Unit 1 A new start 给父母写回信（单元写作精练）英语新教材外研版版七年级上册

**基本信息** 以“写回信”为核心，通过词汇句式积累、结构规划及分层训练，系统提升初中英语应用文写作能力，融合语言能力与思维品质培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作主题指导|1个核心主题|书信结构四分段（问候/见闻/想法/祝福），对比思维运用|从体裁规范到内容组织，构建“格式-内容-情感”表达逻辑| |词汇句式积累|15词+10句|主题词汇分类记忆，功能句型仿写训练|词-句-篇递进，夯实语言表达基础| |典例解析|1篇完整范文|要点覆盖法（起源/好处/流派），高级句式（倒装/定语从句）|以题载法，示范“审题-构思-表达”解题流程| |基础训练|10汉译英+5句型仿写|主题词汇精准翻译，句型结构套用|强化语言知识向语言能力转化| |提升训练|5篇感恩写作|情感真挚表达，生活小事细节展开|从基础应用到情感升华，培养跨情境写作迁移能力|

Unit 1 A new start 给父母写回信 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 ✍给父母写回信 本单元写作任务是Mia写给父母的回信，体裁书信。你可以模拟刚升入初中的学生，向父母分享在校一周的经历。内容可以包含新认识的伙伴、课堂学到的知识、遇到的困难与收获，讲讲自己独立生活的感受。你可以表达一开始的不安，再写自己慢慢适应校园；主动告诉父母不用担心，自己可以照顾好自己，同时说明未来的学习目标。写作重点练习代词，运用对比思维。书信格式规范，语气真诚温暖，分为问候、校园见闻、内心想法、向父母送上祝福。 📚【词汇积累】 1. write a reply 写回信 2. adapt to 适应 3. worry about 担心 4. share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某事 5. meet difficulties 遇到困难 6. keep positive 保持乐观 7. take care of oneself 照顾自己 8. new start 新起点 9. learn from mistakes 从错误中学习 10. daily lessons 日常课程 11. feel lonely 感到孤单 12. hold on 坚持下去 13. follow one’s advice 听从某人建议 14. achieve one’s goal 实现目标 15. all the best 一切顺利 💡【句式积累】 1. Thank you for your letter and your care. 感谢你们的来信与关心。 2. I am slowly adapting to my new school life. 我正在慢慢适应我的校园新生活。 3. Don’t worry about me. I can take good care of myself. 不要担心我，我可以照顾好自己。 4. I have some new friends and we share lots of interesting things. 我交到新朋友，我们分享很多趣事。 5. Sometimes I meet difficulties, but I will not give up. 有时我遇到困难，但我不会放弃。 6. Every day is a new start for me. 对我而言每一天都是新起点。 7. I will learn from my mistakes and make progress. 我会从错误中学习，取得进步。 8. I hope you can keep healthy and happy at home. 希望你们在家健康开心。 9. I will follow your advice and work harder. 我会听从你们的建议，更加努力。 10. I believe I can achieve my small goals step by step. 我相信我可以一步步实现小目标。 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jackson想来中国学习中国功夫（武术）。请你写封邮件，向他介绍相关内容： 1. 武术的起源（约2500年前）；2. 练习武术的好处；3. 武术中著名的流派。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3. 开头语和结束语已给出。 参考词汇：流派 form ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1. 身份：李华；收信人：外国笔友Jackson，语气友好自然，私人电子邮件文体 2. 核心任务：介绍中国武术，三大要点必须全部覆盖，不能缺项 ①起源：追溯至大约2500年前，历史悠久 ②习武好处：强身健体；磨炼意志；讲究礼仪、修身养性，不止打斗技巧 ③著名流派：少林功夫、太极拳是全球最知名两大流派 3. 词数要求：100词左右，不要过长；题干给出开头结尾，写作只需要填充主体段落 4. 主题内核：文化传播，纠正外国人“功夫只是格斗”的片面认知 行文结构规划（三段主体） 段落1：承接来信，引出话题，简单说明武术悠久历史（2500年前起源） 段落2：介绍练习武术双重益处：强健体魄，塑造品格、崇尚武德 段落3：介绍知名流派，举例少林功夫、太极；可以顺带欢迎他来华学习 Dear Jackson, I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China to learn Chinese kung fu. Now let me introduce something about it. Chinese kung fu, also called Wushu, dates back to about 2,500 years ago. Practising it brings many benefits. Not only can it strengthen your body, but it also helps develop perseverance and self-discipline. Besides, it stresses good manners and inner peace rather than simply fighting. There are various famous forms of kung fu. Shaolin Kung Fu and Tai Chi are the most world-famous ones. I’m convinced you will have a fantastic learning experience here. Looking forward to your arrival. Yours, Li Hua 1. 结构亮点 严格对应题目三个要点，层次清晰；句式长短结合，逻辑过渡自然（besides / what’s more），阅卷可以快速找到全部得分信息。 