摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦七年级上册Unit 1 “You and Me”写作训练,从话题词汇(如grade, hobby)和佳句仿写(如sb’s name is…)切入,通过“词句储备—范文进阶—实战训练”的学习支架,帮助学生构建从基础表达到篇章写作的知识脉络。
其特色在于分层提升语言能力,如佳句仿写结合教材原句解析,范文修改用be good at升级词汇;通过列提纲培养“总—分—总”写作逻辑,提升思维品质;提供中考真题及参考范文,助力学生掌握写作策略,提升学习能力。学生能系统提升写作水平,教师可直接用于课堂教学,提高效率。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 RJ
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Unit 1 You and Me
A 课时同步训练
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Section B
What do we need to know
about a new friend?
Period 5 2a—3c(大单元话题与写作)
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.年级;等级 _______
2.业余爱好 _______
3.交朋友 ______________
4.姓氏 ___________
5.名字 ____________
6.弹吉他 _________________
grade
hobby
make friends
last name
first name
play the guitar
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】My name is Peter Brown.(sb’s name is…)
→仿写:她的名字叫海伦·格林。
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【解析】链接狂K
be动词的用法的详细讲解见狂K重点P13。
8.【教材原句】I’m 13 years old.[… year(s) old]
→仿写:我有个弟弟,他八岁了。
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Her name is Helen Green.
I have a brother and he is eight years old.
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9.【教材原句】Now, I live in Beijing with my family.(live in)
→仿写:约翰现在和他姐姐住在伦敦。
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10.【教材原句】My favourite food is Beijing roast duck, and my favourite
place is the Great Wall.(sb’s favourite… is…)
→仿写:我最喜欢的运动是网球。
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John lives in London with his sister now.
My favourite sport is tennis.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026山西运城期中]为了提升学生的学习兴趣和英语表达能力,你校将成
立一个英语俱乐部(the English Club),正在招聘俱乐部成员。假如你是Emma
Green,请用英语写一篇短文介绍一下自己。
内容包括:
·your basic information (name, age, grade, class, hobbies…)
·your English study
要求:1.词数不少于60;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。
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第1步 审题目
体 裁:说明文
时 态:一般现在时
人 称:以第一人称为主
内容要点:个人信息及英语学习情况
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总——分——总”。
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第3步 写作进阶
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Hello, everyone! My full
name is Emma Green. I’m 13
years old. I’m in Class 3, Grade
7.I want to join the English Club. _____________________________
Hello, everyone! My full name is
Emma Green. I’m 13 years old. I’m in
Class 3, Grade 7.I want to join the English
Club.
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I’m an active girl. I like
outdoor activities.My favourite
sport is ping-pong, and I like
tennis too.① I make many friends
by playing ping-pong and tennis.② I’m an active girl. I like outdoor
activities.I like ping-pong. .best, and
I. .love. .tennis. .a lot. .too.(用“like... best”替
换favourite,升级词汇;加入“love... a lot”结
构,丰富语境)① I make many friends by
playing ping-pong and tennis.I like
to. .spend. .my time. .playing. .with my friends.
(拓展语境;用“spend... doing”结构使表
达更高级) ②
续表
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I think English is very
interesting. I like to talk with my
classmates in English.I can sing
English songs.③
I want to do something for
others in the English Club.④
Thank you! I think English is very interesting. I
like to talk with my classmates in
English.I. .am good at. .singing English songs.
(用be good at替换can,升级词汇) ③
I. .would like to. .do something for
others in the English Club.(用would like to
替换want to,升级词汇) ④
Thank you!
续表
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026浙江宁波期中】假如你是Alice,下周你们班即将迎来一位外国同学
Tom。在他到来之前,为了让大家尽快熟悉这位新同学,请你用英语向全班同学
介绍一下Tom。
注意:1.文章必须包含所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、班级等信息;
3.词数60左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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A New Classmate
Name Tom Age 14 Country Singapore
Family Live with parents in Ningbo
Favourite colour Black
Favourite food Mapo tofu
Hobby Playing tennis
Next week, we will have a new classmate.____
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【参考范文】
Next week, we will have a new classmate.Before he comes, let me
introduce him to you.
His name is Tom.He is 14 years old and comes from Singapore.He
lives with his parents in Ningbo now.His favourite colour is black, and
he is crazy about Mapo tofu.In his free time, he enjoys playing tennis
and playing the guitar.He is friendly and easy to get along with.He
also hopes to learn Chinese culture with us.
Let’s make him feel welcome!
Value statement: Getting to know each other is the first step in making
new friends.
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