Unit 4 A better me（写作突破专项训练）英语外研版三起五年级上册（新教材）

Unit 4 A better me 写作方法指引- 原文指路 Our school's going to have a girls' basketball team. Amy and I want to join. 开篇点题：点明自身目标与愿望，引出故事开端。 Amy is in. But I am out. I am very sad. 描述挫折：呈现尝试后的失败结果，真实表达失落情绪。 Amy is so kind. She comes to play basketball with me. I'm going to work hard. 表达决心：讲述面对挫折后的行动，体现努力改变的坚定态度。 There's going to be a test again. I'm still not sure. But I'm going to try again. 展现坚持：描述再次尝试的复杂心态，传递不放弃的精神。 I'm in! I'm so happy. I'm going to play with Amy and my other friends! 抒发喜悦：点明最终成功的结果，表达内心喜悦，呼应开头的愿望。 一、核心词汇 1. 目标与计划类 make new friends, learn something new, read more, exercise more, get better at, listen to English songs, talk with others in English, learn to swim, get up early 2. 情感与态度类 afraid, fail, great, start, try again, work hard, happy, sad, worried, unhappy 3. 校园与活动类 basketball team, test, classroom, teacher, school 二、参考句型 1. 表达未来计划 I'm going to get better at English. I'm going to listen to English songs every day. I'm going to learn to swim this summer holiday. I'm going to get up early to read English books. I'm going to work hard and I can make it next time. 2. 表达面对挑战的态度 Don't be afraid. Just start it today! We can all be great if we try our best. Try again. Fail again. Fail better. I'm not going to give up easily. 3. 描述经历与感受 Amy is so kind. She comes to play basketball with me. I was worried when there were too many people. I feel sad because I can't join the basketball team. I'm so happy that I finally join the team! 易错点提示 1. be going to结构易错：要注意主语和be动词的搭配，比如主语是I用I'm going to，主语是he/she用He's/She's going to，主语是we/they用We're/They're going to，不要遗漏be动词。 2. get better at的用法：后面接名词或动名词形式，比如get better at English（接名词）、get better at playing basketball（接动名词），不能直接接动词原形。 3. try的搭配：try something new表示尝试新事物；try to do sth表示努力做某事；try again表示再试一次，注意不同搭配的含义区分。 4. 时态区分：描述过去的经历要用一般过去时，比如I was sad、She came to play basketball；描述未来计划要用be going to结构，不要混淆时态。 写作一 新学期来临，你有不少新的计划和目标，请写一篇英语短文，介绍你的新学期计划，说说你打算做什么以及为什么要这么做。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： make new friends, get better at English, listen to English songs, get up early, read more, work hard 写作二 你之前参加学校篮球队的选拔失败了，感到很伤心，好朋友Amy来鼓励你并陪你练习，现在你有了新的打算，请写一篇短文讲述这段经历和你的未来计划。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： basketball team, fail, sad, try again, work hard, get better at playing basketball, happy 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： New term is coming. I have many good plans. （引出背景）I'm going to make new friends in my classroom. I'm going to get better at English. I'm going to listen to English songs every day and get up early to read more English books. （罗列规划） I will work hard. I think I can make it. （表明决心） 范文（提高版）： The new term starts soon, and I'm excited for my new plans. （引出背景） First, I'm going to make new friends at school because I want to share interesting things with more classmates. Then, I'm going to get better at English. I plan to listen to English songs every morning and get up early to read short English stories. （罗列规划）I will work hard every day. I believe I can do well in English this term. （表明决心） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Last week, I tried to join the school basketball team, but I failed. （交代遭遇）I felt sad. My friend Amy is so kind. She came to play basketball with me after school. （好友陪伴）Now I'm not going to give up. I'm going to work hard and get better at playing basketball. I will try again next term. I think I can join the team then. （立下目标） 范文（提高版）： Last week, I took part in the school basketball team selection, but I failed. I felt really sad and worried that I couldn't join my favorite team. （交代遭遇）Then my good friend Amy came to me. She said, "Don't be afraid. Try again." She plays basketball with me every afternoon after school. （好友陪伴）Now I'm going to work hard every day to get better at playing basketball. I will try again next term, and I'm sure I can make it. （立下目标） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $