Unit 8 The power of love（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材沪教版九年级上册

本讲义聚焦初中英语Unit 8 "The power of love"单元写作，围绕"人与自我、人与社会"范畴的善意与爱主题，构建"主题解读-素材积累-范例赏析-实战演练"学习支架。通过思维导图梳理温情记叙文与故事读后感的写作维度，提供15个核心词汇、8个实用句式及3个佳句仿写示例，结合中考真题与模拟题（如演讲、书信、记叙文）强化细节叙事与情感表达能力。 该资料以语言能力培养为核心，通过生活实例与课文故事结合（如仿写"老人用善意挽救绝望生命"），提升学生用英语表达真挚情感的能力。同时注重思维品质发展，引导学生分析故事结构、提炼情感逻辑，在实战演练中学会从生活小事挖掘爱的力量，涵养文化意识中的家国情怀与人文关怀。课中辅助教师系统授课，课后助力学生通过素材积累与真题练习查漏补缺，夯实写作基础。

Unit 8 The power of love单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我、人与社会” 范畴，围绕善意、无私的爱，体会亲情、人间善意带来的温暖力量。 2. 写作维度 本单元以温情记叙文、故事读后感为主，写作维度分为两类：一是复述课文里充满爱意的故事，梳理故事完整情节；二是结合生活实例，讲述身边的善意与爱，表达爱的力量带来的感动。写作侧重细节叙事，抒发真挚情感。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 1 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. precious gift 珍贵的礼物 2. desperate life 绝望的生命 3. clear away sadness 消解悲伤 4. by hand 手工制作 5. collect photos 收集照片 6. stick pictures 粘贴照片 7. family value 家风 8. mutual respect 互敬互爱 9. correct mistakes 改正错误 10. cheer sb. up 使某人振作 11. make great progress 取得巨大进步 12. take good care of 悉心照顾 13. stay up all night 彻夜不眠 14. repay love 回报爱意 15. get on well with 与…… 和睦相处 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. One word frees us of all the weight and pain: that word is love. 翻译：有一字能卸下所有重担与痛苦，那便是爱。 2. Love means different things to different people. 翻译：爱对每个人而言意义各不相同。 中间句（4 句） 1. Jim sold his watch to buy a set of combs for Della. 翻译：吉姆卖掉手表，为德拉买一套梳子。 2. Old Behrman painted an ivy leaf to save the young girl's life. 翻译：贝尔曼老人画了一片常春藤叶挽救女孩的生命。 3. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. 翻译：我再三考虑后，说出想去海边的心愿。 4. If I make a mistake, I won’t hide it. 翻译：如果我犯错，我不会刻意隐瞒。 结尾句（2 句） 1. There is a power that can clear away all sadness, and that power is love. 翻译：有一种力量能消解所有悲伤，这份力量便是爱。 2. True friendship is full of warmth and support. 翻译：真挚的友谊充满温暖与陪伴。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P117)：Jim sold his watch to buy a set of combs for Della. 仿写：女孩卖掉心爱的长发，为爱人买下珍贵礼物。 2. 教材原句 (P127)：Old Behrman painted an ivy leaf to save the young girl's life. 仿写：老人默默付出，用善意挽救了绝望的生命。 3. 教材原句 (P129)：One word frees us of all the weight and pain: that word is love. 仿写：有一种力量能消解所有悲伤，这份力量便是爱。 典例 （2025·山西·中考真题）生活中总有很多爱包围着我们，父母的付出，老师的鼓励，朋友的支持，陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛，请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。 内容包括： ·show what love is in your eyes ·tell one of your stories of being loved ·share the influence that this story has on you 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①文体：英语演讲比赛演讲稿 ②时态：议论感悟用一般现在时，叙事回忆用一般过去时 ③写作要点：阐述自己心中爱的定义、讲述一件被爱的亲身经历、写出这件事对自己带来的影响；词数不少于 80，禁止出现真实人名、校名。 谋篇布局 开头：开篇点明爱的定义，说明爱包含理解、尊重、支持等不同形式。 中间：记叙暑假家庭出游一事，讲述父母尊重自己出游选择的暖心经过。 结尾：总结感悟，承诺今后换位思考，学会体谅、关爱家人。 佳作展示 Love means different things to different people. It can be support, encouragement or trust. In my view, love is understanding and respect. Last summer vacation, my family talked about where to go for our trip. I knew they preferred educational ones, but I really wanted something relaxing. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. To my surprise, they agreed happily. Filled with warmth, I realized how much they loved me. Love is about caring about others’ feelings. Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice, I promise I’ll do the same for them 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] [高分句型] Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. (现在分词作状语，宾语从句) （一） （2025·陕西渭南·模拟预测）今年的母亲节是在五月十一日。母爱温暖每个人的一生。假如你是李华，在今年的母亲节，你亲手为你的母亲制作了一件礼物。请你写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你制作的礼物，你送这个礼物的原因以及制作的过程。 要求： 1.所写内容应体现提示信息里面的要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥，但不可简单照抄本题第一节的内容； 2.语言流畅，逻辑清晰，书写工整、规范； 3.不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 4.词数：不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) 参考词汇：by hand, material, collect, stick, draw, scissors, good luck, remind, ... Mother’s Day is on May 11th this year. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 （二） （2026·广西桂林·二模）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Sam在来信中提到，他对中国的家庭文化很感兴趣，尤其是“家风”这个概念。请你用英语写一封回信，向他介绍你家的优良家风，以及你和父母是如何在日常相处中践行这种家风的。 要求： 1. 你家的优良家风是什么（如诚信正直、互敬互爱等）； 2. 你和父母如何在日常相处中践行这种家风（如坦诚沟通、互相理解等）； 3. 这种家风对你的成长有什么影响。 注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。） 参考词汇：family value（n.家风）, honesty（n.诚信）, responsible（adj.负责任的） Dear Sam, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese family culture. Let me tell you about my family values._____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua （三） （2026·新疆乌鲁木齐·二模）在你的成长过程中，一定有人陪伴你、帮助你、影响着你，他/她可能是你的家人、老师或朋友。请以“My ________”为题写一篇短文，介绍这位对你来说很特别的人。 写作要求： 1．内容至少包括： ①他/她的基本信息（外貌、性格、爱好等） ②你们之间发生的事（至少一件事） ③你的感受 2．词数：80-120词 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 My _____________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） （2026·吉林四平·模拟预测）家是我们成长中最温暖的依靠，家人的陪伴与关爱藏在每一件小事里。请以My Warm Family为题目，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。 写作要点： （1）描述一件家人关爱你的具体小事； （2）谈谈你从这件事中感受到的温暖与力量； （3）表达你对家人的感谢与美好祝愿。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 My Warm Family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） （2026·浙江丽水·二模）假如你是李华，你正在参与校英语报主题为“A Moment of Love”的征稿活动，请根据以下相关信息，结合自身体验，选择一位家人或老师，用英文描述你们相处中让你感受到爱的珍贵瞬间。 注意： 1．提供的信息仅供参考使用; 2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; 3．词数80词左右。 A Moment of Love _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） （2026·山东聊城·一模）假如你是阳光中学的一名学生，你校英语节将开展以“Friendship Lights Up My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿，介绍你的朋友并分享你们的故事。文章须包含以下要点： 1．描绘朋友的基本信息（年龄，长相，爱好等）； 2．描述一个事例，体现朋友对你的帮助； 3．谈谈你对友谊的理解。 注意:1．词数80-100左右； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Friendship Lights Up My Life _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） （2026·辽宁大连·模拟预测）孩子的成长离不开父母。为了鼓励同学们表达对父母的感恩之心，学校英语角正在进行以“Thanks to my parents”为题的英语征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文参加本次活动，内容包括： （1）父母对自己的关怀爱护；             （2）曾让父母操心的事情；         （3）今后回报父母的打算。 注意： （1）词数80~100； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Thanks to my parents _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） （2025·陕西咸阳·二模）什么东西比蓝天深沉，比大海辽阔？什么东西比高山挺拔，比小溪清澈？那就是爱。我们的生活中处处充满着爱，它可以带给我们无限的力量。假如你是王磊，请你以“Love Around Me”为题，根据下面思维导图，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Love Around Me I’m Wang Lei. There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $ Unit 8 The power of love单元同步写作讲义 1. 单元主题 属于 “人与自我、人与社会” 范畴，围绕善意、无私的爱，体会亲情、人间善意带来的温暖力量。 2. 写作维度 本单元以温情记叙文、故事读后感为主，写作维度分为两类：一是复述课文里充满爱意的故事，梳理故事完整情节；二是结合生活实例，讲述身边的善意与爱，表达爱的力量带来的感动。写作侧重细节叙事，抒发真挚情感。 3. 思维导图 词汇积累 1 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. precious gift 珍贵的礼物 2. desperate life 绝望的生命 3. clear away sadness 消解悲伤 4. by hand 手工制作 5. collect photos 收集照片 6. stick pictures 粘贴照片 7. family value 家风 8. mutual respect 互敬互爱 9. correct mistakes 改正错误 10. cheer sb. up 使某人振作 11. make great progress 取得巨大进步 12. take good care of 悉心照顾 13. stay up all night 彻夜不眠 14. repay love 回报爱意 15. get on well with 与…… 和睦相处 句式积累 开头句（2 句） 1. One word frees us of all the weight and pain: that word is love. 翻译：有一字能卸下所有重担与痛苦，那便是爱。 2. Love means different things to different people. 翻译：爱对每个人而言意义各不相同。 中间句（4 句） 1. Jim sold his watch to buy a set of combs for Della. 翻译：吉姆卖掉手表，为德拉买一套梳子。 2. Old Behrman painted an ivy leaf to save the young girl's life. 翻译：贝尔曼老人画了一片常春藤叶挽救女孩的生命。 3. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. 翻译：我再三考虑后，说出想去海边的心愿。 4. If I make a mistake, I won’t hide it. 翻译：如果我犯错，我不会刻意隐瞒。 结尾句（2 句） 1. There is a power that can clear away all sadness, and that power is love. 翻译：有一种力量能消解所有悲伤，这份力量便是爱。 2. True friendship is full of warmth and support. 翻译：真挚的友谊充满温暖与陪伴。 佳句仿写 1. 教材原句 (P117)：Jim sold his watch to buy a set of combs for Della. 仿写：女孩卖掉心爱的长发，为爱人买下珍贵礼物。 2. 教材原句 (P127)：Old Behrman painted an ivy leaf to save the young girl's life. 仿写：老人默默付出，用善意挽救了绝望的生命。 3. 教材原句 (P129)：One word frees us of all the weight and pain: that word is love. 仿写：有一种力量能消解所有悲伤，这份力量便是爱。 【答案】 1. The girl sold her beloved long hair to buy a precious gift for her lover. 2. The old man gave quietly and saved the desperate life with kindness. 3. There is a power that can clear away all sadness, and that power is love. 典例 （2025·山西·中考真题）生活中总有很多爱包围着我们，父母的付出，老师的鼓励，朋友的支持，陌生人的帮助……我们在用心感受这点点滴滴的爱。你校英语社团将举行主题为“Feel love, learn to love”的演讲比赛，请用英语写一篇参赛演讲稿。 内容包括： ·show what love is in your eyes ·tell one of your stories of being loved ·share the influence that this story has on you 要求： 1. 词数不少于80词； 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 ①文体：英语演讲比赛演讲稿 ②时态：议论感悟用一般现在时，叙事回忆用一般过去时 ③写作要点：阐述自己心中爱的定义、讲述一件被爱的亲身经历、写出这件事对自己带来的影响；词数不少于 80，禁止出现真实人名、校名。 谋篇布局 开头：开篇点明爱的定义，说明爱包含理解、尊重、支持等不同形式。 中间：记叙暑假家庭出游一事，讲述父母尊重自己出游选择的暖心经过。 结尾：总结感悟，承诺今后换位思考，学会体谅、关爱家人。 佳作展示 Love means different things to different people. It can be support, encouragement or trust. In my view, love is understanding and respect. Last summer vacation, my family talked about where to go for our trip. I knew they preferred educational ones, but I really wanted something relaxing. Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. To my surprise, they agreed happily. Filled with warmth, I realized how much they loved me. Love is about caring about others’ feelings. Just as my parents understand me and respect my choice, I promise I’ll do the same for them 佳作赏析 [亮点词汇] ①talk about谈论 ②to my surprise令我惊讶的是 ③filled with充满 [高分句型] Thinking twice, I said I hoped to go to the beach. (现在分词作状语，宾语从句) （一） （2025·陕西渭南·模拟预测）今年的母亲节是在五月十一日。母爱温暖每个人的一生。假如你是李华，在今年的母亲节，你亲手为你的母亲制作了一件礼物。请你写一篇英语短文向大家介绍一下你制作的礼物，你送这个礼物的原因以及制作的过程。 要求： 1.所写内容应体现提示信息里面的要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥，但不可简单照抄本题第一节的内容； 2.语言流畅，逻辑清晰，书写工整、规范； 3.不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； 4.词数：不少于70。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数。) 参考词汇：by hand, material, collect, stick, draw, scissors, good luck, remind, ... Mother’s Day is on May 11th this year. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Mother’s Day Gift Mother’s Day is on May 11th this year. I made a photo album for my mom by hand. I chose colorful paper and collected photos of our happy moments. I used scissors to cut out the shapes of hearts and wrote warm words beside each photo. It took me two days to finish. Mom always says photos keep memories alive. This album reminds her of our love. When she saw it, she hugged me and cried. It’s the best gift I’ve ever given! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意]    确定文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时为主。 明确要点：母亲节制作的礼物、制作原因、制作过程。 确定人称：第一人称(I/my)。 注意事项：不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息，词数不少于70。    [第二步：构思布局]    三段式结构： 开头段：点明母亲节时间，总起说明为妈妈制作礼物。 主体段：具体介绍礼物的制作材料、过程。 结尾段：写妈妈收到礼物的反应，点明礼物的意义。    [第三步：要点展开]    要点一：制作礼物的背景与目的 背景：Mother’s Day is on May 11th this year. 目的：show my love to my mom/give her a special gift/express my thanks等 要点二：礼物的制作过程 材料与工具：colorful paper/photos/scissors/cloth/glue等 制作动作：collect photos/cut out heart shapes/write warm words/stick photos/draw等 制作方式：by hand/in person等    要点三：礼物的意义与妈妈的反应 意义：remind her of our happy moments/keep memories alive/mother’s favorite等 反应：hugged me and cried/said it was the best gift等 （二） （2026·广西桂林·二模）假定你是李华，你的外国朋友Sam在来信中提到，他对中国的家庭文化很感兴趣，尤其是“家风”这个概念。请你用英语写一封回信，向他介绍你家的优良家风，以及你和父母是如何在日常相处中践行这种家风的。 要求： 1. 你家的优良家风是什么（如诚信正直、互敬互爱等）； 2. 你和父母如何在日常相处中践行这种家风（如坦诚沟通、互相理解等）； 3. 这种家风对你的成长有什么影响。 注意： 1. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2. 文中不得透露个人信息； 3. 词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。） 参考词汇：family value（n.家风）, honesty（n.诚信）, responsible（adj.负责任的） Dear Sam, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese family culture. Let me tell you about my family values._____________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Sam, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in Chinese family culture. Let me tell you about my family values. The most important value in my family is honesty. My parents always tell me that being honest is a very important thing. We often talk openly about our feelings and problems. If I make a mistake, I won’t hide it. Instead, we discuss how to correct it together. This value helps me grow into a responsible person. It also makes our family warm and happy. I learn to be helpful and friendly to people around me because of it. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：书信类应用文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：介绍自家优良家风、日常如何践行家风、家风对自身成长的影响 确定人称：第一人称（I/my/we） 注意事项：不得透露个人真实信息；开头结尾已给出，不计入80词总词数 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：沿用题目给定开头，引出家风话题 主体段：点明家风内涵+举例说明家人日常如何践行家风 结尾段：阐述家风对个人成长和家庭氛围的影响 第三步：要点展开 要点一：点明优良家风 家风类型：honesty/respect/love and unity/diligence/politeness等 开篇表达：The most important value in my family is honesty./My family has a good family value—mutual respect and love.等 要点二：日常践行家风 相处方式：talk openly about feelings and problems/communicate sincerely/understand each other/share ideas等 处事做法：make a mistake and never hide it/discuss how to correct mistakes together/take responsibility patiently等 要点三：家风带来影响 个人成长：grow into a responsible person/shape my personality/learn to be helpful and friendly等 家庭氛围：make our family warm and happy/influence my life greatly/teach me to get on well with others等 （三） （2026·新疆乌鲁木齐·二模）在你的成长过程中，一定有人陪伴你、帮助你、影响着你，他/她可能是你的家人、老师或朋友。请以“My ________”为题写一篇短文，介绍这位对你来说很特别的人。 写作要求： 1．内容至少包括： ①他/她的基本信息（外貌、性格、爱好等） ②你们之间发生的事（至少一件事） ③你的感受 2．词数：80-120词 3．文中不得出现真实姓名和校名 My _____________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 My Best Friend I have a special person in my life, and she is my best friend. She has big eyes and long hair. She is kind, quiet and always ready to help others. She likes reading books and playing sports. Once I failed my English test and felt really sad. She cheered me up patiently and helped me with my lessons every day. With her help, I made great progress soon. I feel warm and lucky to have such a friend. I hope our friendship will last forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：人物介绍类记叙文，介绍人物用一般现在时/叙事事件用一般过去时 明确要点：人物外貌性格爱好、相处具体事例、个人内心感受 确定人称：第一人称I/第三人称she/he 注意事项：不出现真实姓名校名，词数控制80-120词 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出身边特别之人，介绍外貌、性格与爱好 主体段：记叙两人之间发生的一件具体往事 结尾段：抒发内心感受，表达真情与美好祝愿 [第三步：要点展开 ]要点一：人物基本信息 外貌特征：big eyes and long hair/small round face/tall and thin/short black hair等 性格特点：kind quiet/friendly/outgoing/warm-hearted/hard-working等 兴趣爱好：reading books and playing sports/drawing/listening to music/dancing/running等 要点二：彼此之间发生的事 事件场景：failed English test felt sad/got into trouble/felt lonely/had difficulty in study等 对方行为：cheered me up patiently/helped me with lessons/encouraged me/looked after me等 最终结果：made great progress/became confident/got out of trouble/improved myself等 要点三：内心真实感受 内心情绪：feel warm and lucky/feel moved/feel thankful/feel happy等 情感期许：hope friendship last forever/cherish the friendship/be grateful forever等 （四） （2026·吉林四平·模拟预测）家是我们成长中最温暖的依靠，家人的陪伴与关爱藏在每一件小事里。请以My Warm Family为题目，根据写作要求，用英语写一篇短文。 写作要点： （1）描述一件家人关爱你的具体小事； （2）谈谈你从这件事中感受到的温暖与力量； （3）表达你对家人的感谢与美好祝愿。 写作要求： （1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥； （2）词数90—100； （3）书写规范，卷面整洁； （4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。 My Warm Family ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Warm Family My family is full of warmth and love. I still remember the day when I was worried about my exam. I felt nervous and upset. My parents sat beside me and talked with me patiently. They encouraged me not to give up and taught me to relax. They even made my favorite fruit salad to cheer me up. With their care, I became confident and did better later. This warm memory makes me feel loved and strong. I am so thankful to my family. I hope we will always be happy and stay together forever. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，用一般过去时和一般现在时为主 明确要点：描述一件家人关爱我的具体小事、谈谈我从这件事中感受到的温暖与力量、表达我对家人的感谢与美好祝愿 确定人称：第一人称（I/My）   注意事项：词数90—100；不能出现考生姓名和学校名称 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构：   开头段：总起句，指出我的家充满温暖与爱   主体段：描述一件家人关爱我的具体小事并谈谈我在这件事中感受到的温暖与力量 结尾段：表达我对家人的感谢与美好祝愿 [第三步：要点展开]   要点一：家人关爱我的具体小事 情绪支持：cheer sb. up/encourage sb. not to give up/calm sb. down等 行动表达：talked with me/encouraged me/help sb. with sth.等 学习助力：explain sth. to sb. clearly/stay up with sb./share learning tips with sb.等 要点二：我从这件事中感受到的温暖与力量 力量维度：become more confident/gain courage and strength等 成长维度：learn to be thankful/learn to stay positive等 感激回馈：be deeply thankful to sb/cherish the love from sb等 要点三：表达我对家人的感谢与美好祝愿 感恩表达：thankful to sb./grateful/thankful/be full of thanks等 未来承诺：repay their kindness /try my best to be better/make my family proud等 美好祝愿：wish them good health/hope they live happily/wish our family full of joy等 （五） （2026·浙江丽水·二模）假如你是李华，你正在参与校英语报主题为“A Moment of Love”的征稿活动，请根据以下相关信息，结合自身体验，选择一位家人或老师，用英文描述你们相处中让你感受到爱的珍贵瞬间。 注意： 1．提供的信息仅供参考使用; 2．文中不得出现真实的人名和校名; 3．词数80词左右。 A Moment of Love _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： A Moment of Love Love is always around us. I still remember a warm moment with my mom. One rainy evening, I felt sad because I failed my math test. When I got home, Mom didn’t blame me. Instead, she sat with me and helped me work out the problems carefully. She encouraged me not to give up. Her patience and love made me feel warm and confident. This moment tells me love is the most precious thing in the world. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以具体事件展现“爱的瞬间”，用一般过去时为主（回忆已发生的事） 明确要点：选择一位家人或老师，描述一个让你感受到爱的珍贵瞬间，包含时间、地点、人物、感受 确定人称：第一人称（I/my） 注意事项：不得出现真实人名和校名，词数80左右，提供信息仅供参考 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，引出爱的主题，点明回忆对象 主体段：具体描述事件经过（时间、地点、发生了什么、对方怎么做的） 结尾段：表达感受，升华主题（爱的意义） [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：引入回忆（Memory） 总起表达：Love is always around us/Love is everywhere/Love never leaves us 引出对象：a warm moment with my mom/a special moment with my dad/teacher 过渡句式：I still remember.../I will never forget... /It happened when... 要点二：事件描述（具体瞬间） 时间设定：One rainy evening/Last winter/One cold night/Last Friday after school 起因/背景：I felt sad because I failed my math test/I was worried about.../I had a fight with.../I felt lonely... 对方反应：Mom didn’t blame me. Instead, she sat with me/Dad gave me a big hug./My teacher smiled at me and said... 具体行为：helped me work out the problems carefully/stayed up with me/cooked my favorite food/held my hand 鼓励话语：She encouraged me not to give up/She said “I believe in you”/“You can do it” 要点三：感受与升华（Feeling） 内心感受：made me feel warm and confident/touched my heart/filled me with warmth/gave me strength 主题升华：love is the most precious thing in the world/love is the greatest power/love means never giving up on me （六） （2026·山东聊城·一模）假如你是阳光中学的一名学生，你校英语节将开展以“Friendship Lights Up My Life”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇文章投稿，介绍你的朋友并分享你们的故事。文章须包含以下要点： 1．描绘朋友的基本信息（年龄，长相，爱好等）； 2．描述一个事例，体现朋友对你的帮助； 3．谈谈你对友谊的理解。 注意:1．词数80-100左右； 2．文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Friendship Lights Up My Life _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文 Friendship Lights Up My Life I have a good friend who is 14 years old. She has long hair and always wears a warm smile. She likes reading books and playing basketball in her free time. Once I was bad at English and felt worried. She patiently helped me with my grammar and shared good learning methods with me. With her help, my English improved a lot soon. True friendship is full of warmth and support. Good friends always stay with each other and grow up together. It really lights up my whole life. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性记叙文，结合一定议论，用一般现在时为主，描述过去事例可用一般过去时 明确要点：朋友基本信息（年龄、长相、爱好）、朋友帮助的事例、对友谊的理解 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第三人称（she/her等，描述朋友时用） 注意事项：不得透露真实的人名、校名和地名 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出朋友，介绍朋友基本信息 主体段：描述朋友帮助自己的事例 结尾段：谈谈对友谊的理解，升华主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：朋友基本信息 年龄描述：14 years old/15 years old等 长相描述：long hair/short hair/big eyes/small nose等，还可以用always wears a warm smile等描述整体形象 爱好描述：like doing sth.（reading books/playing basketball/drawing pictures/listening to music等） 要点二：朋友帮助的事例 事例背景：was bad at English/Math and felt worried/anxious 帮助行为：helped me with my grammar/homework，shared good learning methods/experience with me. 帮助结果：my English improved a lot soon/I made great progress in Math 要点三：对友谊的理解 理解内容：True friendship is full of warmth and support./Friendship means staying with each other and growing up together./Good friends are like stars, always shining in our lives. （七） （2026·辽宁大连·模拟预测）孩子的成长离不开父母。为了鼓励同学们表达对父母的感恩之心，学校英语角正在进行以“Thanks to my parents”为题的英语征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文参加本次活动，内容包括： （1）父母对自己的关怀爱护；             （2）曾让父母操心的事情；         （3）今后回报父母的打算。 注意： （1）词数80~100； （2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； （3）文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Thanks to my parents _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】 例文： Thanks to my parents My parents are the most important people in my life. They always take good care of me. My mother cooks healthy food for me, and my father often helps me with my studies. I still remember the time when I was seriously ill. They stayed up all night to look after me. At that time, I realized how much they loved me. To repay their love, I will study hard to make them proud. I will also help with housework and spend more time with them. Thank you, mom and dad! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不得遗漏，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：点明父母对自己的关爱，列举生活中如饮食、学习方面的照顾； 第二步：通过回忆一次生病让父母彻夜不眠的经历，体现父母的辛苦和对自己的爱； 第三步：陈述未来通过努力学习和分担家务来回报父母的计划，并表达感激。 [亮点词汇] ①take good care of照顾 ②stay up熬夜 ③repay their love回报他们的爱 ④make them proud使他们骄傲 ⑤realize意识到 [高分句型] ①I still remember the time when I was seriously ill. (when引导的定语从句) ②To repay their love, I will study hard to make them proud. (动词不定式短语作目的状语) （八） （2025·陕西咸阳·二模）什么东西比蓝天深沉，比大海辽阔？什么东西比高山挺拔，比小溪清澈？那就是爱。我们的生活中处处充满着爱，它可以带给我们无限的力量。假如你是王磊，请你以“Love Around Me”为题，根据下面思维导图，写一篇英语短文。 要求： 1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）； 4. 词数：不少于70。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数。） Love Around Me I’m Wang Lei. There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Love Around Me      I’m Wang Lei. There is lots of love around me in my everyday life. This love makes my days full of warmth and gives me the courage to face all kinds of challenges.  Every day I can receive love from my parents, my teachers, my classmates and my friends. At home, my parents look after me carefully. In the morning, my lovely mother cooks delicious food for me. Then my father drives me to school. At school all the teachers not only care about me but also teach me lots of useful knowledge. My dear classmates are also very kind. They help me whenever I have difficulties with my studies. And we get on well with each other. I chat online with friends in my spare time. They often share my happiness and trouble.    I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them. I make a decision to study hard and make great progress. Here, I should say thanks to them. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“参考信息”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，点明主题； 第二步，具体介绍父母、老师、同学和朋友爱你的表现； 第三步，最后书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①not only...but also不但……而且…… ②get on well with sb和某人相处得好 ③make a decision决定 [高分句型] I often feel happy and excited when I get love from them.（when引导的时间状语从句） 9 / 18 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $