内容正文:
必修第一册 Welcome Unit 个人简介
话题总览
写作任务
① 单元核心话题拆解
本单元核心写作任务:应用文·个人学生简介
细分场景:班级新生自我介绍、交换生个人档案、校园社团入学简历、英文自我陈述
② 高考写作大类归类
归属:应用文(人物介绍类) 隶属高考高频主题大类「个人成长、校园生活、人际交往」
③ 高考命题切入点一句话点明
高考常以“新生自我介绍、海外交换生档案、社团报名简历”为背景,要求条理清晰介绍自身基本信息、性格、爱好、特长与校园目标,语言简洁自然。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁分析
人物简介、自我介绍是高考应用文高频基础体裁,近三年高考真题、各地期中期末高频考查;常结合书信、演讲稿、登记表同步出题。
2. 命题形式固定
提纲式为主,给出2–4个明确内容要点,写作场景完整,包含:写作身份(高一新生/交换生)、阅读对象(外教/同班同学/社团老师)、写作目的、内容要点。
3. 题材贴近生活,彰显时代与文化
校园生活:新生入学自我介绍、社团招新个人档案、交换生校园报备;
个人成长:性格特点、兴趣爱好、特长技能、学习习惯;
中外交流:出国交换学生个人简介、接待外国学生自我说明;
社会实践:志愿爱好、运动、阅读、艺术特长。
一、命题情景考查(出题载体)
1. 班级场景:刚升入高中,班级英文课自我介绍;给新外教写个人档案
2. 交换生场景:作为交换生填写海外学校学生档案、写个人介绍邮件
3. 社团场景:申请英语社/运动社团,提交英文个人简介
4. 交流活动:接待外国来访学生,写自我介绍短文
二、语言能力考查(阅卷评分核心)
格式规范
1. 短文自我介绍:无书信格式,分段行文;
2. 邮件式个人档案:保留书信称呼、结尾客套落款;非正式语气(同学)/正式语气(老师、校方)区分清晰。
逻辑表达
开篇:简单问候+点明写作目的(介绍自己);
主体:分层介绍,连接词分层(First of all, Besides, What’s more, Last but not least);分层逻辑:基本信息→性格爱好→特长/学习习惯→高中目标;
结尾:表达期待、友善祝福。
句式梯度
基础:简单主谓句、基础描写句型(I like… / I am…);
高分:定语从句、非谓语动词、并列结构、高级描述句式(Being an outgoing boy/girl…; What attracts me most is that…)。
词汇与得体性
区分基础词汇与高级替换词;描写性格、爱好词汇丰富,语气友好真诚,符合青少年学生身份。
三、思维素养考查(高考命题深层导向)
1. 人物刻画能力:贴合学生身份,真实立体介绍自我,不空洞;
2. 共情交际意识:自我介绍友善大方,体现校园交往礼貌;
3. 价值观导向:热爱学习、积极参与校园活动、友善合群、坚持兴趣等正向价值观。
四、高频设问形式(题干提问角度)
1. 作为高一新生,写一篇英文短文向全班同学介绍自己;
2. 你将作为交换生前往海外高中,请填写学生个人档案,介绍自身情况;
3. 学校英语社团招新,请写一份英文个人简介提交给社团老师;
4. 外国交换生即将来你班,写邮件向他介绍你自己。
本单元写作要求完成student profile学生个人简介,完整介绍自身基础信息、性格爱好、特长以及高中新生活期待,分为三段式行文。
第一步:锁定本单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:高一新生学生个人档案/自我介绍,面向同学、外教、海外校方介绍自己;
2. 对应文体:英文人物简介(短文/简易邮件),文体特点:条理清晰、语言真诚简洁,分层清晰;
3. 写作对象:同班新同学/外籍老师/海外高中校方;语气亲切自然,正式简介需稳重礼貌;
4. 核心写作要点:①姓名、年龄、家乡等基础信息;②性格、兴趣爱好、特长;③学习习惯;④高中新目标与校园期待。
第二步:本单元三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1段):简单问候,交代身份,点明要做自我介绍,简洁开门见山。
2. 主体分层(3层核心):
第一层:基础信息(姓名、年龄、家乡);
第二层:性格特质+兴趣爱好、特长(阅读、运动、乐器、英语等);
第三层:学习态度与高中新生活目标。
3. 结尾收尾(1段):表达期待,期待和同学友好相处、积极参与校园活动,收束全文。
第三步:分层写作思路+英文范文示例
1. 基础保底思路(适配基础薄弱学生)
写作逻辑:句式简单、要点齐全、无复杂语法,平铺直叙,字数达标,保证基础得分。
【基础版范文】
写作升级逻辑:复合句、非谓语、定语从句、逻辑递进、立意升华,不止罗列信息,体现青少年成长态度。
【话题核心词块】
基础词
1. 基础信息:student profile 学生档案;hometown 家乡;age 年龄;senior high student 高中生
2. 性格:outgoing 外向的;quiet 安静的;friendly 友好的;hard-working 勤奋的
3. 爱好特长:hobby 爱好;be good at 擅长;read novels 读小说;play sports 运动
4. 校园目标:make friends 交朋友;take part in clubs 参加社团;improve English 提升英语
