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英 语
八年级上册 RJ
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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home
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课时同步训练
大单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.装饰;装潢 __________
2.剪刀 __________
3.打包;收拾 _________
4.挂起;挂断电话 _________
5.清扫 __________
6.公寓套房 ___________
decorate
scissors
pack up
hang up
clean up
apartment
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二、佳句仿写
7.【教材原句】I can’t wait to show them our new house! (can’t wait to do sth)
→仿写:我迫不及待地想装饰我的新家。
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8.【教材原句】Yes, but now we need to get ready for their arrival.(get ready
for)
→仿写:妈妈正在为姥爷的到来做准备。
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I can’t wait to decorate my new home.
Mum is getting ready for Grandpa’s arrival.
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9.【教材原句】… I saw Grandpa and my little cousin standing in the cold wind
waiting for us.(see sb doing sth)
→仿写:当我起床时,我看见我妈妈正在像往常一样为全家人做早饭。
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10.【教材原句】I shared the snacks with my cousin and told Grandpa about
school.(share sth with sb)
→仿写:我喜欢在晚餐时和我的家人分享有趣的故事。
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When I got up, I saw my mum cooking breakfast for the whole family
as usual.
I like to share funny stories with my family during dinner time.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2025江苏常州期中]假如你是吉米,你的好朋友萨姆要搬进新居,他想向
你咨询关于卧室装修的建议。请根据邮件内容和你所学的关于颜色的知识回复邮
件,表达你的建议。
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Hi, Jimmy,
You know my family will move into a new flat next spring. We’re
decorating it now. I want to make my bedroom a comfortable place because I
often feel tired and stressed after school. What colour should I paint the wall?
What can make me feel energetic (精力旺盛的)? Could you please offer me
some advice?
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Sam
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写作要求:(1)要点齐全,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(2)词数不少于100(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a new apartment with your own
bedroom.
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Yours,
Jimmy
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第1步 审题目
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第二人称为主
内容要点:根据邮件中的内容给他一些关于卧室装修的建议,适当增加细节。
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第2步 列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总—分—总”。
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第3步 写作进阶#6
Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will
move into a new apartment with
your own bedroom. Dear Sam,
I’m so glad that you will move into a
new apartment with your own bedroom.
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A bedroom should make
you feel relaxed, so I think you
can paint the wall light blue
①.Blue can bring peace to your
mind and body. As a middle
school student, you always have
much homework to do and feel
stressed easily. So blue is the
best colour.As you feel tired
easily②, you need energetic
colours in the bedroom. A bedroom should make you feel
relaxed, so I think it might be a good idea
to(用it might be a good idea to代替you
can,升级句型). .paint the wall light blue
①.Blue can bring peace to your mind and
body. As a middle school student, you always
have much homework to do and feel stressed
easily. So blue is the best
colour.As. .too. .much homeworkmakes you
feel. .tired easily②, (用too much homework体
现因果关系,用“make+宾语+宾补”升级句型)
you need energetic colours in the bedroom.
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You can put some green
plants in your bedroom.③You
can hang some pictures of nature
on the wall.You can also put
some flowers by the window.④
They can make the room full of
life and make you feel energetic.
I hope my advice will help
you⑤ and you will enjoy your
new life!
Yours,
Jimmy You’d better(用had better代替can,升级
词汇) put some green plants in your
bedroom.③ You can hang some pictures of
nature on the wall.It’s also a good idea to
(用It’s also a good idea to代替You can
also,升级句型). .put some flowers by the
window.④ They can make the room full of
life and make you feel energetic.
I hope my advice will. .be helpful
(用be helpful代替help you,升级短语)⑤
and you will enjoy your new life!
Yours,
Jimmy
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2026陕西榆林质检】春节是每个家庭温暖的团聚时刻——家里的灯光、饭
菜的香气,还有亲人围坐时的欢声笑语,都藏着“家是甜蜜港湾”的真谛。某英文
报社正在开展以“Sweet Memories of the Spring Festival at Home”为题的征文活
动,请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇英文短文,分享春节里与家人相伴的温馨片段。
·Who did you spend the Spring Festival with at home? (parents, grandparents,
sisters, brothers…)
·What did you do during the Spring Festival at home? (make dumplings, share
stories…)
·What was your feeling? (sweet, happy…)
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要求:(1)短文应包含题目要求所给的全部信息,选择使用参考词汇,可适当发挥;
(2)语句正确,意思通顺、连贯,书写规范;
(3)短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
(4)词数不少于60(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)。
Sweet Memories of the Spring Festival at Home
Sweet Spring Festival memories at home took me back to the past.____
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【参考范文】
Sweet memories of the Spring Festival at Home
Sweet Spring Festival memories at home took me back to the past.
Last Spring Festival, I spent the holiday with my parents, grandma and
my little brother.
On New Year’s Eve, we made dumplings together in the kitchen.
Grandma showed us how to wrap nice dumplings. While making dumplings,
we talked a lot. Dad told us about his Spring Festival when he was a
kid, and Grandma shared some interesting old stories. After that, we
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had the dumpling dinner. After dinner, we sat on the sofa, watched the
Spring Festival Gala and ate snacks.
That night, I felt so happy and excited. This nice Spring Festival
memory will always be in my heart.
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【解析】温馨提示
show sb sth相当于show sth to sb,意为“向某人展示某物”。
Value statement:East or west, home is best.
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