Unit4 Fun in the Sun! 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年仁爱科普版英语七年级上册

**基本信息** 以季节与运动为主题，构建“素材-句型-方法-训练”四维体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|3类主题词汇+高频搭配+功能表达|主题词汇分类记忆，功能表达场景化运用|从基础词汇到搭配再到功能句，层层递进夯实语言基础| |黄金句型库|开头/主体/结尾句型+8组句型升级|基础句到升级句的扩展技巧，通过细节描写丰富表达|按写作结构（引入-描述-总结）构建句型网络，提升表达准确性| |高分写作方法|5步写作法（审题-结构-内容-语言-检查）|三段式结构搭建，现在进行时与一般现在时灵活运用|以“主题明确-场景生动-感受真实”为逻辑主线，培养写作思维| |阶梯训练|句子训练（3级）+篇章训练（2篇）|汉译英→句型仿写→句子升级→篇章写作的阶梯式训练|从单句到篇章，逐步提升语言组织与逻辑构建能力，契合中考写作要求|

Unit 4 Fun in the Sun! 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 季节与天气 spring 春天 summer 夏天 autumn 秋天 winter 冬天 warm 温暖的 hot 炎热的 cool 凉爽的 cold 寒冷的 sunny 阳光充足的 cloudy 多云的 rainy 下雨的 windy 多风的 snowy 下雪的 户外活动与运动 go hiking 去远足 go swimming 去游泳 go skiing 去滑雪 go fishing 去钓鱼 fly kites 放风筝 have a picnic 野餐 make a snowman 堆雪人 play football 踢足球 play basketball 打篮球 play ping-pong 打乒乓球 play badminton 打羽毛球 do Tai Chi 打太极 play jianzi 踢毽子 run 跑步 ride a bike 骑自行车 walk 散步 动作与感受 enjoy 享受 love 爱 like 喜欢 feel 感觉 make 使 keep 保持 healthy 健康的 happy 高兴的 relaxed 放松的 excited 兴奋的 2. 高频搭配 in spring / summer 在春天/夏天 on sunny days 在晴天 fly kites 放风筝 go hiking 去远足 go swimming 去游泳 have a picnic 野餐 make a snowman 堆雪人 play with sb 和某人玩耍 have fun 玩得开心 keep healthy 保持健康 be good for health 对健康有益 all year round 全年 traditional Chinese sport 中国传统运动 warm up 热身 on the playground 在操场上 in the park 在公园里 3. 写作功能表达 描述季节与天气 My favorite season is ... 我最喜欢的季节是…… I like ... best. 我最喜欢…… ... is my favorite time of the year. ……是我一年中最喜欢的时光。 The weather in ... is ... ……季节的天气是…… It’s ... today. 今天天气…… It is the best time to ... 是做……的最佳时节。 What a beautiful / sunny / lovely day！ 多么美好/阳光/可爱的日子啊！ 描述活动与场景 I often ... with ... 我经常和……一起…… We like ... in ... 我们喜欢在……做…… Look！ ... is / are ... now. 看！……正在…… There are many people ... 有很多人…… Some are ... and some are ... 一些人在……另一些人在…… ... is a good place to ... ……是做……的好地方。 We usually ... in the morning / afternoon. 我们通常在上午/下午…… 介绍传统运动 ... has a long history in China. ……在中国有悠久的历史。 It is a kind of traditional Chinese sport. 它是一种中国传统运动。 People of all ages can do it. 各个年龄段的人都可以做。 It helps people keep fit and relax. 它帮助人们保持健康、放松身心。 Many people enjoy doing ... every day. 很多人每天都喜欢做…… 表达喜好与感受 ... makes me happy / healthy. ……让我快乐/健康。 I enjoy ... very much. 我非常喜欢…… It is fun / exciting to ... 做……很有趣/令人兴奋。 I feel ... after ... 做……后我感到…… ... brings me joy and health. ……给我带来快乐和健康。 There is nothing better than ... in ... 在……没有比……更好的了。 It is a wonderful way to relax. 这是一种放松的好方式。 Doing ... makes me feel full of energy. 做……让我感到充满活力。 发出邀请与倡议 Would you like to ... with me？ 你愿意和我一起去……吗？ Let’s ... together. 让我们一起……吧。 I hope you can join us. 我希望你能加入我们。 Why not ... with us？ 为什么不和我们一起……呢？ 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 介绍季节类： My favorite season is spring. 我最喜欢的季节是春天。 I like summer best. 我最喜欢夏天。 Among all the seasons, I like autumn most. 在所有季节中，我最喜欢秋天。 Spring is my favorite time of the year. 春天是我一年中最喜欢的时光。 介绍运动/活动类： I enjoy doing sports in my free time. 我喜欢在空闲时间做运动。 My favorite outdoor activity is flying kites. 我最喜欢的户外活动是放风筝。 Playing basketball is my favorite sport. 打篮球是我最喜欢的运动。 There are many outdoor activities in different seasons. 不同的季节有很多户外活动。 I like to go hiking with my family. 我喜欢和家人一起去远足。 2. 主体句型 天气与自然描写： In spring, the weather is warm and everything turns green. 春天，天气暖和，万物变绿。 Flowers bloom everywhere and the world becomes very beautiful. 花儿到处盛开，世界变得非常美丽。 The weather is hot in summer, but we can have a lot of fun. 夏天的天气很热，但我们可以玩得很开心。 It is cool and sunny in autumn, a good season for outdoor activities. 秋天凉爽晴朗，是户外活动的好季节。 Winter is cold, but we can play with snow and make snowmen. 冬天很冷，但我们可以玩雪和堆雪人。 活动描写： I often go hiking with my family on weekends. 我周末经常和家人一起去远足。 We enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views. 我们享受新鲜的空气和美丽的景色。 Look！ I am flying a kite in the park. 看！我正在公园里放风筝。 There are many people in the park. Some are walking, and some are having a picnic. 公园里有很多人。一些人在散步，另一些人在野餐。 My father is playing basketball with his friends. 我爸爸正在和他的朋友们打篮球。 We often play together on the playground after school. 放学后我们经常在操场上一起玩。 传统运动介绍： Tai Chi is a traditional Chinese sport. 太极是一项中国传统运动。 Jianzi has a long history in China. 踢毽子在中国有悠久的历史。 People of all ages enjoy playing jianzi. 各个年龄段的人都喜欢踢毽子。 It is a wonderful way to keep healthy. 这是一种保持健康的好方式。 3. 结尾句型 表达喜爱： I love spring because it makes me feel happy. 我爱春天，因为它让我感到快乐。 There is nothing better than enjoying nature in spring. 没有比在春天享受大自然更好的了。 Doing outdoor activities is a lot of fun. 做户外活动很有趣。 Sports can keep us healthy and strong. 运动能让我们健康强壮。 发出邀请： Would you like to join us？ 你愿意加入我们吗？ Let’s go hiking together next weekend. 下周末我们一起去远足吧。 Why not come and enjoy the fun with us？ 为什么不和我们一起来享受乐趣呢？ 总结感悟： I enjoy every season and every sport. 我享受每个季节和每项运动。 I will keep doing sports and stay healthy. 我会坚持做运动，保持健康。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 I like spring. 我喜欢春天。 My favorite season is spring. The weather is warm and everything turns green. 我最喜欢的季节是春天。天气暖和，万物变绿。 I go hiking on weekends. 我周末去远足。 I often go hiking with my family on weekends. We enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views. 我周末经常和家人一起去远足。我们享受新鲜的空气和美丽的景色。 It is sunny today. 今天阳光明媚。 It is sunny and warm today. It is a good day for outdoor activities. 今天阳光明媚，天气温暖。是进行户外活动的好日子。 I am flying a kite. 我正在放风筝。 Look！ I am flying a kite in the park. The kite is flying higher and higher in the blue sky. 看！我正在公园里放风筝。风筝在蓝天上越飞越高。 There are many people. 有很多人。 There are many people in the park. Some are walking, and some are having a picnic. 公园里有很多人。一些人在散步，另一些人在野餐。 I like sports. 我喜欢运动。 I like sports because they can keep us healthy and strong. Doing sports is a lot of fun. 我喜欢运动，因为它们能让我们健康强壮。做运动很有趣。 Tai Chi is a sport. 太极是一项运动。 Tai Chi is a traditional Chinese sport. People of all ages enjoy doing it every morning. 太极是一项中国传统运动。各个年龄段的人都喜欢每天早上做。 Spring is nice. 春天很好。 Spring is a season of new life and hope. There is nothing better than enjoying nature in spring. 春天是一个充满新生命和希望的季节。没有比在春天享受大自然更好的了。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作任务为“写一篇关于自己最喜欢的季节或运动的短文”。写作内容应包括最喜欢的季节或运动是什么、天气特点、自然景色、活动场景和同伴，以及自己的感受。 写作形式： 短文（Short Passage） 写作对象： 老师或班级同学 时态要求： 一般现在时（描述习惯和事实）和现在进行时（描述正在进行的动作）并用 Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：引出主题 点明自己最喜欢的季节或运动是什么，交代天气或时间背景。 第二段：描写场景与活动 描述天气和自然环境，使用现在进行时描写正在进行的活动，说明和谁一起、在哪里。 第三段：表达感受 说明这项活动带来的快乐或好处，表达自己的喜爱之情。 Step 3 丰富内容 加入具体的环境描写和人物动作，让画面更生动。例如不只写“I like spring.”，还要写“In spring, the weather is warm and flowers bloom everywhere.” Step 4 提升语言 使用现在进行时（am/is/are + doing）、人称代词宾格（me, him, her, us）、连接词（because, so, and）和描述性形容词，使文章生动具体。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整（主题→天气→活动→感受）、结构是否清晰（三段式）、现在进行时是否正确、人称代词宾格是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我最喜欢的季节是春天。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 春天的天气温暖，万物变绿。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 我经常周末和家人一起去远足。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 看！我正在公园里放风筝。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我喜欢春天，因为它让我感到快乐。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：My favorite season is ...（介绍最喜爱的季节） 例句： My favorite season is spring. （1）我最喜欢的季节是夏天。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我最喜欢的季节是冬天。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：The weather is ... in ...（描述季节天气） 例句： The weather is warm in spring. （1）夏天的天气炎热。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）秋天的天气凉爽。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：I often ... with ...（描述经常做的活动） 例句： I often go hiking with my family. （1）我经常和我的朋友一起打篮球。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我经常和我的同学一起放风筝。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：Look！ ... is / are doing ...（描述正在进行的动作） 例句： Look！ I am flying a kite in the park. （1）看！孩子们正在游泳池里游泳。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）看！我的朋友们正在操场上踢足球。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：... is a traditional Chinese sport.（介绍传统运动） 例句： Tai Chi is a traditional Chinese sport. （1）踢毽子是一项中国传统运动。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）乒乓球是一项中国传统运动。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：... makes me ...（表达感受） 例句： Spring makes me feel happy. （1）运动让我感到健康。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）夏天让我感到兴奋。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：I like spring. 升级句：My favorite season is spring. The weather is warm and everything turns green. 1. 基础句：I like summer. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I like playing basketball. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I go hiking on weekends. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：The weather is hot. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：We are playing football. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：Sports are good. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．生命在于运动。假如你被学校评为“运动之星”(Sports Star)，学校邀请你在本周五的集会上和同学们分享你的运动情况，请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。 提示： 1. 你最喜欢什么运动？你平时和谁一起从事这项运动？ 2. 你们学校的体育课怎么样？你认为体育课的价值在哪里？ 3. 作为“运动之星”，关于体育运动，你有什么好的建议给大家？ 要求： 1. 词数80—100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 内容可以适当的发挥。 Hello, everyone! I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你们班最近就“我最喜欢的季节”展开讨论，以下是你们小组成员的相关情况。请根据此写一篇60词左右的英语短文。开头已给出，不计入词数。 组员 最喜欢的季节 原因 Li Hua 春季 气候温暖，景色宜人 Chen Ming 夏季 和家人去海边度假 Wang Yu 秋季 秋高气爽，适合野餐 I （请补充……） （请补充……） Our group members have different favourite seasons. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. My favorite season is spring. 2. In spring, the weather is warm and everything turns green. 3. I often go hiking with my family on weekends. 4. Look! I am flying a kite in the park. 5. I love spring because it makes me feel happy. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）My favorite season is summer. （2）My favorite season is winter. 句型 2 （1）The weather is hot in summer. （2）The weather is cool in autumn. 句型 3 （1）I often play basketball with my friends. （2）I often fly kites with my classmates. 句型 4 （1）Look! The children are swimming in the swimming pool. （2）Look! My friends are playing football on the playground. 句型 5 （1）Jianzi is a traditional Chinese sport. （2）Ping-pong is a traditional Chinese sport. 句型 6 （1）Doing sports makes me feel healthy. （2）Summer makes me feel excited. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：My favorite season is summer. The weather is hot and I can go swimming every day. 2. 升级句：I like playing basketball because it is exciting and it can keep me healthy. 3. 升级句：I often go hiking with my family on weekends. We enjoy the fresh air and beautiful views. 4. 升级句：The weather is hot in summer, but I can eat ice cream and go swimming with my friends. 5. 升级句：Look! We are playing football on the playground. Everyone is having great fun. 6. 升级句：Sports are good for our health. They can keep us strong and make us happy. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1． 例文 Hello, everyone! I’m happy to be a Sports Star this term. My favorite sport is basketball. I often play it with my classmates after school. It helps me relax and build stronger friendships with them. Our school offers great PE classes. We learn different sports, which makes PE fun and valuable. It helps us stay healthy and teaches teamwork. As a Sports Star, I suggest you find a sport you enjoy. Start with easy activities like running or jumping rope. Remember, doing sports regularly is the key. Let’s move together for a healthier life! Thank you! 2．例文 Our group members have different favourite seasons. Li Hua likes spring best because it’s warm and beautiful. Chen Ming enjoys summer. He always spends holidays at the seaside with his parents. Wang Yu loves autumn—the clear sky is perfect for picnics. As for me, winter is my favourite. I can have snowball fights and make snowmen with my friends. It’s so much fun! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $