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Unit4 Looking good, feeling good
Period 3 Integrated skills教学设计
教学基本信息
单元名称
必修第一册Unit4 Looking good, feeling good
学科
英语
学段
高中
年级
高一第一学期
主要教材
书名:普通高中教科书·英语必修第一册
出版社:译林出版社 出版日期:2020年7月
课时安排
2课时(80min)
课型
写作课
教学设计理念
主题语境引领下的词汇、语法教学,英语学习活动观
1. 本节课以 “整形手术的利弊与理性审美” 为主题语境,通过话题讨论、新闻阅读、听力报道、观点辩论等情境活动,激活学生对外貌与健康的认知,自然引入议论文写作主题。
2. 遵循 “学习理解 — 应用实践 — 迁移创新” 的思路:引导学生通过阅读与听力感知整形手术的双面性、通过文本分析归纳议论文 PRE 结构与语言特征(学习理解);通过口语讨论梳理观点与论据、通过写练结合落实议论文写作技能(应用实践);最后通过真实写作任务实现能力的迁移创新。
3. 注重思辨能力培养,搭建 “输入 — 构思 — 输出 — 修改” 的完整写作支架,帮助学生掌握结构化议论文写作方法,提升逻辑论证能力与正式书面语表达能力。
教材分析
【What】本课为单元综合技能板块,围绕 “整形手术的利弊” 主题展开,包含两篇新闻故事阅读、新闻报道听力、观点讨论与议论文写作四大模块。阅读部分呈现一正一反两个整形案例,直观展现整形手术的不同影响;听力部分补充行业现状与利弊分析;最终落脚到 “个人对整形手术的看法” 主题的议论文写作输出任务,重点教授 PRE 写作结构。
【Why】通过学习本节课,学生能掌握英语议论文的文体特征与 PRE 写作方法,提升议论文写作能力;同时辩证看待外貌焦虑与整形选择,树立健康的审美观与价值观,理解内在品质的重要性。
【How】教学遵循 “读输入 — 听补充 — 说构思 — 写输出” 的综合技能训练路径:以新闻阅读铺垫正反案例与核心认知,以听力素材补充数据论据与行业背景,以口语讨论完成写作构思与语言预热,以独立写作 + 互评修改落实写作技能;核心词汇采用 “讲解 + 拓展 + 即练” 模式,夯实语言基础,实现技能与思维的协同提升。
学情分析
1. What I know
词汇方面:已掌握外貌、健康类基础词汇,能简单表达对事物的赞成与反对。
写作方面:具备简单观点类短文的写作基础,能给出基本理由,但对规范议论文的结构逻辑、正式语体与论证方法了解较少。
背景知识方面:高一学生对外貌、审美话题关注度高,对整形手术有初步的了解与自己的判断,有表达个人观点的意愿。
2. What I want to know
学生想知道议论文 PRE 结构的具体构成与使用方法。
学生想学习如何用正式、地道的英语撰写议论文,让论证更有说服力,避免表达口语化。
学生想掌握用事实、数据、事例支撑观点的写作技巧,让议论文内容充实、逻辑严谨。
3. What I learned
主题内容方面:学生将辩证认识整形手术的利弊,建立理性的审美观念,树立健康的成长观与价值观。
语言知识方面:学生将掌握 treatment, regret, in addition 等核心词汇与短语的搭配与用法;掌握议论文 PRE 结构(观点 - 理由 - 论据 - 总结)与正式语体特征;能独立撰写观点明确、论证清晰的主题议论文。
学习策略方面:学会 “多模态输入 — 逻辑梳理 — 写作输出 — 互评修改” 的议论文学习方法,提升信息整合、逻辑思辨与自主优化能力。
教学目标
语言能力
能读懂整形主题的新闻故事,准确提取人物经历与结果等核心信息;能听懂新闻报道,梳理行业现状与利弊要点;掌握核心词汇与短语的用法与搭配;能运用 PRE 结构撰写观点明确、结构清晰、语言规范的议论文。
学习能力
能通过阅读与听力自主提取、归纳写作论据,提升信息整合与逻辑梳理能力;能在小组讨论中合作梳理观点与论证思路,提升协作学习能力;掌握自评与互评的写作修改方法,提升自主纠错与优化能力。
文化意识
理解审美观念的多元性,理性看待整形手术的价值与风险,认同 “内在美重于外在美” 的健康观念,树立积极正向的自我认知与成长观。
思维品质
能梳理议论文的 PRE 逻辑结构,提升结构化思维与逻辑论证能力;能结合现实案例辩证分析整形手术的利弊,提升批判性思维与辩证思考能力;能通过互评反思优化写作内容,培养严谨的思维习惯。
教学重难点
教学重点
文体维度:掌握议论文 PRE 核心结构(Point 提出观点 + Reason 阐述理由 + Evidence 补充论据 + Summary 总结收尾)。
语言维度:掌握核心词汇与短语的搭配用法,掌握观点表达、理由阐述、举例论证、总结收尾的常用句型,能在语境中准确运用。
教学难点
语体把控:准确使用正式、客观的书面语撰写议论文,避免表达口语化、随意化,做到语气贴合议论文文体特征。
论证优化:用真实、具体的事例、数据或事实支撑观点,避免内容空泛,提升议论文的逻辑性与说服力
教学资源
课件PPT,黑板、白板。
教学活动设计
教学过程
活动形式及步骤
活动意图
时间
学习理解
Activity 1 Lead in
1. 话题导入:提问What is plastic surgery?
When we mention it, what pops into your mind first?
2. 交互动画活动:Play a game to figure out the difference first-hand.
●通过生活化互动激活背景知识与话题词汇,激发学生表达欲与思辨兴趣,为后续听力、阅读与写作做好情境铺垫。
5min
Activity 2 Reading
1. Read two news stories below about plastic surgery and find out the main idea for each one.
答案:①A man received plastic surgery at King’s Hospital last month to treat burn marks he got one year ago.
②A woman who has recently had plastic surgery on her face now regrets the decision.
2.Read two news stories again and answer the following questions.
①How did the plastic surgery help John Wilson?
②What problems did the plastic surgery bring to Ella Edwards?
答案:①His burnt skin was repaired, especially the skin on his face. He can go out like a normal guy now.
②She still suffers from daily pain. The surgery makes her look unnatural and she is unable to make certain facial expressions.
3.Fill in the blanks to learn more in two news.
Causes
Results
Emotions
He was caught in a horrible ①____ and his skin was② __.
• He wanted to become more ③____.
The operation was a great④_, repairing some of his ⑤___.
Now he can go out like a⑥ __.
He is ⑦___ with the treatment and becomes more ⑧___.
She wanted to become more
⑨ .
She suffers from⑩_____, which stops her from returning to a normal life.
The surgery makes her look
⑪_and unable to make certain ⑫__ .
She is ⑬__
with the result and really ⑭__ having the surgery.
答案:①campus fire ②badly hurt ③confident about his appearance ④success ⑤burnt skin ⑥normal guy ⑦pleased ⑧confident ⑨beautiful⑩daily pain ⑪unnatural ⑫facial expressions
⑬anxious ⑭regrets
●通过正反案例的范文研读,让学生直观感知整形手术的双面性,积累话题素材与核心语言,为议论文写作储备事实论据。
15min
Activity 3 Listening
1. Are the following statements true (T), false (F) or not given (NG)?
①The plastic surgery industry is very popular now. T / F / NG
②These days, the number of men who have plastic surgery is almost the same as that of women. T / F / NG
③Most actresses have had plastic surgery on their faces. T / F / NG
④One of the advantages of plastic surgery is that it can treat burn marks.T / F / NG
⑤Plastic surgery patients may suffer from terrible pain. T / F / NG
⑥People under 18 should never have plastic surgery. T / F / NG
答案:①T ②F ③NG ④T ⑤NG ⑥F
2. Listen to the report again and complete the notes below.
Plastic surgery
Results of recent research on plastic surgery
About (1) _________ of all patients are men.
The average age of patients is (2) ______.
Experts believe the industry will (3) _______________ in the future.
Advantages of plastic surgery
It is the easiest way to help people improve their (4) __________.
It helps people (5) _______________________.
Disadvantages of plastic surgery
It is very (6) _________.
It carries serious (7) __________. Patients may (8) ___________________ after failed plastic surgery operations or even die during operations.
The results of plastic surgery might be different from what people expect. This is especially true for (9) _________.
答案:(1) one third (2)falling (3)continue to grow
(4) appearance (5) build their self-confidence
(6) expensive (7) health risks (8) suffer health problems (9) teenagers
3. What is the structure of the news report?
答案:Phenomenon →Advantages →Disadvantages
●通过听力输入补充行业数据与多维论据,进一步丰富话题素材,同时让学生感知观点类文本的逻辑脉络,为 PRE 结构学习做铺垫。
15min
Activity 4 Speaking
1. In pairs, have a discussion about plastic surgery. Use the following questions to help you.
①Are you for or against plastic surgery? Why?
②What examples can you think of to support your opinion?
●通过口语讨论完成写作前的观点构思与语言预热,将抽象的写作主题转化为具体的观点交流,同时锻炼口语表达与逻辑思维。
15min
应用实践
Activity 5 Writing
Write an argument essay expressing your opinion about plastic surgery.
Use your ideas and the information collected previously to help you.
●搭建清晰的写作支架,完成从构思到成文的完整写作输出,落实议论文写作的技能目标,培养结构化写作思维。
15min
Activity 6 Language points
详解文章中的重点单词。
●聚焦核心语言点,通过讲练结合夯实基础,实现教考衔接,提升语言运用的精准度。
10min
Activity 7 Summary
以框架图的形式,回顾整形手术的优势与弊端,梳理议论文 PRE 结构与写作要点,梳理知识脉络。
●整合文本信息,梳理知识逻辑,帮助学生构建清晰的认知体系。
2min
Activity 8 Assessment
展示评价表,供学生对自己本节课中的表现及所学情况进行自我评价。
●通过自我评价,帮助学生了解自己的学习情况,提高学习的积极性和主动性。
2min
迁移创新
作业内容
作业设计意图
1min
本节课作业二选一,为分层作业,难度有所区别。基础一般的同学可以选择作业一,基础较好的同学可以选择作业二。
假如你是李华,你们学校就“青少年是否应该整容”的问题进行讨论,要求每个同学用书信的形式投稿,发表自己的意见。请根据下面的提示写一篇短文。
1.你的观点:青少年不应该整容;
2.你的理由:对身体有害;分散学习的注意力;中学生过分注重外表不合适……
二选一
1.你的观点;2.你的理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考范文一:
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua. I’m writing to share my view on whether teenagers should have plastic surgery.
I firmly hold that teenagers should not take such operations. For one thing, teens should focus on studies rather than appearance and improve themselves through hard work. For another, as they are still growing, surgery may harm their health. Many teens who had surgery ended up with regrets and couldn’t live normally.
In short, teenagers should stay away from plastic surgery and live a meaningful life.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考范文二:
Dear Editor,
I’m Li Hua, writing to voice my opinion on whether teenagers should have plastic surgery. From my perspective, teenagers are not supposed to receive such operations.
For one thing, as teens are still physically developing, cosmetic surgery may bring permanent health risks that harm their long-term growth. For another, real charm lies in inner qualities like knowledge and kindness, rather than a modified appearance. We can build true confidence by improving our personal abilities.
Yours,
Li Hua
●通过写作练习,让学生在真实的语境中运用所学知识,提高学生的语言综合运用能力、逻辑思维和表达能力。
板书设计
Unit 4 Looking good, feeling good
Period 3 Integrated skills
Advantages & Disadvantages of plastic surgery
Advantages: treat burns, improve appearance, build self-confidence...
Disadvantages: health risks, pain, unnatural look, expensive, addiction...
PRE structure of argument essay
Point (opinion) →Reason 1 + Evidence →Reason 2 + Evidence →Summary (conclusion)
Key phrases: treat...as..., regret doing, in addition
教学反思
优点:
话题贴合学生成长困惑,思辨性强,学生参与讨论的积极性高,课堂互动活跃,能主动结合社会现象与自身认知表达观点。
读、听、说、写层层递进,PRE 写作支架搭建清晰,从案例输入到结构归纳,再到观点构思与成文输出,符合学生的认知规律,写作结构落实效果较好。
缺点:
部分学生选取的论据较为单一,多停留在泛泛的利弊描述,缺乏具体数据、真实案例等细节支撑,论证说服力不足。
少数学生对议论文的正式语体把控不够准确,写作中出现较多口语化表达,不符合议论文的客观正式特征。
改进:
课前补充更多整形相关的真实案例与数据素材,课上增加范文论据拆解环节,引导学生学习多样化的论证方式。
增加正式语体与口语表达的对比练习,强化学生的文体意识,在互评环节增加语体检查项,提升语言的规范性。
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