摘要:
**基本信息**
以“家乡今昔对比”为核心主题,通过基础夯实、中考标准、拓展拔高三级训练,系统融合used to句型与时态语法,提升语言表达与逻辑思维能力。
**专项设计**
|模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑|
|----|-----------|----------|----------|
|基础片段写作|3小题|结合课本素材,用used to描述过去,现在完成时写现状,限定核心词汇|从单句句型训练到主题片段构建,夯实语法基础|
|中考标准书面表达|2道真题类|提供提示要点、写作框架,明确必用词汇与句型|按“总-分-总”结构组织篇章,贴合中考命题规范|
|拓展综合写作|2道长文|依托课本阅读素材,从介绍说明到提出建议,提升综合应用|从事实描述到观点表达,培养思维深度与表达逻辑性|
内容正文:
# 新人教版九年级Unit1 The Changing World 书面表达专项练习题
写作核心主题:家乡今昔对比、生活变迁,核心语法 used to 句型、一般过去时、现在完成时,贴合中考书面表达分值与出题风格
写作素材全部来自课本对话、阅读原文,词汇为本单元核心单词,分为基础小练、中考标准作文、拓展话题写作三部分,适配课堂训练、课后作业、考前模拟
一、基础片段写作(3小题,每题30词左右,夯实句型)
1 话题:家乡道路与交通变化
写作要求:结合课本素材,使用used to描述过去土路,再用现在完成时写出如今宽阔公路、高铁,至少用到单词narrow,wide,track,take
参考可用短语:used to,take half a day,take only one hour
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2 话题:家乡环境改变
写作要求:围绕塞罕坝治沙素材,过去常有沙尘暴,如今满山树木,单词sandstorm,sandy,bush,miracle
参考可用短语:used to be covered with sand,plant trees,improve the environment
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3 话题:村民生活变化
写作要求:对比过去进城打工,如今返乡发展大棚、旅游业,单词villager,greenhouse,tourism,product
参考可用短语:used to work in big cities,come back,take advantage of local resources
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二、中考标准书面表达(2道真题类作文,80-100词,给出提示要点、写作框架、必用单元词汇短语)
作文1
写作题目:Changes in My Hometown
写作背景:20年前你的家乡交通闭塞、环境恶劣,如今道路宽阔,配套医院、超市、绿化山林一应俱全
内容提示要点
1 过去:道路狭窄泥土路,看病购物要走远,山上全是沙土,常有沙尘暴
2 现在:新建宽阔公路、医院、超市,山上种满灌木树木,环境变好
3 个人感受:家乡变化巨大,为家乡发展感到自豪
必用单元词汇:narrow,wide,dirt track,sandstorm,bush,government,benefit
必用核心句型:used to,have built,take
写作框架提示
第一段:总起,我的家乡在二十年里发生巨大变化
第二段:分写过去的交通、环境、生活不便
第三段:描述如今的各类改变,政府植树修路带来的好处
第四段:抒发个人感想
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作文2
写作题目:Changes in My Daily Life
写作背景:对比小学与现在初中生活,出行、住房、学习方式不同,有不变的家人温情
内容提示要点
1 小学:家近步行上学,住在小平房,纸质课本学习
2 现在:家远坐公交,宽敞公寓,线上资源、小组讨论学习
3 不变:家人始终陪伴,充满温暖
必用单元词汇:flat,discussion,transport,aspect,improve
必用核心句型:used to,have become,take buses
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三、拓展综合写作(2道长文训练,100-120词,适合拔高训练)
作文1
话题:The Fast Railway Brings Great Changes
素材依托课本蒙巴萨-内罗毕高铁阅读短文
写作要求:介绍这条480公里铁路,过去火车耗时10小时,如今仅4小时,带动商贸、旅游业,当地人从中获益
必用短语:cut travel time,business deals,benefit from,all over the world
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作文2
话题:What Can We Do to Change Our Hometown
写作要求:从治沙、完善交通、发展乡村产业三个角度写建议,结合单元环保、发展素材,用到plant bushes,build wide roads,develop tourism
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四、情景交际小作文(对话改写,40词)
素材取自Section A对话:George父亲时隔二十年重访李瑞家乡,写出两人对话改写短文,至少三处used to句型
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五、写作答题规范提示
1 词数控制:基础片段30词上下,标准作文80-100词,拓展作文100-120词,词数不符会扣分
2 语法硬性要求:每篇作文必须同时使用used to、一般过去时、现在完成时三种时态
3 词汇要求:每篇至少使用3个本单元重点单词,2个单元固定短语
4 易错提醒:区分used to do(过去常常)和be used to doing(习惯于);in 加过去年份只用一般过去时,over the last搭配现在完成时
参考答案与标准范文
一、基础片段写作范文
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In the past, the roads used to be narrow dirt tracks. It used to take half a day to get to the town. Now the government has built wide highways, and it only takes one hour for us to travel outside. Our trips become much easier.
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There used to be terrible sandstorms and all hills were sandy land. With government’s help, people planted lots of bushes year by year. Now the environment has improved a lot, and it becomes a green miracle.
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Many villagers used to work in big cities for living. Now most of them have come back home. They build greenhouses and sell local products to tourists, so local tourism develops quickly.
二、中考标准书面表达范文
作文1 Changes in My Hometown
Great changes have taken place in my hometown over the past twenty years.
Twenty years ago, roads were narrow dirt tracks. We used to go far away to see doctors or buy daily things. The hills were covered with sand and sandstorms came often.
Now the government has built wide roads, a new hospital and a supermarket. Lots of bushes are planted on hills, so sandstorms are seldom seen. All villagers benefit from these great changes.
I am so proud of my lovely hometown.
作文2 Changes in My Daily Life
My life has changed a lot since I studied in primary school.
I used to walk to school as my home was close, and I lived in a small flat. I only learned knowledge from textbooks before.
Now my school is far, so I take buses every day. My family moves into a big flat, and I join group discussions to improve study.
One thing never changes—the warm love from my whole family.
三、拓展综合写作范文
作文1 The Fast Railway Brings Great Changes
The 480-kilometre Mombasa-Nairobi railway opened in 2017. Old trains used to take ten hours to travel between the two cities, but now it only takes about four hours.
Over two million people take this train every year. Businessmen can finish business deals with ease. Local people benefit a lot, and local tourism develops rapidly. The railway connects cities and brings better lives to everyone.
作文2 What Can We Do to Change Our Hometown
We can take many actions to make our hometown much better.
First, we plant more bushes and trees on sandy hills to stop sandstorms. Second, the government should build wide roads to improve transport. Third, we can develop tourism and sell special local goods to visitors. Small efforts will create huge changes.
四、情景交际小作文范文
George’s father visited Li Rui’s hometown after twenty years. He saw lots of big changes. It used to take half a day to reach the town, now it just takes one hour. People used to shop far away, but there is a street supermarket now. The hills used to be full of sand, and they are covered with green trees at present.
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