Unit5作文讲义和范文2026-2027学年沪教版（五四学制）英语九年级上册

该初中英语讲义以“Unit 5: Buildings”为主题，通过写作要点分析框架图系统构建建议信与倡议书的知识体系，将“表明身份目的、阐述理由、提出措施”等核心写作步骤按逻辑递进呈现，并用表格归纳必备句型（如“I am writing to...”“I suggest that...”）和话题词组（如“environmentally friendly”“recycling bins”），清晰梳理写作重难点及内在联系。 讲义亮点在于结合真实情境设计分层写作任务，如建议信聚焦新教学楼设计、倡议书关注老建筑保护，培养学生语言表达与逻辑分析能力（语言能力、思维品质）。高分范文提供规范示例，句型词组辅助基础薄弱学生掌握表达，写作要点分析引导学生深度思考建议合理性，助力教师实施精准分层教学，支持学生自主复习提升写作效率。

沪教五四九上Unit 5作文 Unit 5: Buildings 作文题目1：建议信（Letter of Suggestions） 题目： 学校计划建设一栋新教学楼，请你给校长Mr. Lin写一封建议信，就新楼的设计提出你的具体建议。 写作要点分析： 本题有三个写作要点。第一，表明自己的身份和写信目的，即就新教学楼的设计提出建议。第二，从功能布局、环保节能、安全舒适等角度提出2-3条具体建议，每条建议都要有合理理由。第三，表达希望建议被采纳的愿望，并感谢校长的关注。 必备句型和词组： 表明身份与目的： · I am writing to give some suggestions on... · I am a student from... 提出建议： · I think it would be better to... · I suggest that... · It is important to consider... 话题词组： · environmentally friendly · recycling bins / rooftop garden · glass panels / natural light 结尾： · I hope my suggestions will be considered. · Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. 高分范文（114词）： Dear Mr. Lin, I am writing to give some suggestions on the design of our new school building. I am a Grade 9 student and I care deeply about our school's development. I think it would be better to include more environmentally friendly features in the building. For example, we could use large glass panels to make the classrooms brighter and reduce the need for electric lights. It is also important to set up recycling bins on every floor to encourage waste sorting. In addition, I suggest that the new building have a rooftop garden where students can relax and grow plants. This would not only make the school greener but also provide a peaceful place for students to study and communicate. I hope my suggestions will be considered. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 作文题目2：倡议书（Proposal for Protecting Old Buildings） 题目： 你们城市有一些老建筑面临被拆除的风险。请你给当地政府写一封倡议书，建议保护这些历史建筑，并说明理由和具体措施。 写作要点分析： 本题有三个写作要点。第一，指出老建筑面临拆除的问题，表达忧虑并提出写信目的。第二，从历史文化价值、教育意义、城市特色等角度说明保护的理由。第三，提出具体的保护措施，如改建为博物馆、加强公众宣传等。 必备句型和词组： 指出问题： · I am writing to propose... · It is a pity that... · Many old buildings are being torn down. 说明价值： · These buildings are valuable because... · They represent the history and culture of... · They tell the stories of our ancestors. 提出措施： · We should... · I suggest that we... · It is our responsibility to... 结尾期望： · I hope you will consider my proposal. 高分范文（116词）： Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to propose the protection of the old buildings in our city. It is a pity that many of these historical buildings are being torn down to make room for new constructions. These buildings are valuable because they represent the history and culture of our city. They tell the stories of our ancestors and show the architectural styles of different periods. If we lose them, we will lose an important part of our identity. Moreover, these buildings can serve as wonderful educational resources for students to learn about local history and traditional craftsmanship. I suggest that we turn some of these old buildings into museums or cultural centres. We should also raise public awareness about the importance of protecting historical sites. I hope you will consider my proposal and take action to save our city's treasures. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $