内容正文:
利弊权衡
LOOKING INTO
THE FUTURE
智能家居
The best way to predict the future is to create it.
-Peter Drucker
人工智能
未来预测
UNIT 2
Contents
单元复习路径
01
复习目标
02
知识图谱
03
词汇串讲
04
重点句型
05
单元语法
06
主题写作
UNIT 2
Review Objectives
复习目标:从未来生活语篇走向科技观点表达
01
词汇与词组
掌握智能控制、监测安全、预测变化和科技态度相关词汇,并能在未来生活语境中准确运用。
02
句型与语法
归纳重点句型和将来进行时,辨析will do与will be doing,并完成语境练习。
03
语篇与写作
梳理智能家居说明文与科技观点文的结构,完成严格三段式观点写作。
UNIT 2
Looking into the Future
单元主题图谱:未来变化、技术价值、潜在风险与理性选择
展望未来
CHANGE → IMPACT → CHOICE
01
智能家居
自动控制 → 便利与节能
健康监测 → 风险预警
02
技术影响
提升效率与生活质量
数据、安全与依赖风险
03
语篇框架
功能说明 → 技术价值
争议事件 → 权衡立场
04
理性选择
接受变化但不盲从
用规则引导技术发展
UNIT 2
Vocabulary Map
重点词汇图谱:功能、性质、变化与态度
重点词汇
MEANING → FORM → USE
01
智能控制
integrate / combine / command
automatic / efficient / preference
02
监测安全
monitor / detect / secure
warning / critical / relevant
03
预测变化
predict / available / innovation
potentially / forecast / prospect
04
态度论证
persuade / oppose / advocate
cease / resist / rather than
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Grammar Map
将来进行时:从形式识别到语境辨析
将来进行时
FORM → MEANING → USE
01
基本形式
will be doing
will not be doing
02
未来过程
未来某时正在进行
at this time tomorrow
03
常见功能
自然安排与发展趋势
礼貌询问未来计划
04
易错辨析
will do vs. will be doing
状态动词慎用进行时
UNIT 2
Writing Map
科技观点写作:表态、论证与建议
科技观点文
POSITION → EVIDENCE → ADVICE
01
审题表态
明确讨论对象
给出总体态度
02
三段结构
P1 引题表态
P2 分析利弊
03
证据支撑
优势 + 具体结果
风险 + 具体场景
04
语言迁移
signposts组织逻辑
单元词组 + 重点句型
P3 权衡结论与建议
UNIT 2
Text Analysis: Smart Homes
Reading and Thinking:说明文如何介绍未来住宅
体裁与主旨
体裁:科技说明文
Genre: an expository text
主旨:围绕smart homes,说明智能住宅如何使生活更加安全、节能和舒适。
语篇框架
开篇:现实痛点 → a more comfortable environment
智能控制:integrated sensors → automatic control
健康监测:keep constant track of your health
安全防护:prevent serious damage from accidents
结尾:not a fantasy,但普及仍需时间
信息推进与写法
PROBLEM:忘关电器等生活问题
FUNCTION:Intelligent Controls / Regular Health
BENEFIT:save energy, warn you early, prevent damage
LIMIT:新技术尚未普遍应用
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Text Analysis: Technology
Using Language:观点文如何讨论科技利弊
体裁与主旨
体裁:科技观点文
Genre: an argumentative essay
主旨:围绕Should We Fight New Technology?比较不同立场,最终形成积极而审慎的个人态度。
语篇框架
P1:无人驾驶事故 → oppose driverless cars
P2:Amish生活 → advocate a simple life
P3:天气追踪、互联网 → benefits of technology
P4:个人经历 → accept change rather than resist it
论证方法
CLAIM:Some people oppose... / others advocate...
EVIDENCE:the Amish / weather-tracking / the Internet
BALANCE:On the one hand... On the other hand...
POSITION:look on the positive side of change
UNIT 2
LOOKING
INTO THE
FUTURE
Key Points
考点串讲
FUTURE
UNIT 2
Core Vocabulary
核心词汇清单:按语义场归类,便于课堂集中复现与迁移
01 智能控制
integrate combine command preference
automatic efficient routine
02 监测与安全
monitor detect secure warning
critical relevant abnormal
03 预测与变化
predict forecast available innovation
prospect potentially
04 态度与论证
persuade oppose advocate cease resist
place emphasis on rather than
UNIT 2
Vocabulary Check
中文提示快说英文:先独立作答,再同伴互查
1—10 核心词汇
11—20 核心词组
1
劝说;说服
2
安全的;可靠的
3
使合并;成为一体
4
偏爱
5
指令;命令
6
监测;监控
7
发现;查明
8
有关的
9
可获得的
10
结合;混合
11
预测;预料
12
反对;抵制
13
停止;终止
14
提倡;支持
15
抵制;反抗
16
响应语音指令
17
持续记录
18
从这种意义上说
19
缺乏……时
20
而不是
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Vocabulary Check: Answers
按编号核对答案,并标记需要再次串讲的词汇
答案核对
读准 → 说对 → 会用
1
persuade
2
secure
3
integrate
4
preference
5
command
6
monitor
7
detect
8
relevant
9
available
10
combine
11
predict
12
oppose
13
cease
14
advocate
15
resist
16
respond to voice
17
keep constant track of
18
in this sense
19
in the absence of
20
rather than
UNIT 2
考点串讲
1. persuade vt. 劝说;说服
情景导学
Good evidence can persuade the public to use new technology wisely.
有力的证据能说服公众明智地使用新技术。
词汇拓展
persuasive adj. 有说服力的
persuasion n. 说服
用法归纳
① persuade sb. to do sth. 说服某人做某事
② persuade sb. into doing sth. 说服某人做某事
③ persuade sb. that... 使某人相信……
即时演练
The report persuaded residents _______________ (protect) their personal data.
to protect
The argument was highly _______________ (persuade).
persuasive
解析:persuade sb. to do sth.:说服某人做某事。
解析:系动词was后用形容词persuasive作表语。
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考点串讲
2. secure adj. 安全的;安心的;可靠的 vt. 获得;保护
情景导学
Smart controls can keep our homes secure while saving energy.
智能控制可以在节能的同时保障住宅安全。
词汇拓展
security n. 安全;保障
insecure adj. 不安全的
用法归纳
① keep sb./sth. secure 使某人/某物安全
② secure sth. from/against... 保护某物免受……
③ secure a job/place 获得工作/席位
即时演练
The new system stores users' personal information _______________ (secure).
securely
Strict rules are needed to improve data _______________ (secure).
security
解析:修饰动词stores,用副词securely。
解析:data作定语,空格处需名词security。
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考点串讲
3. integrate vi. & vt. (使)合并;成为一体
情景导学
Future homes will integrate intelligent controls into everyday life.
未来住宅将把智能控制融入日常生活。
词汇拓展
integrated adj. 综合的;集成的
integration n. 结合;整合
用法归纳
① integrate A into/with B 将A融入B/把A与B结合
② be integrated into... 被整合进……
即时演练
Smart sensors are fully _______________ (integrate) into the home system.
integrated
The _______________ (integrate) of AI into education requires careful planning.
integration
解析:be integrated into...:被整合到……中。
解析:定冠词The后用名词integration作主语。
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考点串讲
4. preference n. 爱好;偏爱
情景导学
The system will learn each user's routine and preferences.
系统将了解每位用户的日常习惯和偏好。
词汇拓展
prefer v. 更喜欢
preferable adj. 更可取的
用法归纳
① have a preference for 偏爱……
② prefer A to B 喜欢A胜过B
③ prefer doing/to do 更喜欢做某事
即时演练
Many users have a preference _______________ voice control.
for
Settings can be adjusted according to users' personal _______________ (prefer).
preferences
解析:have a preference for...:偏爱……。
解析:personal修饰名词;结合users'使用复数preferences。
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考点串讲
5. command n. 指令;命令;控制 vt. 命令;控制
情景导学
All controls will respond to voice commands.
所有控制装置都将响应语音指令。
词汇拓展
commanding adj. 威严的
have a good command of 精通
用法归纳
① give/obey a command 发布/服从命令
② command sb. to do 命令某人做某事
③ command that...(should) do 命令……
即时演练
The engineer commanded the technician _______________ (shut) down the device.
The system responds to spoken _______________ (command).
to shut
commands
解析:command sb. to do sth.:命令某人做某事。
解析:spoken修饰名词;泛指多条指令,用复数commands。
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考点串讲
6. monitor v. 监视;监测;监控 n. 显示器;监视器
情景导学
Your smart home will be monitoring your health every day.
你的智能住宅将每天监测你的健康状况。
词汇拓展
monitoring n. 监测;监管
health monitor 健康监测器
用法归纳
① monitor health/progress 监测健康状况/进展
② monitor how/whether... 监测如何/是否……
即时演练
At this time tomorrow, the system _______________ (monitor) air quality.
will be monitoring
Continuous _______________ (monitor) helps detect health risks early.
monitoring
解析:未来具体时刻正在进行,用将来进行时。
解析:形容词Continuous修饰名词monitoring。
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考点串讲
7. detect vt. 发现;查明
情景导学
Sensors can detect a leak before serious damage occurs.
传感器能在严重损失发生前检测到泄漏。
词汇拓展
detection n. 发现;检测
detector n. 探测器
用法归纳
① detect danger/a fault 发现危险/故障
② be detected early 被及早发现
即时演练
If smoke _______________ (detect), the alarm will sound immediately.
is detected
Early _______________ (detect) of faults can prevent serious damage.
detection
解析:smoke与detect构成被动关系,用一般现在时被动语态。
解析:形容词Early修饰名词detection。
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考点串讲
8. relevant adj. 有关的;有意义的
情景导学
The system will provide users with relevant information.
系统将为用户提供相关信息。
词汇拓展
relevance n. 相关性
irrelevant adj. 不相关的
用法归纳
① be relevant to 与……有关
② relevant information/evidence 相关信息/证据
即时演练
The information collected must be relevant _______________ users' actual needs.
Remove any _______________ (relevant) details from the report.
to
irrelevant
解析:be relevant to...:与……有关。
解析:根据remove和语境,用反义形容词irrelevant。
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考点串讲
9. available adj. 可获得的;可购得的;(人)有空的
情景导学
Many smart-home innovations are already available.
许多智能家居创新产品已经可以使用。
词汇拓展
availability n. 可获得性
readily available 容易获得
用法归纳
① be available to sb. 可供某人使用
② be available for... 可用于……
即时演练
The service will be available _______________ all residents next month.
to
Check the _______________ (available) of the device before ordering it.
availability
解析:be available to sb.:可供某人使用。
解析:定冠词the后用名词availability。
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考点串讲
10. combine vt. & vi. (使)结合;混合
情景导学
Smart homes combine convenience with energy efficiency.
智能住宅把便利与能源效率结合起来。
词汇拓展
combination n. 结合;组合
combined adj. 联合的
用法归纳
① combine A with/and B 把A与B结合
② combine to do 联合起来做……
即时演练
The design combines convenience _______________ energy efficiency.
with
A _______________ (combine) of human judgment and AI can improve decisions.
combination
解析:combine A with B:把A与B结合。
解析:不定冠词A后用单数名词combination。
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考点串讲
11. predict vt. 预测;预言;预料
情景导学
Experts predict that AI will reshape future education.
专家预测人工智能将重塑未来教育。
词汇拓展
prediction n. 预测
predictable adj. 可预测的
用法归纳
① predict that... 预测……
② be predicted to do 据预测会……
即时演练
It is _______________ (predict) that robots will handle more routine tasks.
predicted
Accurate _______________ (predict) help cities prepare for future changes.
predictions
解析:It is predicted that...:据预测……。
解析:谓语help表明主语为复数名词predictions。
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考点串讲
12. oppose vt. 反对;抵制;阻挠
情景导学
Some people oppose developing driverless cars too quickly.
有些人反对过快发展无人驾驶汽车。
词汇拓展
opposition n. 反对
opposite adj. 相反的
用法归纳
① oppose doing sth. 反对做某事
② be opposed to doing 反对做某事
即时演练
Experts are opposed to _______________ (share) personal data carelessly.
Public _______________ (oppose) to driverless cars has decreased.
sharing
opposition
解析:be opposed to doing sth.中to为介词。
解析:形容词Public修饰名词opposition。
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考点串讲
13. cease vi. & vt. (使)停止;终止
情景导学
We should cease accepting technology simply because it is new.
我们不应仅因技术是新的就不加思考地接受它。
词汇拓展
ceaseless adj. 不停的
without cease 不停地
用法归纳
① cease doing/to do 停止做某事
② cease to exist 不复存在
即时演练
The machine ceased _______________ (operate) when danger was detected.
operating
The alarm rang _______________ (cease) throughout the night.
ceaselessly
解析:cease doing sth.:停止做某事。
解析:修饰动词rang,用副词ceaselessly。
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考点串讲
14. advocate vt. 提倡;支持;拥护 n. 提倡者;支持者
情景导学
The writer advocates using technology responsibly.
作者提倡负责任地使用技术。
词汇拓展
an advocate of/for...
……的支持者
用法归纳
① advocate doing sth. 提倡做某事
② advocate that...(should) do 主张……
即时演练
Experts advocate _______________ (set) clear rules for AI use.
setting
She is a strong _______________ (advocate) of responsible innovation.
advocate
解析:advocate doing sth.:提倡做某事。
解析:不定冠词a和形容词strong后用单数名词advocate。
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考点串讲
15. resist vi. & vt. 抵制;反抗;抵挡
情景导学
We should guide technological change rather than resist it blindly.
我们应引导技术变革,而不是盲目抗拒它。
词汇拓展
resistance n. 抵制;反对
resistant adj. 有抵抗力的
用法归纳
① resist doing sth. 抵制做某事
② cannot resist doing 忍不住做某事
即时演练
Some users resist _______________ (adopt) new devices.
adopting
Public _______________ (resist) may slow the spread of new technology.
resistance
解析:resist doing sth.:抵制做某事。
解析:形容词Public修饰名词resistance。
UNIT 2
Core Sentence Patterns
01
will be doing...
描述未来某时正在进行的动作
02
the instant...
一……就……;时间从句用一般现在时
03
It will take...before...
要过一段时间才……
04
It can be argued that...
客观引出可争议的观点
05
make it possible for sb. to do...
使某人做某事成为可能
06
rather than...
而不是……;连接平行成分
UNIT 2
Sentence 1
课文原句
In the future, we will be using advanced technology every day.
在未来,我们每天都会使用先进技术。
核心结构
will be doing
语法功能
表示未来某个时刻正在进行,或按发展趋势自然发生。
使用要点
关注未来时间点和动作的持续过程。
即时训练
到2035年,许多家庭将使用人工智能管理能源。
By 2035, many families will be using AI to manage energy.
明天此时,工程师们将测试新的智能系统。
This time tomorrow, engineers will be testing the new smart system.
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Sentence 2
课文原句
Your lights will come on the instant you enter the door.
你一进门,灯就会亮起来。
核心结构
the instant + 从句
语法功能
相当于 as soon as,引导时间状语从句。
使用要点
主句用将来时,从句用一般现在时。
即时训练
你一回到家,智能系统就会调节室温。
The instant you get home, the smart system will adjust the temperature.
她一打开应用程序,系统就会显示最新数据。
The instant she opens the app, the system will display the latest data.
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Sentence 3
课文原句
It will take some years before most homes use this technology.
还需要几年,大多数住宅才会使用这项技术。
核心结构
It will take + 时间 + before...
语法功能
表示“要过……才……”,突出实现目标所需时间。
使用要点
before从句通常用一般现在时表将来。
即时训练
还需要几年,无人驾驶汽车才会被广泛使用。
It will take a few years before driverless cars are widely used.
还需要一段时间,智能机器人才能进入普通家庭。
It will take some time before smart robots enter ordinary homes.
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Sentence 4
课文原句
It could be argued that the Amish's quality of life is better.
可以说,阿米什人的生活质量更高。
核心结构
It can be argued that...
语法功能
客观、审慎地引出一种可讨论的观点。
使用要点
适合科技利弊类议论文,避免表达过于绝对。
即时训练
可以说,科技能否改善生活取决于我们如何使用它。
It can be argued that whether technology improves life depends on how we use it.
可以说,人工智能应辅助教师,而不是取代教师。
It can be argued that AI should assist teachers rather than replace them.
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Sentence 5
课文原句
The Internet has made it possible for families to keep in touch.
互联网使家人保持联系成为可能。
核心结构
make it possible for sb. to do
语法功能
it为形式宾语,真正宾语是后面的不定式。
使用要点
possible作宾语补足语,for引出动作执行者。
即时训练
智能设备使老年人独立生活成为可能。
Smart devices make it possible for the elderly to live independently.
在线平台使偏远地区的学生获得优质课程成为可能。
Online platforms make it possible for students in remote areas to access quality courses.
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Sentence 6
课文原句
I will accept change rather than resist it.
我会接受变化,而不是抗拒它。
核心结构
A rather than B
语法功能
连接两个平行成分,强调选择A而非B。
使用要点
前后动词形式、词性或结构应保持一致。
即时训练
我们应该规范人工智能,而不是因为风险就拒绝它。
We should regulate AI rather than reject it because of its risks.
我们应该引导技术发展,而不是盲目抵制变化。
We should guide technological development rather than resist change blindly.
UNIT 2
LOOKING
INTO THE
FUTURE
Grammar
单元语法复习
The Future Progressive Tense
UNIT 2
Grammar Review
将来进行时:结构、功能、辨析与易错点
01 结构提炼
肯定:will be doing
否定:will not be doing
疑问:Will + 主语 + be doing...?
02 核心意义
站在现在看未来某一时刻或时间段,动作正处于进行过程中。
03 常见功能
未来过程;自然安排;礼貌询问。常与 at this time tomorrow 等连用。
04 复习重点
先判断语境功能,再比较 will do 与 will be doing;注意状态动词。
复习主线:未来时间点 → 动作是否处于过程 → 语境功能 → 形式核对
UNIT 2
Key Point 1
要点归纳:形式服务于“未来过程”
基本结构
At 9 tomorrow, the robot will be cleaning the kitchen.
肯定:will be doing;否定:will not be doing;疑问:Will...be doing?
未来过程
This time tomorrow, engineers will be testing the driverless car.
强调未来某一时刻动作正在进行。
自然安排
We will be using cleaner energy.
描述按计划或趋势自然发生的未来过程。
判断要点
找出未来时间点,判断动作届时是否正在进行;不要只看到“将来”就使用 will do。
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Key Point 2
易混辨析:will do 与 will be doing
will do:事实、决定、承诺
The system will stop automatically.
I will help you set it up.
• 强调完整动作或结果
• 可表示临时决定、意愿和承诺
• 不突出未来某时的进行过程
will be doing:过程、安排、询问
The system will be monitoring your health.
Will you be using the car tonight?
• 强调未来过程
• 表示自然安排
• 礼貌询问未来计划
• 语气通常更客观
判断关键
先问:动作在未来某时是“发生/完成”,还是“正在进行”?
临时决定用 will do;未来过程、自然安排或礼貌询问多用 will be doing。
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Key Point 3
易错点:形式、从句时态与状态动词
不要漏掉 be
× will monitoring
✓ will be monitoring
进行时必须保留助动词 be。
时间从句不用将来时
When you arrive, the robot will be preparing dinner.
when从句用一般现在时表将来。
状态动词慎用进行时
I will know the result.
一般不用 will be knowing;know 表状态。
注意:先判断动作意义,再核对 will + be + doing;形式正确不等于语境正确。
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Common Traps
易错点辨析:根据语境选择正确时态
01
At 10 tomorrow morning, the engineers _____________________ (test) the system.
will be testing
未来具体时刻动作正在进行,用will be testing。
02
When you arrive home, the robot _______________________ (prepare) dinner.
will be preparing
到家时准备晚餐正在进行;when从句用一般现在时。
03
Don't call at eight. We ________________________ (discuss) data protection.
will be discussing
at eight指未来某时正在讨论。
自查:有逗号 ≠ 一定用 which;先确认先行词,再判断空格在从句中所作成分。
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Gaokao Practice
高考语境训练:将来过程与计划安排
01
This time tomorrow, researchers _____________________ (test) the device.
will be testing
this time tomorrow提示未来某时正在进行。
02
At 7 tomorrow, the system ______________________ (check) air quality.
will be checking
强调明早7点正在执行的例行过程。
03
Will you ____________________ (use) the car this evening?
be using
礼貌询问对方今晚的安排,用将来进行时。
自查:有逗号 ≠ 一定用 which;先确认先行词,再判断空格在从句中所作成分。
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Layered Practice
分层训练:由形式判断到科技语境表达
01
By this time next year, scientists ________________________ (develop) safer batteries.
will be developing
强调明年此时正在持续的研发过程。
02
When danger is detected, the system ____________________ (send) a warning.
will send
强调随后发生的结果,用一般将来时。
03
At 9 tonight, my robot ______________________ (clean) the kitchen.
will be cleaning
未来具体时刻动作正在进行。
自查:有逗号 ≠ 一定用 which;先确认先行词,再判断空格在从句中所作成分。
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Contextual Practice 语篇训练:2035年的智慧社区
语法填空
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
By 2035, many people ____________________ (live) in smart communities. At 7 each morning, home systems ______________________ (check) air quality. When a problem _________________ (detect), the system will send a warning. Cleaner energy ________________ (power) most buildings. Service robots _____________________ (work) in public spaces at this time each day. These changes will make city life more _______________ (efficiency). Protecting personal data will remain _________ important task. Residents will become more ___________ (awareness) of data security. Strict rules will reduce the risk of information _____________ (leak). Only in this way __________ smart communities truly serve their residents.
will be living
will be checking
is detected
will power
will be working
efficient
an
语篇覆盖:将来进行时、一般将来时、被动语态、词形转换、冠词与倒装
aware
leakage
will
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Contextual Practice 语篇训练:未来课堂中的技术运用
语法填空
阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
In 2035, students ______________________ (learn) with AI assistants. At this time tomorrow, teachers _______________________ (prepare) new lessons. When students ask, AI __________________ (provide) immediate feedback. Schools, many of ___________ will use smart devices, must protect privacy. Responsible use of technology _________________ (remain) essential. Virtual reality will make lessons more ______________ (engage). Students will have more chances ________________ (explore) complex ideas. Teachers must ensure that technology _____________ (use) responsibly. Convenience should not replace ______________ (think) independently. Only when technology supports real learning __________ it be valuable.
will be learning
will be preparing
will provide
which
will remain
engaging
to explore
语篇自查:未来时态 / 定语从句 / 非谓语 / 被动语态 / 倒装
is used
thinking
will
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Grammar Transfer 综合运用:描述2035年的学习生活
任务
用3—4句话描述2035年的课堂,至少使用两处 will be doing。
内容:学习方式、教师作用、一项便利及一项需要关注的问题。
示例表达
In 2035, students will be learning with AI assistants. Teachers will be using real-time data to offer individual support.
完整示例
In 2035, students will be learning with AI assistants, while teachers will be using real-time data to offer individual support. Learning will be more efficient, but schools will also need to protect students' privacy.
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LOOKING
INTO THE
FUTURE
Writing
主题写作
Technology and the Future
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Writing Task
写作任务:Should AI assistants be widely used in study?
校英文报征文
假定你是李华,校英文报正在讨论“Should AI assistants be widely used in study?”。请写一篇观点短文投稿。
内容包括:你的态度;主要优势与潜在风险;合理使用建议。词数80左右,严格三段。
01
写什么
讨论AI学习助手
明确总体态度
说明主要利弊
02
怎样证明
使用具体场景
说明原因或结果
避免空泛评价
03
怎样表达
严格三段
使用连接词
迁移单元语言
写作目标:立场明确,利弊有证据,结论提出可执行的建议。
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Read for Writing
范文分析:科技观点文的三段式论证框架
结论与立场
引题 + 总体态度
AI assistants are becoming increasingly common in study.
开篇点明讨论对象,并给出“合理使用”的总体立场。
优势 + 风险 + 证据
personalised feedback → efficient learning;blind acceptance → dependence
主体段用具体结果支撑利弊,形成清晰的权衡。
结论 + 使用建议
check information / protect personal data / think independently
重申有条件支持的立场,并提出可执行建议。
语篇逻辑:提出问题 → 权衡利弊 → 给出建议
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Plan the Structure
写前构思:三段分别完成表态、论证和建议
空泛
引题与表态
讨论对象
总体态度
中心观点
我支持、反对,还是有条件支持?
具体
利弊与证据
一项主要优势
一个具体场景
一项潜在风险
哪些事实能支撑我的判断?
Technology is dangerous.
权衡与建议
重申立场
合理使用规则
价值判断
怎样让技术服务于人?
选材原则
只选择最有说服力的一项优势和一项风险,并分别补充具体结果。
第一段简洁表态;第二段信息最丰富;
第三段给出结论和建议。
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Language Toolkit
语言支架:用单元词汇和句型表达科技利弊
引出观点
It can be argued that... / In my view... / As far as I am concerned...
说明优势
make it possible for sb. to do... / provide personalised support / improve efficiency
说明风险
be opposed to... / put privacy at risk / become dependent on... / resist doing...
权衡与建议
on the one hand...on the other hand... / rather than... / use technology responsibly
句式升级:用具体结果支撑观点,用 rather than 表达取舍,用将来时预测影响。
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Sentence Upgrade
写前训练:把中文观点译成准确、具体的英文句子
1
人工智能可以根据学生的不同需求提供个性化帮助。
AI can provide personalised support according to students' different needs.
2
另一方面,过度依赖人工智能可能削弱独立思考能力。
On the other hand, overdependence on AI may weaken independent thinking.
3
我们应制定明确规则,而不是盲目拒绝这项技术。
We should establish clear rules rather than reject the technology blindly.
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Timed Writing 限时写作:15分钟完成一篇80词左右的三段式观点短文
写作要求
围绕AI学习助手表明态度,说明一项优势、一项风险,并提出合理使用建议。
至少使用2个本单元重点词组,并尝试使用1个重点句型。
P1 表态
引出话题 / 明确立场 / 提出中心观点
句型提示:In my view, AI assistants should...
P2 论证
主要优势 / 具体结果 / 潜在风险
句型提示:On the one hand... On the other hand...
P3 建议
权衡结论 / 使用规则 / 价值判断
句型提示:We should...rather than...
完成后检查:是否严格三段?观点是否有证据?时态、词组和拼写是否正确?
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Model Essay 完整范文
Should AI Assistants Be Widely Used in Study?
AI assistants are becoming increasingly common in study. In my view, they should be used wisely because they can support learning but cannot replace independent thinking.
On the one hand, AI can identify weak areas and provide immediate, personalised feedback. On the other hand, students who accept every answer without checking it may become dependent on technology and even receive incorrect information.
All in all, schools should teach students to check AI-generated content and protect personal data. We should make good use of AI rather than allow it to think for us.
评价量表
1 立场明确
2 严格三段
3 证据具体
4 语言迁移
5 时态拼写
每项2分,共10分
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Gaokao Writing Practice 高考应用文写作:校英文报科技专栏征稿
写作任务
假定你是李华,校英文报“Future Life”专栏正在征稿。请以“My Smart Life in 2035”为题写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:1. 一项期待使用的智能技术;2. 它带来的益处;3. 可能的问题及使用建议。
01
体裁与对象
校英文报主题短文
面向中学生读者
02
结构与字数
严格三段式
词数80左右
03
语言迁移
至少2个单元词组
使用将来时表达
限时建议
审题与列提纲3分钟 → 写作12分钟 → 检查2分钟。检查立场、证据、段落、时态和拼写。
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Reference Model
高考应用文参考范文
My Smart Life in 2035
In 2035, I hope to live in a smart home that can learn my daily routine. It will be using sensors to adjust lights and temperature automatically.
The system will make life more comfortable and energy-efficient. It can also monitor my health and warn me of danger. However, personal information may be at risk if the system is not secure.
Therefore, users should protect their data and check important decisions themselves. Technology should serve people rather than control them.
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