Unit 6 Energy,nature and us（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“能源与自然”为主题，构建“文体方法-词汇句型-写作应用”三维训练体系，系统提炼书信、说明、叙事类写作结构，强化语言能力与环保意识培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|3类文体结构示例|书信格式规范/说明类开篇点题/叙事类情节推进|从文体框架到主题表达的逻辑递进| |核心词汇|3类（能源/行为/物品）|分类记忆法（功能场景关联）|概念生成→应用场景拓展| |参考句型|4类功能句型|句型模板化（描述/建议/规则/书信）|句型功能与主题内容的匹配| |写作任务|2个任务+基础/提高范文|分层写作指导（结构套用→内容拓展）|方法迁移到实际写作的能力训练|

Unit 6 Energy,nature and us 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （书信类） Dear Editor, 书信格式：正式书信标准开头，明确收件对象，符合书信写作规范 We are running out of resources. But it is not too late. 开篇引入：点明能源资源匮乏的现状，同时传递改善的希望，引发读者共鸣 We can take quick showers to save energy and water. 提出建议：给出具体可操作的节能方法，让内容更具实用性 Sincerely, 书信格式：正式书信标准结尾，符合书信写作的格式要求 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （说明类） Wind power, solar power, and water power are types of green energy. 开篇点题：明确说明对象，介绍绿色能源的核心类型，让读者快速把握说明核心 We use green energy to light, heat and cool our homes and schools. 用途说明：具体阐述绿色能源的实际应用场景，增强说明内容的直观性 Follow the "3R" rules to save energy and resources—every little thing helps! 方法总结：引出节能核心原则，强调行动的价值，完成说明内容的总结升华 写作方法指引- 原文指路 （叙事类） It was a sunny day. Grandpa, Binbin, and Robin played outside. 背景铺垫：交代故事的时间、人物与场景，为后续情节发展做铺垫 Grandpa had an idea. "The sun is very hot. We can use solar power to cook our lunch here," he said. 情节推进：通过人物对话引出利用绿色能源的核心事件，推动故事发展 "The food is delicious, and we cooked with no gas or electricity! That's super cool!" said Binbin. 主题体现：通过人物的真实感受，展现绿色能源环保、节能的优势，升华叙事主题 一、核心词汇 1. 能源类型类 wind power（风能）solar power（太阳能）water power（水能）electricity（电） green energy（绿色能源） 2. 节能行为类 save energy（节约能源）take quick showers（快速淋浴）use LED lighting（使用LED灯） unplug computers/TVs（拔掉电脑/电视插头）walk more and drive less（多走路，少开车） use air conditioners less（少用空调）reuse bags（重复使用袋子） recycle bottles/boxes/clothes/toys/books（回收瓶子/盒子/旧衣服/玩具/书籍） use both sides of paper（纸张双面使用） 3. 相关物品类 solar oven（太阳能烤箱）air conditioner（空调）LED light（LED灯）computer（电脑） TV（电视） 二、参考句型 1. 描述绿色能源 Wind power, solar power, and water power are types of green energy. They are clean and good for Mother Earth. We use green energy to light, heat and cool our homes and schools. We also use it to run cars, buses and trains. Sunlight is a great source of energy. It can help light our house, run cars and cook food. 2. 提出节能建议 We should save energy because many resources are running out. We can take quick showers to save energy and water. We should always unplug our computers and TVs when we don't use them. We can use LED lighting to use less electricity. We should walk more and drive less to reduce energy use. School is over. We should turn off the lights to save energy. 3. 介绍"3R"规则 Follow the "3R" rules to save energy and resources—every little thing helps! Reduce means we should use air conditioners less, walk more and drive less, and take quick showers. Reuse means we should bring our own bags to shops and markets. Recycle means we should recycle bottles, boxes, old clothes, toys and books. 4. 书信写作（给编辑的信） We are running out of resources. But it is not too late. We can do things to change this. Here are my ideas to save energy and resources. First, we can take quick showers to save water and energy. Second, we should use LED lighting at home and school. 易错点提示 1.词汇拼写易错：注意solar不要误写为soler，recycle不要遗漏字母；air conditioner是可数名词，表达多个时要加复数形式s。 2.语法结构易错：use sth to do sth是固定结构，比如use solar power to cook，不能省略to；should是情态动词，后面必须接动词原形，比如We should save energy，不能写成We should saves energy；help to do sth中，help后可直接接动词原形，也可接to+动词原形，不要错误添加s。 3.介词搭配易错：表示“从太阳获取能源”用energy from the sun，介词用from，不要误用of；表示“带袋子去商店”用bring our own bags to shops，介词用to，不要误用for。 写作一 请你介绍一下你所了解的绿色能源，包括它们是什么、有什么好处，以及我们可以如何利用它们。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： wind power, solar power, water power, green energy, solar oven 写作二 假设你是一名学生，给校报编辑写一封信，分享你对校园节能的建议，告诉大家我们可以做哪些小事来节约能源。 要求： 1. 书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： save energy, LED lighting, unplug computers, use both sides of paper, walk more 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Wind power, solar power and water power are types of green energy. They are clean and good for Mother Earth. （能源种类）We use green energy to light our homes and schools. We can also use solar power to cook food with a solar oven. （能源用途） Green energy helps us save other resources. （收获感悟） 范文（提高版）： Wind power, solar power and water power are great green energy sources. They are clean and don't hurt our planet. （能源种类）We use wind power to run some buses, and water power to make electricity for our cities. At home, my mom uses a solar oven to bake bread. （能源用途） Green energy is important for our future. （收获感悟） 写作二 范文（基础版）： Dear Editor, We should save energy at school because many resources are running out. Here are my ideas. （写信缘由）First, we can use LED lighting in classrooms to use less electricity. Second, we should unplug computers after class. Third, we can use both sides of paper. （节约办法）Every little thing helps! （收获感悟） Yours, Li Ming 范文（提高版）： Dear Editor, Our school can do more to save energy, and here are my suggestions. （写信缘由）First, we should use LED lighting in all classrooms and turn off lights when we leave. Second, we need to unplug computers and TVs after school. Third, we can walk more instead of taking school buses for short trips. Also, we should recycle boxes and books in our classroom. （节约办法）Let's save energy together! （收获感悟） Yours, Li Ming 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $