2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---汤姆戒除网瘾重塑生活 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、情节与情感线构建，系统整合文本理解、逻辑衔接、情感表达等关键能力，以问题链（如细节问答）和任务单（如情节构造）引导学生自主剖析文本结构，形成续写思维框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导设计，如“细节问答”模块帮助学生自测文本理解漏洞，“续写框架”提供从衔接句到段落展开的方法指导，参考答案对比培养思维品质。每个环节融入语言能力训练与学习策略引导，助力学生自主构建续写能力体系，教师可通过学情精准辅导，实现个性化备考。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Tom was crazy about online games. When he was 14, his parents bought him a new laptop as a birthday gift. At first, he only played for half an hour after finishing homework. But soon, the games caught all his attention. Every day after school, he rushed home and sat in front of the screen right away. He skipped afternoon sports classes to stay at home playing games. He often stayed up late at night without sleep. His eyes turned red, and he felt weak all the time. He even lost interest in his favorite basketball. His grades dropped quickly, and he often fell asleep in class. His parents talked with him many times, asking him to give up too much gaming. But Tom couldn’t control himself. One evening, he argued loudly with his parents and locked himself in the room. The next morning, he felt dizzy on the way to school and nearly fell down on the street. His teacher noticed his terrible state and called his parents. That night, his parents took away his laptop completely. Tom felt empty and upset. He had no idea what to do in his free time. He stayed in his bedroom all day long, too sad to eat or talk with anyone. 注意：(1)续写词数为150个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。 One afternoon, Tom’s neighbor Jack knocked at his door. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Several weeks later, Tom totally changed and built a healthy lifestyle. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 Tom：________________________________________________________ Tom’s parents：________________________________________________________ Jack（neighbor）：________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Tom got a new laptop and gradually became addicted to online games--- _________________ --- He skipped sports classes, stayed up late and abandoned hobbies, causing poor health and falling grades--- _________________ --- He refused parents’ persuasion, argued with them and felt dizzy on the way to school--- _________________ --- His parents took away his laptop, leaving Tom upset, empty and isolated 4. 细节问答 What caused Tom’s bad condition?：___________________________________ What negative changes did gaming bring to Tom?：_________________________________ What did Tom’s parents do to help him?：________________________________________________ How did Tom feel after his laptop was taken away?：__________________________________________ What is the key for Tom’s transformation?：_____________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 汤姆收到笔记本电脑，从适度游戏逐渐沉迷网络游戏→_________________ →熬夜逃体育课、荒废爱好、身体变差、成绩暴跌→_________________ →不听父母劝导、与父母争吵，身体不适被老师察觉→_________________ →父母没收电脑，汤姆陷入空虚消沉、封闭自我→（续写）邻居杰克上门拜访，带汤姆走出房间、培养新爱好→（续写）汤姆彻底蜕变，养成健康生活作息，重拾美好状态 6．情感线 addicted and obsessed→___________→irritable and rebellious→___________→lonely and depressed（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 经典句式摘抄 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One afternoon, Tom’s neighbor Jack knocked at his door. 衔接句1——What did Jack do and how did he influence Tom?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Several weeks later, Tom totally changed and built a healthy lifestyle. 衔接句2——What positive changes did Tom have and what did he learn?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：One afternoon, Tom’s neighbor Jack knocked at his door. →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：Several weeks later, Tom totally changed and built a healthy lifestyle. →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四、段落续写（学生作答区） One afternoon, Tom’s neighbor Jack knocked at his door. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Several weeks later, Tom totally changed and built a healthy lifestyle. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Tom：曾经沉迷网游、自控力差、叛逆消沉，后期及时醒悟、积极改变、重塑健康生活的少年。 Tom’s parents：用心关爱孩子、耐心劝导，及时制止孩子不良行为、引导孩子回归正轨的家长。 Jack：热心善良、乐于助人，主动开导汤姆、带领汤姆走出低谷的暖心邻居。 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Tom got a new laptop and gradually became addicted to online games--- He was totally absorbed in games and abandoned daily routines --- He skipped sports classes, stayed up late and abandoned hobbies, causing poor health and falling grades--- He suffered physical discomfort and poor academic performance --- He refused parents’ persuasion, argued with them and felt dizzy on the way to school--- His abnormal state was noticed by his teacher --- His parents took away his laptop, leaving Tom upset, empty and isolated 4. 细节问答 What caused Tom’s bad condition?：He was severely addicted to online games, lacking self-control and self-discipline. What negative changes did gaming bring to Tom?：He had poor physical health, abandoned his hobby of basketball, fell asleep in class and his academic grades dropped sharply. What did Tom’s parents do to help him?：They talked with him repeatedly and finally took away his laptop to stop his addiction. How did Tom feel after his laptop was taken away?：He felt extremely upset, empty and lonely, refusing to eat or communicate with others. What is the key for Tom’s transformation?：Jack’s company and guidance, as well as Tom’s own awareness and active change. What does the story tell us?：We should resist online addiction, develop healthy hobbies and lifestyles, and cherish self-discipline and youthful time. 5．情节线 汤姆收到笔记本电脑，从适度游戏逐渐沉迷网络游戏→整日沉迷屏幕，荒废课余生活与作息 →熬夜逃体育课、荒废爱好、身体变差、成绩暴跌→身心状态全面下滑，课堂状态糟糕 →不听父母劝导、与父母争吵，身体不适被老师察觉→问题彻底暴露，父母强制没收电脑 →父母没收电脑，汤姆陷入空虚消沉、封闭自我→（续写）邻居杰克主动上门陪伴，邀请汤姆户外运动、重拾爱好→（续写）汤姆彻底摆脱负面状态，养成自律健康的生活方式，收获成长蜕变 6．情感线 addicted and obsessed→tired and exhausted→irritable and rebellious→empty and depressed→positive and energetic（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：少年汤姆沉迷网游，荒废学业与身体，叛逆消沉，在邻居的陪伴与引导下走出低谷，戒除网瘾，重塑健康自律的生活方式，完成自我蜕变。 英文：Addicted to online games, Tom suffered from poor health, declining grades and negative moods. With the help of his neighbor Jack, he got rid of game addiction, picked up healthy hobbies and finally built a positive lifestyle. 8. 经典句式摘抄 ① But soon, the games caught all his attention.（简洁主谓宾句式） ② He often stayed up late at night without sleep. His eyes turned red, and he felt weak all the time.（细节描写句式） ③ He stayed in his bedroom all day long, too sad to eat or talk with anyone.（too...to...结果状语句式） 9. 本文主题 成长励志类：拒绝网络沉迷、自律把控自我，培养健康爱好与生活习惯，不负青春、向阳成长。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One afternoon, Tom’s neighbor Jack knocked at his door. 衔接句1：Jack noticed Tom’s bad mood, comforted him patiently and invited him to do outdoor sports to kill time. Paragraph 2: Several weeks later, Tom totally changed and built a healthy lifestyle. 衔接句2：Tom regained his hobbies, focused on study, kept regular routines and realized the harm of online addiction. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：One afternoon, Tom’s neighbor Jack knocked at his door. →①杰克发现汤姆消沉低落，耐心开导、温柔陪伴→②邀请汤姆出门打球、散步，丰富空余时间→③汤姆慢慢敞开心扉，走出封闭的自我 第二段：Several weeks later, Tom totally changed and built a healthy lifestyle. →①汤姆重拾篮球爱好，坚持运动、作息规律→②专心投入学习，课堂状态改善、成绩回升→③彻底戒除网瘾，懂得自律，收获健康人生状态 四、段落续写（高分范文·150词左右） One afternoon, Tom’s neighbor Jack knocked at his door. Seeing Tom’s depressed look, Jack figured out what had happened. Instead of blaming him, Jack chatted with him patiently and invited him to play basketball outside. Having nothing to do, Tom agreed reluctantly. Sweating on the court made him feel relaxed and joyful for the first time in a long while. Gradually, Tom began to hang out with Jack regularly, doing sports and taking walks in his spare time. Several weeks later, Tom totally changed and built a healthy lifestyle. He restored his old hobby of basketball and kept regular routines. He no longer stayed up late and became energetic both in life and study. Focusing on his schoolwork carefully, he listened attentively in class and made steady progress in his grades. Tom finally realized that online games only brought temporary emptiness. A positive and healthy lifestyle was exactly what made his youthful days worthwhile. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $