Unit 3 Technology and our life（写作突破专项训练）英语北京版六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“科技与生活”为主题，构建“方法指引-词汇句型-实战写作”三阶训练体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑组织能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1篇青藏铁路案例|“回顾过去-引出变化-介绍信息-凸显价值-阐述影响”五步法|从现象描述到意义分析，构建完整写作逻辑链| |核心词汇|3类（科技名词/动词短语/形容词）|按“领域+功能”分类记忆法|从具体事物到动作描述再到特征评价，形成词汇网络| |参考句型|3类（变化描述/功能介绍/特点评价）|“过去-现在”对比法、“First-Second-Third”列举法|从简单句到复杂表达，实现句型梯度提升| |写作任务|2篇（沟通方式变化/BDS功能）|基础版（框架搭建）与提高版（细节拓展）分层写作|从模仿范文到独立表达，落实语言能力与思维品质培养|

Unit 3 Technology and our life 写作方法指引- 原文指路 In the past, there was no railway in Tibet. Most people travelled by bus, on foot, or on horseback. It was hard to get into and out of Tibet. 回顾过去：描述西藏过去的交通困境，为科技带来的变化做铺垫。 Thanks to technology, the Qinghai-Tibet Railway went into service in 2006. 引出核心变化：点明科技赋能的标志性成果，开启西藏交通新篇章。 It is the highest railway in the world. It starts in Xining and ends in Lhasa. 介绍关键信息：说明青藏铁路的独特地位与基本路线，丰富内容细节。 The railway crosses no-man's land and climbs snowy mountains. People all think it is amazing to build a railway like that. 凸显科技价值：描述铁路建设的艰难，体现科技突破的非凡意义。 The railway makes travel in Tibet easier. More and more people come to Tibet to experience the culture and life of this beautiful place. 阐述积极影响：说明铁路对西藏出行及文化旅游发展的推动作用。 一、核心词汇 1. 科技领域名词 通信相关：letter, telephone, email, phone, stamp 学习相关：online learning platform, VR technology, robot teacher 交通相关：Qinghai-Tibet Railway, railway, bus, horseback 卫星系统：BDS , satellite 2. 动词短语 沟通类：keep in touch with, get in touch with, hear from, make a phone call, write a letter, write emails 学习类：take online lessons, solve problems 功能类：go into service, find one's way, do farm work 3. 描述性形容词 easy, faster, interesting, amazing, helpful, smart, safe 二、参考句型 1. 过去与现在的变化描述 In the past, people usually wrote letters to keep in touch with each other. Technology is changing our communication now. It makes our communication easier and faster. In the past, there was no railway in Tibet. But now the Qinghai-Tibet Railway makes travel in Tibet easier. 2. 科技事物的功能介绍 BDS helps us know more about the Earth and space. It also makes people's lives better. First, BDS helps people find their way. Second, BDS makes farming smarter, easier, and safer. Third, BDS helps keep people safe. VR technology makes learning more interesting. For example, if you want to learn about space, you can put on special glasses to feel how to walk in space. 3. 事物特点与评价 The Qinghai-Tibet Railway went into service in 2006. It is the highest railway in the world. Writing letters is a tradition in my family. It's also a good way to collect stamps. People all think it is amazing to build a railway like that. 易错点提示 1. 词汇拼写细节：专有名词首字母大写：Qinghai-Tibet Railway、Bei DOU Navigation satellite system，注意拼写不要出错；VR technology是固定缩写，需保留大写。固定搭配拼写：on horseback不要误写为on a horseback；keep in touch with、get in touch with不要遗漏介词with。 2. 时态使用规范：描述过去的场景要用一般过去时，如：In the past, people waited for days or weeks to hear from others.；描述现在的情况用一般现在时。短语go into service的过去式为went into service，注意时态变化。 3. 句型结构注意：使用“First...Second...Third...”列举要点时，要保持句式一致，清晰表达不同功能；for example后接完整句子，举例要贴合主题。 写作一 请你写一篇短文，介绍人们沟通方式的过去与现在的变化，说说这些变化带来的不同感受。要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： letter, telephone, email, keep in touch with, hear from, faster, easy 写作二 请你介绍一下北斗导航系统（BDS）的功能和它给人们生活带来的帮助。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： BDS, find one's way, do farm work, safe, smart, helpful 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： In the past, people wrote letters to keep in touch with their friends and family. They waited for weeks to hear from others. （过去沟通） Now we have telephones and emails. We can make a phone call or write emails anytime. It makes our communication faster and easier. （如今变化）I like these new ways, but writing letters is still a warm tradition. （个人看法） 范文（提高版）： In the past, people usually wrote letters to keep in touch with their loved ones. They put stamps on the letters and sent them by post, sometimes waiting for more than a week to get a reply. （过去沟通）Now things are much better. We can use phones to call others at once, or write emails to share our lives quickly. These ways make communication faster and easier. （如今变化）Some people still love writing letters, because collecting beautiful stamps is a fun hobby. （个人看法） 写作二 范文（基础版）： BDS is a helpful satellite system. （总起介绍）First, it helps people find their way. Second, it makes farming smarter and safer. Third, it helps keep people safe when they are in danger. （列举作用）BDS is amazing. It makes our daily lives better and more convenient. （总结评价） 范文（提高版）： BDS, short for Bei DOU Navigation satellite system, is a smart and useful satellite system. （总起介绍）First, it helps people find their way easily. For example, when we go hiking in the mountains, we can use BDS to know our exact position. Second, it helps farmers do farm work smarter and safer. Third, if someone gets lost or is in danger, BDS can help rescuers find them quickly.（列举作用）BDS really makes our lives better every day. （总结评价） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $