预习07 Unit 2 Amazing numbers书面表达专练【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版八年级英语上册（广州卷）

**基本信息** 基于“奇妙数字”主题，构建分层写作框架+题型专项突破+素材系统支撑的书面表达训练体系，融合数字表达语法与科普文写作逻辑，提升语言表达与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |分层教学|3层次模板（学困生/中等生/优等生）|基础层简单句模板→标准层四段结构→提升层对比数据与衔接词运用|数字表达语法（基数词/序数词等）与写作四要素（场景-事实-数据-感受）递进融合| |题型训练|4类必考题型（短文/邮件/校刊投稿/对比作文）|不同文体结构（如邮件含标准格式与反问结尾），专项突破数量语法（the number of/a number of）|题型与课标话题“人与社会”对应，覆盖中考高频应用文体| |素材积累|核心词汇（hundred/thousand等）+8个万能句型|高频短语（hundreds of等）与模板句型（Numbers are everywhere...）|素材服务语法准确应用与内容趣味拓展，培养观察与探索能力|

【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版八年级英语上册（广州卷） 预习07 Unit 2 Amazing numbers书面表达专练 一、主题整体定位 （1）课标话题 人与社会——数字、数学科普、生活中的数字奥秘；单元核心主题：Amazing numbers 奇妙的数字 （2）写作核心立意 1. 挖掘生活、自然、历史里有趣的数字知识，感受数字的奇妙； 2. 学会使用基数词、序数词、大数表达、the number of / a number of 等单元核心语法； 3. 培养观察生活、乐于探索数学与数字奥秘的兴趣。 （3）文体、时态、字数、绑定语法 1. 文体：科普说明文（核心）、英文邮件、校园英文报投稿；词数80–110词 2. 时态：一般现在时（客观数字常识），少量一般过去时（历史数据） 3. 写作必考语法点（必须融入作文） ① 基数词、序数词、大数 hundred/thousand/million用法 ② hundreds of / thousands of 模糊数量表达 ③ the number of（谓语单数）& a number of（谓语复数） ④ win / beat，reply to 单元重点动词搭配 （4）写作固定四要素（写作答题框架） 1. Where can we see numbers？生活各处存在数字（时间、日期、班级、人口、自然） 2. Interesting facts about numbers 奇妙数字科普（自然、数学、生活冷知识） 3. Use numbers to describe data 用数字描述数量、排名、年份 4. Your feelings：你对数字的看法，数字带给我们的便利与乐趣 二、分层写作教学思路 基础层（学困生）三段简单模板 1. 开头：数字无处不在，生活离不开数字； 2. 中间：列举2–3处生活数字，简单使用基数词、序数词描述； 3. 结尾：数字很奇妙，我很喜欢研究数字。 要求：简单句为主，正确使用基础数字表达，无复杂句式。 标准层（中等生）四段完整结构 1. 开篇点题：Numbers are everywhere around us； 2. 生活场景：学校、城市、自然中的各类数字（班级排名、城市人口、一年天数）； 3. 趣味科普：1–2个奇妙数字小知识，区分the number of / a number of； 4. 结尾感悟：数字方便生活，蕴藏很多有趣知识。 提升层（优等生）拓展升华 1. 增加对比数据，使用hundreds of、大数表达丰富内容； 2. 加入历史、动物、自然数字冷知识增强趣味性； 3. 加入衔接词 First, Besides, What’s more； 4. 升华：数学与数字是探索世界的工具，激发探索欲。 教学重难点 重点：正确运用基数词、序数词、数量短语描述数据，区分the number of与a number of； 难点：准确使用hundred/thousand有无s和of的规则，科普类文章语言客观通顺。 三、单元四大必考书面表达题型 题型1 基础核心短文 My Amazing Numbers（课内原题） 要求以 My Amazing Numbers 为题写短文，要点： 1. 生活里随处可见数字； 2. 写出3个和生活相关的数字事实（年龄、班级、月份、城市人数等）； 3. 分享一个你知道的奇妙数字小知识； 4. 谈谈你对数字的感受。 题型2 应用文高频：邮件介绍数字趣味知识 假定你是李华，笔友Peter对神奇数字很感兴趣，请写一封邮件向他介绍生活中有趣的数字，分享数字小科普。邮件标准格式，文末反问对方身边有趣的数字。 题型3 校刊投稿：Amazing Numbers in Our Life（拔高题型） 学校英文报纸征集科普短文，介绍生活、自然中的奇妙数字，可搭配数据描写，适合优生拓展。 题型4 对比类作文 Numbers in Our School 用数字介绍校园数据：班级数量、学生人数、年级排名、图书馆藏书，区分the number of / a number of，专项训练数量语法。 四、单元专属写作素材（词汇、短语、万能句型） （1） 核心数字类词汇 number 数字；hundred 百；thousand 千；million 百万 ordinal number 序数词；cardinal number 基数词；data 数据 population 人口；page 页码；century 世纪；year 年份 （2）高频写作短语 hundreds of 成百上千；thousands of 成千上万 the number of ……的数量；a number of 许多 win the first prize 获得一等奖；the twentieth century 二十世纪 on the fifth day 在第五天；three hundred students 三百名学生 （3）万能高分句型 1. Numbers are everywhere in our daily life. 2. The number of students in our class is forty-five. 3. A number of students are interested in maths and numbers. 4. There are three hundred and sixty-five days in a year. 5. Hundreds of amazing facts are hidden in numbers. 6. July is the seventh month of the year. 7. It is amazing to find fun facts about different numbers. 8. Numbers help us record time, data and everything around us. 五、书面表达专练 1．请以 “Amazing Numbers in My Eyes” 为题，写一篇短文。 内容包括： 1. 你认为令人惊奇的数字有哪些； 2. 这些数字令人惊奇的原因； 3. 数字在生活中的重要性。 要求：不少于70词，语句通顺，可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．以“Amazing numbers in our life”为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文。 要点： 1. 数字在生活中无处不在，用途广泛； 2. 一些数字很惊人，如人口、高度、长度等； 3. 学习数字很有趣，帮助我们更好地认识世界。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．从原始的计数方式到今天的数字体系的发展历程展示了人类的伟大智慧。假如你是李华，你校正在举办以“我与数字”为主题的征文活动，请你以“Numbers in Daily Life”为题，写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容包括： （1）数字的重要性； （2）在日常生活中，数字有哪些用途； （3）讲述一段你与数字之间的故事，并说说你的个人感受。 要求： （1）词数80左右； （2）短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．请以“日常生活中的数字”为题写一篇短文。 内容提示：1. 你认为数字在我们日常生活中重要吗? 2. 日常生活中，我们都在什么时候会使用到数字? 3. 假如我们的生活中没有了数字，那会是怎样的呢? 要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。 ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．如今，数字设备 (如手机、平板、电脑) 正多方面影响着人们的学习与生活。假如你是李明，给学校英语周刊写一篇题为“My Digital Life”的征文，谈谈你使用电子设备的个人经历，感受和建议。 Everyone feels excited about China’s great technology development. We would like you to say something about your digital life.·What digital device(s) do you usually use? ·What do you do with the digital device(s)? (至少两项活动) ·What do you think of them? ·What’s your advice on using them well ? Looking forward to hearing from you! 要求： 1. 文中必须包含4个内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇供选择； 2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息； 3 词数：80词左右。文章开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。 My Digital Life With the development of technology in China, digital devices have become an important part of my life. I usually use my _______________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．以“日常生活中的数字”为题写一篇短文，词数不少于70词： Suggested outlines: * Do you think numbers are important in our daily life? * When do we use numbers in our daily life? * What will our life be like without numbers? ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1．例文 Amazing Numbers in My Eyes Interesting numbers are all around us. From lucky numbers to important dates, numbers play a significant role in our lives. Here are a few examples of interesting numbers that I find fascinating. Firstly, the number 7 is often considered a lucky number in many cultures. It is believed to bring good fortune and is often associated with spirituality. Another interesting number is 13, which is often considered unlucky. This superstition is so strong that many buildings don’t have a 13th floor, and some people avoid doing anything important on the 13th day of the month. However, in some cultures, such as Italy, 13 is considered a lucky number. Numbers are very important in our daily lives. We use numbers to count, measure, calculate, and understand the world around us. From simple tasks like checking the time to more complex activities like budgeting and financial planning, numbers play a crucial role in our decision-making processes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：以“Amazing Numbers in My Eyes”为题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引入话题——令人惊奇的数字； 第二步，介绍有哪些令人惊奇的数字及原因； 第三步，表明数字在生活中的重要性。 [亮点词汇] ①play a significant role in在……中发挥重要作用 ②is associated with与……相联系 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①Here are a few examples of interesting numbers that I find fascinating.（定语从句） ②Another interesting number is 13, which is often considered unlucky.（定语从句） 2．例文： Amazing numbers in our life Numbers are everywhere in our life. We use them to count, know time, age and population. Some numbers are really amazing. The world’s population is very large. Some buildings and mountains have surprising height and length. Learning numbers is very interesting. Numbers help us to know the world better. I enjoy studying numbers and finding some amazing facts around us. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：说明文/夹叙夹议，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：数字无处不在及广泛用途、惊人的数字（人口/高度/长度等）、学习数字的乐趣与意义 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）为主，结合客观事实的第三人称 注意事项：紧扣“Amazing”主题，字数不少于60词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明数字在生活中无处不在且用途广泛 主体段：举例说明一些令人惊叹的数字（如人口、建筑高度等） 结尾段：总结学习数字的乐趣，升华主题（帮助认识世界） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：数字无处不在且用途广泛 存在状态：Numbers are everywhere in our life./Numbers can be found everywhere./We are surrounded by numbers. 用途表达：We use them to count, know time, age and population./They are widely used for counting, telling time, and recording ages./Numbers play an important role in our daily life, such as counting and telling time. 要点二：惊人的数字 过渡句：Some numbers are really amazing./It is surprising to see some big numbers./Some numbers are quite unbelievable. 具体举例（人口）：The world’s population is very large./There are over 8 billion people in the world./The population of the Earth is growing fast. 具体举例（高度/长度）：Some buildings and mountains have surprising height and length./Many tall buildings and long rivers have amazing heights and lengths./The height of some mountains and the length of some rivers are truly shocking. 要点三：学习数字的乐趣与意义 学习感受：Learning numbers is very interesting./It is great fun to learn about numbers./I find learning numbers really fascinating. 意义作用：Numbers help us to know the world better./They help us understand the world around us./Numbers are like a key to opening the door to the world. 3．例文： Numbers in Daily Life Numbers are everywhere. Without numbers, modern society could hardly function. We rely on numbers for time management. They are essential for financial transactions, from counting money to checking bank balances. Moreover, phone numbers, ID numbers and postal codes help identify and connect us. Once, I failed a maths test due to carelessness in number calculations. I was frustrated but learnt a valuable lesson: precision matters. Since then, I’ve become more cautious, realizing that even a tiny error can lead to big mistakes. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏写作要点中的信息，并适当添加内容，使文章语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，介绍数字的重要性； 第二步，具体介绍在日常生活中，数字有哪些用途； 第三步，讲述一段自己与数字之间的故事，并说说自己的个人感受。 [亮点词汇] ① time management时间管理 ② financial transactions金融交易 ③ due to由于 ④ frustrated沮丧 [高分句型] Since then, I’ve become more cautious, realizing that even a tiny error can lead to big mistakes.（现在分词短语作伴随状语；that引导的宾语从句） 4．例文： Numbers are very important in our daily life. Maths teachers use numbers to teach us how to do calculation and solve problems. We read numbers from newspapers to know the information and facts. When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices. Without numbers, the whole world will be in a mess, and it will be difficult for us to even tell the time. That’s why numbers are so important that we can’t live without it. 【详解】［总体分析］ ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态为一般现在时。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点，逻辑清晰。 ［写作步骤］ 第一步，开篇点明主题，直接指出数字在日常生活中非常重要。 第二步，从数学老师教学、阅读报纸获取信息、超市价格展示这几个方面详细阐述数字的用途和重要性。 第三步，通过假设没有数字的情况，强调数字不可或缺，总结数字的重要性。 ［亮点词汇］ ① solve problems解决问题 ［高分句型］ ① That’s why numbers are so important that we can’t live without it. （so...that...句型） 5．例文： My Digital Life With the development of technology in China, digital devices have become an important part of my life. I usually use my smartphone and computer. I mainly do two things online. First, I use learning apps to review lessons and do homework, which helps me understand difficult knowledge better. Second, I video chat with my grandparents who live in another city, so we can keep in touch easily. Digital devices are really helpful, but they also have some disadvantages. Sometimes I may waste time on games if I’m not careful. To use them well, I think we should make a plan. For example, we can set a time limit for playing games. In this way, we can enjoy the benefits of digital life without being caught up in it. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ②时态：主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：必须包含4个内容要点 (使用的设备、至少两项活动、看法、建议)，可适当发挥，如添加具体例子。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明数字设备是“我”生活的重要部分，说明“我”日常使用电子设备的时长； 第二步，介绍“我”在线上的两项核心活动——用学习类App辅助学习、与异地祖父母视频聊天； 第三步，辩证看待数字设备，既肯定其帮助，也指出易沉迷游戏的弊端； 第四步，提出合理使用数字设备的方法 (制定计划、限时娱乐)，强调平衡享受其益处与避免沉迷。 [亮点词汇] ①smartphone智能手机 ②keep in touch保持联系 ③focus on专注于 [高分句型] ①First, I use learning apps to review lessons and do homework, which helps me understand difficult knowledge better. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Sometimes I may waste time on games if I’m not careful.  (if引导的条件状语从句) 6．例文： Numbers in our daily life Numbers are very important in our daily life. Maths teachers use numbers to teach us how to do calculation and solve problems. We read numbers from newspapers to know the information and facts. When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices. Without numbers, it will be difficult for us to even tell the time. That’s why numbers are so important that we can’t live without it. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。本文以“日常生活中的数字”为题展开描述，文中介绍日常生活中什么时候会用到数词，以及如果没有数字，我们的生活会是什么样子的。 2.例文点评：本文主要采用的是第一人称，时态采用的是一般现在时。准确运用时态，并保持主谓一致。逻辑性强，语句表达通顺。 3.高分亮点： 短语：use sth to do sth 用……做某事；be difficult for sb对某人来说很困难。 句子：When we go to the supermarket, numbers can be seen everywhere to show the prices句中when引导的时间状语从句；That’s why numbers are so important that we can’t live without it句中so…that引导的结果状语从句。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $