Unit 5 Going on an exchange trip 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年沪教版英语八年级上册

该初中英语单元知识清单系统整合了“交换旅行”主题的写作专项训练内容，涵盖主题词汇、高频搭配、功能表达、黄金句型及高分写作方法五大知识范畴，为学生搭建从基础语言积累到篇章规范输出的递进式学习支架。 清单采用分类梳理与分级训练相结合的方式构建知识体系，如主题词汇按“交换旅行相关名词”“活动与体验”分类，句型库设“基础-升级”对比表，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。特别设计“阶梯训练”模块，从汉译英到句型仿写再到句子升级，适配不同学习水平，教师可依托此清单精准设计教学活动，学生能自主完成写作能力进阶。

Unit 5 Going on an Exchange Trip 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 交换旅行相关名词 exchange trip 交换旅行 exchange student 交换生 host family 寄宿家庭 host brother / sister 寄宿家庭的兄弟/姐妹 cultural exchange 文化交流 culture shock 文化冲击 experience 经历；体验 homesick 想家的 grateful 感激的 unforgettable 难忘的 benefit 益处；优势 independent 自主的 nervous 焦虑的；担忧的 活动与体验 visit places of interest 参观名胜古迹 learn about local culture 了解当地文化 try local food 品尝当地食物 make new friends 交新朋友 keep in touch 保持联系 go on tours 去旅行 dip the brush in ink 用笔蘸墨 paint on Xuan paper 在宣纸上作画 learn tai chi 学习太极 use chopsticks 使用筷子 speak a little Chinese 说一点中文 2. 高频搭配 stay with a host family 与寄宿家庭住在一起 go on a tour 去旅行 places of interest 名胜古迹 see ... in person 亲眼见到…… snake its way through 蜿蜒穿过 no doubt 毫无疑问 keep in touch with 与……保持联系 be grateful for 对……感激 learn about 了解 different from 与……不同 so far 到目前为止 come over 过来；来访 as soon as possible 尽快 from an early age 从小 go on an exchange trip 参加交换旅行 3. 写作功能表达 表达感谢 I’m writing to thank you for ... 我写信是为了感谢您…… Thank you so much for ... 非常感谢您…… I am really grateful that ... 我真的感激…… It was so kind of you to ... 您……真是太好了。 I am grateful that ... 我很感激…… 描述交换经历 I still remember the day when ... 我仍然记得那一天…… It has been a fantastic experience to ... 做……是一次绝妙的经历。 I have learnt a lot about ... 我学到了很多关于…… I felt like part of the family. 我感觉自己是这个家庭的一员。 The thing I miss most is ... 我最想念的是…… 表达愿望与祝福 I do hope that ... 我真的希望…… I hope you are well. 我希望您一切安好。 I plan to keep in touch with ... 我计划与……保持联系。 Best wishes to ... 向……致以最美好的祝愿。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 I hope you are well. 我希望您一切安好。 I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my exchange trip. 我写信是为了感谢您在我交换旅行期间的善意。 I am writing to express my thanks to you. 我写信是为了向您表达我的感谢。 How are you？ I’m writing to thank you for ... 您好吗？我写信是为了感谢您…… 2. 主体句型 It was so kind of you to let me stay in your home. 您让我住在您家里真是太好了。 I was very nervous at first，but your family made me feel at home. 起初我非常紧张，但您的家人让我感觉像在自己家一样。 I have learnt to use chopsticks and speak a little Chinese. 我学会了使用筷子，还能说一点中文。 It was an unforgettable experience to see the Great Wall in person. 亲眼看到长城是一次难忘的经历。 I still remember the day when you showed me how to make Chinese tea. 我仍然记得您教我泡中国茶的那一天。 3. 结尾句型 I do hope you can come to visit me in the UK one day. 我真的希望有一天您能来英国看我。 I will never forget your kindness and warm welcome. 我永远不会忘记您的善良和热情欢迎。 I hope to hear from you soon. 我希望能尽快收到您的来信。 Keep in touch！ 保持联系！ 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 Thank you for your help. 谢谢您的帮助。 I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my exchange trip. 我写信是为了感谢您在我交换旅行期间的善意。 Your family was friendly. 您的家人很友好。 I was very nervous at first，but your family made me feel at home. 起初我非常紧张，但您的家人让我感觉像在自己家一样。 I learnt a lot. 我学到了很多。 I have learnt to use chopsticks and speak a little Chinese during my stay with you. 在您家住期间，我学会了使用筷子，还能说一点中文。 I miss Beijing. 我想念北京。 The thing I miss most is the delicious Chinese food and our happy time together. 我最想念的是美味的中国菜和我们在一起的快乐时光。 I hope you can visit me. 我希望您能来看我。 I do hope you can come to visit me in the UK one day，and I will show you around my city. 我真的希望有一天您能来英国看我，我会带您参观我的城市。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作任务为“写一封感谢短文，感谢交流期间给予帮助的人”。写作内容应包括问候对方、说明写信目的、回顾帮助的具体事情、学到的文化知识、回国后的生活及思念，以及表达保持联系的愿望。 写作对象： 寄宿家庭成员或帮助过自己的人 时态要求： 一般过去时（回顾过去经历）和现在完成时（描述回国后的变化）并用 Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：问候与写作目的 问候对方是否安好，开门见山地说明写信的目的是表达感谢。 第二段：回顾经历与表达感谢 回顾交换期间印象深刻的1-2件具体事情（对方如何帮助自己、一起做了什么活动），表达感谢之情，说明从这次经历中学到了什么。 第三段：表达思念与祝愿 简述回国后的生活和感受，表达对对方的思念，邀请对方来访，送上祝愿。 Step 3 丰富内容 使用具体经历来体现感谢，避免空泛。例如不只写“Thank you for your help.”，还要写“Thank you for showing me how to make Chinese tea. I still remember the day when we sat together and enjoyed the tea.” Step 4 提升语言 使用现在完成时（have learnt，have been，haven’t visited...yet）、现在完成时与for/since连用（I have stayed...for...，I have been here since...）、感叹句（What an unforgettable trip！）、感谢句式（I’m writing to thank you for...； It was so kind of you to...）和连接词（so，because，although），使感谢邮件真挚感人。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整（问候→感谢→回顾→思念→祝愿）、结构是否清晰（三段式）、现在完成时是否正确。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我写信是为了感谢您在我交换旅行期间的善意。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 起初我非常紧张，但您的家人让我感觉像在自己家一样。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 在您家住期间，我学会了使用筷子，还能说一点中文。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 我仍然记得您教我泡中国茶的那一天。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 我真的希望有一天您能来英国看我。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：I’m writing to thank you for ...（说明写信目的） 例句： I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my exchange trip. （1）我写信是为了感谢您让我住在您家里。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我写信是为了感谢您带我参观北京的名胜古迹。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：I was nervous at first，but ...（描述感受变化） 例句： I was very nervous at first，but your family made me feel at home. （1）起初我对一切都感到陌生，但您的热情欢迎让我感觉很好。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）起初我对这里的食物不太适应，但很快我就爱上了中国菜。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：I have learnt to ... during my stay.（描述所学） 例句： I have learnt to use chopsticks and speak a little Chinese during my stay with you. （1）在您家住期间，我学会了如何泡中国茶。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）在交流期间，我学会了如何与人更好地沟通。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：I still remember the day when ...（回忆具体时刻） 例句： I still remember the day when you showed me how to make Chinese tea. （1）我仍然记得我们一起爬长城的那一天。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我仍然记得您教我说第一句中文的那一天。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：The thing I miss most is ...（表达思念） 例句： The thing I miss most is the delicious Chinese food. （1）我最想念的是我们在一起的快乐时光。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我最想念的是每天早上喝到您泡的热茶。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：I do hope that ...（表达真诚愿望） 例句： I do hope you can come to visit me in the UK one day. （1）我真的希望我们很快能再次见面。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我真的希望有一天能再去中国看您。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：Thank you for your help. 升级句：I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my exchange trip. 1. 基础句：Your family was friendly. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：I learnt a lot. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：I miss Beijing. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：I hope you can visit me. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：The trip was wonderful. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：I made new friends. 升级句：____________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．  假设你叫Mary Brown，是一名在北京待了一年的美国交换生。现在你要回国了，请根据下面的内容要点写一封感谢信，表达你对在北京期间给过你帮助的老师、同学及朋友们的感激之情。 内容包括： 1. 在老师和同学的帮助下，加入了学校社团，学到了很多东西。 2. 游览了很多北京的名胜，品尝了很多美食，并了解了中国的历史和文化。 3. 这是一次难忘的交流之旅。 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear everyone, I sincerely thank you for all the help you offered me over the past year. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you so much again.  Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Mary Brown 2．上月Frank来中国北京交换访学，在北京寄宿家庭中李先生家待了两个星期，他深刻感受到了寄宿家庭对他的关心和照顾，在北京两周中，他参加了各种各样的活动，参观了北京地区的名胜古迹，品尝了当地的美食，了解了不少的中国传统和文化，也交了中国朋友，他特别感谢李先生和夫人给他的关爱。假如你是Frank，请向他的寄宿家庭写一封感谢信，表达他的感谢之情。 To: Mr. Li and Mrs. Li Subject: Thank you Dear Mr and Mrs Li, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Frank 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. I’m writing to thank you for your kindness during my exchange trip. 2. I was very nervous at first，but your family made me feel at home. 3. I have learnt to use chopsticks and speak a little Chinese during my stay with you. 4. I still remember the day when you showed me how to make Chinese tea. 5. I do hope you can come to visit me in the UK one day. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）I’m writing to thank you for letting me stay in your home. （2）I’m writing to thank you for showing me around the places of interest in Beijing. 句型 2 （1）I was unfamiliar with everything at first，but your warm welcome made me feel good. （2）I didn’t like the food at first，but soon I fell in love with Chinese dishes. 句型 3 （1）I have learnt how to make Chinese tea during my stay with you. （2）I have learnt how to communicate better with others during the exchange trip. 句型 4 （1）I still remember the day when we climbed the Great Wall together. （2）I still remember the day when you taught me my first Chinese sentence. 句型 5 （1）The thing I miss most is our happy time together. （2）The thing I miss most is the hot tea you made for me every morning. 句型 6 （1）I do hope we can meet again soon. （2）I do hope I can go to China to see you again one day. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：I was very nervous at first，but your family made me feel at home from the very beginning. 2. 升级句：I have learnt to use chopsticks and speak a little Chinese during my stay with you，and I still practice every day. 3. 升级句：The thing I miss most is the delicious Chinese food and our happy time together at the dinner table. 4. 升级句：I do hope you can come to visit me in the UK one day，and I will show you around my city with great pleasure. 5. 升级句：It has been a fantastic experience to learn about Chinese culture and make so many wonderful memories. 6. 升级句：I have made many new friends during the exchange trip and we still keep in touch with each other. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．例文 Dear everyone, I sincerely thank you for all the help you offered me over the past year. When I first came to Beijing as an exchange student, I was uneasy about the unfamiliar life. Thanks to the kindness of teachers and classmates, I soon got used to everything. I took part in various school clubs and learned a great deal about traditional Chinese culture. I also toured many well-known places of interest and tasted a variety of delicious local snacks. Day by day, I have gained a deeper understanding of Chinese history and local customs. This exchange experience will stay in my memory forever. I will always cherish the time we spent together. Thank you so much again. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Mary Brown 2．例文 Dear Mr and Mrs Li, I’m writing to express my deepest thanks for your incredible care during my two-week stay in Beijing last month. Your family’s warmth made me feel right at home—from the tasty local dishes you prepared to the trips to iconic sites like the Forbidden City, every moment was unforgettable. I loved joining the cultural activities, learning about Chinese traditions, and even making Chinese friends, all thanks to your kindness. This exchange experience became so meaningful because of you. I’ll treasure these memories always and hope we can stay in touch. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours, Frank 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $