Unit 6 Nature and us（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版五年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“自然公园”为主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-写作实践”三级训练体系，系统培养语言表达与情境应用能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1篇原文指路|提炼“开篇引入-景观描述-活动推荐-出行提示”四步结构|从篇章整体框架到局部要素展开，建立写作逻辑链| |核心词汇|5类分类词汇（自然景观/天气等）|按主题功能分类记忆，强化场景词汇储备|围绕“自然公园”主题，构建相关词汇网络| |参考句型|4类功能句型（介绍景观/描述天气等）|提供情境化句型模板，注重There be句型等核心表达|从基础句型到复杂表达，实现语言能力层级提升| |写作任务|2个任务（含基础/提高版范文）|分层示范写作思路，结合易错点提示规避错误|从知识输入到能力输出，达成语言应用闭环|

Unit 6 Nature and us 写作方法指引- 原文指路 Welcome to River Nature Park. 开篇引入：直接向读者发出邀请，明确写作对象为自然公园。 There are many rivers and big trees here. 景观描述：运用There be句型介绍公园标志性自然景观。 There are a lot of fish in the rivers. You can go boating on the river with your friends. 活动推荐：补充景观细节后，介绍适合开展的户外活动，增强吸引力。 There is heavy rain in summer. Sometimes there are floods too. Check the weather report before you go. 出行提示：说明季节特殊天气，给出实用游览建议，体现贴心关怀。 一、核心词汇 1. 自然景观类 nature park, forest, river, lake, mountain, waterfall, snowy mountain, grassland 2. 天气类 windy, heavy rain, flood, heavy snow, fog, cold, fine day, strong wind 3. 动物植物类 monkey, rabbit, fish, bird, tree, flower, grass 4. 活动与行为类 go boating, hike, walk your dog, take pictures, put on a play, draw pictures, play the piano, make food 5. 其他实用词汇 tour guide, hotel, umbrella, raincoat, weather report, class party 二、参考句型 1. 介绍自然公园/景观 There is a big forest in the nature park. There are many rivers and big trees in River Nature Park. You can go boating on the river with your friends. Sanjiangyuan National Park is the largest national park in China. There are many beautiful views like snowy mountains, lakes and forests in it. 2. 描述天气与对应活动/安排 It is very cold in winter and sometimes there is heavy snow. Autumn is windy, so we should be careful of fires. There will be heavy rain this afternoon, so we need to stay in the hotel and close the windows. This Saturday there will be strong winds, so I won't go to the park. 3. 安全提示类 Check the weather report before you go to the nature park. Don't go into the forest on spring mornings when there is heavy fog. The sun is strong at the beach, so you should wear a hat and sunglasses. You should bring enough water with you when you go hiking. 4. 欢迎/活动邀请类 Welcome to River Nature Park! Have a good time in Mountain Nature Park! We are going to have a class party on 1 January at 2:00 p.m. 易错点提示 1. There be句型单复数易错：注意区分名词单复数，单数/不可数名词用"There is..."，复数名词用"There are..."，例如：正确表达是"There is a lake in the park."，不要写成"There are a lake in the park."。 2. 天气词汇搭配易错：描述大雨用"heavy rain"（不用"big rain"），大风用"strong wind"（不用"big wind"），避免搭配错误。 3. 活动短语形式易错："go boating" "take pictures"这类短语中，动词要用动名词形式，不要写成"go boat" "take picture"。 4. 季节前介词易错：表示在某个季节，介词用"in"，例如"in spring" "in winter"，不要误用"on"。 写作一 请介绍你最喜欢的一个自然公园，描述公园里的自然景观，以及你在公园里可以进行的活动。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： nature park, forest, river, lake, monkey, go boating, take pictures, draw pictures 写作二 周末你计划和家人去自然公园游玩，出发前查看了天气预报，请你写一写当天的天气情况、你们的活动调整以及需要注意的安全事项。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： weather report, strong wind, heavy rain, hotel, umbrella, raincoat, take pictures, stay inside 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： My Favorite Nature Park I love Green Lake Nature Park. There is a big lake in it. There are many trees and flowers around the lake. You can see some monkeys in the forest near the lake. （公园总览） I often go boating on the lake with my parents. I also take pictures of the beautiful flowers. （游玩活动）I have a good time there every time. （游玩感受） 范文（提高版）： My Favorite Nature Park Green Lake Nature Park is my favorite place to visit. There is a clear lake in the center of the park. Around the lake, there are tall green trees and colorful flowers. You can find lovely monkeys jumping and playing in the small forest nearby. （公园总览）On fine days, I go boating with my friends and we sing happily. I also draw pictures of the lake and take photos of the cute monkeys. （游玩活动） It’s a wonderful place to enjoy nature. （游玩感受） 写作二 范文（基础版）： My Weekend Plan This weekend, I want to go to Mountain Nature Park with my family. But we check the weather report first. It says there will be heavy rain in the afternoon. （出行计划）So we will stay in the hotel then. We bring umbrellas and raincoats with us. In the morning, we can take pictures of the mountains. （行程安排）We will still have a good time. （心情总结） 范文（提高版）： My Weekend Plan This weekend, my family and I plan to visit Mountain Nature Park. Before we go, we check the weather report carefully. It says there will be strong wind in the morning and heavy rain in the afternoon. （出行计划）So we decide to hike for a short time in the morning and take pictures of the green mountains. We bring umbrellas and raincoats to keep dry. In the afternoon, we will stay in the hotel and make delicious food together. We also remember to close the hotel windows tightly. （行程安排） It will be a fun weekend! （心情总结） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $