Unit 5 Look into the future（写作突破专项训练）英语外研版三起五年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“未来生活”为主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-写作实践”三阶训练体系，系统培养英语语言表达与逻辑组织能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|2个主题示例|提炼“开篇引入-总述功能-细节刻画-补充说明”写作步骤，含问答式功能描述、科技元素融合等技巧|从话题引入到内容展开，形成“点-线-面”逻辑链条| |核心词汇与句型|4类词汇+3类句型|按“场景-功能-评价”分类词汇句型，配套易错点（will用法、固定搭配等）解析|词汇为基础、句型为框架，支撑写作内容构建| |写作任务与范文|2个任务+4篇范文|提供基础/提高双版范文，示范从“畅想-描述-感受”的表达逻辑|从模仿应用到自主创作，实现语言能力与思维品质的递进培养|

Unit 5 Look into the future 写作方法指引- 原文指路 This robot is so cool! 开篇引入：直接表达对描写对象的喜爱，快速引出未来机器人的话题 It will help people a lot. 总述功能：概括机器人的核心价值，为后续具体功能描写做铺垫 Will it do our chores? Yes. We will have more free time. 功能+价值：通过问答形式，清晰说明机器人的一项具体功能及给生活带来的便利 Will it take care of pets? Yes, it will keep an eye on the pets all day. 细节刻画：详细描述机器人照顾宠物的具体行为，让内容更真实生动 Well … will it do my homework? No, it won’t! 补充说明：点明机器人的功能边界，使对机器人的描述更全面客观 In one hundred years, What will we eat? 引发畅想：以设问开篇，激发对未来食物的想象，自然引出写作主题 The world will have foods Of all kinds! 总述特点：概括未来食物种类丰富的核心特征，奠定描写基调 Healthy and yummy? That’s right! 突出优势：强调未来食物健康美味的特点，升华对未来食物的正面认知 We will use 3-D printing to make food. 科技融合：说明3D打印技术在未来食物制作中的应用，体现写作的科技元素 一、核心词汇 1. 未来生活场景类 future, city, robot, flying car, moon, Mars, sea, farm, pet, free time 2. 日常活动类 chores, homework, games, sports, fun 3. 科技应用类 3-D printing, pen, shape, pill, body 4. 食物相关类 food, cake, pie, fry, egg, meat, healthy, yummy 二、参考句型 1. 描述未来事物的功能 It will help people a lot. It will do our chores. It will keep an eye on the pets all day. It will know all kinds of games and sports. 2. 描述未来生活场景 People will live on Mars in the future. We will drive flying cars to the moon in an hour. We will use 3-D printing to make food. We may only need to eat a pill to get what our bodies need. 3. 表达对未来的评价 The future of food is bright! 3-D printing is a good thing because it can make things in different shapes. 易错点提示 1. will的用法易错：will作为一般将来时的助动词，后面必须接动词原形，比如不能写成"It will does chores"，正确形式是"It will do chores"。 2. 固定搭配易错："keep an eye on"是固定短语，意为“照看、留意”，不能遗漏冠词"an"，不要写成"keep eye on"。 3. 专有名词写法易错："3-D printing"的连字符不能省略，正确写法是带连字符的"3-D printing"，不要写成"3Dprinting"或者"3D printing"。 4. 情态动词may的用法：may后面要接动词原形，比如不能写成"We may eats a pill"，正确形式是"We may eat a pill"。 写作一 请你畅想一下未来的家庭生活，说说家里会出现什么新科技，你会用更多的空闲时间做哪些有趣的事。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： robot, chores, free time, pet, games, sports 写作二 请你描述未来的食物会是什么样子，我们会用什么方式制作或获取食物，未来食物有什么特别之处。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： 3-D printing, pill, food, healthy, yummy, shape 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My Future Home Life In the future, I will have a smart robot at home. （畅想未来）It will do our chores every day. It will also keep an eye on my pet dog when I go out. I will have lots of free time. I will play fun games and do sports with my friends. （智能帮手）I think future home life will be very happy! （抒发感受） 范文（提高版）： My Future Home Life In the future, my home will have a super helpful robot. （畅想未来） It will clean the floor, wash the dishes and do all the boring chores for us. It will keep an eye on my cute pet cat all day long. I will have much more free time. I will play ball games with my classmates and try new sports like flying frisbee. （智能帮手）I believe future home life will be full of fun! （抒发感受） 写作二 范文（基础版）： The Future of Food In the future, food will be very different. （总起变化）We will use 3-D printing to make yummy food. We can make cake, pie and egg in different shapes. We may also eat a small pill to get what our bodies need.（新式食物）The future of food is bright!（表达展望） 范文（提高版）： The Future of Food In the future, our food will change a lot.（总起变化） We will use 3-D printing to make all kinds of yummy food. We can make cake in star shape and pie in heart shape. These foods are not only delicious but also healthy. Sometimes we may eat a small pill instead of big meals. It can give our bodies all the energy we need.（新式食物）I really look forward to the future of food!（表达展望） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $