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Unit 4 Space Exploration
Reading for Writing
By the end of this class, you will be able to
Learn whether it is worthwhile to explore space.
Understand the basic structure and language features of the argumentative essay.
Write and argumentative essay with clear argument and solid evidence.
Learning Objectives
Lead-in
The R&D cost of the Beidou Satellite Navigation System is about 12 billion US dollars.
Is exploring space a waste of time and money?
Is it a waste of time and money?
Hunger
Disease
Poverty
Pollution
Yes
No
Space achievements
Skim for the text type
A. argumentation (议论文)
B. narration (记叙文)
C. travel journal (旅游日志)
Read and choose.
Underline two different opinions
Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and lots of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away. Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. Instead, we should feed the world's poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realise how exploring space helps us.
para 1
Para 1
Countries around the globe are spending billions of dollars and lots of time on various space missions, whether to Mars or other planets much further away. Some people argue that we should stop wasting time and money exploring space. Instead, we should feed the world’s poor and find immediate solutions to other problems, such as pollution and fatal diseases. However, others feel this is a shallow view which fails to realise how exploring space helps us.
Why are some people against space exploration?
Para 2
How does exploring space help to fight against world hunger?
❶ It has directly __________ the many satellites that now orbit Earth.
resulted in
❷ A number of the satellites record data on land and _____________.
weather patterns
❸ Then the data _______________ scientists on Earth.
❹After careful analysis, the scientists can provide useful ________________ _____________________.
❺As a result, space-based science _______________ in its efforts to grow _____________ to feed Earth' s increasing population.
is transmitted to
recommendations
has helped farming
enough food
and advice for farmers
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Satellites record →Scientist analyse data and provide useful →Farmers are able to grow .
para3
para4
Space technologies have helpes to creat new → Companies make better .
Seeing pictures of our planet makes people realise that our planet's are .
How does space exploration benefit humans?
data
advice
enough food
material
products
resources
limited
Underline the sentence that rephrases the author’s opinion?
In closing, exploring space provides the world with many different benefits. Therefore, it should continue so as to provide new and better solutions to people's short-term and long-term problems.
观点类作文
观点类作文
就“探索太空”话题分析评论
一般现在时为主
第一、第三人称
体裁话题
时态人称
文章架构
首段:开门见山点明话题
中段:介绍正反两种观点及其理由
尾段:阐述自己的观点
Language features of an argument
体裁:议论文
人称:第一人称、第三人称
时态:一般现在时为主
要点:1. 论点——
2. 论证
2.1 分论点1+细节
2.2 分论点2+细节
2.3 分论点3+细节
2.4 ……
3. 结论
写作模板——第一段
开门见山,导入主题(1-2句)
We had an argument over .
= We had a heated discussion about / on ____________.
我们就......进行了热烈的讨论。
Recently, ... has brought about a heated discussion.
最近,......引起了热烈的讨论。
写作模板——第一段
人们对此有不同的看法。(以下表达,任选其一)
Different people hold different opinions.
People have different opinions on this problem.
Different students have different attitudes towards it.
Opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.
写作模板——第二段
阐述正方观点
Some of us think/ hold the opinion that___________.
Some people are in favor of the idea that .
First of all, ______________________________________.
Secondly, _______________________________________.
Thirdly,_________________________________________.
如何衔接论据?
1. 表示递进关系:
In the first place; first of all; to begin with; firstly;
what’s more; furthermore; moreover; besides;
finally; lastly; in the end.
2. 表示列举事实:
such as; for example.
3. 表示观点:
in one’s opinion; in one’s view; from one’s point of view;
as far as I am concerned; as for sb.
写作模板——第二段
阐述反方观点
However, others are strongly against it./ People who are opposed to /against the idea think that .
They believe that _______________________________.
Besides, ______________________________________.
写作模板——第三段
说明你的观点
As far as I am concerned / In my opinion, _____________
总结观点
表示总结:
in short
in brief
in a word
in general
all in all
on the whole
in conclusion
重点短语
1. _____________________ 饲养宠物
2._____________________
3._____________________
4._____________________
5.
6.______________________
7. ________________________
keep pets
lead to/bring about
make a difference
provide sb with sth
waste time and money (in) doing sth
run out
meet the requirements
Practice
目前,城市里越来越多的人养宠物,对此中学生英语报社组织了一场讨论:城市内是否可以饲养宠物。请你根据下表所提供的信息,介绍讨论的情况,并说明自己的观点和建议。
支持饲养宠物 反对饲养宠物 你的观点
1.从宠物身上得到安慰。
2.与动物和谐相处,增添生活乐趣。
1.造成环境污染。
2.制造吵闹声,甚至伤人。
......
Practice
1. 最近,我们就城市内是否(whether)可以在家养宠物(keep pets)进行了热烈的讨论。
2. 不同的学生对此有不同的看法。
3. 有些学生认为养宠物是个好主意。
Recently, we had a heated discussion on whether people can keep pets at home in cities.
Different students have different attitudes towards it.
Some students think it is a good idea to keep pets.
Practice
4. 首先,我们可以从宠物身上得到安慰 (comfort) .
5. 而且,与动物和谐相处 (get along well with...) 会使我们的生活变得有趣。
6. 然而,其他学生强烈反对。
First of all, we can get comfort from pets.
What’s more, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting.
However, others are strongly against it.
Practice
7. 在他们看来,如果太多人在家里养宠物,会对环境(environment) 有害。
8. 而且,宠物可能会发出过多的噪音,甚至攻击 (attack) 人类。
In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it will be bad for the environment.
Besides, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.
Practice
9. 就我而言,我喜欢动物,所以我不认为在家养宠物不好。
10. 但我们必须采取一些措施 (take some measures) 来防止它们污染 (pollute) 我们的环境 (environment) 。
But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment.
In my opinion, I like animals, so I don’t think it is bad to keep pets at home.
Recently, we had a heated discussion on whether people can keep pets at home in cities. Different students have different attitudes towards it.
Some students think it is a good idea to keep pets. First of all, we can get comfort from pets. What’s more, getting along well with animals will make our life interesting. However, others are strongly against it. In their opinion, if too many people keep pets at home, it will be bad for the environment. Besides, pets may make too much noise and even attack people.
In my opinion, I like animals, so I don’t think it’s bad to keep pets at home. But we must take some measures to prevent them from polluting our environment.
Sample
Practice
近年来,越来越多的学生喜欢观看短视频(watch short videos), 你班就学生是否应该看短视频进行了讨论。请你用英语给校报写一篇短文,介绍讨论的情况并表达你的观点。
赞同者 反对者 你的观点
1.可以获得大量有用的信息(information);
2.可以使我们放松。
1.会浪费许多时间;
2.长时间看短视频会损害视力(eyesight)。
......
Whether students should watch short videos?
Recently, we had a heated discussion on whether students should watch short videos. When it comes to watching short videos, different students have different attitudes towards it.
Some of us hold the opinion that students should watch short videos. First of all, we can get a lot of useful information from these short videos. What’s more, watching short videos can make us relax. However, others are strongly against it. They believe that sthdents will waste a lot of time watching short videos. Besides, if we spend too much time watching short videos, it will be harmful to our eyesight.
Sample
In my opinion, watching short videos does harm to students’ study, which also takes up much valuable time. So I think students should spend less time watching short videos.
Sample
Practice
如今,越来越多的人在网上点餐。最近你们班举行了一场题为“是否应该网上订餐”的讨论,请你用英语给校报写一篇短文介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
赞同者 反对者 你的观点
1.节约时间;
2.可以吃各种美味的食物。 1.食物不健康;
2.一次性餐具会污染环境。
......
参考词汇:订餐 order food 一次性餐具 disposable tableware
Practice
假如你是李华,最近你们班举行了一场以 “Should We Help Strangers?” 为题的辩论会,请你用英语给校报写一篇短文,客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
赞同者 反对者 你的观点
1.帮助他人是美德(virtue)
2.帮助他人就是帮助自己
1.怕带来麻烦(trouble)
2.怕被误解(misunderstand)
......
Practice
假如你是李华,最近你班举行了一次班会,班会的主题是:Is space exploration significant? 请用英语给校报写一篇短文,客观地介绍讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。
赞同者 反对者 你的观点
1.获得新知识。
2.从太空获得新资源。
3.扩大人类生存空间。
4. ...... 1.耗资巨大。
2.宇航员的安全问题。
3.浪费金钱。这些钱本可用来解决地球上的饥饿、污染等问题。 ......
Is space exploration significant?
The topic of space exploration is becoming more and more popular recently. People have divided opinions about it.
Some of us think it important to explore space because people can have a better understanding of the outer space through exploration. Secondly, with the resources on the earth running out, it is necessary to find new resources in the outer space. Thirdly, these explorations make it possible to find other planets which are suitable for humans to live on.
However, others think very differently. They said this kind of exploration is a waste of time and money. Besides, it is extremely dangerous for astronauts to explore space, so sometimes they risk their lives in finishing the mission.
As far as I’m concerned, people should be pioneering. Although there are huge risks and difficulties, it is worth carrying on space exploration.
Sample
Thanks!
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