Unit 8 More than a Game 单元写作专项训练 2026-2027学年人教版九年级英语上册

Unit 8 More than a Game 单元写作专项训练 一、单元核心信息 二、写作素材库 1. 主题词汇 运动项目 sport 运动 athletics 田径 swimming 游泳 running 跑步 relay race 接力赛 long jump 跳远 high jump 跳高 shot-put 铅球 table tennis 乒乓球 tennis 网球 volleyball 排球 basketball 篮球 football 足球 skiing 滑雪 figure skating 花样滑冰 speed skating 速度滑冰 ski jumping 跳台滑雪 运动员相关词汇 athlete 运动员 runner 赛跑运动员 swimmer 游泳运动员 champion 冠军 medal 奖牌 gold medal 金牌 silver medal 银牌 bronze medal 铜牌 record 纪录 world record 世界纪录 Olympic record 奥运会纪录 coach 教练 teammate 队友 captain 队长 比赛与训练 competition 比赛 event 赛事 race 赛跑 training 训练 practice 练习 tryout 选拔赛 handoff 交接棒 finish line 终点线 starting line 起跑线 baton 接力棒 victory 胜利 defeat 失败 品质与精神 determination 决心 perseverance 坚持不懈 teamwork 团队合作 courage 勇气 strength 力量 spirit 精神 never give up 永不放弃 dream big 有远大梦想 work hard 努力工作 stay humble 保持谦逊 respect 尊重 2. 高频搭配 take part in 参加 compete in 在……中比赛 win a gold medal 赢得金牌 set a world record 创造世界纪录 break a record 打破纪录 train hard 刻苦训练 work as a team 团队合作 never give up 永不放弃 catch up with 追上 make up ground 追赶 take the lead 领先 cross the finish line 冲过终点线 sign up for 报名参加 look forward to 期待 be proud of 以……为自豪 try out for 参加……的选拔 help out 帮助 3. 写作功能表达 介绍运动员 My favourite athlete is ... 我最喜欢的运动员是…… He / She is a ... from ... 他/她是来自……的…… He / She is an athlete who ... 他/她是一位……的运动员。 描述经历与成就 He / She has won ... medals. 他/她赢得了……枚奖牌。 He / She set a new world record in ... 他/她在……中创造了新的世界纪录。 He / She trained hard for ... 他/她为……刻苦训练。 Although he / she ...，he / she never gave up. 虽然他/她……，但他/她从不放弃。 表达敬佩与启发 I admire him / her because ... 我敬佩他/她，因为…… His / Her story teaches me that ... 他/她的故事教会我…… He / She is a true example of ... 他/她是……的真正榜样。 I am inspired by ... 我受到……的激励。 三、黄金句型库 1. 开头句型 My favourite athlete is ... 我最喜欢的运动员是…… You may have never heard of ...，but he / she is my favourite athlete. 你可能从未听说过……，但他/她是我最喜欢的运动员。 I would like to introduce an athlete who inspires me a lot. 我想介绍一位对我激励很大的运动员。 There are many great athletes in the world，and my favourite is ... 世界上有很多伟大的运动员，我最喜欢的是…… 2. 主体句型 He / She is an athlete who never gives up. 他/她是一位永不放弃的运动员。 He / She has won many gold medals and inspired millions. 他/她赢得了许多金牌，激励了数百万人。 He / She trained hard every day to achieve his / her dream. 他/她每天都刻苦训练以实现自己的梦想。 Although he / she was badly hurt，he / she never gave up. 虽然他/她受了重伤，但他/她从未放弃。 He / She is not only a great athlete but also a true example of the Olympic spirit. 他/她不只是一位伟大的运动员，也是奥运精神的真正榜样。 3. 结尾句型 His / Her story teaches me that we should never give up. 他/她的故事教会我们永不放弃。 I admire him / her because he / she always works hard and stays humble. 我敬佩他/她，因为他/她总是努力工作并保持谦逊。 He / She is a true hero and his / her spirit will always inspire me. 他/她是一位真正的英雄，他/她的精神将永远激励我。 This athlete shows me that with hard work and determination，anything is possible. 这位运动员让我明白，通过努力和决心，一切皆有可能。 4. 句型升级 基础句 升级句 He is a great athlete. 他是一位伟大的运动员。 He is an athlete who never gives up no matter how hard things are. 他是一位无论多么困难都永不放弃的运动员。 He won a gold medal. 他赢得了一枚金牌。 He has won many gold medals and set a new world record in the 100 metres. 他赢得过许多金牌，并创造了100米新的世界纪录。 He worked hard. 他训练很努力。 He trained hard every day for many years to achieve his dream. 他多年来每天都刻苦训练以实现自己的梦想。 He never gave up. 他从未放弃。 Although he was badly hurt in the race，he never gave up and tried his best to finish. 虽然在比赛中受了重伤，但他从未放弃，尽最大努力完成比赛。 He inspires me. 他激励我。 His story teaches me that with hard work and determination，I can achieve my goals too. 他的故事教会我，通过努力和决心，我也能实现自己的目标。 四、高分写作方法 Step 1 审题定位 明确写作任务为“写一篇文章介绍一位令人敬佩的运动员”。写作内容应包括运动员的基本信息（姓名、国籍、运动项目）、训练或比赛经历、最大成就、优秀品质及敬佩原因，以及带给自己的启发。 写作形式： 短文（Short Passage） 写作对象： 校刊读者或同学 时态要求： 一般过去时（叙述经历）和一般现在时（评价品质和影响）并用 Step 2 搭建结构 第一段：引出人物 介绍自己敬佩的运动员是谁，他/她从事什么运动项目，点出总体印象。 第二段：描写经历与成就 描述运动员的训练经历和比赛过程（遇到的困难、如何坚持），介绍他/她的最大成就和荣誉。 第三段：评价与启发 说明他/她的优秀品质（坚韧、团队合作、谦逊等），解释为什么敬佩他/她，以及他/她给自己带来的启发。 Step 3 丰富内容 不要只简单罗列成就，要加入具体的情节和细节。例如不只写“He won a gold medal.”，还要写“Although he was badly hurt in the race，he tried his best to finish and won loud cheers from the crowd.” Step 4 提升语言 使用一般过去时（trained，competed，won）、一般现在时（is，inspires，teaches）、定语从句（an athlete who...，the person that...）、连接词（although，because，so，not only...but also...）和描述品质的形容词，使文章内容充实、情感真挚。 Step 5 检查修改 检查内容是否完整（人物→经历→成就→品质→启发）、结构是否清晰（三段式）、主谓一致是否正确、定语从句是否正确、拼写和标点是否有误。 五、阶梯训练 （一）句子训练 Level 1 汉译英 1. 我最喜欢的运动员是埃里克·穆桑巴尼。 ____________________________________________________________ 2. 他是一位无论多么困难都永不放弃的运动员。 ____________________________________________________________ 3. 虽然他受了重伤，但他从未放弃。 ____________________________________________________________ 4. 他赢得了许多金牌，激励了数百万人。 ____________________________________________________________ 5. 他/她不仅是一位伟大的运动员，也是奥运精神的真正榜样。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 2 句型仿写（参照例句完成句子） 句型 1：My favourite athlete is ...（介绍运动员） 例句： My favourite athlete is Eric Moussambani. （1）我最喜欢的运动员是苏炳添。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）我最喜欢的运动员是谷爱凌。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 2：He / She is an athlete who ...（描述品质） 例句： He is an athlete who never gives up. （1）他是一位一直努力工作的运动员。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）她是一位始终保持谦逊的运动员。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 3：He / She has won ...（描述成就） 例句： He has won many gold medals and inspired millions. （1）她已经赢得了三枚奥运金牌。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）他创造了一项新的世界纪录。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 4：Although he / she ...，he / she never gave up.（描述坚持） 例句： Although he was badly hurt，he never gave up. （1）虽然他在比赛中遇到了很多困难，但他从未放弃。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）虽然她一开始落后了，但她从未放弃并最终赢了。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 5：He / She is not only ... but also ...（描述多重身份） 例句： He is not only a great athlete but also a true example of the Olympic spirit. （1）她不仅是一名优秀的运动员，也是一位出色的榜样。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）他不仅是一位冠军，也是一位激励了很多人的英雄。 ____________________________________________________________ 句型 6：His / Her story teaches me that ...（描述启发） 例句： His story teaches me that with hard work and determination，anything is possible. （1）她的故事教会我永不放弃。 ____________________________________________________________ （2）他的故事教会我团队合作很重要。 ____________________________________________________________ Level 3 句子升级（共6题） 要求：参照下方示例，将基础句升级为内容更丰富、表达更高级的句子。 示例： 基础句：He is a great athlete. 升级句：He is an athlete who never gives up no matter how hard things are. 1. 基础句：He won a gold medal. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 2. 基础句：He worked hard. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 3. 基础句：He never gave up. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 4. 基础句：He inspires me. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 5. 基础句：She is a good athlete. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ 6. 基础句：His story is moving. 升级句：___________________________________________________________ （二）篇章训练 1．最近，贵州省台江县台盘村举办的村BA非常火爆，通过体育运动宣传贵州的乡村文化。请以“Country Culture—Village BA in Guizhou”为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文，介绍村BA。 Country Culture—Village BA in Guizhou Where is Village BA held? Taipan Village, Taijiang County Who can play basketball? Local villagers Why is Village BA hot? Have more than 80 years of history; Know the local culture What’s your opinion about Village BA? Improve people’s lives… Country Culture—Village BA in Guizhou ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Tom对你们学校的体育活动很感兴趣，请你根据以下提示，用英语给他写一封回信，介绍你最喜欢的运动及体会。 提示要点： 1. 你最喜欢的运动是什么，为什么喜欢它； 2. 参与这项运动给你带来的收获（如强身健体、学会合作、面对失败等）； 3. 你对“运动远不止是比赛”的理解。 要求： 词数80词左右； 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯； 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： teamwork（团队合作），failure（失败），character（品格），confident（自信的） Dear Tom, I’m happy to tell you about my favorite sport. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．学校英语广播站征稿，主题My Favourite Athlete 要点： 1. 介绍你最喜欢的运动员(姓名、运动项目)； 2. 他/她的经历与优秀品质； 3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么； 要求：80–100词，语句通顺，语法正确。 My Favourite Athlete ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 参考答案 Level 1 汉译英 1. My favourite athlete is Eric Moussambani. 2. He is an athlete who never gives up no matter how hard things are. 3. Although he was badly hurt，he never gave up. 4. He has won many gold medals and inspired millions. 5. He / She is not only a great athlete but also a true example of the Olympic spirit. Level 2 句型仿写 句型 1 （1）My favourite athlete is Su Bingtian. （2）My favourite athlete is Gu Ailing. 句型 2 （1）He is an athlete who always works hard. （2）She is an athlete who always stays humble. 句型 3 （1）She has won three Olympic gold medals. （2）He has set a new world record. 句型 4 （1）Although he met many difficulties in the race，he never gave up. （2）Although she fell behind at first，she never gave up and finally won. 句型 5 （1）She is not only a great athlete but also an excellent role model. （2）He is not only a champion but also a hero who has inspired many people. 句型 6 （1）Her story teaches me that I should never give up. （2）His story teaches me that teamwork is very important. Level 3 句子升级 （以下为参考升级答案，其他合理升级也可接受） 1. 升级句：He has won many gold medals and set a new world record in the 100 metres. 2. 升级句：He trained hard every day for many years to achieve his dream，often getting up early and practising until late at night. 3. 升级句：Although he was badly hurt in the race，he never gave up and tried his best to finish the competition. 4. 升级句：His story teaches me that with hard work and determination，I can achieve my goals too. 5. 升级句：She is a great athlete who not only wins medals but also shows great sportsmanship and respect for her opponents. 6. 升级句：His story is deeply moving because it shows that true success comes from never giving up no matter what challenges you face. 篇章训练（参考范文） 1．范文： Country Culture—Village BA in Guizhou Recently, the rural basketball game, held in Taipan Village, Taijiang County, in Guizhou Province, has attracted widespread attention across the country because of its warm atmosphere. Some teams from Guizhou joined in the competition. Most of the players are local villagers, so people call it “Village BA”. It has more than 80 years of history. It not only provides a bigger stage for people who are interested in playing basketball, but also gives people a chance to get to know the local culture better. I like basketball games. In my opinion, the popularity of “Village BA” has promoted the development of this place and improved people’s lives. The event is encouraging more and more people to take part in sports. 2．参考范文 Dear Tom, I’m happy to tell you about my favorite sport. My favorite sport is basketball. I love it because it is exciting, and full of challenges. Every time I play, I feel energetic. Playing basketball has brought me a lot. It helps me build a strong body. More importantly, it teaches me the importance of teamwork. We can never win a game alone. It also teaches me how to face failure. When we lose, we learn from our mistakes and try harder next time. I truly believe that sport is more than a game. It shapes our character and makes us better people. Yours, Li Hua 3．参考范文 My Favourite Athlete My favourite athlete is Liu Cuiqing. She is a blind runner who takes part in the Paralympics. She runs with her guide Xu Donglin and has won three gold medals in many competitions. Training is really hard for her. She often falls and gets hurt, but she never gives up. She always keeps practising every day no matter how tired she is. I learn a lot from her. No matter what difficulties we meet, we should stick to our dreams and keep moving forward bravely. $