摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕七年级上册Unit 1 Friendship主题写作,从话题词汇(如same, describe)和佳句仿写(教材原句转化,如turn to sb for help)导入,通过范文进阶攻略(审题、列提纲、初级到高阶作文对比)搭建从词句到篇章的学习支架,帮助学生系统提升写作能力。
其特色在于分层训练提升核心素养,通过教材原句仿写强化语言能力,列提纲和高阶表达替换(如As the saying goes)培养思维品质,实战演讲稿写作增强学习能力。教师可利用清晰教学步骤和参考范文提高效率,学生能在分层训练中逐步掌握写作技巧,提升英语表达水平。
内容正文:
英 语
七年级上册 HN
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Unit 1 Friendship
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课时同步训练
Section 3 Speaking & Writing
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.相同的 ______
2.描述 __________
3.外貌 ____________
4.直的 __________
same
describe
appearance
straight
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5.中等身高 _______________
6.擅长 ____________
7.遵守诺言 _____________________
8.互相尊敬 ____________________
medium height
be good at
keep one’s promise
respect each other
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二、佳句仿写
9.【教材原句】When I meet difficult maths problems, I turn to him for help.
(turn to sb for help)
→仿写:当我遇到麻烦时,我会向吉姆寻求帮助。
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10.【教材原句】With his help, my maths has improved a lot.(with sb’s help)
→仿写:在琳达的帮助下,我在语文取得了更好的成绩。
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When I meet trouble, I will turn to Jim for help.
With Linda’s help, I have got better scores in Chinese.
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11.【教材原句】Friendships are not only about having fun, but also about love,
honesty, understanding and trust.(not only... but also...)
→仿写:彼得不仅在学习上帮助我,课后也经常照顾我。
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12.【教材原句】I can trust her and I share my thoughts with her.(share sth
with sb)
→仿写:我们可以互相分享一切,玩得很开心。
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Peter not only helps me in studies, but also takes care of me after
school.
We can share everything with each other and have fun.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
友谊在人的一生中非常重要。假如你是李华(Li Hua),你的英国网友彼得
(Peter)昨天发了一封电子邮件给你,问及你对友谊的看法,请你给他回一封电
子邮件,说说你对友谊的看法等。
词数:80—100
提示:
(1)What do you think about friendship?
(2)What do you consider is important in friendship? (At least 2 points)
(3)What are the reasons?
参考词汇:观点 viewpoint;永恒的 everlasting
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Dear Peter,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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第1步 审题目
体裁:应用文
时态:一般现在时
人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
内容要点:对友谊的看法;友谊中重要的是什么及理由。
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为三段式分步介绍。
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第3步 写作进阶
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Dear Peter,
Hello! I am happy to get
your email. I want to talk about
friendship with you.A saying says,
“Friendship is like sunshine.”①I
think good friends are important.
We can share things and have
fun. ________________________________
Dear Peter,
Hello! I am happy to get your email. I
want to talk about friendship with you.As
the saying goes, “Friendship is like
sunshine.”(用As the saying goes替换A
saying says)① I think good friends are
important. We can share things and have fun.
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First, I think honesty and
kindness are important in
friendship.When you have
problems, your friend tells you
the truth and helps you.②Second,
we need to respect friends. We
should treat friends like we want
to be treated.③ First, I think honesty and kindness are
important in friendship. When you. .are in
trouble, he or she always tells you the truth
and. .is willing to. .help you correct your
mistakes.(用be in trouble替换have
problems,用be willing to体现主动性)②
Second, I. .think it’s important
to. .respect. .each other,because. .we should
respect our. .
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What about yours? Finally, I
hope our friendship is everlasting.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua friends and treat them. .the way. .we want to
be treated.(用the way引导方式状语从句,升
级句式)③
What about yours? Finally, I hope our
friendship is everlasting.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
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第三阶 实战强化训练
为引导同学们正确交友,学校英文社团决定开展一场英语演讲比赛。假如你
是李华,请你以“____ (Kindness/Honesty/Patience/...) makes____ my true friend”
为题,写一篇不少于80词的演讲稿。
写作提示:
(1)补全标题;(2)说明原因;(3)你的感受。
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【参考范文】
Honesty makes David my true friend
David is honest with me, so he becomes my true friend.
He never tells lies.When I make a mistake, he will point it
out.With his help, my grades have improved a lot.Besides, he always
keeps his promise.If he promises to support me, he will surely do
it.This makes me count on him and trust him very much.
I think a true friend is not only one who plays with you, but also
someone who is honest.So I advise you all to make honest friends.
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