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Unit 5 Fun Clubs单元同步写作讲义
本单元写作围绕校园社团展开,要求同学们能介绍自己心仪或参加的社团,运用本单元词汇、because从句、be interested in等句型说明喜欢社团的原因,描述打鼓、画画、爬山等社团活动,表达参与社团的乐趣与收获,常以短文、演讲稿、邮件等形式考查,写作时注意乐器、固定短语的正确使用。
词汇积累
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1. club 俱乐部;社团
2. join 参加;加入
3. choose 选择;挑选
4. drama 戏剧;戏剧表演
5. feel 感受;觉得
6. news 消息;新闻
7. musical 音乐的;有音乐天赋的
8. exactly 正是如此;准确地
9. drum 鼓
10. ability 能力;才能
11. paint 用颜料画;刷油漆
12. climb 攀登;爬
13. more 更多(的)
14. act 扮演;行动
15. interested 感兴趣的
16. nature 自然界;大自然
17. beef 牛肉
18. soon 不久;很快
19. than 比
20. collect 收藏;收集
21. activity 活动
22. quick 迅速的
23. mind 思想;头脑
24. heart 心脏
25. fall 掉落;落下
26. message 信息;消息
27. join the club 加入俱乐部
28. music club 音乐社团
29. paint pictures 画画
30. climb mountains 爬山
31. play the drum 打鼓
32. feel happy 感到开心
33. more friends 更多朋友
34. act in dramas 演戏剧
35. collect things 收集物品
36. nature club 自然社团
37. be interested in 对……感兴趣
38. many activities 许多活动
39. learn new abilities 学习新才艺
40. send messages 发消息
句式积累
开头句:
1. There are many fun clubs in our school.
我们学校有很多有趣的社团。
2. I want to join the music club.
我想要加入音乐社团。
3. My favorite club is the nature club.
我最喜欢的社团是自然社团。
中间句:
1. I am interested in music, so I choose the music club.
我对音乐感兴趣,所以我选择音乐社团。
2. We can play the drum and sing songs in the music club.
我们可以在音乐社团打鼓、唱歌。
3. I like to paint pictures, so I join the art club.
我喜欢画画,所以我加入美术社团。
4. We climb mountains and enjoy beautiful sights in the nature club.
我们在自然社团爬山、欣赏美景。
5. We collect all kinds of small things in the club.
我们在社团里收集各种各样的小物件。
6. I join the drama club because I like acting in dramas.
我加入戏剧社团,因为我喜欢演戏剧。
结尾句:
1. It’s great fun for me to take part in these club activities.
参加这些社团活动对我来说十分有趣。
2. I can learn new abilities and make more friends in the club.
我能在社团学到新才艺,交到更多朋友。
3. I really love my club time after school.
我十分喜爱放学后的社团时光。
佳句仿写
1. 教材原句:I want to join the music club.
仿写:我想要加入自然社团。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 教材原句:I am interested in painting pictures.
仿写:我对爬山很感兴趣。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 教材原句:We can play the drum in the music club.
仿写:我们可以在美术社团画画。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
4. 教材原句:I join the drama club because I like acting.
仿写:我加入自然社团因为我热爱大自然。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
5. 教材原句:It’s great fun for me to take part in club activities.
仿写:参加社团活动对我来说十分有趣。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
典例
学校开展社团招新活动,请你根据提示,以 My Favorite Club 为题写一篇短文,向全班介绍你最喜欢的社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 你最喜欢的社团(音乐社团)
2. 喜欢它的原因(热爱音乐、擅长打鼓,音乐课轻松有趣)
3. 社团日常活动(每周二、四活动,唱歌、打鼓、排练小节目)
4. 你的收获(交到新朋友、学会新才艺、收获很多快乐)
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
审题
① 写作主题:介绍自己最喜爱的校园音乐社团;
② 人称,时态:以第一人称 I、we进行写作,全文使用一般现在时;
③ 写作要点:
(1)开篇点明学校有多样社团,引出自己最爱的音乐社团
(2)说明喜爱社团的两点原因:热爱音乐、擅长打鼓,课堂氛围轻松
(3)介绍社团活动时间与日常练习内容
(4)讲述参与社团后的成长与收获,发出邀请
谋篇布局
开头
引出校园各类社团,开门见山说出最喜欢音乐社团
中间
分层说明喜欢社团的理由,详细描述社团每周的活动内容
结尾
分享自己的收获,热情邀请同学们一起加入
佳作展示
My Favorite Club
There are all kinds of wonderful clubs in our school, such as art club, nature club and drama club. Among them, my favorite club is the music club.
I am really interested in music and I can play the drum well, so I choose this club. We have club activities every Tuesday and Thursday. In the club, we sing beautiful songs and practice playing drums together. Sometimes we also prepare small shows for our school. I can make more friendly classmates and learn new musical skills here.
It’s great fun for me to spend my free time in the music club. If you love music too, welcome to join us!
佳作赏析
亮点词汇:
① all kinds of 各种各样的
② be interested in 对…… 感兴趣
③ practice playing drums 练习打鼓
④ prepare small shows 准备小型节目
⑤ musical skills 音乐才艺;
高分句型:
① There are all kinds of wonderful clubs in our school, such as art club, nature club and drama club.
(使用 there be 句型 + such as 列举事物,丰富文章开篇内容。)
② It’s great fun for me to spend my free time in the music club.
(运用 It’s + 名词 + for sb. to do sth. 高频写作句型,表达个人感受。)
(一)
学校社团招新,请你写短文推荐美术社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 喜欢美术,擅长画画;
2. 社团活动:画风景、卡通、学习调色;
3. 收获:放松心情、交到志同道合好友、提升绘画技巧。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(二)
你打算报名自然社团,请给社团老师写短文自我介绍,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 热爱爬山、亲近大自然;
2. 社团活动:户外观察植物、收集树叶标本;
3. 希望学到自然知识、结识喜欢户外的朋友。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(三)
校园英语报征稿,介绍戏剧社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 社团活动:排练校园短剧、扮演不同角色;
2. 活动时间每周三下午;
3. 收获:锻炼口语、变得自信、学会团队合作。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(四)
班会分享稿,介绍你喜爱音乐社团的理由,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 会打鼓、热爱唱歌;
2. 每周二、周四练习各类乐器;
3. 共同排练校园晚会节目,放松身心。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(五)
英语作文大赛题目,写课后社团活动,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 课后参加收藏社团;
2. 日常收集精美卡片、特色树叶;
3. 和同学分享藏品,丰富课余生活。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(六)
社团招新海报配套短文,介绍运动社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 活动:跑步、篮球、乒乓球;
2. 每周一、周五统一训练;
3. 强身健体,释放学习压力。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(七)
给外国笔友写邮件,介绍你参加的综合才艺社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 社团:综合才艺社团;
2. 活动:画画、唱歌、表演短剧;
3. 既能放松身心,又能不断提升各项才艺。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
$Unit 5 Fun Clubs单元同步写作讲义
本单元写作围绕校园社团展开,要求同学们能介绍自己心仪或参加的社团,运用本单元词汇、because从句、be interested in等句型说明喜欢社团的原因,描述打鼓、画画、爬山等社团活动,表达参与社团的乐趣与收获,常以短文、演讲稿、邮件等形式考查,写作时注意乐器、固定短语的正确使用。
词汇积累
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1. club 俱乐部;社团
2. join 参加;加入
3. choose 选择;挑选
4. drama 戏剧;戏剧表演
5. feel 感受;觉得
6. news 消息;新闻
7. musical 音乐的;有音乐天赋的
8. exactly 正是如此;准确地
9. drum 鼓
10. ability 能力;才能
11. paint 用颜料画;刷油漆
12. climb 攀登;爬
13. more 更多(的)
14. act 扮演;行动
15. interested 感兴趣的
16. nature 自然界;大自然
17. beef 牛肉
18. soon 不久;很快
19. than 比
20. collect 收藏;收集
21. activity 活动
22. quick 迅速的
23. mind 思想;头脑
24. heart 心脏
25. fall 掉落;落下
26. message 信息;消息
27. join the club 加入俱乐部
28. music club 音乐社团
29. paint pictures 画画
30. climb mountains 爬山
31. play the drum 打鼓
32. feel happy 感到开心
33. more friends 更多朋友
34. act in dramas 演戏剧
35. collect things 收集物品
36. nature club 自然社团
37. be interested in 对……感兴趣
38. many activities 许多活动
39. learn new abilities 学习新才艺
40. send messages 发消息
句式积累
开头句:
1. There are many fun clubs in our school.
我们学校有很多有趣的社团。
2. I want to join the music club.
我想要加入音乐社团。
3. My favorite club is the nature club.
我最喜欢的社团是自然社团。
中间句:
1. I am interested in music, so I choose the music club.
我对音乐感兴趣,所以我选择音乐社团。
2. We can play the drum and sing songs in the music club.
我们可以在音乐社团打鼓、唱歌。
3. I like to paint pictures, so I join the art club.
我喜欢画画,所以我加入美术社团。
4. We climb mountains and enjoy beautiful sights in the nature club.
我们在自然社团爬山、欣赏美景。
5. We collect all kinds of small things in the club.
我们在社团里收集各种各样的小物件。
6. I join the drama club because I like acting in dramas.
我加入戏剧社团,因为我喜欢演戏剧。
结尾句:
1. It’s great fun for me to take part in these club activities.
参加这些社团活动对我来说十分有趣。
2. I can learn new abilities and make more friends in the club.
我能在社团学到新才艺,交到更多朋友。
3. I really love my club time after school.
我十分喜爱放学后的社团时光。
佳句仿写
1. 教材原句:I want to join the music club.
仿写:我想要加入自然社团。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
2. 教材原句:I am interested in painting pictures.
仿写:我对爬山很感兴趣。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
3. 教材原句:We can play the drum in the music club.
仿写:我们可以在美术社团画画。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
4. 教材原句:I join the drama club because I like acting.
仿写:我加入自然社团因为我热爱大自然。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
5. 教材原句:It’s great fun for me to take part in club activities.
仿写:参加社团活动对我来说十分有趣。
__________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
1. I want to join the nature club.
2. I am interested in climbing mountains.
3. We can paint pictures in the art club.
4. I join the nature club because I love nature.
5. It’s great fun for me to take part in club activities.
典例
学校开展社团招新活动,请你根据提示,以 My Favorite Club 为题写一篇短文,向全班介绍你最喜欢的社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 你最喜欢的社团(音乐社团)
2. 喜欢它的原因(热爱音乐、擅长打鼓,音乐课轻松有趣)
3. 社团日常活动(每周二、四活动,唱歌、打鼓、排练小节目)
4. 你的收获(交到新朋友、学会新才艺、收获很多快乐)
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
审题
① 写作主题:介绍自己最喜爱的校园音乐社团;
② 人称,时态:以第一人称 I、we进行写作,全文使用一般现在时;
③ 写作要点:
(1)开篇点明学校有多样社团,引出自己最爱的音乐社团
(2)说明喜爱社团的两点原因:热爱音乐、擅长打鼓,课堂氛围轻松
(3)介绍社团活动时间与日常练习内容
(4)讲述参与社团后的成长与收获,发出邀请
谋篇布局
开头
引出校园各类社团,开门见山说出最喜欢音乐社团
中间
分层说明喜欢社团的理由,详细描述社团每周的活动内容
结尾
分享自己的收获,热情邀请同学们一起加入
佳作展示
My Favorite Club
There are all kinds of wonderful clubs in our school, such as art club, nature club and drama club. Among them, my favorite club is the music club.
I am really interested in music and I can play the drum well, so I choose this club. We have club activities every Tuesday and Thursday. In the club, we sing beautiful songs and practice playing drums together. Sometimes we also prepare small shows for our school. I can make more friendly classmates and learn new musical skills here.
It’s great fun for me to spend my free time in the music club. If you love music too, welcome to join us!
佳作赏析
亮点词汇:
① all kinds of 各种各样的
② be interested in 对…… 感兴趣
③ practice playing drums 练习打鼓
④ prepare small shows 准备小型节目
⑤ musical skills 音乐才艺;
高分句型:
① There are all kinds of wonderful clubs in our school, such as art club, nature club and drama club.
(使用 there be 句型 + such as 列举事物,丰富文章开篇内容。)
② It’s great fun for me to spend my free time in the music club.
(运用 It’s + 名词 + for sb. to do sth. 高频写作句型,表达个人感受。)
(一)
学校社团招新,请你写短文推荐美术社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 喜欢美术,擅长画画;
2. 社团活动:画风景、卡通、学习调色;
3. 收获:放松心情、交到志同道合好友、提升绘画技巧。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】
My Favorite Club
Our school has all kinds of wonderful clubs, such as music club, nature club and drama club. Among them, my favorite club is the art club.
I am really interested in drawing, so I join the art club. We draw cute cartoons and beautiful mountain views in our free time. Our art teacher teaches us to mix different colours and improve our painting skills. When I draw pictures, I feel very relaxed. I also make lots of good friends who share the same hobby with me.
It’s great fun for me to spend my after-school time in the art club. If you love drawing, come and join us right now!
[总体分析]
①题材:校园招新推荐说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本篇重点运用 be interested in 表达爱好,用 when 从句描写内心感受,严格按照 “爱好 — 活动 — 收获” 三层结构行文。
[写作步骤]
第一步:总述学校各类社团,开门见山点明自己最喜爱美术社团。
第二步:说明热爱绘画的原因,详细描写社团日常绘画学习活动。
第三步:总结参加社团的收获,热情邀请喜爱画画的同学加入。
[亮点词汇]
① all kinds of 各种各样的
② be interested in 对…… 感兴趣
③ mix different colours 调配不同色彩
④ painting skills 绘画技巧
⑤ share the same hobby 拥有相同爱好
⑥ after-school time 课后时光
[高分句型]
① Among them, my favorite club is the art club.
亮点:among 引导范围对比,开篇句式高级,替代简单的 I like…best。
② When I draw pictures, I feel very relaxed.
亮点:when 引导时间状语从句,丰富句式结构,写出画画时的内心感受。
(二)
你打算报名自然社团,请给社团老师写短文自我介绍,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 热爱爬山、亲近大自然;
2. 社团活动:户外观察植物、收集树叶标本;
3. 希望学到自然知识、结识喜欢户外的朋友。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear teacher,
I’m Li Hua from Class Three, Grade Seven. I want to join the nature club very much. I love climbing mountains and enjoying beautiful natural views in my free time.
In the nature club, we can go outside to watch different plants and collect colourful leaf samples. I hope I can learn lots of useful knowledge about nature there. I also wish to make more friends who love outdoor activities like me.
I really look forward to taking part in all kinds of club activities. Thank you for reading my words!
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:社团申请书信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本文为书信类作文,行文语气礼貌真诚,可使用定语从句修饰人物,提升作文文采档次。
[写作步骤]
第一步:礼貌问候老师,表明自己想要报名自然社团。
第二步:介绍自己热爱户外爬山的爱好,描述社团特色户外活动。
第三步:表达学习自然知识、结交新朋友的期待,礼貌致谢。
[亮点词汇]
① natural views 自然风光
② leaf samples 树叶标本
③ outdoor activities 户外活动
④ look forward to 期待
⑤ take part in 参加
⑥ useful knowledge 有用的知识
[高分句型]
① I love climbing mountains and enjoying beautiful natural views in my free time.
亮点:love doing 并列两个动名词短语,句式整齐,丰富爱好描写。
② I also wish to make more friends who love outdoor activities like me.
亮点:who 引导定语从句修饰 friends,提升作文句式难度。
(三)
校园英语报征稿,介绍戏剧社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 社团活动:排练校园短剧、扮演不同角色;
2. 活动时间每周三下午;
3. 收获:锻炼口语、变得自信、学会团队合作。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Our Drama Club
Do you like acting and talking in front of people? Our school drama club is a wonderful place for you. We have interesting club activities every Wednesday afternoon.
In the club, we practice short school plays together and everyone gets a chance to act different roles. At first I was shy and afraid to speak loudly, but now I am confident enough to perform on the stage. We learn to work as a team when we prepare plays.
We always have great fun when we practice dramas. It helps us improve our spoken English a lot.
[总体分析]
①题材:报刊介绍说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:本篇核心得分技巧是运用前后对比句型,清晰写出自身性格、表达能力的成长变化。
[写作步骤]
第一步:提问引出戏剧社团,交代固定活动时间。
第二步:描写社团排练短剧、扮演角色的日常内容,对比自身前后变化。
第三步:总结戏剧社团带来的成长与收获,推荐同学们参与。
[亮点词汇]
① act different roles 扮演不同角色
② at first 起初
③ confident 自信的
④ work as a team 团队合作
⑤ perform on the stage 在舞台表演
⑥ spoken English 英语口语
[高分句型]
① At first I was shy and afraid to speak loudly, but now I am confident enough to perform on the stage.
亮点:at first 与 now 形成对比,but 转折句式清晰写出自身成长变化。
② It helps us improve our spoken English a lot.
亮点:it 指代前文戏剧练习,improve 表示提升,简洁表达社团作用。
(四)
班会分享稿,介绍你喜爱音乐社团的理由,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 会打鼓、热爱唱歌;
2. 每周二、周四练习各类乐器;
3. 共同排练校园晚会节目,放松身心。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Why I Love Music Club
Among all the school clubs, I love the music club best.
I can play the drum well and I really enjoy singing pop songs. We meet every Tuesday and Thursday to practice different musical instruments. Sometimes we work together to prepare wonderful shows for the school party. Soft music makes me relaxed after busy school lessons.
Playing music with my partners is amazing fun. I hope more students can feel the beauty of music with us.
[总体分析]
①题材:班会发言稿;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:开篇优先使用 Among all… 高级句式,行文多用 so 连接因果逻辑,让文章条理更清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步:对比全校社团,直接点明音乐社团是自己的最爱。
第二步:说明自身特长,介绍固定练习时间与晚会排练活动。
第三步:总结音乐缓解学习压力的作用,号召大家加入音乐社团。
[亮点词汇]
① musical instruments 乐器
② prepare wonderful shows 准备精彩节目
③ school party 校园晚会
④ make me relaxed 使我放松
⑤ pop songs 流行歌曲
⑥ partners 伙伴
[高分句型]
① Among all the school clubs, I love the music club best.
亮点:among 限定范围,开篇高级句式,替代简单句 I like music club best。
② Soft music makes me relaxed after busy school lessons.
亮点:make + 宾语 + 形容词固定结构,生动写出音乐带来的感受。
(五)
英语作文大赛题目,写课后社团活动,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 课后参加收藏社团;
2. 日常收集精美卡片、特色树叶;
3. 和同学分享藏品,丰富课余生活。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
My Favorite After-school Activity
After school, I don’t go home at once. I join the collect club and it becomes my favorite after-school activity.
We collect colourful cards, different tree leaves and small lovely crafts together. We often share our collections and talk about our favorite little things. I meet many classmates with the same collecting hobby every week.
This special club makes my free time colourful and meaningful. I learn to share good things and make new close friends here.
[总体分析]
①题材:竞赛记叙文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作重点掌握 make sb. + 形容词固定结构,突出社团给课余生活带来的积极改变。
[写作步骤]
第一步:说明放学后不立刻回家,参加收藏社团是我最爱的课后活动。
第二步:描写社团收集卡片、树叶,互相交换分享藏品的趣味活动。
第三步:点明社团让课余生活丰富多彩,收获友谊与快乐。
[亮点词汇]
① at once 立刻,马上
② colourful cards 彩色卡片
③ share collections 分享藏品
④ meaningful 有意义的
⑤ crafts 小手工
⑥ close friends 亲密好友
[高分句型]
① After school, I don’t go home at once. I join the collect club and it becomes my favorite after-school activity.
亮点:两句话衔接自然,交代背景,清晰引出文章主题。
② This special club makes my free time colourful and meaningful.
亮点:make + 宾语 + 双形容词并列,突出社团带来的双重好处。
(六)
社团招新海报配套短文,介绍运动社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 活动:跑步、篮球、乒乓球;
2. 每周一、周五统一训练;
3. 强身健体,释放学习压力。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Welcome to Our Sports Club
Do you want to keep healthy and relax yourself after study? Welcome to our school sports club! We have group training every Monday and Friday afternoon.
We can run on the big playground and play all kinds of ball games, such as basketball and ping-pong. Doing sports helps us stay strong and release study pressure. We cheer for each other when we finish hard training.
It’s great fun to exercise with our friendly classmates. Come and join our big warm sports family!
[总体分析]
①题材:招新宣传说明文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:招新宣传类作文适合设问句开头,结尾使用号召语句,贴合宣传文体的表达风格。
[写作步骤]
第一步:设问吸引读者,欢迎同学们加入运动社团。
第二步:交代训练时间,列举跑步、球类等多样运动项目。
第三步:说明运动对身体、心情的好处,欢迎全体同学参与。
[亮点词汇]
① keep healthy 保持健康
② group training 集体训练
③ release study pressure 释放学习压力
④ cheer for each other 互相加油
⑤ playground 操场
⑥ warm family 温暖大家庭
[高分句型]
① Do you want to keep healthy and relax yourself after study?
亮点:设问句开篇,吸引读者,符合招新宣传文体风格。
② It’s great fun to exercise with our friendly classmates.
亮点:单元核心 It’s + 名词 + to do 句型,阅卷高频加分句型。
(七)
给外国笔友写邮件,介绍你参加的综合才艺社团,80 词左右。
提示:
1. 社团:综合才艺社团;
2. 活动:画画、唱歌、表演短剧;
3. 既能放松身心,又能不断提升各项才艺。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【参考范文】
Dear friend,
I join a wonderful talent club in my school and I want to tell you about my happy club life.
We have many kinds of colourful activities here every week. We can draw beautiful pictures, sing sweet songs and act in interesting short plays. When I stay in the club, I can forget all my tiredness from heavy schoolwork. I also improve my different abilities little by little.
This talent club is really a perfect place for me to relax myself and grow better.
Yours,
Li Hua
[总体分析]
①题材:电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:邮件文体语气要自然亲切,多用时间状语从句,分层描写放松身心、提升才艺两类收获。
[写作步骤]
第一步:告知笔友我参加了学校综合才艺社团,写信分享社团生活。
第二步:介绍社团画画、唱歌、表演等多元化趣味活动。
第三步:总结社团的价值,既能放松又能提升自身才艺。
[亮点词汇]
① talent club 才艺社团
② colourful activities 丰富多彩的活动
③ tiredness 疲惫
④ heavy schoolwork 繁重课业
⑤ little by little 一点点地
⑥ perfect place 绝佳场所
[高分句型]
① When I stay in the club, I can forget all my tiredness from heavy schoolwork.
亮点:when 引导时间状语从句,写出社团缓解学习疲惫的作用。
② This talent club is really a perfect place for me to relax myself and grow better.
亮点:不定式 to do 作后置定语,一句话写出社团两大好处。
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