2. 加分词汇&短语 1. date back to 追溯到（历史话题高级短语，替代简单单词begin） 2. strengthen your body 强身健体 3. perseverance and self-discipline 毅力与自律 4. various famous forms 众多著名流派（贴合题干参考词form） 5. enjoy great popularity 享有盛誉 3. 高级句式（新高考加分核心） ①倒装句：Not only can it strengthen your body, but it also helps develop perseverance （书面表达经典加分句型，摆脱通篇简单陈述句） ②定语从句：which began around 2,500 years ago 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 1. 一个新开端 2. 一则名言 3. 理解一则名言 4. 初中第一课 5. 代词（语法） 6. 比较两件事 7. 给父母写回信 8. 描述个人问题 9. 初中新生活 10. 结交新朋友 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：It is a challenge for sb. to do sth. 例句：It was a big challenge for me to fit in senior high. (1) 适应初中节奏对我来说是一大挑战。 (2) 勇敢面对新难题对青少年是一种挑战。 句型2：Taking part in…helps me… 例句：Taking part in extra-curricular activities helps me grow. (1) 参加课堂讨论帮助我敢于表达想法。 (2) 加入学习小组帮助我查漏补缺。 句型3：I find it rewarding to do sth. 例句：I find it rewarding to develop my hobbies after school. (1) 我发现持续反思学习十分有意义。 (2) 我发现主动求助能够取得进步。 句型4：encourage sb. to do sth. 例句：My teacher encourages me to try new things. (1) 新朋友们鼓励我勇敢尝试。 (2) 这次经历鼓励我设立新目标。 句型5：Sb. feel(s) lucky to do sth. 例句：I feel lucky to meet so many helpful teachers. (1) 我很幸运能够拥有全新的开始。 (2) 他很幸运可以在新学校遇见知己。 【提升必做】 （一） 假如你是李华，你的母亲一直无微不至地照顾你、鼓励你，请你以“Thank My Mother”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文，表达对母亲的感恩之情。 要求：语句通顺，逻辑清晰，情感真挚，可结合生活小事展开。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Thank My Mother My mother is the person I love most in my life. She is kind and hard-working. Every morning, she gets up early to make breakfast for me. When I feel worried about my exams, she always comforts me and encourages me to be confident. She not only takes good care of my daily life, but also teaches me to be a good person. I used to be naughty and make her angry, but she never blames me. Now I realize how great her love is. I want to say thank you to my dear mom. I will study harder and try my best to make her proud. （二） 父亲节/母亲节即将到来，请你给父母写一封感谢信，感谢他们多年的养育与付出，说说自己的感悟和未来的打算，词数80-100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 （三） 生活中，父母的爱藏在点点滴滴的小事里，请以“Love in Small Things”为题，写一篇短文，讲述一件父母关爱你的小事，表达感恩之心，词数80-100词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】 （四） 父爱如山，沉默却厚重。请你写一篇短文，介绍自己的父亲，表达对父亲的感恩，词数70-90词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】 （五） 请以“Learn to Be Grateful to Family”为题，写一篇议论文，谈谈我们为什么要感恩家人，以及我们应该怎么做，词数80-100词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $Unit 1 A new start 给父母写回信 单元写作精练 【写作主题】 ✍给父母写回信 本单元写作任务是Mia写给父母的回信，体裁书信。你可以模拟刚升入初中的学生，向父母分享在校一周的经历。内容可以包含新认识的伙伴、课堂学到的知识、遇到的困难与收获，讲讲自己独立生活的感受。你可以表达一开始的不安，再写自己慢慢适应校园；主动告诉父母不用担心，自己可以照顾好自己，同时说明未来的学习目标。写作重点练习代词，运用对比思维。书信格式规范，语气真诚温暖，分为问候、校园见闻、内心想法、向父母送上祝福。 📚【词汇积累】 1. write a reply 写回信 2. adapt to 适应 3. worry about 担心 4. share sth. with sb. 和某人分享某事 5. meet difficulties 遇到困难 6. keep positive 保持乐观 7. take care of oneself 照顾自己 8. new start 新起点 9. learn from mistakes 从错误中学习 10. daily lessons 日常课程 11. feel lonely 感到孤单 12. hold on 坚持下去 13. follow one’s advice 听从某人建议 14. achieve one’s goal 实现目标 15. all the best 一切顺利 💡【句式积累】 1. Thank you for your letter and your care. 感谢你们的来信与关心。 2. I am slowly adapting to my new school life. 我正在慢慢适应我的校园新生活。 3. Don’t worry about me. I can take good care of myself. 不要担心我，我可以照顾好自己。 4. I have some new friends and we share lots of interesting things. 我交到新朋友，我们分享很多趣事。 5. Sometimes I meet difficulties, but I will not give up. 有时我遇到困难，但我不会放弃。 6. Every day is a new start for me. 对我而言每一天都是新起点。 7. I will learn from my mistakes and make progress. 我会从错误中学习，取得进步。 8. I hope you can keep healthy and happy at home. 希望你们在家健康开心。 9. I will follow your advice and work harder. 我会听从你们的建议，更加努力。 10. I believe I can achieve my small goals step by step. 我相信我可以一步步实现小目标。 【原题呈现】 假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Jackson想来中国学习中国功夫（武术）。请你写封邮件，向他介绍相关内容： 1. 武术的起源（约2500年前）；2. 练习武术的好处；3. 武术中著名的流派。 注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3. 开头语和结束语已给出。 参考词汇：流派 form ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【审题构思】 1. 身份：李华；收信人：外国笔友Jackson，语气友好自然，私人电子邮件文体 2. 核心任务：介绍中国武术，三大要点必须全部覆盖，不能缺项 ①起源：追溯至大约2500年前，历史悠久 ②习武好处：强身健体；磨炼意志；讲究礼仪、修身养性，不止打斗技巧 ③著名流派：少林功夫、太极拳是全球最知名两大流派 3. 词数要求：100词左右，不要过长；题干给出开头结尾，写作只需要填充主体段落 4. 主题内核：文化传播，纠正外国人“功夫只是格斗”的片面认知 行文结构规划（三段主体） 段落1：承接来信，引出话题，简单说明武术悠久历史（2500年前起源） 段落2：介绍练习武术双重益处：强健体魄，塑造品格、崇尚武德 段落3：介绍知名流派，举例少林功夫、太极；可以顺带欢迎他来华学习 【范文欣赏】 Dear Jackson, I’m glad to hear that you’re coming to China to learn Chinese kung fu. Now let me introduce something about it. Chinese kung fu, also called Wushu, dates back to about 2,500 years ago. Practising it brings many benefits. Not only can it strengthen your body, but it also helps develop perseverance and self-discipline. Besides, it stresses good manners and inner peace rather than simply fighting. There are various famous forms of kung fu. Shaolin Kung Fu and Tai Chi are the most world-famous ones. I’m convinced you will have a fantastic learning experience here. Looking forward to your arrival. Yours, Li Hua 【亮点解析】 1. 结构亮点 严格对应题目三个要点，层次清晰；句式长短结合，逻辑过渡自然（besides / what’s more），阅卷可以快速找到全部得分信息。 2. 加分词汇&短语 1. date back to 追溯到（历史话题高级短语，替代简单单词begin） 2. strengthen your body 强身健体 3. perseverance and self-discipline 毅力与自律 4. various famous forms 众多著名流派（贴合题干参考词form） 5. enjoy great popularity 享有盛誉 3. 高级句式（新高考加分核心） ①倒装句：Not only can it strengthen your body, but it also helps develop perseverance （书面表达经典加分句型，摆脱通篇简单陈述句） ②定语从句：which began around 2,500 years ago 【基础必做】 一、汉译英（主题要点翻译） 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. 一个新开端 2. 一则名言 3. 理解一则名言 4. 初中第一课 5. 代词（语法） 6. 比较两件事 7. 给父母写回信 8. 描述个人问题 9. 初中新生活 10. 结交新朋友 【答案】 1. a new start 解析：单元标题短语 2. a famous saying解析：saying 名词，格言、名言 3. understand a famous saying解析：understand 理解，及物动词 4. the first lesson解析：序数词前加the 5. pronouns解析：语法名词：代词（复数统称） 6. compare (two things)解析：compare 动词，比较；常搭配 compare A and B 7. write a reply to parents解析：a reply to sb. 给某人的回复 8. describe personal problems解析：personal 形容词，个人的 9. the new life at junior high解析：at junior high 在初中 10. make new friends解析：固定短语 make friends 交朋友 二、句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型1：It is a challenge for sb. to do sth. 例句：It was a big challenge for me to fit in senior high. (1) 适应初中节奏对我来说是一大挑战。 (2) 勇敢面对新难题对青少年是一种挑战。 【参考答案】 (1) It is a big challenge for me to get used to the rhythm of junior high. (2) It is a challenge for teenagers to face new difficulties bravely. 句型2：Taking part in…helps me… 例句：Taking part in extra-curricular activities helps me grow. (1) 参加课堂讨论帮助我敢于表达想法。 (2) 加入学习小组帮助我查漏补缺。 【参考答案】 (1) Taking part in class discussions helps me dare to express my ideas. (2) Taking part in the study group helps me find and fix my weak points. 句型3：I find it rewarding to do sth. 例句：I find it rewarding to develop my hobbies after school. (1) 我发现持续反思学习十分有意义。 (2) 我发现主动求助能够取得进步。 【参考答案】 (1) I find it rewarding to keep reflecting on my study. (2) I find it rewarding to ask for help actively and make progress. 句型4：encourage sb. to do sth. 例句：My teacher encourages me to try new things. (1) 新朋友们鼓励我勇敢尝试。 (2) 这次经历鼓励我设立新目标。 【参考答案】 (1) My new friends encourage me to have a try bravely. (2) This experience encourages me to set new goals. 句型5：Sb. feel(s) lucky to do sth. 例句：I feel lucky to meet so many helpful teachers. (1) 我很幸运能够拥有全新的开始。 (2) 他很幸运可以在新学校遇见知己。 【参考答案】 (1) I feel lucky to have a brand-new start. (2) He feels lucky to meet close friends in the new school. 【提升必做】 （一） 假如你是李华，你的母亲一直无微不至地照顾你、鼓励你，请你以“Thank My Mother”为题，写一篇80-100词的英语短文，表达对母亲的感恩之情。 要求：语句通顺，逻辑清晰，情感真挚，可结合生活小事展开。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Thank My Mother My mother is the person I love most in my life. She is kind and hard-working. Every morning, she gets up early to make breakfast for me. When I feel worried about my exams, she always comforts me and encourages me to be confident. She not only takes good care of my daily life, but also teaches me to be a good person. I used to be naughty and make her angry, but she never blames me. Now I realize how great her love is. I want to say thank you to my dear mom. I will study harder and try my best to make her proud. 核心词汇 1. take good care of 好好照顾 2. comfort 安慰 3. encourage 鼓励 4. confident 自信的 5. realize 意识到 6. make sb proud 让某人骄傲 高分好句 1. My mother is the person I love most in my life.（我的母亲是我生命中最爱的人。） 2. She not only takes good care of my daily life, but also teaches me to be a good person.（她不仅照顾我的日常生活，还教我做一个好人。） 3. I will study harder and try my best to make her proud.（我会更加努力学习，尽力让她为我骄傲。） （二） 父亲节/母亲节即将到来，请你给父母写一封感谢信，感谢他们多年的养育与付出，说说自己的感悟和未来的打算，词数80-100词，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【例文】 Dear Dad and Mom, I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you. You have given me life and taken care of me all the time. Since I was born, you have done so much for me. You cook delicious food, buy what I need and help me with my study. When I meet difficulties, you always stand by me and give me courage. You never ask for anything in return but only hope I can grow up happily and healthily. I am truly grateful for your selfless love. From now on, I will help you do more housework and study harder. I hope you can be healthy and happy forever. Yours, Li Hua 核心词汇 1. sincere 真诚的 2. express thanks 表达感谢 3. selfless love 无私的爱 4. courage 勇气 5. in return 作为回报 6. grow up 成长 高分好句 1. I’m writing to express my sincere thanks to you.（我写这封信是为了向你们表达我真挚的感谢。） 2. You never ask for anything in return but only hope I can grow up happily and healthily.（你们从不求回报，只希望我能健康快乐地成长。） 3. I am truly grateful for your selfless love.（我真心感激你们无私的爱。） （三） 生活中，父母的爱藏在点点滴滴的小事里，请以“Love in Small Things”为题，写一篇短文，讲述一件父母关爱你的小事，表达感恩之心，词数80-100词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】 Love in Small Things Parents’ love is everywhere in our life, and it hides in small daily things. I still remember a cold winter night. I had a high fever late at night. My parents were so worried that they took me to the hospital at once. My mom stayed with me all night and kept taking my temperature. My dad bought my favorite food for me the next morning. At that moment, I felt warm and deeply moved. Their love is not big words, but small and warm actions. I will cherish this love and be grateful to them forever. 核心词汇 1. hide 隐藏 2. have a high fever 发高烧 3. worried 担心的 4. take one’s temperature 量体温 5. moved 感动的 6. cherish 珍惜 高分好句 1. Parents’ love is everywhere in our life, and it hides in small daily things.（父母的爱在我们生活中无处不在，它藏在日常的小事里。） 2. Their love is not big words, but small and warm actions.（他们的爱不是豪言壮语，而是微小又温暖的行动。） 3. I will cherish this love and be grateful to them forever.（我会珍惜这份爱，永远感恩他们。） （四） 父爱如山，沉默却厚重。请你写一篇短文，介绍自己的父亲，表达对父亲的感恩，词数70-90词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】 Be Grateful to My Father My father is a quiet man, but his love for me is deep and strong. He is always busy with work to support our family. He seldom says “I love you”, but he does everything for me. Every time I fail in exams, he never criticizes me. Instead, he helps me find out my mistakes and encourages me not to give up. He teaches me to be brave and strong. Thanks to my father, I grow up with full of love. I am so lucky to have him as my father. I love him forever. 核心词汇 1. support family 养家 2. criticize 批评 3. give up 放弃 4. brave 勇敢的 5. thanks to 多亏了 6. lucky 幸运的 高分好句 1. My father is a quiet man, but his love for me is deep and strong.（我的父亲不善言辞，但他对我的爱深沉又浓厚。） 2. He teaches me to be brave and strong.（他教我变得勇敢和坚强。） 3. I am so lucky to have him as my father.（我很幸运有他做我的父亲。） （五） 请以“Learn to Be Grateful to Family”为题，写一篇议论文，谈谈我们为什么要感恩家人，以及我们应该怎么做，词数80-100词。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【例文】 Learn to Be Grateful to Family It’s important for us to learn to be grateful to our family. Family love is the most precious love in the world. Our family members always care about us and help us when we are in need. They give us warm homes and endless love. So we should show our thanks to them. What can we do? We can help them do housework, listen to them carefully and study hard. We should also spend more time staying with them. Being grateful is a good quality. Let’s love our family and repay their love with small actions. 核心词汇 1. precious 珍贵的 2. endless love 无尽的爱 3. quality 品质 4. repay 回报 5. in need 在困境中 6. spend time 花费时间 高分好句 1. It’s important for us to learn to be grateful to our family.（学会感恩家人对我们来说很重要。） 2. Family love is the most precious love in the world.（亲情是世界上最珍贵的爱。） 3. Let’s love our family and repay their love with small actions.（让我们爱我们的家人，用微小的行动回报他们的爱。） $