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英 语
七年级上册 HN
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Unit 3 The seasons
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课时同步训练
Section 3 Speaking & Writing
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.潮湿的 _____
2.南方 _______
3.有活力的 ________
4.下雨 ______
wet
south
lively
rain
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5.冬天 ________
6.野餐 ______________
7.去游泳 _____________
8.堆雪人 ________________
winter
have picnics
go swimming
make a snowman
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】 It is a time of new life and new hope.(a time of)
→仿写:在炎热的天气里,正是享用冰激凌的绝佳时机。
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10.【教材原句】Autumn is beautiful and full of colour.(full of)
→仿写:春天是一个充满快乐的季节。
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It’s a perfect time of enjoying ice cream on a hot day.
Spring is a season full of joy.
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11.【教材原句】There is often thunder and lightning in the afternoon.
(there be句式)
→仿写: 冬天天气相当冷,而且通常会有很多雪。
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12.【教材原句】You’d better bring an umbrella when you go out.(you’d better)
→仿写:如果你来我的家乡,最好穿暖和的衣服。
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It’s quite cold in winter, and there is usually much snow.
If you come to my hometown, you’d better wear warm clothes.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2026辽宁沈阳调研] 假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Jim想来你的家乡旅游,
但他不知道在哪个季节来最好。请根据以下提示给Jim写一封电子邮件介绍一下你
家乡的四季。
内容包括:
(1)The climatic features of the four seasons
(2)People’s activities in different seasons
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要求:
(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
(2)必须包括所有要点,可适当发挥;
(3)词数120左右(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jim,
I am very glad you will come to my hometown ___
Yours,
Li Hua
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第1步 审题目
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:四季的气候特点、人们在不同季节里的活动等
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总——分——总”。
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第3步 写作进阶
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Dear Jim,
I am very glad you will
come to my hometown Shenyang.
Now let me tell you something
about the four seasons in
Shenyang. ________________________________
Dear Jim,
I am very glad you will come to my
hometown Shenyang. Now let me tell you
something about the four seasons in
Shenyang.
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In spring, many things are
alive. It is good to do exercise
outside. We can climb mountains.
We can fly kites. Because the
weather is warm and sunny.Spring
is a relaxing season.① In spring, many things are alive. It is
good to do exercise outside. We can climb
mountains. We can fly kites. Because the
weather is warm and sunny.Spring is a
season. .full of joy.(用full of joy描述更有画
面感)①
续表
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In summer, the days are hot.
It is good to eat ice cream.②
Sometimes I go to the beach with
my family. I like building
sandcastles there. My little sister
makes sandcastles with me too.
In summer,. .it’s a perfect time of
enjoying icecream on a hot day.
(用a perfect time of enjoying使语境更生
动)② Sometimes I go to the beach with
my family. I like building sandcastles there.
My little sister makes sandcastles with me
too.
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In autumn, we can pick fruit.
The fruit is ripe.③ Farmers are
busy. They harvest crops.④ In
this season, the days get shorter
and the temperature goes down.⑤ Autumn is a wonderful season for
picking ripe fruit.(for picking ripe fruit直
接点明季节作用,比 “we can pick fruit.The
fruit is ripe.”的拆分表达更流畅)③ Farmers
are busy. .harvesting. .(用busy doing这样更
地道的短语,避免句子碎片化)crops.④ As
the days become shorter, the temperature
drops.(用As引导时间状语从句,体现两个
现象的伴随关系,在语法上更高级)⑤
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In winter, it is very cold.
There is usually a lot of snow.
We often wear warm clothes. We
do this to keep warm. I can make
snowmen. I can have snowball
fights with my friends.
I hope you can have a good
time in my hometown Shenyang.
Yours,
Li Hua In winter, it is very cold. There is
usually a lot of snow. We often wear warm
clothes. We do this to keep warm. I can
make snowmen. I can have snowball fights
with my friends.
I hope you can have a good time in
my hometown Shenyang.
Yours,
Li Hua
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第三阶 实战强化训练
你们班最近就“最喜欢的季节”展开调查,以下是你们小组成员的调查结果。
请据此写一篇英语短文。
组 员 最喜欢的季节 理 由
Ben 春天 气候温暖,到处都是鲜花绿树
Joe 夏天 可以游泳,和家人到海边度假
Kim 秋天 适合野餐和爬山
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写作要求:
(1)词数 80 左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)书写要整洁、规范;
(3)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息,否则不予评分。
Our group members have their own favourite seasons.____
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【参考范文】
Our group members have their own favourite seasons.Let me tell you
something about them.
Ben likes spring best because it’s warm and there are beautiful
flowers and green trees everywhere in spring.Joe’s favourite season is
summer.Summer is hot.It is exciting to go swimming in summer.He can
also go to the beach to build sandcastles with his family during the
holiday.Autumn is the best season for Kim.It is cool, so it’s a good
time to climb mountains and have a picnic.
As for me, winter is the best season because it’s great fun to
make snowmen with friends!
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