内容正文:
7.考虑到他的年龄,他做得已经相当不错了。
Considering his age/In view of his age,he has
done it very well.
8.我真诚地希望你能考虑我的建议。
I sincerely hope you can take my suggestion in-
to consideration/account.
9.记住,在中国正确地使用筷子是很重要的。
Bear in mind that it is of great importance to
use chopsticks properly in China.
10.你应该抓住这个机会克服这个缺点。
You should seize the opportunity to overcome
the drawback.
Ⅲ.请用高级词汇提升下面的考生作文
假如你是中学生李明,家住泉州。你的英国
笔友Jason来信谈到了他的故乡London,并希望
了解你家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回
信。回信必须包括以下内容:
1.自然情况:地理位置优越、气候风景宜
人等;
2.发展成就:经济发展迅速、城市高楼林
立等;
3.存在问题:交通拥堵现象、空气污染问
题等;
4.对泉州发展的看法:内容由考生自己拟定。
注意:1.请勿提及与考生相关的真实信息;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.词数80左右。
参考词汇:高层建筑high-rise building
[考生作文]
Dear Jason,
I'm 1 very happy to hear from you and know
about your beautiful home city London.Now I'd like to
tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to
live in.Its economy has been developing 2 fast
during the past ten years.New bridges and roads
第二讲
运用复杂句
技法突破
技法一
句子形式多样化
根据表达的需求,可以采用多种句式,这样既能
恰当表达,又能避免形式单一。
DThey were so heavy that we couldn't lift
them at first.(so..that..句型)
2There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend
completely on the ratings in consumption.
位语从句)
[即时演练]
DIn recent years,more and more people start to
protect our environment,which makes our en-
vironment more and more colorful.
-In recent years,with more and more people
starting to protect our environment,our envi-
ronment is becoming more and more colorful.
(with复合结构)
5
写作寻芳
have been 3built,high-rise buildings standing in
many parts of the city.More and more schools
and hospitals are 5useful for the native people.It
is developing into a modern and 6beautiful city.
DBut there are still some problems,such as
heavy traffic in rush hours and 8serious air pol-
lution,which have a bad 9effect on people's dai-
ly life.I think Quanzhou should develop
healthily and scientifically,so that we could have
a better hometown in the future.
Yours,
Li Ming
[参考范文]
Dear Jason,
I'm Dmore than/quite/pretty happy to hear
from you and know about your beautiful home
city London.Now I'd like to tell you something
about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to
live in.Its economy has been developing 2rapid-
ly/swiftly during the past ten years.New bridges
and roads have been 3 set up,high-rise buildings
standing in many parts of the city.An increasing
number of schools and hospitals are 5available for
the native people.It is developing into a modern
and⑥attractive/charming city.⑦However,
there are still some problems,such as heavy traf-
fic in rush hours and 8severe air pollution,
which have a bad 9influence/impact on people's
daily life.10 In my opinion/As far as I am con-
cerned,Quanzhou should develop healthily and
scientifically,so that we could have a better
hometown in the future.
Yours,
Li Ming
式,增添语言内涵对应学生P5
-In recent years,there are so many people
who start to protect our environment that our
environment is becoming more and more color-
ful.(there be句式)
2If you study hard,you will make rapid pro-
gress.
-Study hard and you will make rapid pro-
gress.(并列句)
技法二使用非谓语动词形式,句字凝练高端二
DAfter learning it,I'm sure I'll have a better
understanding of the differences and similari-
ties between Chinese culture and Western cul-
ture.
2On arriving at the tea house,the foreign
students were impressed by the unique tea pots
and tea cups.
高考总复习英语
[即时演练]
DShe walked out of the lab and many students
followed her.(非谓语动词)
-She walked out of the lab,followed by many
students.
2They sang and laughed as they went back to
school.(非谓语动词)
-They went back to school,singing and
laughing.
技法运用定语从句,增加细节,填补内容】
D Material collecting took us a whole week,
during which we interviewed our teachers and
took pictures of every aspect of school life.
2I am eager to invite you to join our team for
the upcoming event,in which you will demon-
strate your ability and make acquaintance with
more friends with the same interest.
[即时演练]
D You'd better make full preparations before
class and have a brief understanding of the his-
tory of Tang Dynasty,which makes it easy for
you to pass the course(使你容易通过这门
课).
2Besides,there will be a lot of useful and inter-
esting activities,from which you can have a
clearer picture of Chinese culture(从中你对中
国文化会有更清晰的认识).
3I have found a flat for you on Fangcao Street
near Jianxin Chinese school.It is on the third
floor with three rooms,one of which is a bed-
room(其中一个是卧室),and the other two
are a bathroom and a kitchen.
技法四巧用倒装,增强句字的表现力
Not only will our club's works be displayed,
but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting
created by a famous artist of this field.
2Not only did you help improve my English,but
you also gave me more confidence in learning.
3Next came the moment when I asked them to
have a try themselves.
[即时演练]
①Though I'm weak,I''ll make the effort.(倒装)
-Weak as/though I am,I'll make the effort.
2He had no sooner come back from Beijing than
he was sent abroad.(倒装)
-No sooner had he come back from Beijing
than he was sent abroad.
技法五恰当使用强调句:增强说服力
DIt is you who taught me how to learn English
well.
2It was on Friday that our activity began.
[即时演练]
DHe did not know what had happened until he
had read the news in the newspaper.(强调句)
It was not until he had read the news in the
newspaper that he knew what had happened.
.6
2Working in teams instead of on my own has
freed me of trouble and made my work more
efficient.
It is working in teams instead of on my own
that has freed me of trouble and made my work
more efficient.(强调句)
技法亢自如应用各种名词性从句,精彩纷呈
DIf you are interested in what I have stated
above,sign up on our school website before
September 1st.
2That's why I think the trip along the Yan-
gtze River will be a better choice.
[即时演练]
DTo his surprise,the little girl knows so many
things.(主语从句)
-What surprises him is that the little girl
knows so many things.
2I have just found that I will have to attend an
important meeting that afternoon(我那天下午
得参加一个重要会议).
技法七with or without精彩点缀,妙不可言
DMoreover,with the stadium set up,a wide
range of sports events are able to be held,of
which ping-pong,football as well as running
competitions enjoy great popularity.
2Without any hesitation,we began to work.
[即时演练]
DAs an old saying goes,living without a clear
and achievable aim(没有清晰可达到的目标)is
like sailing without a compass.
2I can't thank you enough for your generous
help,without which I couldn't have made such
great progress(没有这些帮助我不能获得这么
大的进步)
技法几
巧用副词,充分表情达意
DI am exceedingly delighted to hear from you.
2I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some
time for our festival and have fun with us.
[即时演练]
①She patiently(耐心地)explained all the rules
to the students and required everyone to follow
them.
②We were perfectly(完全地)satisfied with the
result of the experiment.
技法变主动为被动:凸显英语思维
DMy father gave me a new book on my birth-
day.
-I was given a new book (by my father)on my
birthday..(间接宾语作主语)
-A new book was given to me (by my father)
on my birthday.(直接宾语作主语)
2And some world-famous players will be invi-
ted to give lessons.
[即时演练]
①At most five books can be borrowed(可以被借
用)at a time and they can be kept(可以保存)
for ten days.
②You are allowed(被允许)about ten minutes to
prepare for the work.
技法十
语气委婉而中肯,亲切感人
DIf you have further questions,please feel free
to let me know.
2I sincerely hope you can set aside some time
for the art feast.
[即时演练]
①I wonder if you could tell me(你能否告诉我)
what books I need to read and the requirements
of my homework.
②What do you think of it?Are you satisfied
with it?If not,please tell me as soon as possi-
ble(请尽快告诉我).
自主查验
根据所给信息补全短文,并注意高级句式的
应用。
假定你是李华,你校的交换生Tom对中国的
民间艺术很感兴趣,本周五学校将要举办“校园文
化节”,请你写一封电子邮件,邀请Tom去体验编织
艺术。
第三讲
恰当增加细
技法突破
根据高考英语作文的评分标准,作文被分成
了五个档次。其中分数较高的档次对于考生作文
的要求都涉及了覆盖所有内容要点、使用较多语
法结构和词汇、有效使用语句间的连接成分。其
中,一个重要的方面就是在作文中要注意细节的
体现。具体方法如下:
技法一列举具体的实例进行补充说明
(1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救
地球。
We teenagers should do what we can to pro-
tect the environment and save the earth.
>We teenagers should do what we can to protect
the environment and save the earth,For example,
we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,
refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees
and save water and energy.
(2)我要花一些时间和父母待在一起。
I'll spend some time staying with my parents.
I'll spend some time staying with my par-
ents,chatting with them and doing some
housework.
。6
写作寻芳
Dear Tom,
Here comes a good piece of news(来好消息
T).The Campus Culture Festival will be hosted
this Friday.Since you have a strong passion for
Chinese folk art,it's a great pleasure for me to
invite you to join us.
The activity is scheduled to last about two
hours,from 3:30 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.in the
school hall.It covers a wide variety of content.
Not only can we appreciate numerous appealing
weaving works ranging from chairs and tables to
various decorations(我们不仅能够欣赏到许多吸
引人的编织艺术作品,从桌椅到各种装饰品不一
而足),but also we'l watch the documentary concern-
ing(有关的)the history of the weaving art..
In addition,some distinguished professors
(一些著名的教授)will be invited to deliver lec-
tures about how to promote the development of
the weaving art(如何促进编织艺术的发展),dur
ing which time you will definitely gain a better
understanding of it(在这期间你一定会对它有更
好的了解).By the way,if you are available,
we'll meet at three outside the school gate.How
I hope you can take my invitation into considera-
tion(我多么希望你能考虑一下我的邀请啊)!
I'm expecting your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
节,语言魅力动人对应学生P?
(3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。
I would like to seek a pen pal who is interest-
ed in traveling just like me.
->I would like to seek a pen pal who is inter-
ested in traveling just like me.If possible,we
can travel together or share traveling.
技法二
增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、
心理描写以及背景渲染等内容
(1)我有时去村西的小河游泳。
I went swimming in the river in the west of
the village now and then.
->I went swimming in the river in the west of
the village now and then.The water in the riv-
er was very clear..(背景渲染)
->Weather permitting,I went swimming in
the river in the west of the village now and
then.(相关背景)
(2)我发现了一些不良行为。
I found some bad behavior.
-I found some bad behavior.Some people
scribbled on the wall;some played soccer on
the lawn and some people threw rubbish every-
where.(相关行为描述)