造句练习」
12.be bound to...
『造句练习」
13.good grades
『造句练习」
14.be paid by the hour
『造句练习」
15.present address
『造句练习」
16.working experience
『造句练习」
17.a win-win activity
『造句练习」
【高频句型】
L.I am writing to apply for the post of…advertised in兹申请刊登在…上的…
工作。
『仿句练习」
2.In reply to your advertisement in,I beg to apply for the post of in your
company.见…上刊登的贵公司广告,我谨申请应聘贵公司的…职务。
『仿句练习」
3.I would like to apply for admission to your college.我想申请人贵校学习。
『仿句练习」
4.I would like to further my studies in..Department of your university.
在贵校…系继续深造。
『仿句练习」
5.My major is.,and I understand your university has a good program in this
field.我的专业是…,我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
『仿句练习」
6.Born in...in...,I graduated from...University majoring in..I have been working
in..since my graduation,and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field.......
年,我出生于…,毕业于…大学…专业。毕业后一直在…工作,因此积累了该领域
丰富的经验。
『仿句练习」
7.That's why I am applying for..这就是我为什么申请的原因。
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That is the very reason why I submit my application for...(This accounts for
my application for...)
&.I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.如能给我这个机
会,我将不胜感激。
『仿句练习」
9.I hope you can offer me the opportunity.希望能给我这个机会
『仿句练习」
l0.I hope I can be accepted as a member of..我希望,能够成为..的一员。
『仿句练习」
ll.I hope you will kindly send me an application form.希望贵校能给我寄来空
白申请表。
『仿句练习」
12.I should be pleased to attend an interview at your convenience,when I could
give you further details concerning myself.我将乐意在您方便时接受面试,届时我将进
一步介绍自己。
『仿句练习」
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做
志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
One Possible Version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I'm Li Hua,an exchange student from China during this summer vacation.I'm
delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition
to be held in the local art gallery.Now I'm writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows.First of all,having been exposed
to foreign teachers since a young age,I can communicate freely with others in English.
What's more,years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer,which will help
a lot to keep the exhibition in order.The most important factor is that my related
knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art
form.
All in all,my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer.I'd
appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
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假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启
事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival,which will be held on June 15-17,2019,is now looking
for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English
Debate.If you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience
to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点:
1.表示写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的:
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根
据情况增加细节,使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms.Chen,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Class2,Grade 3.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Ms.Chen,
I'm Li Hua,a student from Class2,Grade 3.I'm writing to apply for the position
as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,
I will be able to improve my organizational ability,communication skills as well as
my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such
a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,
which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if
you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
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【总结】
申请信通常包括三部分内容:
1.简要介绍自己,说明信息来源,并提出申请;
2.突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由;
3.请求给予机会,期望尽快回复。
邀请信
【高频语块】
1.举办:hold/organize/host(举办)、
(举行)
『造句练习」
2.时间:
(安排)、last from..to..(持续)
『造句练习」
3.地,点相关:auditorium(礼堂)、playground(操场)、studio(演播室)
『造句练习」
4.形式相关:take the form of(以…形式)、
(…环节)
『造句练习」
5.邀请某人做某事
『造句练习」
6.代表某人
『造句练习」
7.为了做某事
『造句练习」
8.计划/打算做某事
『造句练习」
9.拓展某人的视野
『造句练习」
10.丰富某人的生活
『造句练习」
11.接受某人的邀请
『造句练习」
12.玩得开心
『造句练习」
13.在学校会议厅
『造句练习」
14.表演节目
『造句练习」
15.举办晚会
『造句练习」
16.学生会
『造句练习」
17.参加
『造句练习」
18.给某人留下深刻的印象
『造句练习」
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【高频句型】
开篇句型模板
1.Knowing/Hearing that you are enthusiastic about/are passionate about...,
I'm writing to invite you to participate in .
『仿句练习」
2.In order to do/With the purpose of/With the aim of...,...holds the activity,
,.(话动名称).So/Therefore,as part of it,I'm writing to invite you to.
『仿句练习」
3.It is so great to inform you that ...a well-organised event arranged by...,
is approaching.I'm writing for the purpose of inviting you to take part in ...
『仿句练习」
正文句型模板(时间、地点、活动)
1.The activity,...,will take place/will be held in the lecture hall of our school
from10:00to15:00 on March20th,lasting for5 hours.(时间可灵话更换)
『仿句练习」
2.As is scheduled,...will start at 9 a.m.
『仿句练习」
正文句型模板(活动内容)》
1.Not only can you appreciate...,but you can also...,which will allow you
to do...
『仿句练习」
2.During...,there will be a wide range of/varieties of/a diversity of activities
(that)you are fascinated by/are fond of/are keen on,including sth,sth and so on.
『仿句练习」
3.There are a number of/plenty of activities.First of all,we will admire...
What's more,all participants will....Furthermore,we will taste...
『仿句练习」
正文句型模板(活动意义)
1.(the activity),which will promote/improve/enhance your..
『仿句练习」
2.(the activity),in which you can...
『仿句练习」
3.Not only can it ...but also it can ...
『仿句练习」
4.意义类常用:enrich students'campus life;broaden students'horizons;arouse
students'passion for...:raise one's awareness of...;lead a healthy lifestyle;
strengthen one's sense of ..
『仿句练习」
结尾句型模板
1.Let me know as soon as possible if you can come!
『仿句练习」
2.We'd appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
『仿句练习」
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3.Looking forward to your early reply!
『仿句练习」
4.I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.
『仿句练习」
5.Hope to meet you at the....
『仿句练习」
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,你校近期即将举办一场别开生面的趣味运动会。请给你的英国交换生朋
友David写一封邮件,邀请他参加这次活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;2.活动介绍,3.邀请他有机会来参加。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear David,
In order to increase students'interest in sports and build up their body,my school
will hold the activity,Fun Sports.So I'm writing to invite you to take part in it.
Let me tell you more details.
The activity will take place on the playground of our school from 10:00 to 15:00
on March 20th,lasting for 5 hours.During the day,there will be a wide range of
activities you are fascinated by,including race,basketball and so on.What interests
me most is the game which involves students and teachers.From my perspective,
the activity is so meaningful.Not only can it arouse student passion for sports,but
also it allows students to take a break from their busy studies.
I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.Looking forward
to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2019全国高考真题)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国
朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1.时间;2.活动安排;3.欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Allen,
Knowing that you are a big fan of music,I am writing to invite you to attend
the school music festival to be held next Friday afternoon in our school hall.
The festival will consist of a variety of wonderful performances,including singing,
dancing and instrumental shows.It is also a great chance for music lovers to communicate
and share their passion for art.Since you are skilled at singing,we would be extremely
delighted if you could put on a performance at the festival.
I sincerely hope you can join us.I'm looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
开篇:问候、交代写信背景/原因和写作目的
正文:活动主题、时间地,点、具体流程与安排
结尾:期待对方接受邀请,期盼回信
感谢信
【高频语块】
1.thank sb.for sth./doing sth.
『造句练习」
2.be grateful to sb.for sth.
因某事而感激某人
『造句练习」
3.show/express/_
convey my sincere thanks
to sb.for sth.
向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
『造句练习」
4.in trouble
陷入困境
『造句练习」
5.make great/good progress取得很大的进步
『造句练习」
6.in/during/over the past,/last four years过去四年
『造句练习」
7.be admitted to/into a university
『造句练习」
8.say thanks to you for helping me
谢谢你帮助我
『造句练习」
9.How time flies!时间过得真快!
