内容正文:
Unit 2 A green life
写作方法指引- 原文指路
Dear all,
开篇称呼:明确受众,拉近与读者的距离
Each of us has a box of milk every day at school. We use over 150,000 milk boxes every year! But many of us just throw them away.
引入问题:用数据和日常现状点明牛奶盒浪费的问题,引起读者关注
Milk boxes have three parts: paper, plastic, and metal. Each part can turn into something new, like newspapers, bottles, and cans.
阐释价值:介绍牛奶盒的组成及回收后的转化方向,说明回收的意义
It is easy to recycle a milk carton in just three steps:
过渡引导:自然引出具体回收步骤,让文章结构更清晰
Open the milk box and wash it with water.
步骤描述1:用祈使句清晰说明回收第一步操作,简洁易懂
Make it flat.
步骤描述2:简洁的祈使句,明确回收第二步动作
Put it into a recycling box.
步骤描述3:清晰说明回收最后一步,完成流程指引
Now the milk box moves to a new beginning! Let’s start now for a green world!
结尾倡议:升华主题,发出环保行动号召,增强感染力
一、核心词汇
1. 环保物品类
milk box(牛奶盒)plastic bottle(塑料瓶)recycling box(回收箱)old shirt(旧衬衫)
cap(瓶盖)newspaper(报纸)can(金属罐)bird house(鸟屋)
2. 环保动作类
recycle(回收利用)wash(清洗)make flat(压平)throw away(扔掉)take off(取下)
use again(重复使用)care for(爱护)bring(带来)
3. 环保主题相关
green life(绿色生活)Earth Day(地球日)food waste(食物残渣)plant(植物)garden(花园)
二、参考句型
1. 描述回收步骤
We can recycle milk cartons in just three steps.
First, open the milk box and wash it with water.
Next, make it flat.
Then, put it into a recycling box.
Let's recycle plastic bottles! First, take off the caps. Next, wash the bottles. Then, put them into a recycling box.
2. 介绍个人环保行动
I bring my own water bottle to school every day.
I use old paper for my art homework.
I use food waste to feed plants in the garden.
I don't throw old things away. I reuse an old shirt to make bird houses.
3. 环保呼吁与倡议
Let's start now for a green world!
Don't use plastic every day!
We should all care for the earth.
Let's do something to make our earth cleaner!
易错点提示
1. 词汇拼写易错:注意recycle的正确拼写,不要误写为recycel;区分throw away(扔掉)和take away(拿走)的含义,避免混用。
2. 步骤描述逻辑:用first, next, then描述回收或行动步骤时,要注意顺序的合理性,清晰体现流程。
3. 固定搭配易错:表达“自带某物”时,要使用bring one's own + 物品的结构,比如bring my own water bottle,不要遗漏own。
4. 句型使用注意:否定祈使句Don't...用来表达禁止的行为,比如Don't throw it away.,注意句首首字母大写。
写作一
请你介绍如何回收塑料瓶,用first, next, then等词清晰描述步骤,并简单说说回收的意义。
要求:
1.书写规范,正确使用标点符号。
2.语言表达流畅。
3.不少于 50 词。
参考单词:
plastic bottle, cap, wash, recycling box, recycle, care for
写作二
请你介绍自己平时践行绿色生活的小行动,至少写出3个具体做法,最后发出环保呼吁。
要求:
1.书写规范,正确使用标点符号。
2.语言表达流畅。
3.不少于 50 词。
参考单词:
green life, bring, own water bottle, old shirt, bird house, food waste, garden, plant, care for
参考范文
写作一
范文(基础版):
How to Recycle Plastic Bottles?
Let's recycle plastic bottles!(引出主题)First, take off the caps. Next, wash the bottles with clean water. Then, put them into the recycling box.(操作流程)Recycling can help care for our earth. It's easy to do, so let's keep doing it every day! (升华倡议)
范文(提高版):
How to Recycle Plastic Bottles?
Do you know how to recycle plastic bottles correctly? Let me tell you.(引出主题) First, take off the caps and put them in a separate small bag. Next, wash the bottles carefully to clean the inside. Then, make them flat and put them into the recycling box. (操作流程) Recycling is a good way to care for our earth, so we should do it together! (升华倡议)
写作二
范文(基础版):
My Green Life
I love green life.(点明主题)Every day, I bring my own water bottle to school. I don't throw my old shirt away. I reuse it to make a bird house. I also use food waste to feed plants in the garden. (列举做法) We should all care for the earth. Let's start now for a green world!(发出呼吁)
范文(提高版):
My Green Life
Green life is easy and interesting!(点明主题) Every day, I bring my own water bottle to school, so I never use disposable plastic bottles. When my shirt is too small for me, I don't throw it away. I cut it and make a cute bird house for the little birds in the park. At home, I collect food waste to feed the plants in our garden.(列举做法)Let's do small things to make our earth cleaner. We should all care for our beautiful earth!(发出呼吁)
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