摘要:
该初中英语课件聚焦八年级上册Unit 3“Better you, better me!”写作训练,通过话题词汇(如talent、feel confident to do sth)和教材原句仿写(如dream of doing sth、be hard on)搭建学习支架,衔接高分词句储备、范文进阶攻略到实战强化训练的脉络,帮助学生逐步提升写作能力。
其亮点在于以语言能力和思维品质培养为核心,通过系统的词句积累(如“熟能生巧”practice makes perfect)、句式优化(如用It's + adj + to do sth升级表达)及范文对比(初级到高阶作文),引导学生构建写作逻辑。提供可编辑课件和超链接跳转,提升学习能力,学生能系统掌握写作方法,教师可高效开展同步教学。
内容正文:
英 语
八年级上册 JJ
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Unit 3 Better you, better me!
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课时同步训练
单元话题与写作
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刷写作
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写作
第一阶 高分词句储备
一、话题词汇
1.才能;天资 ________
2.有信心做某事 __________________________
3.熟能生巧 ________________________
4.相信自己 ____________________
talent
feel confident to do sth
practice makes perfect
believe in oneself
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二、佳句仿写
5.【教材原句】From then on, I started dreaming of becoming an opera singer.
(dream of doing sth)
→仿写:她梦想着有一天环游世界。
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6.【教材原句】Don’t be too hard on yourself.(be hard on)
→仿写:妈妈对我的小错误不严厉。
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She dreams of travelling/traveling around the world one day.
My mum isn’t hard on my small mistakes.
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7.【教材原句】You are a special person and unique in your own way!
(in one’s own way)
→仿写:他通过为家人做饭,以自己独特的方式表达爱。
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8.【教材原句】You need to make a little progress every day… (make progress)
→仿写:我们希望这学期在学习英语方面取得很大的进步。
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He expresses his love in his own way by cooking meals for his
family.
We hope to make much progress in learning English this term.
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第二阶 范文进阶攻略
[2025原创]假如你是Sue,你的朋友Henry给你写信交流生活中遇到的困惑。
请你用英语写一封回信,和他分享一下你的做法和建议。
Dear Sue,
I’m unhappy with myself. There’s nothing special about me. I like playing
basketball, but I’m not tall enough. Worst of all, I get average grades in all my
subjects, especially in maths. I’m weak in maths. My friends are all talented
and smart. I feel bad about myself. I’m so stressed. What should I do?
Can you give me some advice? Thank you.
Yours,
Henry
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要求: (1)须回复全部要点,并适当发挥,使行文连贯;
(2)信中不能出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
(3)词数80左右,开头和落款已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Henry,
I’m very glad to hear from you.____
Yours,
Sue
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第1步审题目
体 裁:应用文
时 态:以一般现在时为主
人 称:以第二人称为主
内容要点:理解对方的困扰,针对身高、特长、学习给出建议,给予鼓励
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第2步列提纲
本文适宜采用的作文结构为“总——分——总”。
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第3步写作进阶#7
Dear Henry,
I’m very glad to hear
from you. I understand your
worries. But don’t be hard on
yourself!
Dear Henry,
I’m very glad to hear from you. I
understand your worries. But don’t be hard on
yourself!
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Being short isn’t a
problem. You can still play
basketball.①You can focus on
speed and skills. Everyone has
a talent. You just need to find
yours. Maybe try painting or
singing. Being short doesn’t. .stop you from
playing(用“stop... from doing sth”升级句子,使结构更加完整)basketball.①You can focus on speed and skills. Everyone has a talent. You just need to find yours. Maybe try painting or singing.
续表
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Be confident, and you are
the best.② For maths, make a
study plan. When you have
problems, your teachers and
classmates can help you. Do
some exercises. Practice makes
perfect. Believe in yourself. .and you are the
(用Believe in yourself替换Be confident,升级短
语)best.② For maths, make a study plan.
When you have problems, your teachers and
classmates can help you. Do some exercises.
Practice makes perfect.
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Feeling stressed is
normal, but with small
steps, things will get
better.③
Yours,
Sue It’s normal to feel stressed, but with small steps,
(用“It’s+adj.+to do sth”升级句式,It作形式主语
使句式更加亮眼)__things will get better.③
Yours,
Sue
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第三阶 实战强化训练
【2025河北承德期中】假设你是李明,你所在的学校正在举办一场主题为
“This is me!”的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿,向同学们介绍
自己。
要点: (1)What are your strong points?
(2)What is your dream for the future?
(3)How will you improve yourself to realise your dream?
注意: (1)短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(2)词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
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This is me!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class Four. I’m very glad to stand here
to introduce myself.
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This is me, Li Ming. Thanks a lot.
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【参考范文】
This is me!
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class Four.I’m very glad to
stand here to introduce myself.
I’m a good person and I’m nice to others.I work hard at school
and I do well in maths and English.I get along well with all my
teachers and classmates.I love singing and I got first prize in the
singing competition last term.
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As for my future, I dream of being a doctor, just like my mother.I
hope to help sick people.To
realise my dream, I need to improve myself.I must work harder and get
into a good university.I also need to be more careful and patient.I’m
sure I can make it.
This is me, Li Ming.Thanks a lot.
【解析】知识拓展
realise one’s dream=make one’s dream come true 实现某人的梦想
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