Unit 5 Famous people（写作突破专项训练）英语北京版六年级上册（新教材）

**基本信息** 以“方法指引-词汇句型-实战写作”构建系统性训练，通过结构化写作框架与分类语言要素培养语言能力与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |写作方法指引|1篇演讲原文分解|提炼“问候-点明人物-阐述成就-表达志向-收尾”五段式结构|从篇章结构到句子功能，构建写作逻辑链| |核心词汇|4类30+词|按“职业-描述-事物-作品”分类记忆，强化主题词汇应用|词汇与写作任务高度匹配，支撑内容表达| |参考句型|5类功能句型|分“身份成就/敬佩志向/书籍介绍/经历精神/演讲规范”模块，提供可迁移表达模板|句型与词汇联动，形成“词-句-篇”递进| |易错点提示|4项语法提示|辨析famous for/because、时态、专有名词大写等易错点，强化语言准确性|针对写作高频错误，构建语法保障体系| |写作任务|2任务+4范文|基础版与提高版范文对比，体现从“基本表达”到“丰富细节”的进阶路径|任务对应模块知识，实现方法与实践结合|

Unit 5 Famous people 写作方法指引- 原文指路 Hello, my friends. Today I'm going to share my role model with you. 开篇引入：礼貌问候听众，明确演讲主题为分享心中的榜样。 My role model is Sun Jia Dong, "the father of Bei DOU". 点明人物：介绍榜样的姓名及专属尊称，让听众快速了解人物的重要地位。 He is famous for his great work in China's aerospace science. 阐述成就：具体说明榜样的核心贡献，解释其出名的原因，体现人物价值。 He is my role model. 表达认可：直接点明该人物对自己的榜样意义，强化情感联结。 I want to be a scientist like him. 抒发志向：结合榜样的影响，表达个人的职业理想与追求。 Thank you for listening. 礼貌收尾：规范结束演讲，展现基本礼仪。 一、核心词汇 1. 职业与身份类 scientist（科学家）musician（音乐家）writer（作家）inventor（发明家）poet（诗人） researcher（研究者） 2. 人物描述类 famous（著名的）great（伟大的）amazing（了不起的）hard-working（勤奋的）brave（勇敢的）kind（善良的）friendly（友好的）role model（榜样）favourite（最喜欢的） 3. 相关事物类 aerospace science（航空航天科学）national anthem（国歌）vaccine（疫苗）polio（脊髓灰质炎） sugar pills（糖丸）movable-type printing（活字印刷术）book（书籍）poem（诗歌） music（音乐）collection of letters（书信集） 4. 经典作品类 Letters to Young Readers（《寄小读者》）The Ugly Duckling（《丑小鸭》） The Emperor's New Clothes（《皇帝的新装》）The Little Match Girl（《卖火柴的小女孩》） Thoughts in the Silent Night（《静夜思》） 二、参考句型 1. 介绍人物身份与成就 He is "the father of Bei DOU". He is famous for his great work in China's aerospace science. Ni Er is famous because he wrote the music for China's national anthem. Bi Sheng was an inventor more than 1,000 years ago. He invented the world’s first movable-type printing method. Thomas Edison was a great inventor. He invented many important things. Beethoven wrote beautiful music and people still listen to his music today. 2. 表达个人敬佩与志向 He is my role model. I want to be a scientist like him. Many children enjoy his books. His books teach us to be kind, friendly, and brave. 3. 介绍书籍相关内容 I'm reading Letters to Young Readers by Bing Xin. She was a famous Chinese writer and one of my favourites. It's a collection of letters from Bing Xin to young readers like us. These letters are about her trips to other countries and her love for her hometown and China. From her letters, we learn to love everything good in the world. 4. 描述人物经历与精神 In 1957, Gu and his team began to work on a vaccine for polio. They stayed in the mountains of Yunnan to do research. He began to lose his hearing in his 20s, but it didn’t stop him from making amazing music. Gu worked hard for 44 years on polio vaccines. 5. 演讲类句型 Hello, my friends. Today I'm going to share my role model with you. My role model is... He/she was/is a/an... He/she is famous because... I want to... Thank you for listening. 易错点提示 1. famous for与famous because的区别：famous for后接名词、名词短语或动名词，强调出名的核心事物/行为，例如：He is famous for his great inventions. famous because后接完整句子，强调出名的事件原因，例如：He is famous because he invented the light bulb. 2. 时态的正确使用：描述已故人物时用一般过去时，例如：Bing Xin was a famous writer.描述在世人物或至今仍有影响力的事物时，可用一般现在时，例如：People still listen to Beethoven's music today. 3. 专有名词大写规则：人名、地名、书名、机构名等专有名词首字母必须大写，例如：Thomas Alva Edison, Yunnan, Letters to Young Readers, WHO. 4. 固定搭配注意：work on sth.表示“致力于某事”，例如：Gu Fangzhou worked on polio vaccines for 44 years. stop sb. from doing sth.表示“阻止某人做某事”，例如：His deafness didn't stop him from making music. 写作一 请介绍你心中的榜样人物，说明他/她的职业、出名的原因，以及你为什么把他/她当作榜样。 要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。 参考单词： scientist, musician, inventor, famous, great, hard-working, role model, aerospace science, national anthem, vaccine 写作二 请介绍一本你最喜欢的经典书籍，说明这本书的作者、带给你的启示，以及你喜欢它的原因。要求： 1.书写规范，正确使用标点符号。 2.语言表达流畅。 3.不少于 50 词。。 参考单词： writer, poet, book, poem, favourite, kind, brave, The Ugly Duckling, Letters to Young Readers, Thoughts in the Silent Night 参考范文 写作一 范文（基础版）： Hello, my friends. Today I want to talk about my role model. His name is Sun Jiadong. （开场引入）He is a great scientist. He is "the father of Bei DOU". He is famous for his great work in China's aerospace science. He is very hard-working. （人物事迹） I want to be a scientist like him and make contributions to our country. Thank you. （自身志向） 范文（提高版）： Hello, my friends. Today I'm going to share my role model with you. My role model is Sun Jiadong. （开场引入） He is a great and hard-working scientist. He is called "the father of Bei DOU". He is famous because he spent over 50 years working on China's aerospace science and helped build the Bei DOU system. （人物事迹）He is my role model. I want to study hard and be a scientist like him to help our country develop. Thank you for listening. （自身志向） 写作二 范文（基础版）： My favourite book is The Ugly Duckling. It is written by Hans Christian Andersen, who was a famous writer. （介绍书籍）The story is about an ugly duckling. It is brave and kind. The book teaches us to be kind to others and never give up. （故事主旨） I read it every time I feel sad, and it makes me happy. I love this book very much. （个人感受） 范文（提高版）： My favourite book is The Ugly Duckling by Hans Christian Andersen. He was a great writer from Denmark. （介绍书籍） The story tells us about an ugly duckling that is not liked at first, but it grows into a beautiful swan at last. The duckling is brave and never loses hope. This book teaches us to be kind, brave, and keep going when things are hard. （故事主旨）Many children enjoy this book, and it is one of my most favourite books. （个人感受） 第 1 页 共 5 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $