内容正文:
英 语
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Unit 2 Inspiring People
单元写作·以读促写(Writing & Project)
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主题解读
1.本单元的写作主题是:介绍你心中鼓舞人心的榜样,表达对榜样的敬
佩之情,树立向榜样学习的意识,建立正确的价值观。要求你能描述榜
样的基本信息、主要成就与高尚品质,并阐述榜样对你自身的影响。
2.在写作时,你可以遵循“点明人物 — 介绍事迹 — 总结感受”的逻辑
结构,并有意识地运用本单元的语法——It is + 形容词 + of sb+to do
sth.句式介绍榜样的品质。这样既能清晰组织内容,又能自然融入语法
学习,使你的表达更有说服力。
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范文赏析
A Great Inspiration in My Life
There are a lot of great people
in the world. When talking about
inspiring people, the first name that
comes to my mind is Wang Yaping.
I'll share her story with you.→ 开头
段:引出要介绍的榜样人物 【范文结构分析】
1.请从开头段中找出引出榜样
人物的句子并抄写。
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When talking about inspiring people, the first name that comes to my mind is Wang Yaping.
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Wang Yaping is China's first
woman to walk in space. To be an
astronaut, she had to train hard for
years and faced many challenges.
And the most amazing part of her
was that she gave a live class in
space and shared the beauty of
science with students. She is full of
courage and 2.请在第二段中找出总述王亚
平“核心成就”的句子并抄写。
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请找出体现她 “精神品质” 的
句子并抄写。
Wang Yaping is China's first woman to walk in space.
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wisdom, and she shows that women
can do great things in any field.→
主体段:介绍榜样人物的事迹及精神品
质
Wang Yaping inspires me to
chase my dream bravely. I will work
hard and try my best to be a useful
person in the future.→结尾段:表达
作者的感悟与决心 ___________________________
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3.请在第三段中找出表达作者
“个人感悟与决心” 的句子并抄
写。
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She is full of courage and
wisdom, and she shows that
women can do great things
in any field.
I will work hard and try my best to be a useful person in the future.
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【佳句仿写】
1.When talking about inspiring people, the first name that comes to
my mind is Wang Yaping. 当谈到能激励人心的人物时,我首先想到的
名字是王亚平。
仿写:当谈到梦想的力量时,我首先想到的例子是Martin Luther King。
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When talking about the power of dreams, the first example
that comes to my mind is Martin Luther King.
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2.I will work hard and try my best to be a useful person in the
future.我会努力工作,并尽我最大的努力在未来成为一个有用的人。
仿写:如果我们竭尽全力勇敢地面对困难,那么我们迟早会实现自己的
梦想。
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If we try our best to face difficulties bravely, we will achieve
our dreams sooner or later.
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素材储备
【开头句】
1.Everyone has a person he/she admires, and the one I admire the
most is … 每个人都有自己崇拜的人,而我最钦佩的那个人是……
2.When talking about inspiring people, the first name that comes to
my mind is … 当谈到能鼓舞人心的人物时,我首先想到名字的是……
3.Among all the great people in the world, I admire … the most
for his/her spirit of … 在世界上所有伟大的人物当中,我最钦佩的
是……因为他/她的……精神。
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【中间句——核心成就】
1.He/She spent his/her whole life doing research on … and made
great achievements. 他/她一生都致力于研究……并且取得了巨大的成就。
2.He/She developed … and helped solve the problem of … 他/她研
究出了……并帮助解决了……的问题。
3.He/She was a creative person who built a balance/bridge
between … and … 他/她是位富有创造力的人,在……和……之间建立
起一种平衡/桥梁。
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【中间句——品质提炼】
4.He/She was full of wisdom and courage, and never gave up when
facing difficulties. 他/她充满智慧与勇气,在面对困难时从不放弃。
5.He/She volunteered as a(n) … to help people in need, even
though it was very hard. 他/她志愿担任……一职,来帮助那些需要帮
助的人,尽管这工作非常艰难。
【中间句——社会影响】
6.It was … of him/her to … and he/she set a good example for us.
他/她的这一做法很……,而且他/她为我们树立了一个很好的榜样。
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【结尾句】
1.The spirit of … inspires me to work hard at my study and chase
my dream……… 的精神激励着我努力学习,去追寻自己的梦想。
2.I hope I can be a person like him/her, who does something
meaningful for others. 我希望自己能成为像他/她那样的人,能够为他
人做些有意义的事情。
3.From …, I learn that we should keep going even if we meet
difficulties. 从……身上我学到了即便遇到困难,我们也应该继续前行。
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【俗语谚语】
1.Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者,事竟成。
2.Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于空谈。
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写作练笔
榜样是照亮前行之路的灯塔,是点燃理想之焰的火种。在我们的成
长历程中,总有一些令人敬佩的人,他们身上的闪光点给予我们温暖与
力量,让我们在迷茫时找到方向,不断前行。学校正在开展 “榜样的力
量” 主题征文活动,请你以“The Power of Inspiring People”为题,用
英语写一篇短文参赛。
写作提示: 1.Who is the inspiring people in your heart?
2.What spirits does he/she have?
3.What can you learn from him/her?
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写作要求: 1.文中须包含以上提示的所有内容,可适当增加细节;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称;
3.词数100左右(文中已给出内容不计入总词数)。
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One possible version:
The Power of Inspiring People
Everyone needs inspiring people in their lives, because they can
light up our dreams and push us forward. _______________________
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For me, the most inspiring person is Zhan Tianyou, known as the father of China's railways.
He was full of wisdom and courage, and never gave up when
facing difficulties. At a time when foreign experts doubted China's
ability to build its own railways, Zhan Tianyou led the construction
of China's first independently designed railway. Finally, he achieved
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his goal and showed that Chinese engineers could achieve what
others thought was impossible.
From Zhan Tianyou, I learn that nothing is impossible with
hard work and determination. His story inspires me to face
difficulties bravely in my life and try my best to realize my own
dreams.
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