专题一 层级一 第三讲 恰当增加细节，语言魅力动人（配套教参）-【创新教程】2027年高考英语总复习大一轮讲义语法突破+写作寻芳

[即时演练] ①At most five books can be borrowed(可以被借 用)at a time and they can be kept(可以保存) for ten days. ②You are allowed(被允许)about ten minutes to prepare for the work. 技法十 语气委婉而中肯，亲切感人 DIf you have further questions,please feel free to let me know. 2I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast. [即时演练] ①I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我) what books I need to read and the requirements of my homework. ②What do you think of it？Are you satisfied with it?If not,please tell me as soon as possi- ble(请尽快告诉我). 自主查验 根据所给信息补全短文，并注意高级句式的 应用。 假定你是李华，你校的交换生Tom对中国的 民间艺术很感兴趣，本周五学校将要举办“校园文 化节”，请你写一封电子邮件，邀请Tom去体验编织 艺术。 第三讲 恰当增加细 技法突破 根据高考英语作文的评分标准，作文被分成 了五个档次。其中分数较高的档次对于考生作文 的要求都涉及了覆盖所有内容要点、使用较多语 法结构和词汇、有效使用语句间的连接成分。其 中，一个重要的方面就是在作文中要注意细节的 体现。具体方法如下： 技法一列举具体的实例进行补充说明 (1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救 地球。 We teenagers should do what we can to pro- tect the environment and save the earth. >We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth,For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy. (2)我要花一些时间和父母待在一起。 I'll spend some time staying with my parents. I'll spend some time staying with my par- ents,chatting with them and doing some housework. 。6 写作寻芳 Dear Tom, Here comes a good piece of news(来好消息 T).The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted this Friday.Since you have a strong passion for Chinese folk art,it's a great pleasure for me to invite you to join us. The activity is scheduled to last about two hours,from 3:30 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.in the school hall.It covers a wide variety of content. Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to various decorations(我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸 引人的编织艺术作品，从桌椅到各种装饰品不一 而足)，but also we'l watch the documentary concern- ing(有关的)the history of the weaving art.. In addition,some distinguished professors (一些著名的教授)will be invited to deliver lec- tures about how to promote the development of the weaving art(如何促进编织艺术的发展)，dur ing which time you will definitely gain a better understanding of it(在这期间你一定会对它有更 好的了解).By the way,if you are available, we'll meet at three outside the school gate.How I hope you can take my invitation into considera- tion(我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)！ I'm expecting your reply. Yours, Li Hua 节，语言魅力动人对应学生P? (3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。 I would like to seek a pen pal who is interest- ed in traveling just like me. ->I would like to seek a pen pal who is inter- ested in traveling just like me.If possible,we can travel together or share traveling. 技法二 增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、 心理描写以及背景渲染等内容 (1)我有时去村西的小河游泳。 I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then. ->I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.The water in the riv- er was very clear..(背景渲染) ->Weather permitting,I went swimming in the river in the west of the village now and then.(相关背景) (2)我发现了一些不良行为。 I found some bad behavior. -I found some bad behavior.Some people scribbled on the wall;some played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish every- where.(相关行为描述) 高考总复习英语 技法增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容 (1)我要和父母一起去超市购物。 I'm going to do some shopping with my par- ents in the supermarket. I'm going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and won't be back until about5:00 in the afternoon.(增加时间) (2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。 I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return. -I have taken with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library.(增加地点) 适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、 技法四 条件、让步、手段、目的、地点等内容 (l)假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Henry最近来信 询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点 写一封回信，说明你的计划，并简述理由。 要点：1.休息；2.读书；3.参加社会活动。 DI need a good rest.I'll do some reading. -I need a good rest because I do feel tired af- ter the hard work of all these years.Of course, I'll do some reading for fun,and for knowledge as welL.(因果关系) 2I'll take part in some social activities. -If I have free time,I'll take part in some so- cial activities.(条件状语) If possible,I'll take part in some social ac- tivities.（条件状语) -If possible,I'll take part in some social ac- tivities so that/in order that I can know more about society.(结果状语) (2)Tracy来电话说和你在咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee) 的见面取消。 Tracy called,saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee. Tracy called,saying that she couldn't meet you at Bolton Coffee as she had something im- portant to do.(原因状语) 第四讲 夺人耳目的 No.1引人) 开头一般来说要做到开门见山，使读者了解 文章要谈什么，最好能立刻引起读者的兴趣。下 面介绍几种开头的常见写法。 技法一书信的常用开头法二开门见山法] Nowadays,with the growing popularity of smar- tphones and computers,an increasing number of students are choosing to learn English be- yond the classroom in various ways. 如今，随着智能手机和电脑的日益普及，越来越多 的学生选择用课堂以外的多种方式学习英语。 ·6 结尾适当发挥，写出个人感受、评 技法五 价、希望、愿景、倡议等 (1)Tired as I was this summer holiday,I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受) (2)As far as I'm concerned,such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价) (3)In a word,if she would like to learn Chinese, I hope she will do it well.(愿景) (4)As students,it's our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议) 自主查验 某英文报将举办一场中学生英语作文比赛。 请以“Technology and Life”为题，写一篇短文参 赛。内容包括： 1.科技在生活中的运用2.你的感想。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 [参考范文] Technology and Life Over the last few decades,technologies have been constantly springing up,which has greatly changed our life.It is acknowledged that facial recognition makes it easy for us to get into sta- tions,the airport and other places.Also,the high-speed railway shortens the travelling time between two cities,enabling us to visit more places conveniently.In addition,mobile payment allows us to pay for everything wherever there is a QR code. As is known to us,technologies are all around us.Obviously,they have made our life more efficient and colorful.Only by making bet- ter use of them can we become the master of life. 开头、结尾对应学生P8 胜的开头 技法二 记叙文的常用开头法 1.故事背景法 交代人物、事件、时间、地点、背 景等 It has been 10 years since Youth was founded. 英语报Youth创刊十周年了。 2.往事追忆法一回忆过去发生的某件事 I still remember my first trip to the Taishan Mountain as if it were yesterday. 我依然记得第一次去泰山旅游的事情，就像是 在昨天一样。