Unit 2 On the money 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年英语外研版九年级上册

**基本信息** 以“金钱管理”为主题，构建“词汇-句型-方法-训练”四维写作体系，系统培养语言组织与逻辑表达能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作素材库|5类主题词汇+18个高频搭配|分类整合功能词汇，强化语境应用|从基础词汇到搭配表达，构建主题词网| |黄金句型库|4类核心句型+5组升级示例|提供开头-主体-结尾框架，通过对比实现句型优化|从基础句到复合句，体现语言能力进阶| |高分写作方法|5步写作流程|审题定位→结构搭建→内容丰富→语言提升→检查修改|按写作逻辑链拆解任务，培养思维品质| |阶梯训练|3级句子训练+2篇篇章写作|通过汉译英、仿写、升级实现能力分层突破|从单句到篇章，形成渐进式训练路径|

Unit 2 On the Money 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 金钱相关名词 money 金钱 pocket money 零花钱 lucky money 压岁钱 saving 积蓄；存钱 account 账户 budget 预算 cost 费用 price 价格 dollar 美元 cent 分 penny 一分钱 cash 现金 coin 硬币 note 纸币 dream tin 梦想储蓄罐 piggy bank 储蓄罐 金钱相关动词 save 储蓄；节省 spend 花费 manage 管理 budget 编制预算 deal with 处理 waste 浪费 earn 赚取 donate 捐赠 afford 负担得起 double 使翻倍 invest 投资 pay 支付 故事相关词汇 title 标题 writer 作者 character 人物 plot 情节 surprise ending 出人意料的结局 treasure 珍宝；珍品 couple 一对夫妇 prize 奖赏；奖励 描述品质的形容词 wise 明智的 valuable 有价值的 poor 贫穷的 rich 富有的 generous 慷慨的 mean 吝啬的 thankful 感激的 2. 高频搭配 deal with 处理；对付 manage money 理财 budget their money 编制预算 make a plan 制定计划 save money 存钱 spend money 花钱 waste money 浪费钱 donate money 捐赠钱 make a start 开始 mix up 弄混；弄乱 make sense 有意义；讲得通 go on 继续 on average 平均而言 ten times more 十倍多 nothing but 只有；仅仅 pay for 支付 even though 尽管 break one’s heart 使某人心碎 3. 写作功能表达 说明计划目的 I’d like to present my plan for using my lucky money. 我想展示我的压岁钱使用计划。 First, I plan to ... 首先，我计划…… Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to ... 除了满足我的需求，我还计划…… 说明用途 I’ll use it for ... 我将把它用于…… It can be used to ... 它可以用来…… I’ve decided to ... 我决定…… 说明理由 Because I want to ... 因为我想…… That’s why ... 那就是为什么…… When I...， I can... 当我……时，我能…… 评价计划 It’s a chance for me to understand the true value of ... 这是一个让我理解……真正价值的机会。 This idea will teach us that ... 这个主意将教会我们…… 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 I’d like to present my plan for using my lucky money received for the Spring Festival. 我想展示我的压岁钱使用计划。 Money plays an important role in our daily lives. 金钱在我们的日常生活中扮演着重要的角色。 I have learned a lot about money from the story I read. 从读过的故事中，我学到了很多关于金钱的东西。 2. 主体句型 First, I plan to save half of my lucky money in my bank account. 首先，我计划将压岁钱的一半存到我的银行账户里。 I also plan to spend some money on books. 我还计划花一些钱买书。 Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to donate some money to help people in need. 除了满足我的需求，我还计划捐赠一些钱帮助有需要的人。 When the tin is ready, put all the money that you have into it. 当储蓄罐准备好时，把你所有的钱都放进去。 It’s not about the number; it’s about what you do with it. 重要的不是数量，而是你用它做什么。 3. 结尾句型 It’s a chance for me to understand the true value of money. 这是我理解金钱真正价值的机会。 This plan will teach me how to manage my money wisely. 这个计划将教会我如何明智地管理金钱。 I believe that by doing this, I can learn to be more responsible with money. 我相信通过这样做，我能学会对金钱更负责任。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 I will use my lucky money. 我会用我的压岁钱。 I’d like to present my plan for using my lucky money received for the Spring Festival. 我想展示我的压岁钱使用计划。 I will save some money. 我会存一些钱。 First, I plan to save half of my lucky money in my bank account. 首先，我计划将压岁钱的一半存到银行账户里。 I will buy some books. 我会买一些书。 I also plan to spend some money on books because reading can help me learn more about the world. 我还计划花一些钱买书，因为阅读能帮我更多地了解世界。 I will help others. 我会帮助他人。 Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to donate some money to help people in need. 除了满足我的需求，我还计划捐赠一些钱帮助有需要的人。 I want to manage money well. 我想管理好金钱。 This plan will teach me how to manage my money wisely and understand the true value of money. 这个计划将教会我如何明智地管理金钱，理解金钱的真正价值。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作任务为“写一份关于使用压岁钱的计划”。写作内容应包括计划的目的、钱的具体用途（如储蓄、消费、捐赠等）及相应金额、使用理由以及预期收获。 写作形式： 计划说明（Plan） 写作对象： 老师或班级同学 时态要求： 一般现在时和一般将来时并用 Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：说明目的 介绍自己收到了压岁钱，说明制定计划的目的。 第二段：具体安排 分点说明钱的用途和理由。例如：一部分储蓄、一部分消费（买书、买文具等）、一部分捐赠或帮助他人。 第三段：总结与反思 说明制定这个计划的意义，表达自己对金钱管理的理解和期待。 Step 3 丰富内容 不要只简单列出花钱项目，要加入理由和细节。例如不只写“I will buy books.”，还要写“I plan to buy some books about history because I want to learn more about the past.” Step 4 提升语言 使用时间状语从句（when）、地点状语从句（where）、原因状语从句（because）、顺序词（first, second, finally）和情态动词（can, will, should），使文章条理清晰、内容具体。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整（目的→用途→理由→预期收获）、结构是否清晰（三段式）、when和where从句是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我想展示我的压岁钱使用计划。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 首先，我计划将压岁钱的一半存到我的银行账户里。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 我还计划花一些钱买书，因为阅读能帮我了解世界。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 除了满足我的需求，我还计划捐赠一些钱帮助有需要的人。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 这个计划将教会我如何明智地管理金钱。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：I’d like to present my plan for ...（说明计划目的） 例句： I’d like to present my plan for using my lucky money. （1）我想展示我的零花钱使用计划。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我想展示我的暑假学习计划。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：First, I plan to ...（说明第一步计划） 例句： First, I plan to save half of my lucky money. （1）首先，我计划将这笔钱的一部分存入银行。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）首先，我计划花一些钱为我的父母买礼物。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to ...（补充其他计划） 例句： Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to donate some money. （1）除了满足我的需求，我还计划帮助我的社区。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）除了为家人买礼物，我还计划为我的学习投资。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：It can be used to ...（说明用途） 例句： It can be used to buy books and help others. （1）这笔钱可以用来购买学习用品。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这些钱可以用来帮助贫穷的孩子们上学。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：That’s why ...（解释原因） 例句： That’s why I plan to save some money for the future. （1）这就是为什么我计划买书来学习新东西。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这就是为什么我决定捐赠一些钱帮助他人。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：It’s a chance for me to ...（评价机会） 例句： It’s a chance for me to understand the true value of money. （1）这是一个让我学会自己理财的机会。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）这是一个让我帮助他人并感到快乐的机会。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：I will use my lucky money. 升级句：I’d like to present my plan for using my lucky money received for the Spring Festival. 1. 基础句：I will save some money. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I will buy some books. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I will help others. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I want to manage money well. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：I have a plan. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：I want to be responsible. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．写一段话（至少5句）介绍你自己的压岁钱使用计划。说明你打算如何分配（例如：存多少、花多少、捐多少），并解释为什么这样安排。使用 I plan to..., I will..., because, besides, it’s a good way to... 等表达。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．写一段书评（至少5句）介绍一本你读过的关于金钱或礼物的书或故事。内容包括：书名、作者、主要人物、情节梗概、以及你的评论（你是否同意故事中的价值观）。使用 is known for, no exception, prized treasure, break one's heart, be shocked, turn out to be, more important than 等表达。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. I’d like to present my plan for using my lucky money. 2. First, I plan to save half of my lucky money in my bank account. 3. I also plan to spend some money on books because reading can help me learn about the world. 4. Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to donate some money to help people in need. 5. This plan will teach me how to manage my money wisely. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）I’d like to present my plan for using my pocket money. （2）I’d like to present my plan for my summer study. 句型 2 （1）First, I plan to save part of this money in the bank. （2）First, I plan to spend some money buying gifts for my parents. 句型 3 （1）Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to help my community. （2）Besides buying gifts for my family, I also plan to invest in my studies. 句型 4 （1）This money can be used to buy school supplies. （2）This money can be used to help poor children go to school. 句型 5 （1）That’s why I plan to buy books to learn new things. （2）That’s why I decided to donate some money to help others. 句型 6 （1）It’s a chance for me to learn to manage money by myself. （2）It’s a chance for me to help others and feel happy. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：First, I plan to save half of my lucky money in my bank account, so that I can use it in the future when needed. 2. 升级句：I also plan to spend some money on books because reading can help me learn more about the world and improve myself. 3. 升级句：Besides meeting my needs, I also plan to donate some money to help people in need, because I believe everyone should help others. 4. 升级句：This plan will teach me how to manage my money wisely and understand the true value of money. 5. 升级句：I have made a detailed plan for using my lucky money, which includes saving, spending and donating. 6. 升级句：I want to be responsible with money, so I have planned carefully how to use every cent of my lucky money. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1． I’d like to present my plan for my “lucky” money. First, I will save 50% in the bank for future needs like books and school supplies. It’s a good way to prepare for my study. Besides saving, I will use 30% to buy gifts for my parents because they work hard for me. I also plan to donate 20% to a children’s charity. It’s a good way to pass love, and helping others makes me happy and proud. This plan shows money’s true value: for myself as well as sharing and caring. I will record my spending to manage money better. Money is a tool, and using it wisely improves life. That’s my idea. Thank you. 2．示例： I read a short story The Gift of the Magi by O. Henry. He is known for surprising endings. The main characters are poor Della and Jim. Their prized treasures are her hair and his watch. They want to buy gifts for each other, so they sell their treasures. It almost breaks their hearts. They exchange gifts and are shocked. The gifts turn out to be useless. The story tells us love is more important than money. I fully agree with this value. True love lies in selfless giving. This story is no exception to O. Henry’s great works, and I love it very much. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $