Unit 1 The Changing World. 人际交往（单元写作精练）英语新教材人教版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“变化的世界”为主题，构建“结构+语言+实战”三维写作训练体系，通过今昔对比框架培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力，契合中考写作高频考点。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作框架指导|结构/时态/人称|“总-分-总”结构，今昔对比用一般过去时与现在时，第一/三人称结合|从主题分析到结构搭建，形成“引入-展开-总结”逻辑链| |语言要素积累|词汇15个/句式19句|分类积累变化类词汇，模板化开头/中间/结尾句|从基础词汇到复杂句式，构建“词-句-段”语言进阶路径| |实战应用训练|原题1道/范文1篇/练习6道|审题三段式（立意-布局-表达），句式仿写与升级技巧|以典例为载体，实现“方法-应用-迁移”的能力转化|

Unit 1 The Changing World.变化的世界 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题是“变化的世界”，写作时应围绕着对比人或事物的过去与现在展开。文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。 [教材典句] ①Now great changes have taken place. ②The road used to be narrow and dirty. ③This made it difficult for locals to bring products to the market or to develop industry. ④There used to be sandstorms all the time,and the fields were getting smaller and smaller. 【词汇积累】 ① in the past 在过去 ② at present 目前；现在 ③ years ago 多年前 ④ take place 发生 ⑤ great changes 巨大变化 ⑥ live a better life 过上更好生活 ⑦ keep up with 跟上 ⑧ with the development of 随着…… 的发展 ⑨ used to do 过去常常做 ⑩ nowadays 如今；现今 ⑪ become more and more 变得越来越…… ⑫ convenient and fast 便捷又快速 ⑬ way of life 生活方式 ⑭ make progress 取得进步 ⑮ bring much convenience 带来许多便利 【句式积累】 开头句 Great changes have taken place in the world around us. 我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。 Our world is changing faster than ever before. 我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。 If we compare the past with the present, we can see many differences. 对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。 Times are changing and our life has changed a lot. 时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。 With time going by, the world has changed greatly. 随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。 中间句 People used to go out on foot or by bike. 人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。 Now more people choose cars and high-speed trains to travel. 如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。 In the past, people communicated by letters. 过去人们靠书信交流。 Nowadays we chat online anytime and anywhere. 如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。 Life was simple but hard many years ago. 多年前生活简单却很艰苦。 At present, our life is much more comfortable and convenient. 现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。 Technology makes our daily life much easier. 科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。 Our hometown looks quite different from what it was before. 我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。 People’s lifestyle has changed completely over the years. 这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。 The rapid development brings us both advantages and new challenges. 快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。 结尾句 I’m proud of the great changes in our world. 我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。 I believe our world will become even better in the future. 我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。 We should accept changes and keep learning all the time. 我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。 Changes make our life colorful and meaningful. 变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。 As the world changes, we also need to improve ourselves. 世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。 【原题呈现】 （25-26九年级上·河南驻马店·期中）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华, 你校英语俱乐部正以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示： 要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years.________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时 明确要点：过去和现在的环境状况，对家乡美好未来的期待 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明核心主题——家乡近些年发生巨大的变化 主体段：今昔对比，描述过去落后的环境状况和现在家乡环境改善后的结果 结尾段：展望未来，表达对家乡变得更加美丽和生活更加美好的期待 【范文欣赏】 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, and the air wasn’t fresh. There were few trees, so birds seldom came. But now, everything has changed! The roads have become clean and wide, with colorful flowers on both sides. We’ve planted many trees, and the air is fresh again. Birds sing in the green parks every morning. In the future, I hope my hometown will be more beautiful. Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment. Factories will use clean energy, and rivers will be clearer. I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here! Let’s work together to make it happen. 【亮点解析】 要点一：过去的环境 the roads were narrow and dirty/the air wasn’t fresh/There were few trees/birds seldom came/Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere等 要点二：现在的环境 The roads have become clean and wide/with colorful flowers on both sides/We’ve planted many trees/the air is fresh again/Birds sing in the green parks every morning/The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are cleaner and the sky is bluer等 要点三：未来的展望 美好期望：I hope my hometown will be more beautiful/I hope our living environment will get much better等 提出建议：Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment/Factories will use clean energy/rivers will be clearer/we will set up more community gardens等 信心表达：I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here/I believe the future of my hometown will be better and better等 发出呼吁：Let’s work together to make it happen/Let’s take small actions together to protect our lovely hometown等 【基础必做】 一、高分句式训练。 1.教材原句：There used to be sandstorms all the time, and the fields were getting smaller and smaller. 仿写：过去我的家乡有很多野生动物。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：Have these changes greatly improved your lives? 仿写：自从你来中国以后，你学习中国文化了吗？ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：In the past, it was difficult to travel in Guizhou. 仿写：那一刻他很难作出选择。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句：It took 10 hours to get to Nairobi from Mombasa by train. 仿写：我每天乘公共汽车回家要花半个小时。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 5.教材原句：..., and the people who live here have become rich. 仿写：你认识独居的那个老妇人吗？ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 二、句子升级。 1.It’s an encouraging achievement.（升格为感叹句） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 2.Our country has turned many sandy areas into green land. Our country has taken the lead in making the world greener. （用“not only... but also...”升格） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 3.We look back at the past. Then we can truly realize how much our motherland has achieved.（用only when引导的条件状语从句进行倒装升格） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【提升必做】 1．假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“Changes in My Hometown”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下图写一篇英文演讲稿。 要求：文中不得透露个人真实信息；可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Changes in My Hometown Changes have greatly taken place in my hometown in recent years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．请以Great Changes in My Hometown为题，根据以下提示介绍你家乡发生的巨大变化。 1.过去：道路狭窄，出行不便，生活简单； 2.现在：道路宽阔，交通便利，环境优美，科技让生活更便捷； 3.谈谈你的感受与展望。 词数：100 词左右 提示词：narrow, convenient, be covered with, high-tech, digital payment 注意: 1.表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥； 2.词数100词左右。 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 Great Changes in My Hometown _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony即将来安徽研学，他特意写信询问安徽的特色与近年变化。请你根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封回信。 要点: 1.家乡特色: 一处代表性景点（如黄山/三河古镇）、一种特色文化（如黄梅戏/文房四宝）； 2.近年变化: 交通更便利（地铁/高铁）、环境更优美（公园增多/天更蓝）； 3.发出邀请: 期待见面，愿意做他的向导。 注意: 1.书信需包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear that you will come to Anhui for study tour soon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Li Hua 4．马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．请以“Changes around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校论坛投稿，讲讲近几年发生在你身边的变化。包含以下要点： changes in the past now hometown quiet, small, … popular, Internet-famous city… the way I study textbook, dictionary study apps such as… myself … … 注意：1. 可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes around Me Time flies and great changes have taken place around me over the years. _________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．假如你校英文报发起了一项以“The Changes in My Hometown”为主题的征文活动，请你根据思维导图，从衣、食、住、行四个方面谈谈你家乡的变化，并畅想家乡未来的景象。 要求： 1．要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 3．80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词语：vegetarian food 素食 The Changes in My Hometown With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe, in the future, my hometown will become even better with the efforts of each of us. It will get greener and more livable. 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 1 The Changing World.变化的世界 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 本单元的话题是“变化的世界”，写作时应围绕着对比人或事物的过去与现在展开。文章通常采用“总一分一总”的结构，开头总领全文，点明人和事物发生了巨大变化；中间部分可从生活环境、交通方式、日常生活等角度分层展开，通过今昔对照凸显变化的具体方面；结尾则结合自己的情况，阐述能采取的行动，或表达对未来的美好展望。描写过去的状态与事件时使用一般过去时，描写当下的情况或过去变化对现在产生的影响时，用一般现在时或现在完成时。人称以第一、三人称为主。 [教材典句] ①Now great changes have taken place. ②The road used to be narrow and dirty. ③This made it difficult for locals to bring products to the market or to develop industry. ④There used to be sandstorms all the time,and the fields were getting smaller and smaller. 【词汇积累】 ① in the past 在过去 ② at present 目前；现在 ③ years ago 多年前 ④ take place 发生 ⑤ great changes 巨大变化 ⑥ live a better life 过上更好生活 ⑦ keep up with 跟上 ⑧ with the development of 随着…… 的发展 ⑨ used to do 过去常常做 ⑩ nowadays 如今；现今 ⑪ become more and more 变得越来越…… ⑫ convenient and fast 便捷又快速 ⑬ way of life 生活方式 ⑭ make progress 取得进步 ⑮ bring much convenience 带来许多便利 【句式积累】 开头句 Great changes have taken place in the world around us. 我们身边的世界发生了巨大变化。 Our world is changing faster than ever before. 我们的世界变化比以往任何时候都快。 If we compare the past with the present, we can see many differences. 对比过去和现在，我们能发现诸多不同。 Times are changing and our life has changed a lot. 时代在变迁，我们的生活也改变了许多。 With time going by, the world has changed greatly. 随着时光流逝，世界发生了巨变。 中间句 People used to go out on foot or by bike. 人们过去出门靠步行或骑自行车。 Now more people choose cars and high-speed trains to travel. 如今更多人选择汽车和高铁出行。 In the past, people communicated by letters. 过去人们靠书信交流。 Nowadays we chat online anytime and anywhere. 如今我们可以随时随地线上聊天。 Life was simple but hard many years ago. 多年前生活简单却很艰苦。 At present, our life is much more comfortable and convenient. 现在我们的生活舒适便捷得多。 Technology makes our daily life much easier. 科技让我们的日常生活变得轻松许多。 Our hometown looks quite different from what it was before. 我们的家乡和过去模样大不相同。 People’s lifestyle has changed completely over the years. 这些年人们的生活方式彻底改变了。 The rapid development brings us both advantages and new challenges. 快速发展既带来好处也带来新挑战。 结尾句 I’m proud of the great changes in our world. 我为世界的巨大变化感到自豪。 I believe our world will become even better in the future. 我相信未来世界会变得更加美好。 We should accept changes and keep learning all the time. 我们应接纳变化，坚持终身学习。 Changes make our life colorful and meaningful. 变化让我们的生活丰富多彩、富有意义。 As the world changes, we also need to improve ourselves. 世界在变，我们也要不断提升自我。 【原题呈现】 （25-26九年级上·河南驻马店·期中）“绿水青山就是金山银山”。近年来，我们国家在发展经济的同时也非常重视对环境的保护。假设你是阳光中学的李华, 你校英语俱乐部正以“The Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题进行征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动，介绍家乡的环境变化，并描绘自己对美好未来的期待。提示： 要求：(1)短文必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥； (2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； (3)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years.________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：这是一篇记叙文，用一般过去时、一般现在时和一般将来时 明确要点：过去和现在的环境状况，对家乡美好未来的期待 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：开门见山，点明核心主题——家乡近些年发生巨大的变化 主体段：今昔对比，描述过去落后的环境状况和现在家乡环境改善后的结果 结尾段：展望未来，表达对家乡变得更加美丽和生活更加美好的期待 【范文欣赏】 Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. My hometown has changed greatly these years. In the past, the roads were narrow and dirty, and the air wasn’t fresh. There were few trees, so birds seldom came. But now, everything has changed! The roads have become clean and wide, with colorful flowers on both sides. We’ve planted many trees, and the air is fresh again. Birds sing in the green parks every morning. In the future, I hope my hometown will be more beautiful. Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment. Factories will use clean energy, and rivers will be clearer. I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here! Let’s work together to make it happen. 【亮点解析】 要点一：过去的环境 the roads were narrow and dirty/the air wasn’t fresh/There were few trees/birds seldom came/Pollution was very serious, and there was rubbish everywhere等 要点二：现在的环境 The roads have become clean and wide/with colorful flowers on both sides/We’ve planted many trees/the air is fresh again/Birds sing in the green parks every morning/The mountains have turned greener, the rivers are cleaner and the sky is bluer等 要点三：未来的展望 美好期望：I hope my hometown will be more beautiful/I hope our living environment will get much better等 提出建议：Maybe we’ll have more bike paths to protect the environment/Factories will use clean energy/rivers will be clearer/we will set up more community gardens等 信心表达：I believe “green mountains are gold mountains” will come true here/I believe the future of my hometown will be better and better等 发出呼吁：Let’s work together to make it happen/Let’s take small actions together to protect our lovely hometown等 【基础必做】 一、高分句式训练。 1.教材原句：There used to be sandstorms all the time, and the fields were getting smaller and smaller. 仿写：过去我的家乡有很多野生动物。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】There used to be many wild animals in my hometown. 2.教材原句：Have these changes greatly improved your lives? 仿写：自从你来中国以后，你学习中国文化了吗？ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Have you learned about Chinese culture since you came to China? 3.教材原句：In the past, it was difficult to travel in Guizhou. 仿写：那一刻他很难作出选择。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It was difficult for him to make a choice at that moment. 4.教材原句：It took 10 hours to get to Nairobi from Mombasa by train. 仿写：我每天乘公共汽车回家要花半个小时。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】It takes me half an hour to go home by bus every day 5.教材原句：..., and the people who live here have become rich. 仿写：你认识独居的那个老妇人吗？ _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Do you know the old woman who lives alone? 二、句子升级。 1.It’s an encouraging achievement.（升格为感叹句） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】What an encouraging achievement (it is)! 2.Our country has turned many sandy areas into green land. Our country has taken the lead in making the world greener. （用“not only... but also...”升格） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Not only has our country turned many sandy areas into green land, but it has also taken the lead in making the world greener. 3.We look back at the past. Then we can truly realize how much our motherland has achieved.（用only when引导的条件状语从句进行倒装升格） _______________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Only when we look back at the past can we truly realize how much our motherland has achieved. 【提升必做】 1．假设你是李华，你校英语俱乐部将开展以“Changes in My Hometown”为主题的演讲比赛，请根据下图写一篇英文演讲稿。 要求：文中不得透露个人真实信息；可适当发挥；词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Changes in My Hometown Changes have greatly taken place in my hometown in recent years. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes in My Hometown Changes have greatly taken place in my hometown in recent years. First, the environment has become much better. Streets are wide and clean with many trees and flowers on both sides. Tall buildings and new communities have appeared. People enjoy walking in the parks after dinner. Second, people’s lives has improved a lot. More families have their own cars, so travelling is easier than before. Some families even drive to visit other cities on weekends. I feel proud of these changes. I hope my hometown will become more beautiful in the future. Let’s work together to make it better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：讲稿（文体为应用文），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：环境变化（宽阔洁净的道路、花草树木、高楼与新社区）、居民生活变化（更多家庭拥有私家车，出行更便捷） 确定人称：第一人称（I/we） 注意事项：词数80左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，概括家乡近些年发生了巨大变化 主体段：分别介绍环境变化与居民生活改善两大板块 结尾段：总结感受，展望家乡更美好的未来 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：整体环境变化 环境改变：the environment has become much better/the environment is more pleasant/our hometown looks greener 道路样貌：streets are wide and clean/roads become smoother/streets are lined with plants 建筑变化：tall buildings and new communities have appeared/new housing areas are built/more modern buildings stand here 居民休闲：enjoy walking in the parks after dinner/take a walk after meals/do sports in public parks 要点二：人们的生活变化 出行条件：more families have their own cars/more people own private cars/many families buy family cars 生活便利：travelling is easier than before/trips become more convenient/it’s simpler to go out 休闲拓展：drive to visit other cities on weekends/go on road trips at weekends/travel to nearby towns by car 2．请以Great Changes in My Hometown为题，根据以下提示介绍你家乡发生的巨大变化。 1.过去：道路狭窄，出行不便，生活简单； 2.现在：道路宽阔，交通便利，环境优美，科技让生活更便捷； 3.谈谈你的感受与展望。 词数：100 词左右 提示词：narrow, convenient, be covered with, high-tech, digital payment 注意: 1.表达中必须包含所给要点并进行适当发挥； 2.词数100词左右。 3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名和地名等信息。 Great Changes in My Hometown _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Great Changes in My Hometown Great changes have taken place in my hometown in recent years. In the past, the roads here were narrow and bumpy. People had inconvenient traffic and lived a simple and plain life with few entertainment ways. However, things are totally different now. The streets become wide and smooth, making our travel very convenient. The whole town is covered with green trees and colorful flowers, creating a beautiful environment. Besides, high-tech products make our life much easier. We can finish shopping and daily bills easily with digital payment anytime. I feel proud of these amazing changes. I believe my hometown will become even more wonderful in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：话题作文，一般现在时为主辅以一般过去时和一般将来时 明确要点：家乡的过去，家乡的现在，自己的感受和对未来的展望 确定人称：第一人称 注意事项：100词左右，不得出现真实姓名、学校、地名等信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：开篇点题，指出家乡近些年发生巨变 主体段：详细介绍家乡的过去和现在 结尾段：表达自己的感受以及对未来的期望 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡的过去 描述过去：the roads here were narrow and bumpy/had inconvenient traffic/lived a simple and plain life/with few entertainment ways/technologically backward等 要点二：家乡的现在 描述现在：streets become wide and smooth/making our travel very convenient/is covered with green trees and colorful flowers/creating a beautiful environment/high-tech products make our life much easier/finish shopping and daily bills easily/with digital payment/has ‌better environment‌/easier access to information等 要点三：自己的感受和对未来的展望 自己的感受：feel proud of these amazing changes/love my hometown/feel happy等 展望未来：will become even more wonderful/will become more beautiful等 3．假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tony即将来安徽研学，他特意写信询问安徽的特色与近年变化。请你根据以下要点，用英语给他写一封回信。 要点: 1.家乡特色: 一处代表性景点（如黄山/三河古镇）、一种特色文化（如黄梅戏/文房四宝）； 2.近年变化: 交通更便利（地铁/高铁）、环境更优美（公园增多/天更蓝）； 3.发出邀请: 期待见面，愿意做他的向导。 注意: 1.书信需包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数80~100（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear that you will come to Anhui for study tour soon. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Tony, I’m glad to hear that you will come to Anhui for study tour soon. Anhui is a great place with wonderful views and rich culture. Huangshan is famous for its strange rocks and beautiful clouds. And Huangmei Opera is so popular that many people love it deeply. Great changes have taken place here these years. We have more high-speed trains and subways, making trips much easier. There are also more beautiful parks, and the sky is clearer than before. I’d love to be your guide and show you around when you come. I’m sure you will surely have a great time here. Looking forward to meeting you soon! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[第一步：审题立意] 确定文体： 这是一篇书信作文，以一般现在时为主，现在完成时为辅 明确要点： 介绍安徽的特色和近年变化（特色：景点黄山、特色文化黄梅戏；变化：交通更便利、环境更优美） 确定人称：第一人称（I）为主 注意事项： 不提及真实姓名和校名，80-100词，语气自然 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段： 总领全文，表达对笔友要来安徽研学的欢迎（已给出） 主体段： 分别介绍家乡特色以及近年的改变——景点黄山、特色文化黄梅戏、交通更便利、环境更优美，适当增加细节 结尾段： 发出邀请，表达期待见面 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一： 表达欢迎：I’m glad to hear that you will come to Anhui for study tour soon.等 要点二：安徽特色和近年变化 安徽特色：Anhui is a great place with wonderful views and rich culture. Huangshan is famous for its strange rocks and beautiful clouds. And Huangmei Opera is so popular that many people love it deeply.等 近年变化：Great changes have taken place here these years. We have more high-speed trains and subways, making trips much easier. There are also more beautiful parks, and the sky is clearer than before.等 要点三： 发出邀请，表达期待：I’d love to be your guide and show you around when you come. I’m sure you will surely have a great time here.等 4．马年春晚一首《来晒秋》不仅唱出了劳动人民的希望与梦想，更唱出了乡村振兴的发展与成果。假如你是李华，你校英语报社正在举行题为“The Changes in My Hometown”的征文活动。请根据以下思维导图，积极投稿。 要求：1.短文需包含思维导图中的所有内容，可适当发挥； 2.内容积极向上，不少于80词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 3.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has great changes. Now let me share some with you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案 The Changes in My Hometown In recent years, my hometown has had great changes. Now let me share some with you. The environment has changed a lot. The houses are newer and brighter, and the roads are wide and clean with beautiful flowers on both sides. As for people, they live a happier life. They are more confident and kind. Our farm products are rich and sell well online, bringing more money to us. I am proud of these changes. I love my hometown and hope it will become more and more beautiful in the future. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意］ 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和现在完成时为主 明确要点：人们的变化、房屋道路的变化、农产品变化、个人感受 确定人称：第一人称（李华） 注意事项：不得透露真实人名和校名，内容积极向上 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出家乡变化（已给出） 主体段：分点描述人们、房屋道路、农产品的具体变化 结尾段：表达感受与展望，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：people 变化描述：happier / more confident / kinder / more hardworking / more united等 具体表现：wear nicer clothes / smile more often / help each other / work together / live a better life等 要点二：houses, roads 房屋变化：newer / brighter / taller / more beautiful / modern等 道路变化：wider / cleaner / smoother / lined with trees / with street lights等 位置/环境描述：on both sides of the road / in front of houses / around the village等 要点三：farm products 产品种类：rice / fruits / vegetables / tea / honey / flowers等 销售方式：sell well online / shipped to big cities / sold in supermarkets / exported abroad等 带来好处：bring more money / improve living standards / make farmers proud等 要点四：your feelings 感受词汇：proud / happy / excited / hopeful / thankful / amazed等 5．请以“Changes around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文向学校论坛投稿，讲讲近几年发生在你身边的变化。包含以下要点： changes in the past now hometown quiet, small, … popular, Internet-famous city… the way I study textbook, dictionary study apps such as… myself … … 注意：1. 可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实人名、校名、地名等信息； 3. 词数80左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Changes around Me Time flies and great changes have taken place around me over the years. _________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Changes around Me Time flies and great changes have taken place around me over the years. First, my hometown has changed a lot. It used to be a quiet and small town, but now it has become a popular Internet-famous city. Many tourists come to visit it every year. Second, the way I study is different. In the past, I only used textbooks and paper dictionaries. Now, I use study apps such as Bilibili to learn new things, which is more convenient. Finally, I used to be shy, but now I am more confident and active. I believe these changes make our life better. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时和现在时为主，讲述身边的变化 明确要点：从家乡、学习方式、自身三个方面对比过去与现在的变化 确定人称：第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数80左右，不透露真实信息，语言流畅   [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起点明身边发生了巨大变化 主体段：分别从家乡、学习方式、个人三个角度对比过去与现在的变化 结尾段：总结变化让生活更美好   [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：家乡变化 过去：quiet and small town/old narrow roads 现在：popular Internet-famous city/tall buildings and wide streets 要点二：学习方式变化 过去：only used textbooks and paper dictionaries/borrowed books from the library 现在：use study apps to learn new things/attend online classes 要点三：个人变化 过去：shy and quiet/afraid to speak in public 现在：more confident and active/take part in class discussions 要点四：总结启发 启发：these changes make our life better/we should keep up with the times 6．假如你校英文报发起了一项以“The Changes in My Hometown”为主题的征文活动，请你根据思维导图，从衣、食、住、行四个方面谈谈你家乡的变化，并畅想家乡未来的景象。 要求： 1．要点齐全，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2．语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 3．80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词语：vegetarian food 素食 The Changes in My Hometown With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in my hometown. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I believe, in the future, my hometown will become even better with the efforts of each of us. It will get greener and more livable. 【答案】 The Changes in My Hometown With the development of science and technology, great changes have taken place in my hometown. In the past, people usually wore simple clothes which were black or blue, but now they can choose different styles in bright colors. For food, people mainly had vegetarian food before, while now they enjoy all kinds of fruits and meat. As for houses, we used to live in small old houses, but now we have bigger and more comfortable homes. When it comes to transportation, people used to walk or ride bikes, but now they can take buses or drive their own cars. I believe that, in the future, my hometown will become even better with the efforts of each of us. It will get greener and more livable. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步，分“衣、食、住、行”四个维度，通过“过去和现在”的对比，具体介绍家乡在生活各方面的变化； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①with the development of …随着……的发展 ②all kinds of各种各样的 ③used to do sth.过去常常做某事 [高分句型] In the past, people usually wore simple clothes which were black or blue, but now they can choose different styles in bright colors. (which引导的定语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $