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【暑假预习】2026-2027学年沪教版七年级英语上册(广州卷)
预习07 Unit 2 School life 书面表达专练
一、整体主题定位
(1)课标话题归属
人与自我—校园生活、日常作息;核心主题:My school life / My school day(我的校园生活/校园一日)
(2)写作核心立意
1. 客观描述初中每日校园作息、课程、课间、午餐、课后社团活动;
2. 表达对各科、校园活动的喜好与理由;
3. 抒发对校园、老师、同学的喜爱,懂得珍惜充实的校园时光;
4. 拓展对比中外校园生活差异,拓宽文化视野。
(3)文体、时态、人称
1. 必考文体:电子邮件(课本原生写作任务)、记叙文(短文/日记);
2. 核心时态:一般现在时(描述常态化日常),少量频度副词 always/usually/often;
3. 人称:第一人称 I 为主,80–100词,七年级标准篇幅;
4. 绑定单元语法考点
时间介词 at/on/in;
一般现在时第三人称单数;
What/When/Why/How long/How often 特殊疑问句型;
like doing sth. 表达爱好;名词复数(lessons/classes)。
二、写作分层设计思路(适配不同水平学生)
基础层(学困生)三段固定模板(邮件/短文通用)
1. 开头:自我介绍,点明写信目的(介绍我的校园生活);
2. 中间:按时间顺序写早八上课、上午课程、午休、下午课程、课后活动;只使用简单句,要点齐全;
3. 结尾:简单表达感受(My school life is happy),向对方提问。
标准层(中等生)
在基础时间线基础上增加细节:
1. 写明最喜欢/最不喜欢的科目+理由(interesting / difficult);
2. 补充课间活动、食堂午餐、课后社团;
3. 用上单元核心词组,句子长短结合,行文连贯。
提升层(优等生)
1. 增加对比:对比小学与初中校园生活,或简单对比国外校园;
2. 升华主旨:校园不仅学习知识,还收获朋友、学会合作;
3. 使用衔接词 First, Then, After that, Finally,句式多样。
三、单元四大必考书面表达题型
题型1(课本核心原题)邮件写作 My School Day(最高频)
假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Tom来信询问你的初中校园生活,请写一封邮件介绍你的校园一日,要点:
1. 上学、放学时间;
2. 每日课程安排,最喜欢的学科及原因;
3. 课间、午餐、课后活动;
4. 你的整体感受,反问对方校园生活。
格式:英文邮件(称呼、正文、落款)
题型2 短文记叙文 My Colourful School Life
无书信格式,纯短文,侧重校园丰富活动:社团、运动会、班级课堂、同学相处,突出“多彩校园”。
题型3 观点拓展作文 Different School Lives(拔高题型)
对比中国和国外校园生活的相同点与不同点,简单谈谈你更喜欢哪种校园模式。
题型4 应用文:日记 A Happy School Day
记录开心的一天校园经历,可混合少量一般过去时描写当天特殊活动(球赛、手工课)。
4、 书面表达专练
1.我们青少年要合理安排作息时间,快乐学习,健康生活。以下为育才中学李华一天的部分活动,请结合图文信息,以“Li Hua’s School Day”为题,写一篇英语短文。
要求:
(1)短文须包含图文所有信息,可适当拓展。
(2)不得出现真实的个人信息。
(3)词数70左右。
Li Hua’s School Day
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2.假如你是李华,今天英语课上班里各小组分享了“我的校园生活”,以下是你们小组成员的分享内容。请你作为小组代表做英语汇报,根据以下要点要求写一篇英语短文。
要点
1. 上学时间和放学时间
2. 每日课程安排
3. 最喜欢的科目
4. 感受
内容
第一节课8:00上课;
最后一节课4:45下课;
延时自习课。
每节课的时长,每天几节课。
Ben喜欢数学,因为……
Alice喜欢…,因为……
我喜欢…… ,因为……
……
写作要求:
1. 词数80左右,开头已给,不计入总词数,根据要点提示适当发挥;
2. 书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 不得透露班级、姓名等真实信息,否则不予评分。
I am happy to share the school life of our group members with you today. ____________________
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3.假如你是Sam,请以“My School Life”为题写一篇短文,介绍一下你的学校生活。内容包括:
(1) 学校生活忙碌但有趣,上午四节课,下午三节课;
(2) 喜欢周一,因为周一有你最喜欢的体育;
(3) 喜欢英语(有趣),不喜欢数学(很难);
(4) 课后跟同学们一起打篮球,有时做游戏。
注意:
(1) 词数70左右,题目已给出,不计入总词数;
(2) 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My School Life
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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4.假设你是李梅,收到了英国网友Jack的邮件,邮件中谈到他想了解你和你的家人,以及学校中的学习情况。请你给他回封邮件,谈谈你的情况。
提示:1. 简单介绍你的个人情况,包括姓名、姓氏、年龄,以及你的爱好。
2. 简单介绍一下你的家庭成员。
3. 介绍你在学校的学习情况,如:你在几年级、学什么科目、最喜欢的学科及原因等。
要求:1. 包含提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 内容充实,条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3. 词数:不少于70。
参考词汇:grade
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email._____________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What about you? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
5.假设你是第一中学七年级一班的一名学生,请你以“My School Day”为题,介绍你学校及在学校的学习和生活:
要点:
1. 非常喜爱学校,因为它看起来很现代化;
2. 有许多新朋友,每天都很开心;
3. 学校周一到周五早上八点半开始上课,放学后进行各种课外活动;
4. 喜欢做早操,因为早操有益;
5. ……
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70 左右(开头部分已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
My School Day
I study at No. 1 Middle School. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7.__________________________________
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6.我们的校园生活不仅有课上的书声朗朗,还有课后的欢声笑语。假如你是七年级学生王明,你学校的英文校刊正在举行“My School Life”的主题征文活动。请你根据下面的思维导图写一篇短文投稿,介绍你的校园生活。
要求:
1. 文中应包含所提示的信息,内容积极向上,可适当发挥,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 词数不少于70词,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名与校名。
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7.本学期的学习生活即将结束,近日,学校英语报正在开展题为“My School Life”的征文活动。请你根据下面的内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,向校报投稿。 内容提示:
What are your favourite subject and activity?
What club do you want to join? Why?
What do you think of your school and your school life?
Something more about your school life.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;字数70左右;标题和开头已给出,不计入总数。
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my school life with you._________________________________
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8.假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike想了解你的校园生活。请根据以下提示,给他写一封电子邮件。提示:
1. 介绍你的学校和班级;
2. 描述你的一天(起床、上课、课后活动等);
3. 谈谈你最喜欢的科目及原因;
4. 简单介绍你的朋友。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
2. 包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
3. 词数70左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案
1.例文:
Li Hua’s School Day
Li Hua is a twelve-year-old middle school student. He is busy every day.
In the morning, he gets up at 7:00 and has breakfast at 7:30. Morning classes last from 8:30 to 11:40. Lunchtime is from 12:00 to 13:00. Activity time is between 16:30 and 17:30. He always plays football with friends on the sports field then.
He returns home for dinner at 17:35. After that, he reads with his parents for an hour. At 22:00, he goes to bed. Though he is busy, Li Hua is very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为看图作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括图片中所含要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍李华的个人信息,引出“校园一日生活”的话题;
第二步,分时段陈述活动:按照“早上→中午→下午活动→傍晚回家→晚上活动”的时间顺序,逐一陈述李华的日常安排;
第三步,书写总结,点明李华忙碌却充实快乐的生活状态。
[亮点词汇]
①get up起床
②last from...to...从……持续到……
③play football踢足球
④go to bed去睡觉
[高分句型]
Though he is busy, Li Hua is very happy.(Though引导的让步状语从句)
2.例文:
I am happy to share the school life of our group members with you today. Our first class starts at 8:00 a.m., and the last class ends at 4:45 p.m. Each class lasts 45 minutes, and we have seven classes a day. After that, some students stay for extra study time.
Ben likes math because he thinks it is challenging and fun. Alice enjoys English because she loves reading stories. My favorite subject is science because I can do interesting experiments.
Though school life is busy, we all feel happy and learn a lot every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇讲稿;
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步:介绍上学和放学时间、课程时长及数量,补充延时自习课;
第二步:分别说明Ben、Alice和“我”最喜欢的科目及原因;
第三步:总结对校园生活的感受,强调积极态度。
[亮点词汇]
①challenging有挑战性的
②experiments实验
③busy忙碌的
[高分句型]
①Ben likes math because he thinks it is challenging and fun.(原因状语从句)
②Though school life is busy, we all feel happy and learn a lot every day.(让步状语从句)
3.例文:
My School Life
My school life is busy but interesting. I have four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. I like Monday best because I can have my favorite P.E. class. I love English as it’s very interesting. But I don’t like math because it’s too difficult. After class, I often play basketball with my classmates. Sometimes we play games together. I like my school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:材料作文(介绍学校生活的记叙文);
②时态:一般现在时;
③提示:需涵盖学校课程安排、喜欢周几和学科、课后活动等要点,词数60左右,不能出现真实信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步:总体介绍学校生活忙碌且有趣,说明课程安排;
第二步:阐述喜欢的周一及原因,介绍喜欢和不喜欢的学科及理由;
第三步:描述课后活动,总结对学校生活的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①busy but interesting 忙碌但有趣
②play basketball 打篮球
③play games 做游戏
[高分句型]
①I like Monday best because I can have my favorite P.E. class.(because引导的原因状语从句)
②I love English as it’s very interesting.(as引导的原因状语从句)
4.例文:
Dear Jack,
Thanks for your email. I’m glad to tell you something about myself and my family.
My name is Li Mei. I’m 13 years old. I like reading books and playing badminton in my free time. There are four people in my family: my parents, my younger brother, and me. My father is a teacher, and my mother works in a hospital. My brother is in primary school.
I’m in Grade 7 now. We study many subjects, such as Chinese, math, English, and science. My favorite subject is English because it helps me communicate with people from different countries, like you!
What about you? Please write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Mei
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
② 时态:主要使用“一般现在时”;
③ 写作要点要完整覆盖,包含个人情况、家庭成员及学校学习情况,适当添加细节,重点突出。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇回应邮件,表明告知对方自身及家庭情况的意愿;
第二步,依次介绍个人基本信息与家庭成员构成及职业;
第三步,阐述学校学习情况;
第四步,结尾询问对方情况并期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
① in free time 在空闲时间
② such as 例如
③ communicate with 与……交流
[高分句型]
My favorite subject is English because it helps me communicate with people from different countries, like you!(because引导的原因状语从句)
5.例文:
My School Day
I study at No. 1 Middle School. I’m in Class 1, Grade 7. I like my school very much because it looks modern and it is beautiful with lots of flowers and trees. I have many new friends and I am happy every day. School starts at 8:30 a.m. from Monday to Friday. After school, we have different activities. I like doing morning exercises because they are good for me.
I love my school day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:为“一般现在时”;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求进行写作,不可遗漏任何信息提示,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接已给出的开头,结合要点,介绍自己的学校、在校的学习和生活;
第二步,总结,表达对学校的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
① lots of 很多,大量
② from...to... 从……到……
③ be good for 有益于……
[高分句型]
I like my school very much because it looks modern and it is beautiful with lots of flowers and trees. (because引导原因状语从句)
6.例文:
My School Life
My name is Wang Ming. I’m a student of Class 1, Grade 7. I’m glad to tell you something about my school life.
My home is close to the school. So I walk to school every day. In school, I mainly study Chinese, maths, English, music and so on. I like these subjects very much. I think they are very interesting. After class, I usually play football and basketball with my classmates because I think they are good for our health. My teachers and classmates are kind to me.
I think my school life is very wonderful. I like my school life very much.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先自我介绍,引出主题;
第二步,具体介绍去上学的交通方式,学习的科目,还要介绍老师和同学们,以及课后活动等;
第三步,书写结束语,表达对校园生活的喜爱。
[亮点词汇]
①be glad to 很高兴
②be close to 离……近
③be good for 对……有好处
④be kind to sb. 对某人友好
[高分句型]
①I think they are very interesting.(省略that的宾语从句)
②After class, I usually play football and basketball with my classmates because I think they are good for our health.(because引导的原因状语从句)
7.例文:
My School Life
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my school life with you.
My favorite subject is English because it’s fun and useful. I enjoy playing basketball after school as it keeps me healthy. I want to join the art club because drawing relaxes me. My school is beautiful and has great teachers who are kind and helpful. I really love my school life because I have many friends and we learn new things every day. We also have interesting events, such as sports meeting, which make the school exciting.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己最喜欢的科目和活动;
第二步,介绍自己想要加入什么俱乐部和原因;
第三步,介绍你对学校和学校生活的看法。
[亮点词汇]
① enjoy doing sth喜欢做某事
② want to do sth想要做某事
[高分句型]
①My school is beautiful and has great teachers who are kind and helpful. (定语从句)
②I really love my school life because I have many friends and we learn new things every day.(原因状语从句)
8.例文:
Dear Mike,
Thanks for your email. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
I’m a student in No.1 Middle School. I’m in Class 3, Grade 7. I usually get up at 6:30 a.m. I have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon. My favorite subject is English because it’s interesting. After school, I often play basketball with my friend, Wang Ming. He is nice.
I like my school life very much.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:电子邮件,时态用一般现在时
明确要点:介绍学校班级、一天的安排、最喜欢的科目及原因、朋友这四方面
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:总起句,要介绍自己的学校生活
主体段:从四方面具体展开介绍
结尾段:表达对学校生活的喜欢
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:一天的安排
起床时间:get up at/go to school at等
上课安排:have four classes in the morning and three in the afternoon等
要点二:最喜欢的科目
名称:English/Chinese/P.E等
原因:interesting/useful等
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