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Unit 2 School Life单元同步写作讲义
本单元的主题属于 “人与自我” 范畴,涉及 “校园生活与学习体验”。
该单元旨在引导学生介绍校园日常、课程安排、校园场所、学科喜好以及课后活动。通过描述上学作息、课堂学习、社团活动,分享在校学习感受。校园生活写作可以帮助学生梳理校园经历,表达学习态度,增进师生、同学之间的相互了解,树立积极向上的学习观念。
词汇积累
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1. school life 校园生活
2. subject 科目
3. lesson 课;一节课
4. favourite subject 最喜欢的学科
5. playground 操场
6. library 图书馆
7. gym 体育馆
8. club 社团
9. after-school activities 课外活动
10. school rules 校规
11. have lessons 上课
12. be good at 擅长
13. have lunch 吃午饭
14. on weekdays 在上学日
15. start school 开学;到校上课
16. finish school 放学
17. learn knowledge 学习知识
18. be strict with sb. 对某人严格
19. get ready for class 做好上课准备
20. enjoy school life 享受校园生活
句式积累
开头句:
1. I want to tell you something about my school life.
我想和你聊聊我的校园生活。
2. My school life is colourful and interesting.
我的校园生活丰富多彩又有趣。
3. Let me introduce my school day to you.
让我向你介绍我的上学日常。
中间句:
1. We have six lessons every school day.
我们上学日每天有六节课。
2. My favourite subject is history because it is fun.
我最喜欢历史,因为它很有趣。
3. My teachers are friendly but strict with us.
我的老师们友善,但对我们严格要求。
4. I take part in the football club after school.
放学后我参加足球社团。
5. We have a big playground and a wonderful library in our school.
我们学校有大操场和很棒的图书馆。
结尾句:
1. I love my school and I enjoy my school life very much.
我爱我的学校,十分享受校园生活。
2. Although my school life is busy, I feel happy every day.
虽然校园生活很忙碌,但我每天都很开心。
佳句仿写
1. 教材原句:My favourite subject is history.
仿写:我最喜欢的学科是数学。
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2. 教材原句:We have six lessons a day.
仿写:我们下午有两节课。
____________________________________________________
3. 教材原句:I go to the music club after school.
仿写:放学后我去图书馆读书。
____________________________________________________
典例(25-26七年级上·辽宁盘锦·期中)你校英文报THE NEW START为了了解七年级学生的校园生活情况,下期将开设“My new school life”专栏。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你的校园生活。
1. How many buildings are there in your school? What are they?
2. What’s your favourite subject and why?
3. What do you do at school?
4. What do you think of your school life?
注意: 1. 60词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My new school life
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审题
确定文体:记叙文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:学校建筑(数量与名称)、最喜爱的学科(原因)、在校活动、对校园生活的评价
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:60词左右,不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
谋篇布局
开头
总起句,概括校园生活感受
中间
依次介绍学校建筑、喜爱学科、在校活动
结尾
总结评价,点明感受
佳作展示
My new school life
My new school life is colorful. There are three main buildings in my school: a teaching building, a library and a gym. My favorite subject is English because it is interesting and my teacher is very kind. At school, I often read books in the library and play basketball with friends after class. I think my school life is busy but happy.
佳作赏析
亮点词汇:
1. colorful adj. 丰富多彩的
2. teaching building 教学楼
3. favourite subject 最喜欢的科目
4. after class 课后
5. busy but happy 忙碌但是快乐
高分句型:
1. My favorite subject is English because it is interesting.
我最喜欢英语,因为它很有趣。
2. I think my school life is busy but happy.
我认为我的校园生活忙碌却快乐。
1.(25-26七年级上·江苏南通·期中)阳光中学的英语周系列活动开始了,其中包含以“My School Life”为主题的英文视频制作大赛。假如你是Daniel,准备参加这个比赛。请根据以下提示,完成一段视频文字稿。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 词数80个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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2.(25-26七年级上·湖北武汉·期中)为迎接校园开放日,学校公众号现推出“I Love My Class!”主题征文,旨在展示各班的独特风采与活力。假如你是来自七年级2班的Teng Fei,准备积极投稿,写下对自己新班级的真挚情感。
内容提示:
1.What is your classroom like?
2.Who is your class teacher? What is he/she like?
3.Do you have any new friends?
Something more about your class.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;字数:90词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Love My Class!
Hello, I’m Teng Fei from Class 2, Grade 7.
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3.(25-26七年级上·湖南岳阳·期中)你是否幻想过周围的一切事物都如你所愿,都是你理想中的样子?请以“My dream (梦想的) school”为题写一篇短文。
要点:1. What’s your dream school like?
2. What’s in the school?
3. What’s your favourite place and why do you like it?
4. …
要求:1.短文必须包括上述要点提示,语句通顺,意思连贯。
2.要点中省略部分可适当发挥。
3.词数60左右。
My Dream School
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4.(25-26七年级上·浙江温州·期中)假设你叫Li Ming,你的英国笔友Peter想要了解你的校园生活。请你根据以下信息向他分享你的校园生活及感想。
注意:
1. 稿件需包含以上信息,可适当发挥;
2. 稿件中不得出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;
3. 词数60-80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
5.(25-26七年级上·湖北黄冈·期中)近期,你校将举办一场以“My School, My Home”为题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇英文演讲稿参赛。
要求:
(1)演讲稿须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,逻辑清晰,书写规范;
(3)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(4)词数60词左右,标题、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My School, My Home
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
6.(25-26七年级上·陕西渭南·期中)假如你是李华,你校英文公众号正在面向七年级学生举办主题为“My New School Life”的征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的提示内容,用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的一个新朋友和新学校的情况。
My New School Life
My new friend
● appearance (外貌): tall, short, thin, hair, big eyes, …
● personality (性格): kind, outgoing (外向的), …
● hobby: play sports, painting, …
My new school
● favourite place: sports field, library, …
● activities: do sports, read books, …
要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于50(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
I am Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my new school life.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(25-26七年级上·福建莆田·期中)假定你是某校学生李华,一批来自英国的初中生即将到你们学校进行友好访问。学校正在征集“校园生活小导游”,需要“小导游”用英文向他们介绍丰富多彩的校园生活。请你根据以下内容提示,提前准备好导游词。词数60左右。内容提示:
1. 作息与课程:何时上学/放学;学校设置哪些学科。
2. 午间与课后:在哪用餐;参与什么活动来放松。
3. 真挚邀请:表达对英国朋友到访的期待。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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8.(25-26七年级上·广西崇左·期中)新学期,新起点。为了了解七年级学生的校园生活,你校在英语活动周开展了以“My New School Life”为题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍一下你的校园生活,并谈谈你的感受。内容包括:
1. 校园环境:又大又漂亮,有3栋教学楼,一个图书馆等,最喜爱的地方是……;
2. 课程:每天有七节课,最喜爱的科目是……;
3. 学校有很多俱乐部,想加入的俱乐部是……,老师同学都很友好;
4. 你的感受:在学校总是很开心。
注意:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:classroom building(教学楼),club(俱乐部)
My New School Life
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Let me introduce my school life to you.
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9.(25-26七年级上·江苏淮安·期中)中学时光如诗如歌。假如你是阳光中学的Tom,请根据下面图表提示,以“My Happy School Life”为主题,用英语写一封电子邮件,向你的英国笔友Sandy介绍你的校园生活。
参考词汇:fashion show 时装表演
要求:
1. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,要点全面;
2. 词数80左右,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sandy,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Sunshine Middle School.
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What about your school life? Hope you share it with us!
Yours,
Tom
$Unit 2 School Life单元同步写作讲义
本单元的主题属于 “人与自我” 范畴,涉及 “校园生活与学习体验”。
该单元旨在引导学生介绍校园日常、课程安排、校园场所、学科喜好以及课后活动。通过描述上学作息、课堂学习、社团活动,分享在校学习感受。校园生活写作可以帮助学生梳理校园经历,表达学习态度,增进师生、同学之间的相互了解,树立积极向上的学习观念。
词汇积累
1 / 1
学科网(北京)股份有限公司
1. school life 校园生活
2. subject 科目
3. lesson 课;一节课
4. favourite subject 最喜欢的学科
5. playground 操场
6. library 图书馆
7. gym 体育馆
8. club 社团
9. after-school activities 课外活动
10. school rules 校规
11. have lessons 上课
12. be good at 擅长
13. have lunch 吃午饭
14. on weekdays 在上学日
15. start school 开学;到校上课
16. finish school 放学
17. learn knowledge 学习知识
18. be strict with sb. 对某人严格
19. get ready for class 做好上课准备
20. enjoy school life 享受校园生活
句式积累
开头句:
1. I want to tell you something about my school life.
我想和你聊聊我的校园生活。
2. My school life is colourful and interesting.
我的校园生活丰富多彩又有趣。
3. Let me introduce my school day to you.
让我向你介绍我的上学日常。
中间句:
1. We have six lessons every school day.
我们上学日每天有六节课。
2. My favourite subject is history because it is fun.
我最喜欢历史,因为它很有趣。
3. My teachers are friendly but strict with us.
我的老师们友善,但对我们严格要求。
4. I take part in the football club after school.
放学后我参加足球社团。
5. We have a big playground and a wonderful library in our school.
我们学校有大操场和很棒的图书馆。
结尾句:
1. I love my school and I enjoy my school life very much.
我爱我的学校,十分享受校园生活。
2. Although my school life is busy, I feel happy every day.
虽然校园生活很忙碌,但我每天都很开心。
佳句仿写
1. 教材原句:My favourite subject is history.
仿写:我最喜欢的学科是数学。
____________________________________________________
2. 教材原句:We have six lessons a day.
仿写:我们下午有两节课。
____________________________________________________
3. 教材原句:I go to the music club after school.
仿写:放学后我去图书馆读书。
____________________________________________________
【答案】
1. My favourite subject is maths.
2. We have two lessons in the afternoon.
3. I go to the library to read books after school.
典例(25-26七年级上·辽宁盘锦·期中)你校英文报THE NEW START为了了解七年级学生的校园生活情况,下期将开设“My new school life”专栏。请你根据以下提示,写一篇英语短文,介绍一下你的校园生活。
1. How many buildings are there in your school? What are they?
2. What’s your favourite subject and why?
3. What do you do at school?
4. What do you think of your school life?
注意: 1. 60词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
My new school life
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审题
确定文体:记叙文,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:学校建筑(数量与名称)、最喜爱的学科(原因)、在校活动、对校园生活的评价
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:60词左右,不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
谋篇布局
开头
总起句,概括校园生活感受
中间
依次介绍学校建筑、喜爱学科、在校活动
结尾
总结评价,点明感受
佳作展示
My new school life
My new school life is colorful. There are three main buildings in my school: a teaching building, a library and a gym. My favorite subject is English because it is interesting and my teacher is very kind. At school, I often read books in the library and play basketball with friends after class. I think my school life is busy but happy.
佳作赏析
亮点词汇:
1. colorful adj. 丰富多彩的
2. teaching building 教学楼
3. favourite subject 最喜欢的科目
4. after class 课后
5. busy but happy 忙碌但是快乐
高分句型:
1. My favorite subject is English because it is interesting.
我最喜欢英语,因为它很有趣。
2. I think my school life is busy but happy.
我认为我的校园生活忙碌却快乐。
1.(25-26七年级上·江苏南通·期中)阳光中学的英语周系列活动开始了,其中包含以“My School Life”为主题的英文视频制作大赛。假如你是Daniel,准备参加这个比赛。请根据以下提示,完成一段视频文字稿。
要求:
1. 包含所有要点,可适当补充,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 词数80个左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
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【答案】
例文
My School Life
Hello, everyone! I’m Daniel. Welcome to Sunshine Middle School. I’d like to tell you about my school life.
I have a new deskmate. He is tall with short black hair. He’s very outgoing and helpful, and he loves playing basketball. He often helps me study math. My favourite subject is English, and my English teacher is kind and patient. I like the library best because I can read many books there. We often have fun after-school activities and take wonderful field trips.
I enjoy every day at school. I think my new school life is colourful and meaningful.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍同桌、喜爱学科、最喜欢校园场所、课后活动与校外研学,结尾抒发校园生活感受
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实校名和人名;词数80词左右,使用给定开头
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:使用给定开篇,引出介绍校园生活的主题
主体段:依次介绍同桌、喜爱学科、校园场地、各类校园活动
结尾段:总结感受,评价丰富多彩的校园生活
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:同桌介绍
外形性格:tall with short black hair/thin with big eyes/outgoing/quiet/helpful/warm-hearted等
爱好特长:playing basketball/reading/drawing/playing football等
要点二:喜爱学科
学科选择:English/Math/Chinese/Science等
老师评价:kind/patient/friendly/funny等
要点三:校园场所
场地选择:library/playground/garden/reading room等
活动内容:read many books/borrow storybooks/study quietly等
要点四:校园活动
活动类型:after-school activities/field trips/sports meetings/art clubs等
要点五:结尾感受
评价语句:colourful/meaningful/wonderful/enjoy every day at school等
2.(25-26七年级上·湖北武汉·期中)为迎接校园开放日,学校公众号现推出“I Love My Class!”主题征文,旨在展示各班的独特风采与活力。假如你是来自七年级2班的Teng Fei,准备积极投稿,写下对自己新班级的真挚情感。
内容提示:
1.What is your classroom like?
2.Who is your class teacher? What is he/she like?
3.Do you have any new friends?
Something more about your class.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;字数:90词左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Love My Class!
Hello, I’m Teng Fei from Class 2, Grade 7.
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【答案】例文:
I Love My Class!
Hello, I’m Teng Fei from Class 2, Grade 7. My classroom is very large and modern. There are fifty student desks in the room. Also, there is a smart whiteboard next to the blackboard. Many beautiful pictures are on the wall. Miss Li is our class teacher. She is beautiful and kind. She makes her class very interesting. So we all like her class. In this new class, I have a good friend. His name is Fu Xing. He is clever and loves sports. We often play tennis together. I am so happy to be in this lovely class.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,主体以一般现在时描写班级环境、老师、朋友,搭配简单陈述句抒发对班级的喜爱之情
明确要点:完整覆盖四个板块写作,依次描写教室样貌、班主任及其性格、新朋友、班级其他亮点,每个板块覆盖对应细分要点
确定人称:第一人称
注意事项:正文约90词,标题与开篇语句已给出不计入总词数,禁止透露个人真实信息,行文连贯并适当拓展,文末抒发对班级的真挚喜爱
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:题目给定开篇语句,自我介绍身份,引出要介绍自己的班级
主体段:分层依次介绍教室环境、班主任形象与性格、交到的新朋友,补充班级特色日常小事
结尾段:总结身处这个班级的开心心情,直抒对本班的热爱
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍教室
范文表述:My classroom is very large and modern. There are fifty student desks in the room. Also, there is a smart whiteboard next to the blackboard. Many beautiful pictures are on the wall.
扩展表述:Our classroom is bright and tidy. We have clean desks and comfortable chairs. Some lovely hand-drawings and bookshelves decorate the walls, making it warm.
要点二:介绍班主任
范文表述:Miss Li is our class teacher. She is beautiful and kind. She makes her class very interesting. So we all like her class.
扩展表述:Mr. Wang is our head teacher. He is patient and helpful. Whenever we meet study problems, he always explains them clearly to us.
要点三:介绍是否有新朋友
范文表述:In this new class, I have a good friend. His name is Fu Xing. He is clever and loves sports. We often play tennis together.
扩展表述:I make a close new friend here. She is gentle and good at reading. We usually discuss our lessons and take a walk after class.
要点四:班级的更多细节和结尾感悟
范文表述:I am so happy to be in this lovely class.
扩展表述:Our classmates always help each other and take part in group activities actively. I feel warm and lucky to be in such a great class.
3.(25-26七年级上·湖南岳阳·期中)你是否幻想过周围的一切事物都如你所愿,都是你理想中的样子?请以“My dream (梦想的) school”为题写一篇短文。
要点:1. What’s your dream school like?
2. What’s in the school?
3. What’s your favourite place and why do you like it?
4. …
要求:1.短文必须包括上述要点提示,语句通顺,意思连贯。
2.要点中省略部分可适当发挥。
3.词数60左右。
My Dream School
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【答案】
My Dream School My dream school is big and beautiful. It is surrounded by trees and flowers, so the air is always fresh.
Inside the school, there is a modern library. There is also a large swimming pool and a gym for us to do sports.
My favourite place is the rooftop garden. I can read books there and enjoy the sunshine. I think my dream school is a wonderful place.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:描述性短文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:梦想学校的样子、学校里面有什么、最喜欢的地方及原因
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:词数60左右,语句通顺,意思连贯,省略部分可适当发挥
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总体描述梦想学校的外观与环境
主体段:介绍学校内部设施
结尾段:介绍最喜欢的地方及原因,并总结感受
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:梦想学校的样子
梦想学校的样子:is big and beautiful/is surrounded by trees and flowers/the air is always fresh/a beautiful and vibrant place等
要点二:学校里面有什么
设施:there is a modern library with thousands of books/there is also a large swimming pool/a gym for us to do sports/a big playground等
要点三:最喜欢的地方及原因
最喜欢的地方及原因:my favourite place is the rooftop garden/can read books there/enjoy the sunshine/see the stars等
4.(25-26七年级上·浙江温州·期中)假设你叫Li Ming,你的英国笔友Peter想要了解你的校园生活。请你根据以下信息向他分享你的校园生活及感想。
注意:
1. 稿件需包含以上信息,可适当发挥;
2. 稿件中不得出现真实的校名、姓名等信息;
3. 词数60-80词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about my school life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】Dear Peter,
I’m glad to tell you about my school life. I’m Li Ming, a middle school student who enjoys spending time with my classmates. I join the Robot Club and we design and build small robots there. It’s both fun and challenging. My favorite subject is English because it allows me to communicate with friends like you and learn about different cultures. I really love my school life—it’s busy but full of joy.
Yours,
Li Ming
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体: 书信(电子邮件)。这是一篇向笔友介绍自己校园生活的信件,属于应用文。
明确要点:
自我介绍 (Self-introduction): 需要包含基本信息(如身份、性格或喜好等)。
最喜欢的学科 (Favorite subject): 明确指出是哪门学科,并说明原因。
社团 (Club): 说明参加了什么社团,在社团里做什么,以及感受如何。
确定人称: 第一人称(I / my / we)为主,因为是在向对方介绍“我”的生活。
确定时态: 描述客观事实和日常活动,主要使用一般现在时。
注意事项: 稿件中不得出现真实的校名、姓名等信息(题目已给定署名 Li Ming,信中不可再出现真实校名)。
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构(书信体):
开头(已给出): Dear Peter, I'm glad to tell you about my school life. (引出话题)
主体段:
自我介绍: 简单说明自己是中学生,可以提及性格或日常喜好(如和同学相处)。
社团活动: 介绍参加的社团(如 Robot Club, Reading Club 等),在社团里的具体活动(design and build robots, read books 等),以及感受(fun, challenging 等)。
最喜欢的学科: 说明科目(English, Math 等)及喜欢的原因(如能交流、有趣、有用等)。
结尾: 总结对校园生活的总体感受(busy but happy / full of joy 等),并自然收尾。
落款: Yours, Li Ming (已给出)。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:自我介绍 (Self-introduction)
身份: a middle school student
特点/喜好: enjoys spending time with my classmates / friendly and helpful 等。
要点二:社团 (Club)
社团名称: Robot Club / English Club / Basketball Club 等。
活动内容: design and build small robots / practice speaking English / play basketball等。
活动感受: It's both fun and challenging./ I learn a lot from it.等。
要点三:最喜欢的学科 (Favorite subject)
学科选择: English / Science / Math 等。
喜欢原因: allows me to communicate with friends like you and learn about different cultures / it is interesting and useful 等。
总结感受:
it's busy but full of joy / I really love my school life。
5.(25-26七年级上·湖北黄冈·期中)近期,你校将举办一场以“My School, My Home”为题的演讲比赛。请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇英文演讲稿参赛。
要求:
(1)演讲稿须包含以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)语句通顺,逻辑清晰,书写规范;
(3)文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名;
(4)词数60词左右,标题、开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My School, My Home
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
【答案】例文
My School, My Home
Good morning, everyone!
I’m happy to tell you something about my school. My school is big. There are a lot of buildings in it. My favourite building is the library. It’s next to the classroom building. I often read books there. I like sports and play basketball and football after school. My teachers and classmates are nice. I like them very much. My school is my second home. I love my school.
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:演讲稿,属于介绍类应用文,全文以一般现在时为主
明确要点:必须涵盖校园建筑、运动项目、师生人物,紧扣标题“My School, My Home”表达校园如家的情感
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:总起句,引出要介绍自己的学校,简单介绍校园建筑
主体:分层介绍校园运动、校内老师与同学两类核心要点
结尾:升华主题,点明学校是第二个家,抒发喜爱之情
第三步:要点展开
要点一:校园建筑
地点选择:library/the classroom building/gym
位置描述:next to the classroom building/near the playground
活动内容:often read books there/play all kinds of sports there
要点二:运动项目
运动选择:play basketball and football/play table tennis
活动时间:after school/during class break
要点三:校内人物
人物选择:My teachers and classmates are nice/cleaners are kind
细节说明:I like them very much/I love them
作用效果:My school is my second home/cleaners also make the school feel like a warm home
6.(25-26七年级上·陕西渭南·期中)假如你是李华,你校英文公众号正在面向七年级学生举办主题为“My New School Life”的征文活动。请你根据以下表格中的提示内容,用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的一个新朋友和新学校的情况。
My New School Life
My new friend
● appearance (外貌): tall, short, thin, hair, big eyes, …
● personality (性格): kind, outgoing (外向的), …
● hobby: play sports, painting, …
My new school
● favourite place: sports field, library, …
● activities: do sports, read books, …
要求:
1. 短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
2. 语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
3. 短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于50(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
I am Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my new school life.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
例文
I am Li Hua. I want to tell you something about my new school life. I have a new friend named Tom. He is tall and thin with big eyes and short hair. He is very kind and outgoing. He likes playing sports and painting in his free time.
My new school is beautiful. My favourite place is the sports field because I can do sports with my classmates there. I also like the library. It is quiet, and I often read books there.
I really love my new school life.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:记叙文,时态主要使用一般现在时
明确要点:新朋友的外貌、性格、爱好,以及新学校中自己最喜爱的地方和相关的日常活动
确定人称:第一人称为主(I/we/my),介绍朋友时使用第三人称单数(he/she/his/her)
注意事项:文中不得出现考生的真实个人信息;词数不少于50词
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:进行简要自我介绍并直接引出新学校生活的话题(已给出)
主体段:分别从人、校两方面展开。首先详细描写新朋友的外貌、性格和兴趣爱好;接着介绍新学校中自己最喜欢的地方,并描述在这些地方开展的活动
结尾段:概括和升华情感,表达对当前新学校生活的喜爱之情
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:介绍新朋友的外貌、性格及爱好
外貌特征:tall and thin/big eyes/short hair/short/strong/long black hair等
性格特点:kind and outgoing/friendly/helpful/quiet/active/shy等
日常爱好:playing sports/painting/reading/playing the piano/listening to music等
要点二:描写新学校里最喜爱的地方及相应活动
场所选择:sports field/library/classroom/music room/art building等
场所活动:do sports/read books/run with friends/borrow some books/play football等
情感总结:love my new school life/have a good time/happy with my classmates/enjoy my school days等
7.(25-26七年级上·福建莆田·期中)假定你是某校学生李华,一批来自英国的初中生即将到你们学校进行友好访问。学校正在征集“校园生活小导游”,需要“小导游”用英文向他们介绍丰富多彩的校园生活。请你根据以下内容提示,提前准备好导游词。词数60左右。内容提示:
1. 作息与课程:何时上学/放学;学校设置哪些学科。
2. 午间与课后:在哪用餐;参与什么活动来放松。
3. 真挚邀请:表达对英国朋友到访的期待。
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
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【答案】
例文
Welcome to our school! We start classes at 8:00 am and finish at 5:00 pm. There are many interesting subjects, such as Chinese, Math and English. For lunch, we eat in the dining hall. After school, we often play sports or read books to relax. School life is colorful. I hope you will enjoy your stay here and learn a lot. Welcome!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:导游介绍发言稿,时态以一般现在时为主
明确要点: 1. 作息与课程:上下课时间、校内开设学科; 2. 午间与课后:午餐地点、课后放松活动; 3. 真挚邀请:表达期待英国友人来访、祝对方在此过得愉快;
确定人称:第一人称we,面向来访英国学生使用第二人称you
注意事项:全部提示信息必须包含,可适度拓展;行文通顺连贯;禁止出现真实姓名、校名、地名
[第二步:构思布局]
开头:使用欢迎语开篇,直接切入校园作息课程介绍,交代上午八点上课、下午五点放学,列举语文、数学、英语等特色学科,完成第一处要点;
主体:承接校园日常,说明午餐在学校食堂就餐,课后通过运动、阅读两类活动放松身心,完整对应午间、课后活动要点;
结尾:总结校园生活丰富多彩,真诚表达期待对方在此度过愉快时光、收获新知,再次发出欢迎,完成邀请板块,首尾呼应导游介绍的交际场景。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:作息与课程
核心短语:start classes at 8:00 am/finish at 5:00 pm/many interesting subjects/Chinese, Math and English/begin lessons at eight in the morning/end school at five p.m./different kinds of fun subjects/main subjects including Chinese, Math and English
要点二:午间与课后活动
核心短语:eat in the dining hall/play sports or read books to relax/have lunch in the school canteen/do sports and read for fun after class
要点三:欢迎与邀请
核心短语:enjoy your stay here/learn a lot/Welcome/have a wonderful time at our school/gain plenty of new knowledge/warmly welcome you all
8.(25-26七年级上·广西崇左·期中)新学期,新起点。为了了解七年级学生的校园生活,你校在英语活动周开展了以“My New School Life”为题的征文活动。假设你是李华,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍一下你的校园生活,并谈谈你的感受。内容包括:
1. 校园环境:又大又漂亮,有3栋教学楼,一个图书馆等,最喜爱的地方是……;
2. 课程:每天有七节课,最喜爱的科目是……;
3. 学校有很多俱乐部,想加入的俱乐部是……,老师同学都很友好;
4. 你的感受:在学校总是很开心。
注意:
1. 词数不少于80词;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4. 开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:classroom building(教学楼),club(俱乐部)
My New School Life
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Let me introduce my school life to you.
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【答案】例文
My New School Life
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Let me introduce my school life to you.
My school is big and beautiful. We have three classroom buildings and a modern library with many kinds of books. My favourite place is the library. I often read books about science there. We have seven classes every day. My favourite subject is English because it is very interesting. There are many clubs in our school. I like reading so I want to join the Book Club. My teachers and classmates here are all very nice and friendly. I love them very much.
This is my new school life. I am always happy at school. What is your new school life like? Can you tell me about it?
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,以一般现在时为主,客观介绍自己的初中新校园生活
明确要点:依次介绍校园环境、日常课程、学校俱乐部,最后抒发在校的开心感受
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:内容必须覆盖题干全部4点要求,词数≥80词,不能出现真实校名和人名,行文逻辑连贯
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构
开头段:题目给定开篇句,引出自我介绍+将要介绍校园生活
中间段:分三层展开:①校园整体环境 ②每日课程安排+最喜欢的学科 ③学校俱乐部、师生相处氛围
结尾段:总结自己对校园的感受
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:校园环境阐述
常用表达:big and beautiful/three classroom buildings/library/my favourite place/garden/playground等
要点二:学习与校园生活
常用表达:have seven classes every day/favourite subject/interesting and useful/different kinds of clubs/nice and friendly/various/dancing club等
要点三:个人感受
常用表达:always happy/warm school life/enjoy my school days等
9.(25-26七年级上·江苏淮安·期中)中学时光如诗如歌。假如你是阳光中学的Tom,请根据下面图表提示,以“My Happy School Life”为主题,用英语写一封电子邮件,向你的英国笔友Sandy介绍你的校园生活。
参考词汇:fashion show 时装表演
要求:
1. 语言通顺,意思连贯,条理清楚,要点全面;
2. 词数80左右,文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sandy,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Sunshine Middle School.
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What about your school life? Hope you share it with us!
Yours,
Tom
【答案】
Dear Sandy,
I would like to tell you something about my life at Sunshine Middle School.
Our school is very beautiful. There are three classroom buildings, a library and a new playground in it. We have more subjects now. My favorite subject is geography because it helps me know more about the world. Also, we have many colorful after-school activities, such as sports meetings and fashion shows. Our teachers are kind and they always help us with our problems. My classmates are friendly and we learn from each other. I feel very happy and lucky to study here.
What about your school life? Hope you share it with us!
Yours,
Tom
【详解】写作步骤:
第一步:审题立意
确定文体:应用文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍学校设施、学习科目、课外活动、师生关系以及个人感受
确定人称:第一人称、第三人称(I、 Our school)
注意事项:词数在80个左右
第二步:构思布局
三段式结构:
开头段:点明主题, 向对方介绍自己的校园生活
主体段:介绍学校设施、学习科目、课外活动、师生关系以及个人感受
结尾段:询问对方的校园生活
第三步:要点展开
要点一:学校的设施:classroom building/teaching building/basketball court/football field/dining hall
丰富的课外活动:sports meeting/basketball match/fashion show/singing competition
要点二:最喜欢的科目:My favorite subject is/The subject I like best is
喜欢的原因:help me know more about the world/can learn a lot of new knowledge from/can open my eyes and broaden my horizons
要点三:对校园生活的喜爱之情:I feel happy and lucky to study in this school/My school life brings me lots of warmth and happiness/I treasure my colorful school life.
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