高阶替换词
1. 性格:warm-hearted 热心的;easy-going 随和的;self-motivated 自律上进的
2. 爱好:fascination 爱好;be skilled in 精通;take delight in 喜爱
3. 学习:explore knowledge 探索知识;positive attitude 积极心态;rewarding school life 充实校园生活
【功能句型库】
第一部分:开篇引入(自我介绍/说明写档案目的)
1. Hello everyone, let me introduce myself briefly.大家好,请允许我简单介绍一下自己。
2. I’m writing this student profile to give you a full picture of myself.我写这份学生档案,向你完整介绍我自己。
3. My name is Li Hua and I am 16 years old, a new senior high student here.我叫李华,16岁,是本校高一新生。
4. It’s my great honor to introduce myself to all my new classmates.很荣幸向各位新同学做自我介绍。
第二部分:介绍基础信息、性格爱好
1. I come from a peaceful small town surrounded by green hills.我来自一座青山环绕的宁静小镇。
2. Being an outgoing girl, I enjoy communicating with different people.我性格外向,喜欢和不同的人交流。
3. What attracts me most is reading English stories in my spare time.闲暇时读英文故事是我最大的爱好。
4. I am skilled in playing the guitar and often take part in school performances.我擅长弹吉他,经常参加校园演出。
5. Apart from my hobbies, I always keep a good learning habit.除爱好之外,我一直保持良好的学习习惯。
第三部分:介绍高中目标、校园期待
1. I’m eager to join English club to practice my oral English.我渴望加入英语社团锻炼口语。
2. My main goal in senior high is to balance study and after-school activities.我高中的主要目标是平衡学习与课外活动。
3. I sincerely hope to get along well with every classmate and make close friends.我真诚希望和每位同学友好相处,结交挚友。
4. I look forward to a colorful and rewarding teenage life in the coming three years.我期待未来三年丰富多彩、有所收获的青少年生活。
第四部分:结尾客套、祝福
1. Thank you for listening and I’m glad to meet all of you.感谢聆听,很高兴认识大家。
2. Should you want to know more about me, feel free to talk with me after class.如果你想更多了解我,课后随时可以找我交流。
3. Wish we can help each other and make progress together.愿我们互帮互助,共同进步。
【标准写作模板】
模板①(班级简短自我介绍短文)
Hello everyone,
My name is ________. I am ________ years old and I come from ________.
First of all, I am a ________ person. My biggest hobbies are ________ and ________. Besides, I do well in ________ and keep good learning habits every day.
In senior high, I hope to ________ and take part in different school clubs.
I’m looking forward to making friends with all of you.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②(邮件式 Student Profile 正式档案)
Dear_______,
I’m writing to submit my student profile to introduce myself. My name is ________, aged ________, coming from ________.
Warm-hearted and ________, I take great delight in ________, which brings me a lot of fun. What’s more, I am skilled at ________ and always stay positive in my study.
As a new senior high student, I’m eager to ________ and make progress day by day.
I sincerely hope we can get along well.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1. Student Profile 写作注意事项
1. 人物简介核心是真实介绍自我,不要空洞夸张,贴合高中生身份;
2. 分层清晰,顺序固定:基础信息→性格爱好→学习习惯→高中目标,避免逻辑混乱;
3. 语气区分:班级自我介绍轻松随意;提交给老师/海外校方的档案偏礼貌正式;
4. 多使用描写型句式,少堆砌简单短句,适当加入定语从句、非谓语提升文采。
2. 写作流程导图
开篇问候+自我介绍目的
基础信息(姓名、年龄、家乡)
性格+爱好特长分层介绍
高中学习、校园目标
结尾表达期待、礼貌收尾
【典例1】
假定你是李华,开学第一节英语课,老师要求全班做英文自我介绍,请你写一篇80词左右的student profile,要点包含:
1. 基础信息:16岁,家乡湖北孝感;
2. 性格爱好:外向,擅长英语、跑步;
3. 高中期待:参加英语社团,和同学友好相处。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua. I’m sixteen and I come from Xiaogan, Hubei Province.
As an outgoing boy, I take great delight in running and I am skilled in English learning. I spend half an hour reading English articles every day to improve myself.
In the coming three years, I’m eager to join the school English club and make close friends with all of you.
I’m looking forward to our wonderful school life together.
【典例2】
假定你是李华,即将作为交换生前往国外高中,校方需要你提交一份英文student profile个人档案,介绍自己。词数80词左右。要点:
1. 基本情况、性格;
2. 兴趣特长(绘画、英文阅读);
3. 在海外学校的学习目标。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Dear school teachers,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old senior high student writing to introduce myself.
Easy-going and self-motivated, I have a deep fascination for painting and reading original English novels, which broaden my horizons greatly.
If given the chance to study here, I will spare no effort to improve my spoken English and take part in colorful after-school activities.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、词性转换训练(用于人物描写句型)
1. outgoing (n.外向) ________;warm-heart (adj.热心的) ________
2. hobby (adj.有爱好的) ________;skill (adj.熟练的) ________
3. attract (n.吸引力) ________;positively (adj.积极的) ________
二、句子仿写改写
1. 原句:I like reading English books. It can improve my vocabulary.
→定语从句合并:________________________
→非谓语改写:________________________
2. 原句:I am outgoing. I love making new friends.
→高级句式:________________________
3. 原句:I want to join the English club to practice oral English.
→倒装升级:________________________
4. 原句:It is important to balance study and hobbies.
→强调句式:________________________
三、汉译英(个人简介高频句子)
1. 我是一名16岁高一新生,来自一座美丽小城。
2. 我性格随和,课余最喜欢打篮球和读英文小说。
3. 高中三年,我希望提升英语并结交更多好朋友。
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必修第一册 Welcome Unit 个人简介
Write a Student Profile
话题总览
写作任务
① 单元核心话题拆解
本单元核心写作任务:应用文·个人学生简介
细分场景:班级新生自我介绍、交换生个人档案、校园社团入学简历、英文自我陈述
② 高考写作大类归类
归属:应用文(人物介绍类) 隶属高考高频主题大类「个人成长、校园生活、人际交往」
③ 高考命题切入点一句话点明
高考常以“新生自我介绍、海外交换生档案、社团报名简历”为背景,要求条理清晰介绍自身基本信息、性格、爱好、特长与校园目标,语言简洁自然。
考查频度:⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
考情分析:
1. 体裁分析
人物简介、自我介绍是高考应用文高频基础体裁,近三年高考真题、各地期中期末高频考查;常结合书信、演讲稿、登记表同步出题。
2. 命题形式固定
提纲式为主,给出2–4个明确内容要点,写作场景完整,包含:写作身份(高一新生/交换生)、阅读对象(外教/同班同学/社团老师)、写作目的、内容要点。
3. 题材贴近生活,彰显时代与文化
校园生活:新生入学自我介绍、社团招新个人档案、交换生校园报备;
个人成长:性格特点、兴趣爱好、特长技能、学习习惯;
中外交流:出国交换学生个人简介、接待外国学生自我说明;
社会实践:志愿爱好、运动、阅读、艺术特长。
一、命题情景考查(出题载体)
1. 班级场景:刚升入高中,班级英文课自我介绍;给新外教写个人档案
2. 交换生场景:作为交换生填写海外学校学生档案、写个人介绍邮件
3. 社团场景:申请英语社/运动社团,提交英文个人简介
4. 交流活动:接待外国来访学生,写自我介绍短文
二、语言能力考查(阅卷评分核心)
格式规范
1. 短文自我介绍:无书信格式,分段行文;
2. 邮件式个人档案:保留书信称呼、结尾客套落款;非正式语气(同学)/正式语气(老师、校方)区分清晰。
逻辑表达
开篇:简单问候+点明写作目的(介绍自己);
主体:分层介绍,连接词分层(First of all, Besides, What’s more, Last but not least);分层逻辑:基本信息→性格爱好→特长/学习习惯→高中目标;
结尾:表达期待、友善祝福。
句式梯度
基础:简单主谓句、基础描写句型(I like… / I am…);
高分:定语从句、非谓语动词、并列结构、高级描述句式(Being an outgoing boy/girl…; What attracts me most is that…)。
词汇与得体性
区分基础词汇与高级替换词;描写性格、爱好词汇丰富,语气友好真诚,符合青少年学生身份。
三、思维素养考查(高考命题深层导向)
1. 人物刻画能力:贴合学生身份,真实立体介绍自我,不空洞;
2. 共情交际意识:自我介绍友善大方,体现校园交往礼貌;
3. 价值观导向:热爱学习、积极参与校园活动、友善合群、坚持兴趣等正向价值观。
四、高频设问形式(题干提问角度)
1. 作为高一新生,写一篇英文短文向全班同学介绍自己;
2. 你将作为交换生前往海外高中,请填写学生个人档案,介绍自身情况;
3. 学校英语社团招新,请写一份英文个人简介提交给社团老师;
4. 外国交换生即将来你班,写邮件向他介绍你自己。
本单元写作要求完成student profile学生个人简介,完整介绍自身基础信息、性格爱好、特长以及高中新生活期待,分为三段式行文。
第一步:锁定本单元写作核心要素
1. 写作任务:高一新生学生个人档案/自我介绍,面向同学、外教、海外校方介绍自己;
2. 对应文体:英文人物简介(短文/简易邮件),文体特点:条理清晰、语言真诚简洁,分层清晰;
3. 写作对象:同班新同学/外籍老师/海外高中校方;语气亲切自然,正式简介需稳重礼貌;
4. 核心写作要点:①姓名、年龄、家乡等基础信息;②性格、兴趣爱好、特长;③学习习惯;④高中新目标与校园期待。
第二步:本单元三段式标准行文框架
1. 开头引入(1段):简单问候,交代身份,点明要做自我介绍,简洁开门见山。
2. 主体分层(3层核心):
第一层:基础信息(姓名、年龄、家乡);
第二层:性格特质+兴趣爱好、特长(阅读、运动、乐器、英语等);
第三层:学习态度与高中新生活目标。
3. 结尾收尾(1段):表达期待,期待和同学友好相处、积极参与校园活动,收束全文。
第三步:分层写作思路+英文范文示例
1. 基础保底思路(适配基础薄弱学生)
写作逻辑:句式简单、要点齐全、无复杂语法,平铺直叙,字数达标,保证基础得分。
【基础版范文】
Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua. I am sixteen years old and I come from a quiet small town.
First, I am an easy-going boy. I have many hobbies. I like reading and playing basketball in my free time. Besides, I am good at speaking English. I always finish my homework carefully every day.
In senior high, I hope to make more new friends and study all subjects well. I also want to join the school basketball club.
I’m looking forward to getting along well with all of you.
写作升级逻辑:复合句、非谓语、定语从句、逻辑递进、立意升华,不止罗列信息,体现青少年成长态度。
【高分版范文(交换生邮件Student Profile)】
Dear teachers,
I’m writing this student profile to briefly introduce myself for the exchange program. My name is Li Hua, aged 16, who comes from a beautiful town full of natural scenery.
Outgoing and warm-hearted, I always enjoy making friends with people around me. What appeals to me most is reading English novels and playing badminton, which can not only relax me but also shape my personality. Apart from hobbies, I hold a positive attitude towards study and always try my best to explore new knowledge.
As I step into senior high, I’m eager to take part in all kinds of school activities and improve my oral English to a higher level.
I sincerely hope to enjoy a rewarding school life here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【话题核心词块】
基础词
1. 基础信息:student profile 学生档案;hometown 家乡;age 年龄;senior high student 高中生
2. 性格:outgoing 外向的;quiet 安静的;friendly 友好的;hard-working 勤奋的
3. 爱好特长:hobby 爱好;be good at 擅长;read novels 读小说;play sports 运动
4. 校园目标:make friends 交朋友;take part in clubs 参加社团;improve English 提升英语
高阶替换词
1. 性格:warm-hearted 热心的;easy-going 随和的;self-motivated 自律上进的
2. 爱好:fascination 爱好;be skilled in 精通;take delight in 喜爱
3. 学习:explore knowledge 探索知识;positive attitude 积极心态;rewarding school life 充实校园生活
【功能句型库】
第一部分:开篇引入(自我介绍/说明写档案目的)
1. Hello everyone, let me introduce myself briefly.大家好,请允许我简单介绍一下自己。
2. I’m writing this student profile to give you a full picture of myself.我写这份学生档案,向你完整介绍我自己。
3. My name is Li Hua and I am 16 years old, a new senior high student here.我叫李华,16岁,是本校高一新生。
4. It’s my great honor to introduce myself to all my new classmates.很荣幸向各位新同学做自我介绍。
第二部分:介绍基础信息、性格爱好
1. I come from a peaceful small town surrounded by green hills.我来自一座青山环绕的宁静小镇。
2. Being an outgoing girl, I enjoy communicating with different people.我性格外向,喜欢和不同的人交流。
3. What attracts me most is reading English stories in my spare time.闲暇时读英文故事是我最大的爱好。
4. I am skilled in playing the guitar and often take part in school performances.我擅长弹吉他,经常参加校园演出。
5. Apart from my hobbies, I always keep a good learning habit.除爱好之外,我一直保持良好的学习习惯。
第三部分:介绍高中目标、校园期待
1. I’m eager to join English club to practice my oral English.我渴望加入英语社团锻炼口语。
2. My main goal in senior high is to balance study and after-school activities.我高中的主要目标是平衡学习与课外活动。
3. I sincerely hope to get along well with every classmate and make close friends.我真诚希望和每位同学友好相处,结交挚友。
4. I look forward to a colorful and rewarding teenage life in the coming three years.我期待未来三年丰富多彩、有所收获的青少年生活。
第四部分:结尾客套、祝福
1. Thank you for listening and I’m glad to meet all of you.感谢聆听,很高兴认识大家。
2. Should you want to know more about me, feel free to talk with me after class.如果你想更多了解我,课后随时可以找我交流。
3. Wish we can help each other and make progress together.愿我们互帮互助,共同进步。
【标准写作模板】
模板①(班级简短自我介绍短文)
Hello everyone,
My name is ________. I am ________ years old and I come from ________.
First of all, I am a ________ person. My biggest hobbies are ________ and ________. Besides, I do well in ________ and keep good learning habits every day.
In senior high, I hope to ________ and take part in different school clubs.
I’m looking forward to making friends with all of you.
Yours Sincerely,
Li Hua
模板②(邮件式 Student Profile 正式档案)
Dear_______,
I’m writing to submit my student profile to introduce myself. My name is ________, aged ________, coming from ________.
Warm-hearted and ________, I take great delight in ________, which brings me a lot of fun. What’s more, I am skilled at ________ and always stay positive in my study.
As a new senior high student, I’m eager to ________ and make progress day by day.
I sincerely hope we can get along well.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【升级策略】
1. Student Profile 写作注意事项
1. 人物简介核心是真实介绍自我,不要空洞夸张,贴合高中生身份;
2. 分层清晰,顺序固定:基础信息→性格爱好→学习习惯→高中目标,避免逻辑混乱;
3. 语气区分:班级自我介绍轻松随意;提交给老师/海外校方的档案偏礼貌正式;
4. 多使用描写型句式,少堆砌简单短句,适当加入定语从句、非谓语提升文采。
2. 写作流程导图
开篇问候+自我介绍目的
基础信息(姓名、年龄、家乡)
性格+爱好特长分层介绍
高中学习、校园目标
结尾表达期待、礼貌收尾
【典例1】
假定你是李华,开学第一节英语课,老师要求全班做英文自我介绍,请你写一篇80词左右的student profile,要点包含:
1. 基础信息:16岁,家乡湖北孝感;
2. 性格爱好:外向,擅长英语、跑步;
3. 高中期待:参加英语社团,和同学友好相处。
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【佳作欣赏】
Hello everyone,
My name is Li Hua. I’m sixteen and I come from Xiaogan, Hubei Province.
As an outgoing boy, I take great delight in running and I am skilled in English learning. I spend half an hour reading English articles every day to improve myself.
In the coming three years, I’m eager to join the school English club and make close friends with all of you.
I’m looking forward to our wonderful school life together.
【典例2】
假定你是李华,即将作为交换生前往国外高中,校方需要你提交一份英文student profile个人档案,介绍自己。词数80词左右。要点:
1. 基本情况、性格;
2. 兴趣特长(绘画、英文阅读);
3. 在海外学校的学习目标。
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【佳作欣赏】
Dear school teachers,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old senior high student writing to introduce myself.
Easy-going and self-motivated, I have a deep fascination for painting and reading original English novels, which broaden my horizons greatly.
If given the chance to study here, I will spare no effort to improve my spoken English and take part in colorful after-school activities.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
一、词性转换训练(用于人物描写句型)
1. outgoing (n.外向) ________;warm-heart (adj.热心的) ________
2. hobby (adj.有爱好的) ________;skill (adj.熟练的) ________
3. attract (n.吸引力) ________;positively (adj.积极的) ________
【答案】1. outgoingness; warm-hearted 2. hobbyist; skilled 3. attraction; positive
二、句子仿写改写
1. 原句:I like reading English books. It can improve my vocabulary.
→定语从句合并:________________________
→非谓语改写:________________________
2. 原句:I am outgoing. I love making new friends.
→高级句式:________________________
3. 原句:I want to join the English club to practice oral English.
→倒装升级:________________________
4. 原句:It is important to balance study and hobbies.
→强调句式:________________________
【答案】
1. I like reading English books, which can improve my vocabulary.
Reading English books enables me to enlarge my vocabulary.
2. Being outgoing, I am fond of making new friends.
3. Not only do I want to join the English club, but also I aim to practice my oral English.
4. There is no denying that balancing study and hobbies plays a vital role in our school life.
三、汉译英(个人简介高频句子)
1. 我是一名16岁高一新生,来自一座美丽小城。
2. 我性格随和,课余最喜欢打篮球和读英文小说。
3. 高中三年,我希望提升英语并结交更多好朋友。
【答案】
1. I am a 16-year-old senior high student coming from a beautiful small town.
2. I am easy-going and I love playing basketball and reading English novels most in my spare time.
3. During the three years of senior high, I hope to improve my English and make more good friends.
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