Unit 1 Look It Up！ 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版英语八年级上册

**基本信息** 以人物介绍写作为核心，构建“词汇-句型-方法-训练”四维体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑构建能力，提升跨文化沟通与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|主题词汇（5类）、高频搭配（14组）、功能表达（4类）|分类整合人物描述核心语言要素|从基础词汇到功能句型，构建表达基础| |黄金句型库|开头/主体/结尾句型（12句）、句型升级（5组对比）|提供句式模板与升级路径|从简单句到复杂句，实现语言进阶| |高分写作方法|5步法（审题定位到检查修改）|明确写作流程与要点（如三段式结构、时态运用）|按“内容-结构-语言”逻辑递进| |阶梯训练|句子训练（3Level）、篇章训练（2篇范文）|通过汉译英、仿写、升级实现能力迁移|从句子到篇章，难度梯度提升|

Unit 1 Look It Up！ 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 人物身份与职业 painter 画家 inventor 发明家 musician 音乐家 engineer 工程师 scientist 科学家 artist 艺术家 writer 作家 designer 设计师 physicist 物理学家 mathematician 数学家 editor 编辑 astronaut 宇航员 描述人物品质 intelligent 有才智的；聪明的 talented 有才能的；天才的 artistic 有艺术天赋的 extremely 极其；非常 unusually 不寻常地 genius 天才 creative 有创造力的 hard-working 勤奋的 patient 有耐心的 生平与经历 be born in 出生于 from an early age 从小 grow up 长大 show great intelligence 展现出极大的才智 learn to do 学习做 study in 在……学习 work as 作为……工作 go back a long way 历史悠久 成就与作品 notebook 笔记本 vehicle 交通工具 painting 绘画 invention 发明 work 作品 piece 一首；一篇 achievement 成就 discovery 发现 theory 理论 奖励与荣誉 prize 奖赏；奖励 award 奖项 medal 奖牌 receive 收到；获得 win 赢得 2. 高频搭配 be born in ... 出生于…… from an early age 从小 show great talent in ... 在……方面展现出巨大天赋 be talented in ... 在……方面有天赋 learn to do something 学习做某事 be famous for ... 以……而闻名 be known as ... 作为……而闻名 change the way we think about ... 改变我们对……的看法 be related to ... 与……有关 play an important role 起重要作用 go back a long way 历史悠久 be similar to ... 与……相似 look up 查阅 3. 写作功能表达 介绍人物基本信息 ... was born in ... in ... ……于……年出生于…… ... was a ... ……是一位…… ... was from ... ……来自…… ... is known as ... ……被称为…… 描述生平经历 From an early age，he / she showed great ... 从小，他/她就展现出极大的…… He / She studied ... at ... 他/她在……学习…… He / She worked as ... 他/她从事……工作。 He / She spent ... years doing ... 他/她花了……年做…… 描述成就与贡献 He / She is famous for ... 他/她因……而闻名。 One of his / her most famous works is ... 他/她最著名的作品之一是…… He / She invented / created ... 他/她发明/创造了…… He / She wrote ... 他/她写了…… His / Her discovery changed the way we ... 他/她的发现改变了我们……的方式。 描述奖项与影响 He / She received ... for ... 他/她因……获得…… He / She won the ... prize. 他/她赢得了……奖。 His / Her work has influenced ... 他/她的作品影响了…… He / She is still remembered as ... 他/她至今仍被铭记为…… 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 ... was born in ... in ... ……于……年出生于…… ... was an Italian painter，inventor，musician，engineer and scientist. ……是一位意大利画家、发明家、音乐家、工程师和科学家。 ... is one of the most famous ... in history. ……是历史上最著名的……之一。 Let me introduce ... to you. 让我向你介绍…… 2. 主体句型 From an early age，he / she showed great intelligence and artistic talent. 从小，他/她就展现出极大的才智和艺术天赋。 He / She studied ... and learnt to do many different things. 他/她学习了……并学会做许多不同的事情。 He / She is famous for his / her ... 他/她因……而闻名。 One of his / her most famous works is ... 他/她最著名的作品之一是…… He / She also had many inventions，including ... 他/她还有许多发明，包括…… His / Her notebooks include interesting drawings of ... 他/她的笔记本包括有趣的……画作。 3. 结尾句型 He / She changed the way we think about ... 他/她改变了我们对……的看法。 His / Her work is still important today. 他/她的作品至今仍然很重要。 He / She is remembered as one of the greatest ... of all time. 他/她被铭记为有史以来最伟大的……之一。 ... is a true genius in human history. ……是人类历史上真正的天才。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 He was born in Italy. 他出生于意大利。 Leonardo da Vinci was born in the countryside in Italy in 1452. 列奥纳多·达·芬奇于1452年出生于意大利的乡村。 He was very smart. 他很聪明。 He was extremely intelligent and unusually talented in many different fields. 他极其聪明，在许多不同领域都异常有才华。 He painted Mona Lisa. 他画了《蒙娜丽莎》。 One of his most famous paintings，the Mona Lisa，is perhaps the most famous painting in the world. 他最著名的画作之一《蒙娜丽莎》或许是世界上最著名的画作。 He had inventions. 他有一些发明。 His notebooks include many interesting drawings of flying machines and other vehicles. 他的笔记本包括许多有趣的飞行器和其他车辆的画作。 He was a genius. 他是一个天才。 He was a true genius，and his paintings and inventions changed the way we think about art and science. 他是一个真正的天才，他的绘画和发明改变了我们对艺术和科学的看法。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作任务。写作内容应包括该人物的基本信息（姓名、国籍、生卒年份）、职业身份、主要生平经历、突出成就、获得的奖项和称号以及对社会的贡献和影响。 写作要求： 以客观事实为主，避免主观评价 时态要求： 一般过去时（描述已发生的生平事件）和一般现在时（描述作品和影响的现状） Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：基本信息 介绍人物的姓名、国籍、生卒年份、职业身份（画家、科学家、发明家等），点出该人物的总体定位。 第二段：生平与成就 按时间顺序描述人物的成长经历、学习经历、主要成就和重要作品，补充具体细节和事实。 第三段：荣誉与影响 介绍人物获得的奖项、荣誉称号，说明其对社会的贡献和影响，总结其历史地位。 Step 3 丰富内容 不要只写简单信息，要加入具体年份、具体作品名称和具体成就细节。例如不只写“He was a painter.”，还要写“He painted the Mona Lisa，which is perhaps the most famous painting in the world.” Step 4 提升语言 使用一般过去时（was born，studied，invented，wrote，received）、被动语态（was known as，was awarded）、连接词（and，because，so，such as）和客观陈述语气。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整、结构是否清晰（三段式）、时态是否正确、事实是否准确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 列奥纳多·达·芬奇于1452年出生于意大利。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 达·芬奇是一位画家、发明家、音乐家、工程师和科学家。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 他极其聪明，在许多不同领域都异常有才华。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 他著名的画作之一是《蒙娜丽莎》。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 他的绘画和发明改变了我们对艺术和科学的看法。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：... was born in ... in ...（介绍出生信息） 例句： Leonardo da Vinci was born in the countryside in Italy in 1452. （1）阿尔伯特·爱因斯坦于1879年出生于德国。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）玛丽·居里于1867年出生于波兰。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：... was a ...（介绍职业身份） 例句： Leonardo da Vinci was an Italian painter，inventor，musician，engineer and scientist. （1）聂耳是中国著名的音乐家。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）屠呦呦是一位科学家，她发现了青蒿素。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：From an early age，... showed ...（描述早年才华） 例句： From an early age，he showed great intelligence and artistic talent. （1）从小，她就展现出对音乐的极大兴趣。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）从小，他就展现出非凡的数学才能。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：He / She is famous for ...（描述成名原因） 例句： He is famous for his paintings and inventions. （1）她因在科学领域的贡献而闻名。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）他因发现万有引力定律而闻名。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：One of his / her most famous ... is ...（描述代表作品） 例句： One of his most famous paintings is the Mona Lisa. （1）他最著名的发明之一是飞行器设计。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）他最著名的著作之一是《时间简史》。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：He / She changed the way we ...（描述影响） 例句： His paintings and inventions changed the way we think about art and science. （1）他的理论改变了我们思考宇宙的方式。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）她的发现改变了我们治疗疾病的方式。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：He was born in Italy. 升级句：Leonardo da Vinci was born in the countryside in Italy in 1452. 1. 基础句：He was very smart. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：He painted Mona Lisa. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：He had inventions. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：He was a genius. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：She was a great scientist. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：His work is important. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于Mark Twain的介绍。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇关于马克·吐温的短文。 内容包括： 1. 他是一位美国著名作家，写了许多著名的小说。 2. 1835年出生于佛罗里达州的农村，4岁时和家人搬到城里，12岁时，其父亲去世。 3. 从童年就开始工作，做过许多不同的工作。 4. 最著名的小说：《汤姆·索亚历险记》。 5. 他的写作才能不是与生俱来，而是来源于他个人的经历。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你叫李俊，你的笔友David对中国诺贝尔医学奖获得者屠呦呦很感兴趣。他最近给你写了一封信，询问有关屠呦呦的情况。请给David写一封回信。 屠呦呦自幼对医学(medicine)很感兴趣，于1955年毕业于(graduated)北京医学院(Beijing Medical College)，毕业后一直从事医学研究(medical research)。她工作认真负责，不怕失败，甚至经常带病工作，致力于为中国医学做出贡献(make contributions)。 Place of birth(出生地点) Ningbo, Zhejiang Province Date of birth(出生日期) December 30, 1930 Career(职业) a physician(医学家) Characteristics(性格) Hard-working, creative, full of talent Achievements(成就) the 2015 Nobel Prize in Medicine (October 5, 2015) 你的启发 (至少两点) 写作要求： 1.文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可作适当发挥； 2.表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名； 4.字数要求80词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear David, Thanks for your letter. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Jun 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. Leonardo da Vinci was born in Italy in 1452. 2. Leonardo da Vinci was a painter，inventor，musician，engineer and scientist. 3. He was extremely intelligent and unusually talented in many different fields. 4. One of his famous paintings is the Mona Lisa. 5. His paintings and inventions changed the way we think about art and science. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）Albert Einstein was born in Germany in 1879. （2）Marie Curie was born in Poland in 1867. 句型 2 （1）Nie Er was a famous musician in China. （2）Tu Youyou is a scientist who discovered artemisinin. 句型 3 （1）From an early age，she showed great interest in music. （2）From an early age，he showed extraordinary talent in maths. 句型 4 （1）She is famous for her contributions to science. （2）He is famous for discovering the law of gravity. 句型 5 （1）One of his most famous inventions is the flying machine design. （2）One of his most famous works is A Brief History of Time. 句型 6 （1）His theory changed the way we think about the universe. （2）Her discovery changed the way we treat diseases. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：He was extremely intelligent and unusually talented in many different fields，such as painting，music and engineering. 2. 升级句：One of his most famous paintings，the Mona Lisa，is perhaps the most famous painting in the world. 3. 升级句：His notebooks include many interesting drawings of flying machines and other vehicles，which showed his great creativity. 4. 升级句：He was a true genius，and his paintings and inventions changed the way we think about art and science. 5. 升级句：She was a great scientist whose discovery of artemisinin has saved millions of lives around the world. 6. 升级句：His work is still important today and has influenced generations of scientists and thinkers. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．例文 Mark Twain was a very famous American writer. He was unusually talented in writing and wrote many famous novels. He was born in a small village in Florida in 1835. When he was 4 years old, he and his family moved to the city. Sadly, his father died when he was 12. From an early age, he started to work. He did many different jobs to make money. One of his most famous books is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. This book made him very popular and won him lots of praise. Mark Twain spent all his life writing. His writing ability came from his rich personal experiences rather than innate talent. He made great contributions to American literature and played an important role in the world of books. 2．例文： Dear David, Thanks for your letter. You said you were interested in Tu Youyou. Now I’ll tell you something about her. Tu Youyou is a famous female physician. She was born on December 30, 1930 in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province. She has been very interested in medicine since childhood. She graduated from Beijing Medical College in 1955. She has been engaged in medical research since graduation. This is her favorite job. She works hard and she is creative. She is not afraid of failure, and even often works with illness. She often works day and night. She is full of talent. She devoted herself to the research a drug which is useful for cancer patients. After years of unremitting efforts, she finally succeeded. And in 2015, she won the Nobel Prize in Medicine. She has made great contributions to Chinese medicine. I am really proud of her. I will study hard and try to get into my dream university. I also want to be a useful person to society in the future, just like her.                                                    Yours sincerely, Li Jun 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $