摘要:
该初中英语课件围绕“人们周围的变化及影响”写作主题,结合一般过去时与现在完成时核心语法,通过主题解读明确“引入—变化—影响”写作思路,以范文赏析搭建结构支架,佳句仿写与素材储备提供语言支持,帮助学生构建从理解到应用的学习脉络。
其亮点在于以“以读促写”整合教学,通过范文结构分析(如开头引入主题、主体描述变化、结尾表达感受)培养思维品质,分类素材(开头句、中间变化句、结尾句)提升语言能力,仿写练习强化学习策略。实例包括“Changes in My Neighbourhood”范文的结构拆解和多样化素材句,助力学生系统掌握写作框架,提升表达逻辑与语言运用能力,教师可高效开展教学,学生能养成科学写作习惯。
内容正文:
英 语
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Unit 1 The Changing World
单元写作·以读促写(Writing & Project)
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主题解读
1.本单元的写作主题是:人们周围发生的变化及这些变化对人们的影响。
2.在写作时,你可以遵循“引入—变化—影响”的思路,并有意识地运用
本单元的核心语法——一般过去时(描述过去的动作或状态)和现在完
成时(描述从过去持续到现在的变化或对现在造成的影响)。
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范文赏析
Changes in My Neighbourhood
My neighbourhood has changed
greatly in recent years. (开头段:引
入主题)
In the past, people lived a simple
life with few entertainments. As for
houses, we used to live in small old
houses, but now we have bigger 【范文结构分析】
1.体会开头段是如何引入主题
的并抄写下来。
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My neighbourhood has
changed greatly in recent
years.
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and more comfortable flats. We have
big, beautiful parks and clean, wide
streets. Many families have become
richer, and some even travel abroad
during holidays.(主体段:阐述具体的
变化) 2.请在第二段中找出并抄写描
述房屋变化的句子。
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As for houses, we used to
live in small old houses, but
now we have bigger and
more comfortable flats.
续表
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I feel so proud of these changes.
They show the rapid development of
our country and bring us a more
comfortable and colourful life. I
believe, in the future, my hometown
will become even better with the
efforts of each of us. (结尾段:表达
个人感受及期望) 3.请在第三段中找出并抄写表
达个人感受或期望的句子。
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I feel so proud of these
changes.
I believe, in the future, my
hometown will become even
better with the efforts of
each of us.
续表
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【佳句仿写】
1.In the past, people lived a simple life with few entertainments.在过
去人们过着简单的生活,娱乐活动很少。
仿写:在过去,农民们过着忙碌的生活,几乎很少休息。
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In the past, farmers lived a busy life with little rest.
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2.They show the rapid development of our country and bring us a
more comfortable and colourful life.它们展现了我们国家的快速发展,
并为我们带来了更加舒适和丰富多彩的生活。
仿写:这些变化标志着我们国家的巨大进步,并为我们带来了更加便捷
和现代的生活。
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These changes mark the great progress of our country and
bring us a more convenient and modern life.
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素材储备
【开头句】
1.From villages to big cities, our homes and streets show how
society is changing.从乡村到城市,我们的家园与街道展现着社会的变迁。
2.In recent years, my hometown has changed a lot, which surprises
me a lot. 近年来,我的家乡发生了巨大的变化,这让我感到十分惊讶。
3.New buildings, more cars, and less green space are changing our
daily life and our communities. 新的建筑、更多的汽车和更少的绿地
正在改变我们的日常生活和社区。
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4.Change is a part of life, and my hometown is no different.改变是
生活的一部分,我的家乡也不例外。
5.With time, everything changes, including the place we call home.
随着时间的推移,一切都在改变,包括我们称之为家的地方。
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【中间句——描述具体的变化】
1.In the past, this street was quiet. Now, it is busy with cars day
and night.过去这条街道很安静。现在它日夜车流繁忙。
2.As for houses, we used to live in small old houses, but now we
have bigger and more comfortable flats. 至于房子,我们过去住在小
的旧房子里,但现在我们有了更大、更舒适的公寓。
3.Now people have developed the habit of throwing rubbish into
bins so the city looks cleaner and more beautiful. 如今,人们养成了
将垃圾扔进垃圾桶的习惯,因此城市看起来更加整洁美丽。#1.2
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4.For example, we now have a big supermarket instead of many
small shops. 例如,我们现在有了一个大超市,取代了许多小商店。
5.Technology has made a big difference in our daily life. 科技给我们
的日常生活带来了巨大改变。
6.However, some old traditions are slowly disappearing.然而,一些旧
传统正在慢慢消失。#1.5
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【结尾句】
1.People feel so proud of their community. 人们为他们的社区感到非
常自豪。
2.The changes have brought us great benefits. 这些变化为我们带来了
巨大的益处。
3.I believe, in the future, my hometown will become even better
with the efforts of each of us. 我相信,在未来,在我们每个人的努力
下,我的家乡会变得更好。#3
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4.I hope my hometown keeps its beauty while growing.我希望我的家
乡在发展的同时能保持它的美丽。
5.No matter how it changes, it will always be my home.无论它如何
改变,它永远是我的家。#5
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【俗语谚语】
1.Small changes make a big difference. 微小的改变能带来巨大的不同。
2.There's no place like home.金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。
3.Small actions bring big changes! 微小的行动带来巨大的改变!
4.The best changes start with small steps. 最好的改变始于微小的行动。
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写作练笔
假设你是李华,你市日报社正在举办以“What My Hometown
Surprises Me”为题的征稿活动,让大家记录家乡的那些使自己感到惊喜
的变化。请你结合下面的图示信息,用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿。
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写作要求: 1.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
2.词数100左右。
One possible version:
What My Hometown Surprises Me
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In recent years, my hometown has changed a lot, which
surprises me a lot.
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Firstly, the roads weren't as clean and smooth as they are now.
There used to be rubbish on the roads and in other public areas.
Now people have developed the habit of throwing rubbish into bins
so the city looks cleaner and more beautiful. Secondly, people are
friendlier than before. Thirdly, the traffic is much better than
before. The buses will stop and wait when someone is about to
cross the street.
I'm pleased with all the changes in my hometown and I'm
proud of being a member of it. I will work harder in the future to
make it a better place.
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