Unit 6 Energy,nature and us（写作突破专项训练）英语人教PEP版六年级上册（新教材）

Unit 6  Energy,nature and us                       

写作方法指引- 原文指路 （书信类）

Dear Editor,

书信格式：正式书信标准开头，明确收件对象，符合书信写作规范

We are running out of resources. But it is not too late.

开篇引入：点明能源资源匮乏的现状，同时传递改善的希望，引发读者共鸣

We can take quick showers to save energy and water.

提出建议：给出具体可操作的节能方法，让内容更具实用性 Sincerely, 书信格式：正式书信标准结尾，符合书信写作的格式要求

 

写作方法指引- 原文指路 （说明类）

Wind power, solar power, and water power are types of green energy.

开篇点题：明确说明对象，介绍绿色能源的核心类型，让读者快速把握说明核心

We use green energy to light, heat and cool our homes and schools.

用途说明：具体阐述绿色能源的实际应用场景，增强说明内容的直观性

Follow the "3R" rules to save energy and resources—every little thing helps!

方法总结：引出节能核心原则，强调行动的价值，完成说明内容的总结升华

 

写作方法指引- 原文指路 （叙事类）

It was a sunny day. Grandpa, Binbin, and Robin played outside.

背景铺垫：交代故事的时间、人物与场景，为后续情节发展做铺垫

Grandpa had an idea. "The sun is very hot. We can use solar power to cook our lunch here," he said.

情节推进：通过人物对话引出利用绿色能源的核心事件，推动故事发展

"The food is delicious, and we cooked with no gas or electricity! That's super cool!" said Binbin.

主题体现：通过人物的真实感受，展现绿色能源环保、节能的优势，升华叙事主题

一、核心词汇

1. 能源类型类

wind power（风能）solar power（太阳能）water power（水能）electricity（电）

green energy（绿色能源）

2. 节能行为类

save energy（节约能源）take quick showers（快速淋浴）use LED lighting（使用LED灯）

unplug computers/TVs（拔掉电脑/电视插头）walk more and drive less（多走路，少开车）

use air conditioners less（少用空调）reuse bags（重复使用袋子）

recycle bottles/boxes/clothes/toys/books（回收瓶子/盒子/旧衣服/玩具/书籍）

use both sides of paper（纸张双面使用）

3. 相关物品类

solar oven（太阳能烤箱）air conditioner（空调）LED light（LED灯）computer（电脑）

TV（电视）

二、参考句型

1. 描述绿色能源

Wind power, solar power, and water power are types of green energy. They are clean and good for Mother Earth.

We use green energy to light, heat and cool our homes and schools. We also use it to run cars, buses and trains.

Sunlight is a great source of energy. It can help light our house, run cars and cook food.

2. 提出节能建议

We should save energy because many resources are running out.

We can take quick showers to save energy and water.

We should always unplug our computers and TVs when we don't use them.

We can use LED lighting to use less electricity.

We should walk more and drive less to reduce energy use.

School is over. We should turn off the lights to save energy.

3. 介绍"3R"规则

Follow the "3R" rules to save energy and resources—every little thing helps!

Reduce means we should use air conditioners less, walk more and drive less, and take quick showers.