『造句练习」
l0.As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by随着时间的推移
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11.thanks to/
because of your help多亏了你的帮助
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12.enjoy myself玩得高兴
『造句练习」
13.
去参观,拜访
『造句练习」
14.have a better understanding of...
对…有更好的理解
『造句练习」
15.a place of interest
『造句练习」
【高频句型】
l.My true gratitude is beyond any words/description.任何语言都无法表达我真
挚的谢意。
『仿句练习」
2.We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us.我们非常感
激你为我们做的一切。
『仿句练习」
3.I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken
English.我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。
『仿句练习」
4.Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to
seeing you soon..再次感谢你的盛情招待,我非常期待不久会看到你。
『仿句练习」
5.I'd like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely
help and assistance.我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。
『仿句练习」
6.Thank you so much for your generous help.非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
『仿句练习」
7.I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
『仿句练习」
8.I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.我很感谢你为我所做
的一切。
『仿句练习」
9.I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.我想感谢你的帮
助。
『仿句练习」
10.For this reason,I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.
为此,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
『仿句练习」
ll.Thanks to your help,I have made rapid progress in,.,多亏了你的帮助,在..
我取得了了飞速的进步。
『仿句练习」
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12.Without/But for your help(If it were not for your help),I would not have made
so much progress in my English.要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
『仿句练习」
l3.I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.我太感谢你的帮助
了。
『仿句练习」
l4.I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.如你能接受我诚
挚的感谢,我不胜感激。
『仿句练习」
l5.Your kindness and help will always be remembered.我将永远铭记你的善意和
帮助。
『仿句练习」
【好题链接】
(2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友A1x即将返回自己的国
家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示感谢;
2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Alex,
Learning that you're leaving for the United States soon,I'm eagerly writing
to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking,it's so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning
skills.Under your professional guidance,I have made such unbelievable progress in
English.It's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English
speech contest.Whenever I encounter difficulties,you always cheer me up and help
me out,which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous
confidence.No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
10
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假设你是李华,交换生Trcy刚刚结束在你们学校的学习生活,已经返回英国。作为
班长,请你根据以下内容用英语写一分感谢信,感谢她一学期以来带给大家的美好回忆:
1.怀念与她相处的快乐时光:
2.感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助;
3.感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍;
4.
欢迎她有机会再来中国。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Tracy,
I am writing to extend my heart-felt thanks for all the beautiful memory that you
have brought to us during last term on behalf of our class.The most important reasons
for our gratitude are as follows.For one thing,thank you for spending so much time
and effort in helping us to learn English.For another,we would like to thank you
for all the English books that you have donated to our class.
We really enjoyed the great time that we spent together,and we must thank you
again for your generous assistance.If you come back to China again,please let us know.
We shall appreciate it very much if you can give us a chance to return your kindness.
Again,I would like to express our warm thanks to you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,正在美国交流学习。你的美国老师Ay邀请你下周五下午3点到她
的班里为美国小学生上一节课,介绍中国传统艺术国画。请给她回复一封电子邮件,要点如
下:
1.接受邀请,表示感谢;
2.国画简介:
3.课前学生需做的准备。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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The Possible Version
Dear Amy,
I feel honored to be invited to your class to introduce Chinese painting.It is
appreciated that you would like to offer me this precious chance to share our traditional
culture with your primary students.
Chinese traditional painting refers to paintings painted on Xuan paper or silk in
ink by brush made of animal hair.Known as "guo hua",it is an enduring art form
with a 2000-year-long history.For Chinese,painting serves the purpose of conveying
thoughts and showing the beauty of the lines.It is not only a practical technique for
writing Chinese characters,but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.
Before the class,students are expected to prepare a special brush.Besides,special
paper is also needed.Hope we'll have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因;(点明主题)》
第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;(说明感谢的原因)
第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。(再次致谢)
【拓展训练】
假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信,以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状
病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员,请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1.表达谢意;
2.个人感受;
3.表达信心。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇:
流行病epidemic
疫情epidemic situation
新型冠状病毒novel corona virus
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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The Possible Version
Dear Medical workers.
I am Li Hua,a high middle school student in Shanxi.I'm writing to express sincere
gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Corona
Virus.
In this epidemic,it is you who,despite the lack of equipment and the potential
of infection,desperately rescue those infected but striving for life.It is also you who
have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat
it.It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution.It's
widely believed that with our joint efforts,China will win the battle and make a quick
recovery.
Good luck and stay welll
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
道歉信
【高频语块与句型】
1.因某事向某人道歉
『造句练习」
2.向…说对不起
『造句练习」
3.接受我的道歉
『造句练习」
4.为某事原谅某人
『造句练习」
5.并非故意做某事
『造句练习」
6.弥补;赔偿
『造句练习」
7.赔偿;偿还
『造句练习」
8.给你带来不便
『造句练习」
9.给你带来许多麻烦
『造句练习」
10.更加小心
『造句练习」
11.犯这样愚蠢的错误
『造句练习」
12.应当受到责备
『造句练习」
13.承担责任」
『造句练习」
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14.难以接受的后果
『造句练习」
15.下不为例
『造句练习」
16.我写这封信是因…向你致歉。
『仿句练习」
17.请接受我真诚的道歉。
『仿句练习」
18.对于我说的话/做的事,我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信,我并非故意要…。
『仿句练习」
19.我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑,并接受我的道歉。
『仿句练习」
20.对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。
『仿句练习」
21.道歉:
apologize,
,forgiveness(宽恕,原谅),
make up for...
『造句练习」
22.原因:
unexpected event,prior commitment,
『造句练习」
23.补救:reschedule,
alternative plan...
『造句练习」
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训,回国时因为匆忙,把房东Bob的
音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信,要点如下:
1.对自已带走音乐光盘表示歉意。
2.提出解决的办法。
3.再次请求原谅。
注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语
已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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The Possible Version
Dear Bob.
I am writing to make an apology to you for having forgotten to return a music
CD which I borrowed from you last week.Yesterday I came back from England and
found it in my luggage.I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.
The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England,so I believe you can find
another one in your local store.How about your buying another CD by yourself and
I will pay for it?If you cannot find a similar one,I would send it back to you through
a post office.And if there are any other solutions you like,please let me know.
I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness.Please forgive me for any inconvenience
caused.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,你的美国老师Mr.Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。
你因你的父亲去北京出差,母亲生病住院需要人照顾,故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr.
Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下:
1.表示歉意。
2.说明原因。
3.询问是否有录音,以便补听讲座。
注意:
1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.
开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr.Evans,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
、
眷:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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高中英语★精品教学资料」
新课标英语【高考期末】备考系列
The Possible Version
Dear Mr.Evans,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won't be able to attend the lecture on English
history tomorrow afternoon.My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last
night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now.I am afraid that I will have
to take care of her these days.
However,I am actually very interested in English society and history.I wonder
if it is possible for the talk to be recorded,and if so,could I borrow the tape?It would
mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Please allow me to say sorry again.I sincerely hope that you will be able to
understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2021·四川成都摸底测试)假定你是李华。你原定下个周去英国参加笔友Kevin的高中
毕业典礼,现因故无法成行。请给他发一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.深表歉意;2.解释原因;3.衷心祝福。
Dear Kevin,
Yours,
Li Hua
『解题」审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Kevin,
I'm writing to make an apology to you for not being able to attend your graduation
ceremony as promised.
My classmate got hurt while helping some children,and we are going to visit him
next week.That is why I cannot attend punctually.Although I can't come,I would
like to send my best wishes to you.I also want to recommend you to make full use
of your vacation to enrich yourself.
I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies and enjoy yourself at the
ceremony.Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
16
高中英语★精品教学资料」
新课标英语【高考期末】备考系列
【总结】
第一部分:自我介绍,开门见山表明写作意图(表达歉意)
第二部分:详述描述导致需要道歉的事情,具体事件1,具体事件2(说明自己的错误
或不当之处)
第三部分:表达歉意、弥补措施以及希望得到原谅的期待
难度提升◇高考对接
1.(2022年新高考I&II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人
李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1,节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按邮件标准格式作答。
Dear.Caroline,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题】审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
【参考范文(一)】
Dear Caroline,
I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview held by "Talk and Talk",
which is an English programme in our school broadcasting station.高分句型-(节目
介绍)
As you know,our programme starts at 10 a.m.and ends at 11 a.m.every Tuesday.
高分句型三Besides,,the topic is about how to improve our spoken English.You can give
us some suggestions about it.It is certain that all students will benefit much from your
speech.(访谈的时间和话题)
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward
to your early reply.(感谢)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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【参考范文(二)】
Dear Caroline,
I'm Li Hua,a student in charge of
(
the "Talk and Talk"column
of the school radio station.Designed to facilitate
light-hearted dialogues,
our program endeavors to
present diverse cultural insights and life stories,
enjoying widespread popularity among teachers and students alike (=finding favor with
both teachers and students
We earnestly invite you to join us at the radio station for an interview this Friday
afternoon,precisely
at 4 p.m.We'll focus on "Fun and Gains in
Cross-Cultural Communication".I'm firmly convinced that
)your
abundant experiences and insightful perspectives will bring the listeners inspiration and
enjoyment.
Looking forward to your favorable reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2025年闵行一模)假如你是高三学生李华,你校这学期邀请外教T做系列的英语讲
座,上周Tm做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座,同学们感觉很有收获。请你给Tim写一封邮
件,内容包括
(1)表达感谢并说明原因;(2)建议下周讲座的内容。
Dear.Tim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tim,
I'm Li Hua,a Senior Three student.On behalf of
_)my classmates,
I'm writing to convey our sincere thanks
for your lecture on English
vocabulary learning last week.
The practical strategies you introduced,such as contextual memory
and word formation rules,have rid us of inefficient (rid sb.of sth.
rote memorization
and remarkably improved our learning efficiency.
As most of us are weak in English writing,we sincerely hope your next lecture
can centre on
practical writing skills,especially advanced sentence
patterns and paragraph organization.
We are eagerly looking forward to your next wonderful lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
18高中英语★精品教学资料 新课标英语【高考/期末】备考系列
高考英语习作专项训练
内容目录 书信类(一)申请信 邀请信 感谢信 道歉信
对点练习
高频语块造句练习
高频句型仿句练习
好题链接
高考对接
高考真题
优秀范文
挖空翻译
【篇幅有限★更多内容详见主页下篇资料】
一、书信类(邀请/建议/感谢/道歉/申请/咨询)
首段:问候(必要时加自我介绍)+ 直接点明写作目的
中段:核心信息展开(2-3个要点,用逻辑词衔接),为得分主体
尾段:情感表达+礼貌收尾(期待回复/重申意愿)+ 落款
· 邀请信:中段必写「活动时间+地点+核心内容+邀请对方的理由」
· 建议信:中段必写「2-3条具体建议+每条建议的合理性/益处」
· 感谢信:中段必写「对方帮助的具体细节+帮助带来的积极影响」
· 道歉信:中段必写「道歉的具体原因+可行的弥补方案」
· 申请信:中段必写「个人优势(能力/经历)+与申请项目的匹配度」
对点练习
(一)申请信 邀请信 感谢信 道歉信
申请信
【高频语块】
1. apply for
『造句练习』
2. graduate from
『造句练习』
3. major in
『造句练习』
4. be skilled in/at...
『造句练习』
5. be good at..…/be expert in..
『造句练习』
6. have a good command/knowledge
『造句练习』
7. be competent for.
『造句练习』
8. be fit/ /be qualified for
『造句练习』
9. have rich working experience
『造句练习』
10. cooperate with
『造句练习』
11. come out top
『造句练习』
12. be bound to...
『造句练习』
13. good grades
『造句练习』
14. be paid by the hour
『造句练习』
15. present address
『造句练习』
16. working experience
『造句练习』
17. a win-win activity
『造句练习』
【高频句型】
1. I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。
『仿句练习』
2. In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.见……上刊登的贵公司广告,我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。
『仿句练习』
3. I would like to apply for admission to your college.我想申请入贵校学习。
『仿句练习』
4. I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.我想在贵校……系继续深造。
『仿句练习』
5. My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.我的专业是……,我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
『仿句练习』
6. Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field. ……年,我出生于……,毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作,因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。
『仿句练习』
7. That's why I am applying for...这就是我为什么申请的原因。
『仿句练习』
例句:That is the very reason why I submit my application for…(This accounts for my application for…)
8. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.如能给我这个机会,我将不胜感激。
『仿句练习』
9. I hope you can offer me the opportunity.希望能给我这个机会
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10.I hope I can be accepted as a member of ...我希望,能够成为...的一员。
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11. I hope you will kindly send me an application form.希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。
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12. I should be pleased to attend an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself.我将乐意在您方便时接受面试,届时我将进一步介绍自己。
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【好题链接】
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
One Possible Version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2019, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点:
1.表示写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的;
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms. Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【总结】
申请信通常包括三部分内容:
1. 简要介绍自己,说明信息来源,并提出申请;
2. 突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由;
3. 请求给予机会,期望尽快回复。
邀请信
【高频语块】
1. 举办:hold/organize/host(举办)、 (举行)
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2. 时间: (安排)、last from...to...(持续)
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3. 地点相关:auditorium(礼堂)、playground(操场)、studio(演播室)
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4. 形式相关:take the form of(以…… 形式)、 (…… 环节)
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5. 邀请某人做某事
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6. 代表某人
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7. 为了做某事
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8. 计划/打算做某事
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9. 拓展某人的视野
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10. 丰富某人的生活
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11. 接受某人的邀请
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12. 玩得开心
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13. 在学校会议厅
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14. 表演节目
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15. 举办晚会
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16. 学生会
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17. 参加
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18. 给某人留下深刻的印象
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【高频句型】
开篇句型模板
1. Knowing/Hearing that you are enthusiastic about/ are passionate about ... ,I’m writing to invite you to participate in ..
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2. In order to do/ With the purpose of/ With the aim of... ,... holds the activity, ...(活动名称). So/Therefore, as part of it, I’m writing to invite you to ...
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3. It is so great to inform you that ... , a well-organised event arranged by ... , is approaching. I’m writing for the purpose of inviting you to take part in ... .
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正文句型模板(时间、地点、活动)
1.The activity, ... , will take place/ will be held in the lecture hall of our school from 10:00 to 15:00 on March 20th, lasting for 5 hours.(时间可灵活更换)
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2.As is scheduled, ... will start at 9 a.m .
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正文句型模板(活动内容)
1. Not only can you appreciate... , but you can also... ,which will allow you to do...
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2. During ... , there will be a wide range of/varieties of/a diversity of activities (that)you are fascinated by/ are fond of/ are keen on, including sth, sth and so on.
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3. There are a number of/ plenty of activities. First of all, we will admire... .What’s more, all participants will... .Furthermore, we will taste...
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正文句型模板(活动意义)
1. (the activity), which will promote/improve/ enhance your …
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2. (the activity),in which you can … .
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3. Not only can it ...,but also it can ... .
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4. 意义类常用:enrich students’ campus life;broaden students’ horizons;arouse students’ passion for...;raise one’s awareness of...; lead a healthy lifestyle; strengthen one’s sense of ...
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结尾句型模板
1.Let me know as soon as possible if you can come!
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2.We’d appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
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3.Looking forward to your early reply!
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4.I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.
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5.Hope to meet you at the... .
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【好题链接】
假定你是李华,你校近期即将举办一场别开生面的趣味运动会。请给你的英国交换生朋友David写一封邮件,邀请他参加这次活动。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 活动介绍;3. 邀请他有机会来参加。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear David,
In order to increase students’ interest in sports and build up their body,my school will hold the activity, Fun Sports. So I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. Let me tell you more details.
The activity will take place on the playground of our school from 10:00 to 15:00 on March 20th, lasting for 5 hours. During the day, there will be a wide range of activities you are fascinated by, including race, basketball and so on. What interests me most is the game which involves students and teachers. From my perspective,the activity is so meaningful. Not only can it arouse student passion for sports, but also it allows students to take a break from their busy studies.
I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2019全国高考真题)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1. 时间;2. 活动安排;3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Allen,
Knowing that you are a big fan of music, I am writing to invite you to attend the school music festival to be held next Friday afternoon in our school hall.
The festival will consist of a variety of wonderful performances, including singing, dancing and instrumental shows. It is also a great chance for music lovers to communicate and share their passion for art. Since you are skilled at singing, we would be extremely delighted if you could put on a performance at the festival.
I sincerely hope you can join us. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
开篇:问候、交代写信背景/原因和写作目的
正文:活动主题、时间地点、具体流程与安排
结尾:期待对方接受邀请,期盼回信
感谢信
【高频语块】
1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth.
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2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
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3. show/express/ /convey my sincere thanks/ to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
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4.in trouble 陷入困境
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5. make great/good progress 取得很大的进步
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6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
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7. be admitted to/into a university
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8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
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9. How time flies! 时间过得真快!
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10.As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移
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11. thanks to/ /because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
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12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴
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13. 去参观,拜访
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14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
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15.a place of interest
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【高频句型】
1.My true gratitude is beyond any words/description. 任何语言都无法表达我真挚的谢意。
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2.We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us. 我们非常感激你为我们做的一切。
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3.I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。
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4.Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感谢你的盛情招待,我非常期待不久会看到你。
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5.I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。
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6.Thank you so much for your generous help.非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
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7.I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
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8.I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
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9.I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.我想感谢你的帮助。
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10.For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.为此,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
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11.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in ....多亏了你的帮助,在...我取得了了飞速的进步。
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12.Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English. 要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
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13.I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.我太感谢你的帮助了。
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14.I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.如你能接受我诚挚的感谢,我不胜感激。
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15.Your kindness and help will always be remembered.我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
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【好题链接】
(2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,交换生Tracy刚刚结束在你们学校的学习生活,已经返回英国。作为班长,请你根据以下内容用英语写一分感谢信,感谢她一学期以来带给大家的美好回忆:
1. 怀念与她相处的快乐时光;
2. 感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助;
3. 感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍;
4. 欢迎她有机会再来中国。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Tracy,
I am writing to extend my heart-felt thanks for all the beautiful memory that you have brought to us during last term on behalf of our class. The most important reasons for our gratitude are as follows. For one thing, thank you for spending so much time and effort in helping us to learn English. For another, we would like to thank you for all the English books that you have donated to our class.
We really enjoyed the great time that we spent together, and we must thank you again for your generous assistance. If you come back to China again, please let us know. We shall appreciate it very much if you can give us a chance to return your kindness.
Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,正在美国交流学习。你的美国老师 Amy 邀请你下周五下午 3 点到她的班里为美国小学生上一节课, 介绍中国传统艺术国画。请给她回复一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1.接受邀请,表示感谢;
2.国画简介;
3.课前学生需做的准备。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Amy,
I feel honored to be invited to your class to introduce Chinese painting. It is appreciated that you would like to offer me this precious chance to share our traditional culture with your primary students.
Chinese traditional painting refers to paintings painted on Xuan paper or silk in ink by brush made of animal hair. Known as “guo hua”, it is an enduring art form with a 2000-year-long history. For Chinese, painting serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of the lines. It is not only a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.
Before the class, students are expected to prepare a special brush. Besides, special paper is also needed. Hope we’ll have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因;(点明主题)
第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;(说明感谢的原因)
第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。(再次致谢)
【拓展训练】
假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信,以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员,请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1. 表达谢意;
2. 个人感受;
3. 表达信心。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇:
流行病epidemic
疫情 epidemic situation
新型冠状病毒 novel corona virus
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student in Shanxi. I'm writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Corona Virus.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It's widely believed that with our joint efforts,China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
道歉信
【高频语块与句型】
1. 因某事向某人道歉
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2. 向……说对不起
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3. 接受我的道歉
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4. 为某事原谅某人
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5. 并非故意做某事
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6. 弥补;赔偿
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7. 赔偿;偿还
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8. 给你带来不便
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9. 给你带来许多麻烦
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10. 更加小心
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11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误
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12. 应当受到责备
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13. 承担责任
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14. 难以接受的后果
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15. 下不为例
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16. 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。
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17. 请接受我真诚的道歉。
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18. 对于我说的话/做的事, 我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信, 我并非故意要……
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19. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑, 并接受我的道歉。
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20. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。
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21.道歉:apologize, , forgiveness(宽恕;原谅), , make up for...
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22.原因: , unexpected event, prior commitment, ...
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23.补救:reschedule, , , alternative plan...
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【好题链接】
假定你是李华, 寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训, 回国时因为匆忙, 把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信, 要点如下:
1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。
2. 提出解决的办法。
3. 再次请求原谅。
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for having forgotten to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.
The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因你的父亲去北京出差, 母亲生病住院需要人照顾,故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下:
1. 表示歉意。
2. 说明原因。
3. 询问是否有录音, 以便补听讲座。
注意:
1. 词数100左右。
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Evans,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Mr. Evans,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days.
However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2021·四川成都摸底测试)假定你是李华。你原定下个周去英国参加笔友Kevin的高中毕业典礼, 现因故无法成行。请给他发一封电子邮件, 内容包括:
1.深表歉意; 2.解释原因; 3.衷心祝福。
Dear Kevin,
Yours,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Kevin,
I’m writing to make an apology to you for not being able to attend your graduation ceremony as promised.
My classmate got hurt while helping some children, and we are going to visit him next week. That is why I cannot attend punctually. Although I can’t come, I would like to send my best wishes to you. I also want to recommend you to make full use of your vacation to enrich yourself.
I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies and enjoy yourself at the ceremony. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
第一部分:自我介绍,开门见山表明写作意图(表达歉意)
第二部分:详述描述导致需要道歉的事情,具体事件 1,具体事件 2(说明自己的错误或不当之处)
第三部分:表达歉意、弥补措施以及希望得到原谅的期待
难度提升◈高考对接
1.(2022年新高考I&II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按邮件标准格式作答。
Dear.Caroline,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题】审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
【参考范文(一)】
Dear Caroline,
I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview held by "Talk and Talk", which is an English programme in our school broadcasting station.高分句型一(节目介绍)
As you know, our programme starts at 10 a.m.and ends at 11 a.m. every Tuesday.高分句型二Besides, the topic is about how to improve our spoken English.You can give us some suggestions about it.lt is certain that all students will benefit much from your speech.(访谈的时间和话题)
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.(感谢)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文(二)】
Dear Caroline,
I'm Li Hua, a student in charge of ( ) the "Talk and Talk" column of the school radio station. Designed to facilitate ( ) light-hearted dialogues, our program endeavors to ( ) present diverse cultural insights and life stories, enjoying widespread popularity among teachers and students alike(=finding favor with both teachers and students ).
We earnestly invite you to join us at the radio station for an interview this Friday afternoon, precisely ( ) at 4 p.m. We’ll focus on "Fun and Gains in Cross-Cultural Communication". I'm firmly convinced that ( ) your abundant experiences and insightful perspectives will bring the listeners inspiration and enjoyment.
Looking forward to your favorable reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(2025年闵行一模)假如你是高三学生李华,你校这学期邀请外教Tim做系列的英语讲座,上周Tim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座,同学们感觉很有收获。请你给Tim写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达感谢并说明原因;(2)建议下周讲座的内容。
Dear.Tim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tim,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior Three student. On behalf of ( ) my classmates, I’m writing to convey our sincere thanks ( ) for your lecture on English vocabulary learning last week.
The practical strategies you introduced, such as contextual memory ( ) and word formation rules, have rid us of inefficient (rid sb. of sth. ) rote memorization ( ) and remarkably improved our learning efficiency.
As most of us are weak in English writing, we sincerely hope your next lecture can centre on ( ) practical writing skills, especially advanced sentence patterns and paragraph organization.
We are eagerly looking forward to your next wonderful lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
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中段:核心信息展开(2-3个要点,用逻辑词衔接),为得分主体
尾段:情感表达+礼貌收尾(期待回复/重申意愿)+ 落款
· 邀请信:中段必写「活动时间+地点+核心内容+邀请对方的理由」
· 建议信:中段必写「2-3条具体建议+每条建议的合理性/益处」
· 感谢信:中段必写「对方帮助的具体细节+帮助带来的积极影响」
· 道歉信:中段必写「道歉的具体原因+可行的弥补方案」
· 申请信:中段必写「个人优势(能力/经历)+与申请项目的匹配度」
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(一)申请信 邀请信 感谢信 道歉信
申请信
【高频语块】
1. apply for
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2. graduate from
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3. major in
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4. be skilled in/at...
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5. be good at..…/be expert in..
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6. have a good command/knowledge
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7. be competent for.
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8. be fit/ /be qualified for
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9. have rich working experience
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10. cooperate with
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11. come out top
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12. be bound to...
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13. good grades
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14. be paid by the hour
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15. present address
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16. working experience
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17. a win-win activity
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【参考答案】
1. 申请;I plan to apply for a scholarship to support my further study.
2. 从……毕业;She will graduate from Peking University next year.
3. 主修;My cousin majors in computer science at Tsinghua University.
4. 擅长……;He is skilled in playing the piano and often performs at school events.
5. 擅长……/精通……;Lily is good at drawing and is expert in traditional Chinese painting.
6. 精通;掌握;As an interpreter, she has a good command of both English and French.
7. 能胜任……;With years of experience, he is competent for the position of project manager.
8. qualified;适合/胜任……;After training, she is fit/qualified for the demanding job in the marketing department.
9. 有丰富的工作经验;This candidate has rich working experience in international trade, which makes her stand out.
10. 与……合作;We need to cooperate with other teams to finish this complex task on time.
11. 名列前茅;Through hard work, he came out top in the final exam of his grade.
12. 一定……;If you keep practicing every day, you are bound to improve your oral English.
13. 好成绩;To get into a top university, students must maintain good grades throughout high school.
14. 按小时计酬;Part-time workers in this café are paid by the hour, with a rate of 15 yuan per hour.
15. 目前地址;Please write down your present address clearly on the application form.
16. 工作经验;Many employers value working experience more than academic qualifications when hiring.
17. 一项双赢的活动;The volunteer program between our school and the local community is a win-win activity.
【高频句型】
1. I am writing to apply for the post of … advertised in 兹申请刊登在……上的……工作。
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2. In reply to your advertisement in …, I beg to apply for the post of … in your company.见……上刊登的贵公司广告,我谨申请应聘贵公司的……职务。
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3. I would like to apply for admission to your college.我想申请入贵校学习。
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4. I would like to further my studies in …Department of your university.我想在贵校……系继续深造。
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5. My major is…, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.我的专业是……,我了解贵校在上述领域有极好的项目。
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6. Born in …in…, I graduated from…University majoring in …I have been working in …since my graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field. ……年,我出生于……,毕业于……大学……专业。毕业后一直在……工作,因此积累了该领域丰富的经验。
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7. That's why I am applying for...这就是我为什么申请的原因。
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例句:That is the very reason why I submit my application for…(This accounts for my application for…)
8. I will be much grateful if you can give me the opportunity.如能给我这个机会,我将不胜感激。
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9. I hope you can offer me the opportunity.希望能给我这个机会
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10.I hope I can be accepted as a member of ...我希望,能够成为...的一员。
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11. I hope you will kindly send me an application form.希望贵校能给我寄来空白申请表。
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12. I should be pleased to attend an interview at your convenience, when I could give you further details concerning myself.我将乐意在您方便时接受面试,届时我将进一步介绍自己。
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【参考答案】
1. I am writing to apply for the post of editor advertised in China Daily.
2. In reply to your advertisement in People's Daily, I beg to apply for the post of sales manager in your company.
3. I would like to apply for admission to your graduate school.
4. I would like to further my studies in the Computer Science Department of your university.
5. My major is biology, and I understand your university has a good program in this field.
6. Born in Shanghai in 1995, I graduated from Fudan University majoring in economics. I have been working in a multinational company since my graduation, and I have therefore attained rich experience in this field.
7. That's why I am applying for this scholarship.
8. I will be very grateful if you can give me this internship opportunity.
9. I hope you can offer me the opportunity to attend the seminar.
10. I hope I can be accepted as a member of the research team.
11. I hope you will kindly send me an application form.
12. I should be pleased to attend an interview at your convenience, when I could provide more information concerning myself.
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,暑假在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括:
1.写信目的:2.个人优势:3.能做的事情。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
One Possible Version
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, an exchange student from China during this summer vacation. I’m delighted to learn that volunteer students are wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be held in the local art gallery. Now I’m writing to apply for the position.
The reasons for my application are as follows. First of all, having been exposed to foreign teachers since a young age, I can communicate freely with others in English. What’s more, years of being monitor makes me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot to keep the exhibition in order. The most important factor is that my related knowledge will undoubtedly help the audience learn more about the unique Chinese art form.
All in all, my sense of responsibility will make me a qualified volunteer. I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事,请阅读启事,并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。
Volunteers Wanted
Our annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2019, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and English Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi@aef.com.
写作要点:
1.表示写信意图;
2.陈述应征目的;
3.说明应征条件(性格、能力等)。
写作要求:1.邮件词数不少于100;2.开头和结尾部分已写好,不计入总词数;3.可根据情况增加细节,使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。
Dear Ms. Chen ,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Ms. Chen,
I’m Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. I’m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.
I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.
As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.
I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua
【总结】
申请信通常包括三部分内容:
1. 简要介绍自己,说明信息来源,并提出申请;
2. 突出自己特点,具体说明胜任理由;
3. 请求给予机会,期望尽快回复。
邀请信
【高频语块】
1. 举办:hold/organize/host(举办)、 (举行)
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2. 时间: (安排)、last from...to...(持续)
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3. 地点相关:auditorium(礼堂)、playground(操场)、studio(演播室)
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4. 形式相关:take the form of(以…… 形式)、 (…… 环节)
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5. 邀请某人做某事
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6. 代表某人
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7. 为了做某事
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8. 计划/打算做某事
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9. 拓展某人的视野
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10. 丰富某人的生活
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11. 接受某人的邀请
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12. 玩得开心
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13. 在学校会议厅
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14. 表演节目
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15. 举办晚会
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16. 学生会
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17. 参加
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18. 给某人留下深刻的印象
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【参考答案】
1. 举行:stage;Our school will stage a sports meeting next Friday.
2. 安排:schedule;The meeting is scheduled for 9 a.m. tomorrow.
3. 地点相关:auditorium (礼堂)、playground (操场)、studio (演播室);The graduation ceremony will be held in the school auditorium.
4. ……环节:session;The activity includes an interactive session.
5. 邀请某人做某事:invite sb. to do sth.;We invited her to sing at the party.
6. 代表某人:on behalf of sb.;I'm writing to you on behalf of the whole class.
7. 为了做某事:in order to do sth.;In order to pass the exam, he studies hard every day.
8. 计划/打算做某事:plan to do sth.;They plan to visit the museum next week.
9. 拓展某人的视野:broaden one's horizons;Traveling can broaden our horizons.
10. 丰富某人的生活:enrich one's life;Reading can enrich our life.
11. 接受某人的邀请:accept one's invitation;He accepted our invitation to attend the lecture.
12. 玩得开心:have a great time;The children had a great time at the party.
13. 在学校会议厅:in the school conference hall;The speech will be held in the school conference hall.
14. 表演节目:put on performances;The students will put on performances at the evening party.
15. 举办晚会:hold an evening party;Our school will hold an evening party for the New Year.
16. 学生会:the Student Union;The Student Union is organizing a charity event.
17. 参加:take part in;Many students took part in the sports meeting.
18. 给某人留下深刻的印象:leave a deep impression on sb.;The wonderful performance left a deep impression on us.
【高频句型】
开篇句型模板
1. Knowing/Hearing that you are enthusiastic about/ are passionate about ... ,I’m writing to invite you to participate in ..
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2. In order to do/ With the purpose of/ With the aim of... ,... holds the activity, ...(活动名称). So/Therefore, as part of it, I’m writing to invite you to ...
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3. It is so great to inform you that ... , a well-organised event arranged by ... , is approaching. I’m writing for the purpose of inviting you to take part in ... .
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【参考答案】
1. Hearing that you are passionate about traditional Chinese calligraphy, I’m writing to invite you to participate in the calligraphy exhibition to be held in our school next week.
2. With the aim of promoting cultural exchange between China and foreign countries, our school holds the activity "International Culture Festival". Therefore, as part of it, I’m writing to invite you to give a speech about your country’s folk customs.
3. It is so great to inform you that the "Nature Exploration Camp", a well-organised event arranged by the Students’ Union, is approaching. I’m writing for the purpose of inviting you to take part in this meaningful activity.
正文句型模板(时间、地点、活动)
1.The activity, ... , will take place/ will be held in the lecture hall of our school from 10:00 to 15:00 on March 20th, lasting for 5 hours.(时间可灵活更换)
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2.As is scheduled, ... will start at 9 a.m .
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【参考答案】
1. The activity, the English speech contest, will be held in the school auditorium from 14:00 to 17:00 on April 15th, lasting for 3 hours.
2. As is scheduled, the spring sports meeting will start at 8:30 a.m. this Saturday.
正文句型模板(活动内容)
1. Not only can you appreciate... , but you can also... ,which will allow you to do...
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2. During ... , there will be a wide range of/varieties of/a diversity of activities (that)you are fascinated by/ are fond of/ are keen on, including sth, sth and so on.
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3. There are a number of/ plenty of activities. First of all, we will admire... .What’s more, all participants will... .Furthermore, we will taste...
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【参考答案】
1. Not only can you appreciate the beautiful scenery of the ancient town, but you can also learn about its long history and unique culture, which will allow you to gain a deeper understanding of traditional Chinese architecture.
2. During the summer camp, there will be a wide range of activities that you are fond of, including hiking, camping, and team-building games and so on.
3. There are plenty of activities. First of all, we will admire the amazing works of art in the local museum. What’s more, all participants will have the chance to communicate with famous artists. Furthermore, we will taste delicious local snacks at the nearby food street.
正文句型模板(活动意义)
1. (the activity), which will promote/improve/ enhance your …
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2. (the activity),in which you can … .
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3. Not only can it ...,but also it can ... .
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4. 意义类常用:enrich students’ campus life;broaden students’ horizons;arouse students’ passion for...;raise one’s awareness of...; lead a healthy lifestyle; strengthen one’s sense of ...
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【参考答案】
1. The reading sharing session will enhance your literary appreciation ability.
2. The outdoor hiking activity allows you to get close to nature and relax yourself.
3. Not only can it strengthen your environmental awareness, but also it can cultivate your sense of social responsibility.
4. The International Culture Festival greatly enriches students’ campus life and broadens students’ horizons.
结尾句型模板
1.Let me know as soon as possible if you can come!
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2.We’d appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
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3.Looking forward to your early reply!
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4.I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you.
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5.Hope to meet you at the... .
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【参考答案】
1. Let me know as soon as possible if you can attend the meeting!
2. We'd appreciate it if you could send the document to us soon.
3. Looking forward to your wonderful performance!
4. I do hope you will join our party if it is convenient for you.
5. Hope to meet you at the school gate.
【好题链接】
假定你是李华,你校近期即将举办一场别开生面的趣味运动会。请给你的英国交换生朋友David写一封邮件,邀请他参加这次活动。内容包括:
1. 活动目的;2. 活动介绍;3. 邀请他有机会来参加。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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Dear David,
In order to increase students’ interest in sports and build up their body,my school will hold the activity, Fun Sports. So I’m writing to invite you to take part in it. Let me tell you more details.
The activity will take place on the playground of our school from 10:00 to 15:00 on March 20th, lasting for 5 hours. During the day, there will be a wide range of activities you are fascinated by, including race, basketball and so on. What interests me most is the game which involves students and teachers. From my perspective,the activity is so meaningful. Not only can it arouse student passion for sports, but also it allows students to take a break from their busy studies.
I do hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you. Looking forward to your early reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
(2019全国高考真题)假定你是李华,你校将举办音乐节。请写封邮件邀请你的英国朋友Allen参加,内容包括:
1. 时间;2. 活动安排;3. 欢迎他表演节目。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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Dear Allen,
Knowing that you are a big fan of music, I am writing to invite you to attend the school music festival to be held next Friday afternoon in our school hall.
The festival will consist of a variety of wonderful performances, including singing, dancing and instrumental shows. It is also a great chance for music lovers to communicate and share their passion for art. Since you are skilled at singing, we would be extremely delighted if you could put on a performance at the festival.
I sincerely hope you can join us. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
开篇:问候、交代写信背景/原因和写作目的
正文:活动主题、时间地点、具体流程与安排
结尾:期待对方接受邀请,期盼回信
感谢信
【高频语块】
1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth.
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2. be grateful to sb. for sth. 因某事而感激某人
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3. show/express/ /convey my sincere thanks/ to sb. for sth. 向某人表达我诚挚的谢意
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4.in trouble 陷入困境
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5. make great/good progress 取得很大的进步
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6.in/during/over the past/last four years 过去四年
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7. be admitted to/into a university
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8.say thanks to you for helping me 谢谢你帮助我
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9. How time flies! 时间过得真快!
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10.As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by 随着时间的推移
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11. thanks to/ /because of your help 多亏了你的帮助
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12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴
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13. 去参观,拜访
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14. have a better understanding of… 对……有更好的理解
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15.a place of interest
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【参考答案】
1. 因某事/做某事而感谢某人;Thank you for helping me with my English.
2. I am grateful to my teacher for her patient guidance.
3. extend;gratitude;I would like to extend my sincere gratitude to you for your support.
4. When I was in trouble, my friends always came to help me.
5. With the teacher's help, I have made great progress in math.
6. In the past four years, our school has changed a lot.
7. 被一所大学录取;After hard work, he was admitted to a key university.
8. I want to say thanks to you for helping me finish the task.
9. How time flies! It's already the end of the semester.
10. As time goes by, I gradually understand the importance of learning.
11. owing to;Thanks to your help, I finally solved this difficult problem.
12. I enjoyed myself very much at the party last night.
13. pay a visit to;We plan to pay a visit to our former teacher this weekend.
14. After reading this book, I have a better understanding of history.
15. 名胜古迹;There are many places of interest in this ancient city.
【高频句型】
1.My true gratitude is beyond any words/description. 任何语言都无法表达我真挚的谢意。
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2.We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us. 我们非常感激你为我们做的一切。
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3.I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。
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4.Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感谢你的盛情招待,我非常期待不久会看到你。
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5.I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。
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6.Thank you so much for your generous help.非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。
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7.I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。
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8.I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.我很感谢你为我所做的一切。
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9.I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.我想感谢你的帮助。
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10.For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.为此,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。
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11.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in ....多亏了你的帮助,在...我取得了了飞速的进步。
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12.Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English. 要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。
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13.I extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.我太感谢你的帮助了。
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14.I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.如你能接受我诚挚的感谢,我不胜感激。
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15.Your kindness and help will always be remembered.我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。
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【参考答案】
1. My gratitude to you is beyond any description.
2. I thank you and am very grateful for what you did for me.
3. I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me prepare for the exam.
4. Thank you again for your warm hospitality and I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
5. I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely guidance.
6. Thank you so much for your selfless help.
7. I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely support.
8. I am so grateful to you for what you have done for us.
9. I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind advice.
10. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you for your help.
11. Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in math.
12. Without your help, I would not have made so much progress in physics.
13. I extend you again a thousand thanks for your kind help.
14. I would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks for your help.
15. Your kindness and support will always be remembered.
【好题链接】
(2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 表示感谢;
2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;
3. 临别祝愿。
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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Dear Alex,
Learning that you’re leaving for the United States soon, I’m eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.
Honestly speaking, it’s so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. It’s indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,交换生Tracy刚刚结束在你们学校的学习生活,已经返回英国。作为班长,请你根据以下内容用英语写一分感谢信,感谢她一学期以来带给大家的美好回忆:
1. 怀念与她相处的快乐时光;
2. 感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助;
3. 感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍;
4. 欢迎她有机会再来中国。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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Dear Tracy,
I am writing to extend my heart-felt thanks for all the beautiful memory that you have brought to us during last term on behalf of our class. The most important reasons for our gratitude are as follows. For one thing, thank you for spending so much time and effort in helping us to learn English. For another, we would like to thank you for all the English books that you have donated to our class.
We really enjoyed the great time that we spent together, and we must thank you again for your generous assistance. If you come back to China again, please let us know. We shall appreciate it very much if you can give us a chance to return your kindness.
Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华,正在美国交流学习。你的美国老师 Amy 邀请你下周五下午 3 点到她的班里为美国小学生上一节课, 介绍中国传统艺术国画。请给她回复一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1.接受邀请,表示感谢;
2.国画简介;
3.课前学生需做的准备。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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Dear Amy,
I feel honored to be invited to your class to introduce Chinese painting. It is appreciated that you would like to offer me this precious chance to share our traditional culture with your primary students.
Chinese traditional painting refers to paintings painted on Xuan paper or silk in ink by brush made of animal hair. Known as “guo hua”, it is an enduring art form with a 2000-year-long history. For Chinese, painting serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of the lines. It is not only a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.
Before the class, students are expected to prepare a special brush. Besides, special paper is also needed. Hope we’ll have fun together.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因;(点明主题)
第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;(说明感谢的原因)
第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。(再次致谢)
【拓展训练】
假定你是李华,你所在的国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信,以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员,请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。
1. 表达谢意;
2. 个人感受;
3. 表达信心。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。
参考词汇:流行病epidemic 疫情 epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒 novel corona virus
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
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Dear Medical workers,
I am Li Hua, a high middle school student in Shanxi. I'm writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Corona Virus.
In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!
I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It's widely believed that with our joint efforts,China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.
Good luck and stay well!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
道歉信
【高频语块与句型】
1. 因某事向某人道歉
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2. 向……说对不起
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3. 接受我的道歉
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4. 为某事原谅某人
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5. 并非故意做某事
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6. 弥补;赔偿
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7. 赔偿;偿还
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8. 给你带来不便
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9. 给你带来许多麻烦
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10. 更加小心
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11. 犯这样愚蠢的错误
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12. 应当受到责备
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13. 承担责任
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14. 难以接受的后果
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15. 下不为例
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16. 我写这封信是因……向你致歉。
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17. 请接受我真诚的道歉。
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18. 对于我说的话/做的事, 我确实感到很抱歉。但请相信, 我并非故意要……
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19. 我真心希望你能理解我的处境/设身处地地为我考虑, 并接受我的道歉。
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20. 对于造成的不便我再次表示歉意。
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21.道歉:apologize, , forgiveness(宽恕;原谅), , make up for...
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22.原因: , unexpected event, prior commitment, ...
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23.补救:reschedule, , , alternative plan...
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【参考答案】
1. apologize to sb. for sth.;I apologize to you for my late arrival.
2. say sorry to...;You should say sorry to your deskmate for breaking his pen.
3. accept my apology;I hope you can accept my apology for forgetting your birthday.
4. forgive sb. for sth.;Please forgive me for not replying to your message in time.
5. didn't mean to do sth.;I didn't mean to hurt your feelings when I said that.
6. make up for;I will buy you a new book to make up for the one I lost.
7. pay for;You need to pay for the damage you caused to the window.
8. cause you inconvenience;I'm sorry to cause you inconvenience by changing the meeting time.
9. bring you a lot of trouble;My carelessness brought you a lot of trouble during the trip.
10. be more careful;You should be more careful when crossing the busy street.
11. make such a stupid mistake;I regret making such a stupid mistake in the math exam.
12. be to blame;No one but he is to blame for the project's failure.
13. take responsibility;As the team leader, I must take responsibility for the team's performance.
14. unacceptable consequences;His reckless decision led to unacceptable consequences for everyone.
15. not do it again;I promise not to do it again after this mistake.
16. I am writing this letter to apologize to you for...;I am writing this letter to apologize to you for missing your party.
17. Please accept my sincere apology.;Please accept my sincere apology for the delay in delivering your package.
18. I am truly sorry for what I said/did. But please believe that I didn't mean to...;I am truly sorry for what I did yesterday. But please believe that I didn't mean to ignore you.
19. I sincerely hope you can understand my situation/put yourself in my shoes and accept my apology.;I sincerely hope you can put yourself in my shoes and accept my apology for being late.
20. I apologize again for the inconvenience caused.;I apologize again for the inconvenience caused by the last-minute change.
21. apology;regret;He offered a sincere apology and tried to make up for his mistake.
22. unavoidable reason;emergency;Due to an unexpected event, I had to cancel our appointment.
23. compensate;apologize in person;We need to reschedule the meeting and come up with an alternative plan.
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假定你是李华, 寒假中作为交流生短期去英国培训, 回国时因为匆忙, 把房东Bob的音乐光盘夹在行李中带了回来。现在请你给Bob写一封道歉信, 要点如下:
1. 对自己带走音乐光盘表示歉意。
2. 提出解决的办法。
3. 再次请求原谅。
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Bob,
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Bob,
I am writing to make an apology to you for having forgotten to return a music CD which I borrowed from you last week. Yesterday I came back from England and found it in my luggage. I am so sorry that you cannot listen to it at present.
The CD which I borrowed from you is made in England, so I believe you can find another one in your local store. How about your buying another CD by yourself and I will pay for it? If you cannot find a similar one, I would send it back to you through a post office. And if there are any other solutions you like, please let me know.
I am terribly sorry again for my carelessness. Please forgive me for any inconvenience caused.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
假定你是李华, 你的美国老师Mr. Evans要求你们明天下午去听一个英国历史的讲座。你因你的父亲去北京出差, 母亲生病住院需要人照顾,故不能参加。请你写一封信向Mr. Evans道歉并说明情况。要点如下:
1. 表示歉意。
2. 说明原因。
3. 询问是否有录音, 以便补听讲座。
注意:1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。
Dear Mr. Evans,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Mr. Evans,
I am indeed sorry to tell you that I won’t be able to attend the lecture on English history tomorrow afternoon. My mother suddenly fell ill and was taken to hospital last night and my father is on a business trip to Beijing now. I am afraid that I will have to take care of her these days.
However, I am actually very interested in English society and history. I wonder if it is possible for the talk to be recorded, and if so, could I borrow the tape? It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk.
Please allow me to say sorry again. I sincerely hope that you will be able to understand my situation and accept my apology.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
(2021·四川成都摸底测试)假定你是李华。你原定下个周去英国参加笔友Kevin的高中毕业典礼, 现因故无法成行。请给他发一封电子邮件, 内容包括:
1.深表歉意; 2.解释原因; 3.衷心祝福。
Dear Kevin,
Yours,
Li Hua
『解题』审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
The Possible Version
Dear Kevin,
I’m writing to make an apology to you for not being able to attend your graduation ceremony as promised.
My classmate got hurt while helping some children, and we are going to visit him next week. That is why I cannot attend punctually. Although I can’t come, I would like to send my best wishes to you. I also want to recommend you to make full use of your vacation to enrich yourself.
I sincerely hope you will kindly accept my apologies and enjoy yourself at the ceremony. Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【总结】
第一部分:自我介绍,开门见山表明写作意图(表达歉意)
第二部分:详述描述导致需要道歉的事情,具体事件 1,具体事件 2(说明自己的错误或不当之处)
第三部分:表达歉意、弥补措施以及希望得到原谅的期待
难度提升◈高考对接
1.(2022年新高考I&II卷)假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1. 节目介绍;2. 访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按邮件标准格式作答。
Dear.Caroline,
Yours,
Li Hua
【解题】审:体裁、主旨、人称、时态
析:逐条分析作文题目信息,在草稿纸上快速写下关键信息的汉语
注:对关键信息的汉语快速写出英语短语、句型
写:应用连接词,在草稿纸上快速写出短文
改:修改短文
誊:用标准的手写体规范地把短文誊写在试卷的规定区域
【参考范文(一)】
Dear Caroline,
I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview held by "Talk and Talk", which is an English programme in our school broadcasting station.高分句型一(节目介绍)
As you know, our programme starts at 10 a.m.and ends at 11 a.m. every Tuesday.高分句型二Besides, the topic is about how to
improve our spoken English.You can give us some suggestions about it.lt is certain that all students will benefit much from your speech.(访谈的时间和话题)
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.(感谢)
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考范文(二)】
Dear Caroline,
I'm Li Hua, a student in charge of ( 负责,主管 ) the "Talk and Talk" column of the school radio station. Designed to facilitate ( 促进,使便利 ) light-hearted dialogues, our program endeavors to ( 努力,竭力做某事 ) present diverse cultural insights and life stories, enjoying widespread popularity among teachers and students alike(=finding favor with both teachers and students 得到师生的喜爱,青睐 ).
We earnestly invite you to join us at the radio station for an interview this Friday afternoon, precisely ( 精准地 ) at 4 p.m. We’ll focus on "Fun and Gains in Cross-Cultural Communication". I'm firmly convinced that ( 我坚信,我深信… ) your abundant experiences and insightful perspectives will bring the listeners inspiration and enjoyment.
Looking forward to your favorable reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【译文】
亲爱的卡罗琳老师:
您好!我是校广播站“谈话”栏目的负责人李华。我们的节目旨在通过轻松的对话,分享多元文化视角与人生故事,深受师生喜爱。
现诚挚邀请您于本周五下午4点,光临广播站参与我们的访谈。此次访谈的主题为“跨文化交流中的趣事与收获”,相信您的丰富经历和独到见解定能为听众带来启发与乐趣。
期待您的回复!
李华
2.(2025年闵行一模)假如你是高三学生李华,你校这学期邀请外教Tim做系列的英语讲座,上周Tim做了关于英语词汇学习的讲座,同学们感觉很有收获。请你给Tim写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)表达感谢并说明原因;(2)建议下周讲座的内容。
Dear.Tim,
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Tim,
I’m Li Hua, a Senior Three student. On behalf of ( 代表 ) my classmates, I’m writing to convey our sincere thanks ( 表达我们诚挚的感谢 ) for your lecture on English vocabulary learning last week.
The practical strategies you introduced, such as contextual memory ( 语境记忆 ) and word formation rules, have rid us of inefficient (rid sb. of sth. 使某人摆脱某物 ) rote memorization ( 死记硬背 ) and remarkably improved our learning efficiency.
As most of us are weak in English writing, we sincerely hope your next lecture can centre on ( 以…为中心/聚焦于… ) practical writing skills, especially advanced sentence patterns and paragraph organization.
We are eagerly looking forward to your next wonderful lecture.
Yours,
Li Hua
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