Unit 2 Beyond Earth（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材鲁教版五四制九年级全一册

本讲义聚焦初中英语“航天与航空”主题写作，涵盖基础写作“描述我的太空梦想”（含引出向往、梦想内容与实现方式、探索价值与精神激励结构）和拓展写作“中国航天及人物介绍”（含成就列举、科研付出、精神传承结构），并提供词汇积累（单词、短语）、过渡句型、句式分类（开篇、主体、结尾）、佳句仿写及典例分析、实战演练等学习支架，系统构建写作能力。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心，通过丰富词汇句型与仿写练习提升表达准确性，结合中国航天成就（如王亚平太空授课）与人物介绍渗透文化意识，增强家国情怀。典例分析中的审题与谋篇布局环节，助力学生形成清晰写作逻辑，培养思维品质。多样化实战任务（演讲稿、征文、邮件等）既辅助教师课堂教学，又供学生课后练习，有效查漏补缺，提升学习能力。

Unit 2 Beyond Earth单元同步写作讲义 本单元属于“人与自然”范畴，太空探索，围绕人类探索宇宙的行动、价值、中国航天发展展开，属于科普科技类人文话题。 基础写作：Describe your space dream 描述我的太空梦想（Section B 课本原题） 拓展写作：My favourite space hero/Chinese space program 中国航天、航天人物介绍 单元话题 航天与航空 写作维度 1.描述我的太空梦想 2.中国航天、航天人物介绍 描述我的太空梦想 开头：引出太空是我长久以来的向往 中间：梦想内容（想登上空间站/月球，观测星球）、实现方式（努力学习科学知识） 结尾：太空探索的价值，航天精神激励自己 中国航天、航天人物介绍 开头：China’s space program has made great progress. 中间：列举成就（Shenzhou spaceships, space lectures, space station）、无数宇航员与科研人员付出努力 结尾：航天精神鼓舞青少年，我们要传承探索精神 词汇积累 单词 1. explore /ɪkˈsplɔː(r)/ v. 探索；勘探 2. exploration n. 探索 3. astronaut /ˈæstrənɔːt/ n. 宇航员 4. universe /ˈjuːnɪvɜːs/ n. 宇宙 5. mission /ˈmɪʃn/ n. 航天任务，使命 6. technology /tekˈnɒlədʒi/ n. 科技 7. station /ˈsteɪʃn/ n. 空间站；站点 8. unknown /ˌʌnˈnəʊn/ adj. 未知的 9. proud /praʊd/ adj. 自豪的 → pride n. 自豪感 10. achieve /əˈtʃiːv/ v. 实现（梦想）→ achievement n. 成就 短语 1. space exploration 太空探索 2. space station 空间站 3. space lecture 太空授课 4. carry out space missions 执行航天任务 5. be sent into space 被送入太空 6. break through difficulties 突破难关 7. explore the unknown world 探索未知世界 8. make great progress 取得巨大进步 9. push the limits 突破极限 10. realize one’s space dream 实现太空梦想 通用过渡句型 1. As far as I know — 据我所知 2. In my opinion — 在我看来 3. What’s more — 此外；而且 4. Last but not least — 最后同样重要的是 5. All in all — 总而言之 6. It plays an important role in our life — 它在我们的生活中发挥着重要作用 7. It makes a great difference to our growth — 它对我们的成长意义深远 句式积累 第一段 开篇引入 1. I have held a deep dream of space exploration ever since I watched the wonderful space lecture live. 自从观看了精彩的太空授课直播，我内心就怀揣着探索太空的梦想。 2. When news about China’s space station comes out, I always feel full of pride. 每当有关中国空间站的新闻发布，我内心总是充满自豪。 3. It is widely known that China’s space program has achieved unbelievable success in recent years. 众所周知，中国航天事业近些年取得了令人难以置信的成就。 4. Few things excite me more than learning about human exploration into the unknown universe. 没有什么比了解人类探索未知宇宙更让我激动的事了。 第二段 主体展开（含将来时被动） 1. A large number of new space tasks will be carried out by Chinese scientists in the next few years. 未来几年，大量全新航天任务将由中国科学家执行。 2. More powerful spaceships will be invented so that we can travel further into space. 性能更强的宇宙飞船将会被研发，让我们能去往更远的太空。 3. Many difficulties will be overcome as long as scientists keep making experiments day and night. 只要科学家日夜坚持试验，诸多难题终将被攻克。 4. Valuable data about other planets will be collected and shared with scientists all over the world. 有关其他星球的珍贵数据将会被收集，并分享给全球科研工作者。 5. Astronauts will be trained harder to finish all kinds of difficult space missions in the future. 未来宇航员会接受更严苛的训练，完成各类艰巨的航天任务。 6. It will be realized by teenagers like us that humans can live and work in space one day. 人类有朝一日能在太空生活工作的梦想，将会由我们这代青少年实现。 第三段 结尾升华 1. The brave spirit of exploring space pushes me to study science harder to realize my own space dream. 勇于探索太空的精神激励我刻苦学习理科，实现属于自己的航天梦。 2. Thanks to all the researchers, our country will keep moving forward on the road of space exploration. 多亏全体科研人员，我国在太空探索的道路上将持续稳步前进。 3. Space exploration not only helps us learn more about the universe but also makes our motherland stronger. 太空探索不仅帮助我们了解宇宙，更让我们的祖国愈发强大。 4. We teenagers should keep curious about the unknown and carry on the spirit of space exploration. 我们青少年应当保持对未知的好奇，传承太空探索精神。 佳句仿写 1.教材原句：My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. 仿写：我最大的梦想是不久后一座全新太空实验室将在空间站建成。 _____________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：These technologies can then be used to help build stations on Mars and other planets. 科学知识能够被用来解决各类棘手的太空难题。 _____________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：I believe that space travel will be made much easier in time. 仿写：我相信长途太空飞行在未来几年会变得更加安全。 _____________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句：Though many missions failed or had to be cancelled, space exploration never stopped. 仿写：尽管许多实验失败或被迫推迟，我们的科研团队从未失去希望。 _____________________________________________________________________ 5.教材原句：It is hoped that moon bases will be built in the near future. 仿写：人们希望更强大的空间站能在十年内完工。 _____________________________________________________________________ 【参考答案】 1. My biggest dream is that a new space lab will be set up in our space station soon. 2. Scientific knowledge can be used to solve all kinds of difficult space problems. 3. I believe that long-distance space flights will be made safer in the coming years. 4. Though many experiments failed or had to be put off, our research team never lost hope. 5. It is hoped that more powerful space stations will be finished within ten years. 典例 学校即将举办以“传承英雄文化，弘扬爱国精神”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My Hero—Wang Yaping”为题，根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Great achievements 2013, China’s first teacher in space; 2021, the first Chinese woman to walk in space Good qualities brave, hard-working Inspiring lessons never give up Influence study harder 要求: 1.短文须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使行文连贯；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数80-100。 My Hero—Wang Yaping Wang Yaping is my hero. She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 确认文体：这是一篇人物介绍类记叙文，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：需包含伟大成就、优秀品质、对“我”的精神启示以及对“我”的影响 确定人称：第三人称 (she/her/Wang Yaping) 和第一人称 (my/me) 注意事项：词数80-100；不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；包含表格关键词 要点展开： 要点一：伟大成就 成就一：In 2013, she became China’s first teacher in space./She gave a science lesson from space.等 影响：Her lesson from space made many students love science./It inspired young people.等 成就二：In 2021, she did another amazing thing—she became the first Chinese woman to walk in space./She made history again.等 要点二：优秀品质 品质：Wang is not only brave but also hard-working./She is brave and hard-working.等 具体体现：She shows us the strong spirit of Chinese women and the progress of our country./She is a symbol of women’s power.等 要点三：精神启示与影响 精神启示：Her story teaches me to never give up on my dreams./She never gives up no matter how hard it is.等 影响：She inspires me to study harder and do something useful for our country in the future./I want to become a person like her.等 总结评价：Wang Yaping is a true hero who inspires me to be better every day./Her courage and effort will stay in my heart forever.等 谋篇布局 第一段：承接已给出开头，点明王亚平是自己的英雄 第二段：介绍王亚平的伟大成就；阐述优秀品质 第三段：谈谈王亚平对“我”的精神启示和影响佳作展示 范文 My Hero—Wang Yaping     Wang Yaping is my hero. She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times.     In 2013, she became China’s first teacher in space. Her lesson from space made many students love science. In 2021, she did another amazing thing—she became the first Chinese woman to walk in space.     Wang is not only brave but also hard-working. She shows us the strong spirit of Chinese women and the progress of our country.     Her story teaches me to never give up on my dreams. She inspires me to study harder and do something useful for our country in the future. Wang Yaping is a true hero who inspires me to be better every day. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 1. astronaut 宇航员 2. amazing 令人惊叹的 3. progress 进步 4. spirit 精神 5. inspire 激励 高分句型 1. 定语从句（who修饰人） She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times. 她是一位多次创造历史的优秀中国航天员。 2. 破折号补充说明句式 In 2021, she did another amazing thing—she became the first Chinese woman to walk in space. 2021年，她完成另一项壮举——成为首位太空出舱的中国女性。 3. not only…but also…并列结构 Wang is not only brave but also hard-working. 王亚平既勇敢又勤奋。 （一） 书面表达 1．“玉兔二号”月球车在月球表面留下了月饼形状的图案，引起了广泛关注。你所在班级就“太空探索是否值得”进行了意愿调查。请根据下表信息写一篇演讲稿，介绍讨论情况并表达你的个人观点。 观点 理由 观点 理由 30%反对 1.离我们的日常生活遥远 70%赞同 1.探索宇宙的奥秘 2.投入成本高 2.有助于科技进步 你的观点 …… 注意： 1.词数不少于70； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：月球车lunar rover Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! Recently, the “Yutu-2” lunar rover left a mooncake-shaped pattern on the moon, which has attracted wide attention. In our class, we had a survey about whether space exploration is worth it. Thirty percent of my classmates are against it. They think space is too far away from our daily life and that the cost is too high. However, seventy percent support it. They believe exploring the mysteries of the universe is exciting and that it helps drive scientific and technological progress. Personally, I think space exploration is valuable. It broadens our horizons and may bring benefits to humanity in the future. So, let’s keep exploring! （二） 假设你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“我的太空梦”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，谈谈你对太空探索的看法和梦想。 提示要点：1. 你对太空探索的兴趣（为什么感兴趣）； 2. 你了解的一些太空探索成就（如中国航天成就）； 3. 你未来的梦想或愿望。 要求： 词数80词左右； 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯； 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： space exploration（太空探索），astronaut（宇航员），spacecraft（宇宙飞船），achievement（成就） My Space Dream I have always been fascinated by space exploration. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My Space Dream I have always been fascinated by space exploration. The universe is so mysterious and full of unknowns. I often imagine what it would be like to travel among stars. China has made great achievements in space exploration. For example, we have sent astronauts to space and built our space station. The Chang’e missions have also explored the moon. These successes make me proud and inspire me. My dream is to become an astronaut. I know it requires hard work, but I am ready to study hard and chase my dream. I believe that with determination, nothing is impossible. （三） 学校英语海报比赛主题：Make a poster about China’s space programme，请你写一篇英文短文介绍中国航天，80词左右。 要点： 1. 中国航天工程（天宫、嫦娥、天问、神舟）； 2. 代表成就：王亚平太空授课、祝融火星探测； 3. 你的太空梦想与对航天探索的看法。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 China’s Space Programme China’s space programme has achieved amazing success in recent years. We own four great projects: Tiangong space station, Chang’e moon rovers, Tianwen Mars tasks and Shenzhou manned spaceships. Wang Yaping gave wonderful live space classes in orbit. The Zhurong rover successfully landed on Mars and collected surface data. More challenging space tasks will be carried out soon. I dream of becoming an astronaut one day. Space exploration lets us know more about the universe and pushes science forward. I’m truly proud of our country’s great space achievements. （四） 假定你是李辉，你校在4月24日举办了“校园航天日”主题活动来激发你们对太空的兴趣。请你结合下图信息，给英国笔友David写一封邮件，分享此次活动的过程和感受。 注意： 1. 邮件须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear David, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui 【参考范文】 Dear David,     How are you doing? I’m writing to share an unforgettable activity with you. To spark our interest in space, our school held School Space Day in the school hall on April 24.     At 10 a.m., we attended a lecture by a space expert and learned a lot about space. At 2 p.m., we visited an exhibition. We saw spacesuits closely and watched videos about space history. At 4 p.m., we took part in the water rocket launching contest. It was exciting and let us show our creativity.     The activity was educational. It opened our eyes to the wonders of space. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hui （五） 假设你是中国航天员李华，正在中国太空站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在太空站一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。词数80—120。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear young friends, I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! 【参考范文】 Dear young friends, I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. In the morning, I use special machines to exercise and stay healthy. Eating in space is interesting! Our food comes in special bags, and we need to hold it tightly to prevent it from floating away. Sleeping here is fun too. I sleep in a sleeping bag tied to the wall! During work hours, I do experiments and sometimes go for spacewalks. It feels like flying! After work, I read books or talk with my family through video calls. Though I miss Earth, the view of stars outside is amazing. My life here is busy but meaningful. I feel proud to be part of this journey. Thank you! （六） 假如你是李华，请你以My Dream of Space Travel为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的太空遨游梦想。 内容要点： 1. 自己对太空的喜爱； 2. 太空的神奇之处； 3. 你的太空旅行畅想； 4. 为梦想付出的努力。 写作要求： 1. 词数70-90词； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Dream of Space Travel _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My Dream of Space Travel Space is a mysterious and wonderful world. I have been interested in space since I was a little child. There are countless bright stars and special planets in space. It is very different from the Earth. I want to take a spaceship to visit space, watch the beautiful stars and see our blue Earth from space. To make my dream come true, I study hard every day. I read lots of books about space and keep healthy. I believe I can travel in space one day. （七） 以China’s Mars Exploration为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍中国的火星探测任务“天问一号”。要求： 1. 内容包含：天问一号的发射时间、命名由来、火星探测过程、祝融号的工作、对中国航天的意义； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确； 3. 不少于80词； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 China’s Mars Exploration China’s first Mars lander, Tianwen-1, marks a remarkable milestone in China’s space development. Launched from Wenchang, Hainan on July 23, 2020, it gets its name from Qu Yuan’s ancient poem meaning “Questions to Heaven”, reflecting China’s firm will to explore outer space. After covering over 470 million kilometres, it arrived onMars on February 10, 2021. It orbited Mars for three months before successfully landing on May 15, releasing the rover Zhurong later. Zhurong travelled 1,000 metres on Mars, capturing pictures, examining rocks and transmitting valuable data to Earth. Tianwen-1’s success is just the start of China’s Mars exploration journey. I feel truly proud of the amazing space achievements our nation has made. 1 / 1 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 2 Beyond Earth单元同步写作讲义 本单元属于“人与自然”范畴，太空探索，围绕人类探索宇宙的行动、价值、中国航天发展展开，属于科普科技类人文话题。 基础写作：Describe your space dream 描述我的太空梦想（Section B 课本原题） 拓展写作：My favourite space hero/Chinese space program 中国航天、航天人物介绍 单元话题 航天与航空 写作维度 1.描述我的太空梦想 2.中国航天、航天人物介绍 描述我的太空梦想 开头：引出太空是我长久以来的向往 中间：梦想内容（想登上空间站/月球，观测星球）、实现方式（努力学习科学知识） 结尾：太空探索的价值，航天精神激励自己 中国航天、航天人物介绍 开头：China’s space program has made great progress. 中间：列举成就（Shenzhou spaceships, space lectures, space station）、无数宇航员与科研人员付出努力 结尾：航天精神鼓舞青少年，我们要传承探索精神 词汇积累 单词 1. explore /ɪkˈsplɔː(r)/ v. 探索；勘探 2. exploration n. 探索 3. astronaut /ˈæstrənɔːt/ n. 宇航员 4. universe /ˈjuːnɪvɜːs/ n. 宇宙 5. mission /ˈmɪʃn/ n. 航天任务，使命 6. technology /tekˈnɒlədʒi/ n. 科技 7. station /ˈsteɪʃn/ n. 空间站；站点 8. unknown /ˌʌnˈnəʊn/ adj. 未知的 9. proud /praʊd/ adj. 自豪的 → pride n. 自豪感 10. achieve /əˈtʃiːv/ v. 实现（梦想）→ achievement n. 成就 短语 1. space exploration 太空探索 2. space station 空间站 3. space lecture 太空授课 4. carry out space missions 执行航天任务 5. be sent into space 被送入太空 6. break through difficulties 突破难关 7. explore the unknown world 探索未知世界 8. make great progress 取得巨大进步 9. push the limits 突破极限 10. realize one’s space dream 实现太空梦想 通用过渡句型 1. As far as I know — 据我所知 2. In my opinion — 在我看来 3. What’s more — 此外；而且 4. Last but not least — 最后同样重要的是 5. All in all — 总而言之 6. It plays an important role in our life — 它在我们的生活中发挥着重要作用 7. It makes a great difference to our growth — 它对我们的成长意义深远 句式积累 第一段 开篇引入 1. I have held a deep dream of space exploration ever since I watched the wonderful space lecture live. 自从观看了精彩的太空授课直播，我内心就怀揣着探索太空的梦想。 2. When news about China’s space station comes out, I always feel full of pride. 每当有关中国空间站的新闻发布，我内心总是充满自豪。 3. It is widely known that China’s space program has achieved unbelievable success in recent years. 众所周知，中国航天事业近些年取得了令人难以置信的成就。 4. Few things excite me more than learning about human exploration into the unknown universe. 没有什么比了解人类探索未知宇宙更让我激动的事了。 第二段 主体展开（含将来时被动） 1. A large number of new space tasks will be carried out by Chinese scientists in the next few years. 未来几年，大量全新航天任务将由中国科学家执行。 2. More powerful spaceships will be invented so that we can travel further into space. 性能更强的宇宙飞船将会被研发，让我们能去往更远的太空。 3. Many difficulties will be overcome as long as scientists keep making experiments day and night. 只要科学家日夜坚持试验，诸多难题终将被攻克。 4. Valuable data about other planets will be collected and shared with scientists all over the world. 有关其他星球的珍贵数据将会被收集，并分享给全球科研工作者。 5. Astronauts will be trained harder to finish all kinds of difficult space missions in the future. 未来宇航员会接受更严苛的训练，完成各类艰巨的航天任务。 6. It will be realized by teenagers like us that humans can live and work in space one day. 人类有朝一日能在太空生活工作的梦想，将会由我们这代青少年实现。 第三段 结尾升华 1. The brave spirit of exploring space pushes me to study science harder to realize my own space dream. 勇于探索太空的精神激励我刻苦学习理科，实现属于自己的航天梦。 2. Thanks to all the researchers, our country will keep moving forward on the road of space exploration. 多亏全体科研人员，我国在太空探索的道路上将持续稳步前进。 3. Space exploration not only helps us learn more about the universe but also makes our motherland stronger. 太空探索不仅帮助我们了解宇宙，更让我们的祖国愈发强大。 4. We teenagers should keep curious about the unknown and carry on the spirit of space exploration. 我们青少年应当保持对未知的好奇，传承太空探索精神。 佳句仿写 1.教材原句：My space dream is that one day a research station will be built on the moon. 仿写：我最大的梦想是不久后一座全新太空实验室将在空间站建成。 _____________________________________________________________________ 2.教材原句：These technologies can then be used to help build stations on Mars and other planets. 科学知识能够被用来解决各类棘手的太空难题。 _____________________________________________________________________ 3.教材原句：I believe that space travel will be made much easier in time. 仿写：我相信长途太空飞行在未来几年会变得更加安全。 _____________________________________________________________________ 4.教材原句：Though many missions failed or had to be cancelled, space exploration never stopped. 仿写：尽管许多实验失败或被迫推迟，我们的科研团队从未失去希望。 _____________________________________________________________________ 5.教材原句：It is hoped that moon bases will be built in the near future. 仿写：人们希望更强大的空间站能在十年内完工。 _____________________________________________________________________ 典例 学校即将举办以“传承英雄文化，弘扬爱国精神”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你以“My Hero—Wang Yaping”为题，根据下面表格中的信息，用英语写一篇短文投稿。 Great achievements 2013, China’s first teacher in space; 2021, the first Chinese woman to walk in space Good qualities brave, hard-working Inspiring lessons never give up Influence study harder 要求: 1.短文须包含表格中的关键词，请增加细节以使行文连贯；2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3.词数80-100。 My Hero—Wang Yaping Wang Yaping is my hero. She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 确认文体：这是一篇人物介绍类记叙文，时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：需包含伟大成就、优秀品质、对“我”的精神启示以及对“我”的影响 确定人称：第三人称 (she/her/Wang Yaping) 和第一人称 (my/me) 注意事项：词数80-100；不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；包含表格关键词 要点展开： 要点一：伟大成就 成就一：In 2013, she became China’s first teacher in space./She gave a science lesson from space.等 影响：Her lesson from space made many students love science./It inspired young people.等 成就二：In 2021, she did another amazing thing—she became the first Chinese woman to walk in space./She made history again.等 要点二：优秀品质 品质：Wang is not only brave but also hard-working./She is brave and hard-working.等 具体体现：She shows us the strong spirit of Chinese women and the progress of our country./She is a symbol of women’s power.等 要点三：精神启示与影响 精神启示：Her story teaches me to never give up on my dreams./She never gives up no matter how hard it is.等 影响：She inspires me to study harder and do something useful for our country in the future./I want to become a person like her.等 总结评价：Wang Yaping is a true hero who inspires me to be better every day./Her courage and effort will stay in my heart forever.等 谋篇布局 第一段：承接已给出开头，点明王亚平是自己的英雄 第二段：介绍王亚平的伟大成就；阐述优秀品质 第三段：谈谈王亚平对“我”的精神启示和影响佳作展示 范文 My Hero—Wang Yaping     Wang Yaping is my hero. She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times.     In 2013, she became China’s first teacher in space. Her lesson from space made many students love science. In 2021, she did another amazing thing—she became the first Chinese woman to walk in space.     Wang is not only brave but also hard-working. She shows us the strong spirit of Chinese women and the progress of our country.     Her story teaches me to never give up on my dreams. She inspires me to study harder and do something useful for our country in the future. Wang Yaping is a true hero who inspires me to be better every day. 佳作赏析 亮点词汇 1. astronaut 宇航员 2. amazing 令人惊叹的 3. progress 进步 4. spirit 精神 5. inspire 激励 高分句型 1. 定语从句（who修饰人） She is a great Chinese astronaut who has made history many times. 她是一位多次创造历史的优秀中国航天员。 2. 破折号补充说明句式 In 2021, she did another amazing thing—she became the first Chinese woman to walk in space. 2021年，她完成另一项壮举——成为首位太空出舱的中国女性。 3. not only…but also…并列结构 Wang is not only brave but also hard-working. 王亚平既勇敢又勤奋。 （一） 书面表达 1．“玉兔二号”月球车在月球表面留下了月饼形状的图案，引起了广泛关注。你所在班级就“太空探索是否值得”进行了意愿调查。请根据下表信息写一篇演讲稿，介绍讨论情况并表达你的个人观点。 观点 理由 观点 理由 30%反对 1.离我们的日常生活遥远 70%赞同 1.探索宇宙的奥秘 2.投入成本高 2.有助于科技进步 你的观点 …… 注意： 1.词数不少于70； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：月球车lunar rover Is Space Exploration Worth It? Hello, everyone! _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 假设你是李华，你校英语报正在举办“我的太空梦”主题征文活动。请你根据以下提示，写一篇短文，谈谈你对太空探索的看法和梦想。 提示要点：1. 你对太空探索的兴趣（为什么感兴趣）； 2. 你了解的一些太空探索成就（如中国航天成就）； 3. 你未来的梦想或愿望。 要求： 词数80词左右； 可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯； 开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇： space exploration（太空探索），astronaut（宇航员），spacecraft（宇宙飞船），achievement（成就） My Space Dream I have always been fascinated by space exploration. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 学校英语海报比赛主题：Make a poster about China’s space programme，请你写一篇英文短文介绍中国航天，80词左右。 要点： 1. 中国航天工程（天宫、嫦娥、天问、神舟）； 2. 代表成就：王亚平太空授课、祝融火星探测； 3. 你的太空梦想与对航天探索的看法。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 假定你是李辉，你校在4月24日举办了“校园航天日”主题活动来激发你们对太空的兴趣。请你结合下图信息，给英国笔友David写一封邮件，分享此次活动的过程和感受。 注意： 1. 邮件须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3. 词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。 Dear David, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hui （五） 假设你是中国航天员李华，正在中国太空站执行任务。联合国教科文组织邀请你与全球青少年视频连线，介绍你在太空站一天的工作与生活，并分享你的感受。请你结合以下提示，写一篇英文发言稿。词数80—120。 注意事项： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头结尾已给出，不计入词数； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear young friends, I am Li Hua, an astronaut from China. I am so glad to meet all of you here today. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thank you! （六） 假如你是李华，请你以My Dream of Space Travel为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍自己的太空遨游梦想。 内容要点： 1. 自己对太空的喜爱； 2. 太空的神奇之处； 3. 你的太空旅行畅想； 4. 为梦想付出的努力。 写作要求： 1. 词数70-90词； 2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确； 3. 不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Dream of Space Travel _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 以China’s Mars Exploration为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍中国的火星探测任务“天问一号”。要求： 1. 内容包含：天问一号的发射时间、命名由来、火星探测过程、祝融号的工作、对中国航天的意义； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确； 3. 不少于80词； 4. 文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 假如你是李华，你的梦想是登上太空。请你以“My Trip To Space”为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文，向校报投稿。 写作要点： 1. 你的太空梦想是什么； 2. 想象中太空的美丽景色； 3. 你在太空想做的事情； 4. 你的感悟与未来计划。 写作要求： 1. 词数100左右，误差不超过10词； 2. 包含全部写作要点，可适当发挥； 3. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范； 4. 文中不得出现真实校名、人名。 My Trip To Space My biggest dream is to travel into space one day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 试卷第1页，共3页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $