内容正文:
一部分。结合句意,这里需要填入一个关系代词来引
导从句,“what”在此处表示“什么”。所以,填入what。
64.were考查动词的时态。句意:他们是l5人探险队的
一部分,在那里见证了五周的自然美景。这里描述的
是过去的情况,主语是they,谓语动词用复数形式,因
此填were。
65.be done考查被动语态。句意:应该怎么对待这么美
丽的地方?此处主语为物,用被动语态。
66.its考查形容词性物主代词。句意:这个地方,以其独
特而令人惊叹的自然美景,必须被妥善保存供全国人
民欣赏。这里“它的”应用形容词性物主代词“its”。
67.for考查介词。句意:必须被妥善保存供全国人民欣
赏。结合句意,这里表示“目的”,用介词for。
68.completion考查名词。句意:在他们的旅程结束时,
他们都同意并发警要宣传这个想法。根据前后文可
知,此处用名词。
69.largest考查形容词的最高级。句意:黄石国家公园是
美国最大的国家公园。根据句意,这里需要表示最高
级,应用形容词的最高级形式largest。
70.which考查关系代词。句意:直到阿拉斯加南部的
Wrangell-Saint Elias在l978年成为国家纪念碑,并在
1980年获得成为面积达12.3百万英亩的国家公园的
殊荣。这里是非限制性定语从句,先行词是Wrangell-
Saint Elias,应用关系代词which。
第五部分写作
第一章应用文写作
(一)短文投稿十邀请信(邮件)十申请信(邮件)
1.短文投稿
Writing 1
[审题分析]
审体裁一
短文投稿(议论文)
Ranking My
审人称
一以第三人称为主
College Life
和时态
Essentials
一以一般现在时为主
对学习、社交、睡眠
审要点
进行排序
你的理由
[思路点拨]
本题要求向校报Opinion栏目投稿,对“学习、社交、睡眠”
三者的重要性进行排序并阐述理由,属于议论文的写作范
畴。写作时可采用三段式结构,具体写作思路如下:
开头:开门见山,直接写明三者的重要性排序,亮出个人
观点。
主体:按顺序依次阐述理由,可以使用恰当的连接词来体
现三个要点之间的逻辑关系,注意所给论据应贴合大学生
活实际,立足实际、言之有物。
结尾:总结观点,升华主旨,使文章结构完整、立意充实。
工参考范文]
Ranking My College Life Essentials
In terms of my college life essentials,I would rank
sleep as the most important,followed by studying and so-
cializing.
Sleep tops the list because health is the foundation for
everything.Without sufficient rest,we can barely concen-
trate,let alone handle academic pressure.Studying comes
second.After all,academic work is our core mission,but
it can only be achieved when we are energized.Lastly,so-
cializing takes a back seat compared to the other two,yet it
remains an essential stress outlet and source of support.
To sum up,striking a good balance among the three is
vital for a wonderful college experience.
Writing 2
[语篇解读]这是一篇应用文。发现校图书馆的藏书存
在被勾画涂改的现象。请你向英文报投稿。
入
[详解]
1.词汇积累
财产:asset--→possession/property
乱涂乱画:scribble→scrawl
满是:be filled with→be stuffed with
寿命:lifespan-life expectancy
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Many books have been scribbled and defaced.
拓展句:There are many books that have been scribbled
and defaced.
[点睛][高分句型1Let's treasure our library books,
keeping them in good condition,(运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2]Some pages are filled with random draw
ings,while others have important passages underlined or
crossed out,(运用了while连接并列句,表对比)
参考范文]
Treasure Library Books:Our Shared Responsibility
Recently,I've noticed a disturbing phenomenon in our
school library.Many books have been scribbled and de-
faced.Some pages are filled with random drawings,while
others have important passages underlined or crossed out.
Even worse,some books have been torn.
These books are our shared assets,not personal note-
books.They deserve our respect and care.Every mark on
them not only ruins the reading experience for others but
also shortens their lifespan.Let's treasure our library
books,keeping them in good condition.After all,a well-
kept library is a reflection of our school's culture and our
own good character.
Writing 3
[语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇
短文向校英文报“Sports and Health'”栏目投稿,向同学们
推荐一项适合课间开展的运动。
解析:1.词汇积累
厌倦:be tired of→be fed up with
首先:first-above all
减轻:com bat-→relieve
提高:improve-,enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This simple routine involves standing up from your
desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and taking a few
deep breaths.
拓展句:This is a simple routine that involves standing up
from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and
taking a few deep breaths.
[点睛][高分句型1]Lastly,it promotes a healthy and
active lifestyle,which is essential for overall well-being.
(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
L高分句型2]This simple routine involves standing up
from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and
taking a few deep breaths..(运用了动名词作宾语)
[高分句型3]lt's a small change that can make a big
difference in your day.(运用了that引导的定语从句)
[参考范文]
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
Everybody!Are you tired of sitting in class all day?
How about incorporating some physical activity into your
daily routine?One great option is the "Stand Up and
Stretch"exercise.This simple routine involves standing up
from your desk,stretching your arms,legs and back,and
taking a few deep breaths.It's a quick and easy way to get
your blood flowing and re-energize your body and mind.
This exercise is recommended for several reasons.
3
First,it helps to combat the negative effects of pro-
longed sitting,such as back pain and stiffness.Second,it
can improve your focus and concentration,making it easier
to stay engaged in class.Lastly,it promotes a healthy and
active lifestyle,which is essential for overall well-being.
So,next time you feel a bit sluggish during class,re-
member to stand up and stretch!It's a small change that
can make a big difference in your day.
2.邀请信(邮件)
Writing 1
Dear Caroline,
This is my first time that I have invited you to attend
our program-Talk and Talk.It is ten years since Talk and
Talk was established.This is an amazing program where
you can share your ideas with students.Now,when having
trouble in learning English well,plenty of students urge to
know how to deal with it.As our distinguished foreign lan-
guage teacher,your aid can help us a lot.If you are availa-
ble on this Sunday,I together with the whole Talk and
Talk staff am waiting for your coming.I'd appreciate it if
you take my invitation into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing 2
[写作指导]
主题语境:人与社会一人际沟通(良好的人际关系)。邀
请朋友在线分享英语写作经验。
(1)审人称和时态。邀请信中的主要人称是第一人称,一般会
用到两种时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。那么这篇作文中
人称就是我(I)和我们(we);时态可用do,wil+do。
(2)关键词的翻译。主要是围绕作文要点来确定相应的英
语的表达。
(3)列要点提纲。一般是三段式。第一段(写信目的):邀
请信的第一段要涉及到两方面的内容:第一句可做简要的
的自我介绍(名字加身份)。第二段(具体事宜):这部分就
是邀请信的重心所在,一般写一个过渡句来衔接上下文。
第三段(表达期待的心情):最后一一段要做到首尾呼应,再
次表明期望对方能够接受邀请的心情。
(4)润色作文。
[参考范文]
Dear Jim,
I'm writing to invite you to an internet-based talk
about how to improve English writing.The talk is thought
important for us Chinese students,of whom most are poor
in writing a composition in English.Therefore,we hope
you,a native speaker,would like to give us some advice on
what we can do well with our English compositions.
The online talk is scheduled to take place between
5:00pm and 6:30pm this Saturday,and if you will,I will
send you the link to Tencent Meeting,an video app compa-
rable to Zoom.
I would appreciate it so much if we could have you in
the talk.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.申请信(邮件)
Writing 1
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Jin,an exchange student from China.Knowing
that Chinese Workshop will be held in the school,I am
writing to apply for taking part in the activity.
The theme of the activity involves Chinese food,tradi-
tional Chinese handicrafts,Chinese calligraphy and paint-
ing.So I think this activity is very significant,which is con-
ducive to spreading excellent traditional Chinese culture and
1
promoting cultural exchanges between China and Britain.
As a Chinese,I have a passion for making Chinese cuisine,
for example dumplings.Not only can I teach participants
how to make dumplings,but also let them fall in love with
Chinese cuisine.
I would appreciate it if you would enroll me in the
event.Looking forward to your reply.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
Writing 2
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to apply to be a volunteer for the Chinese
Painting Exhibition which will be held in your art gallery.I
think I am qualified for this job,because I have learned Chi-
nese painting since childhood.Equally important,I am flu-
ent in both Chinese and English,so I have no difficulty in
communicating with others.If I am lucky enough to be cho-
sen as a volunteer,I can show visitors around the gallery
and answer their questions about the paintings,after some
proper training.
I would be very grateful if you could offer me the op-
portunity.I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)普通信(邮件)十通知
1.普通信(邮件)
Writing 1
[语篇解读]本篇是应用文写作。要求考生给Chris写一
封信,分享在公园上美术课的经历。
解析:1.词汇积累
决定:decide~determine
整个的:entire-→whole
提供:offer-provide
总之:in a word-in short
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decided to create
a watercolor painting of the small bridge over the park's
pond,surrounded by blooming flowers
拓展句:Because I was inspired by the fantastic scenery,I
decided to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge
over the park's pond,which was surrounded by blooming
flowers.
[点睛][高分句型l]We were tasked to draw or paint
something that impressed us most.(that引导的定语从句)
[高分句型2]I felt a deep sense of peace as I painted.
(as引导的时间状语从句)
[参考范文]
Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a
park last Friday.
We were tasked to draw or paint something that im-
pressed us most.Inspired by the fantastic scenery,I decid-
ed to create a watercolor painting of the small bridge over
the park's pond,surrounded by blooming flowers.
The entire experience was incredibly refreshing.Being
surrounded by nature not only sparked my creativity but al-
so offered a much-needed break from the usual hustle and
bustle of school life.I felt a deep sense of peace as I paint
ed.
In a word,it was not just an art class;it was a mo-
ment of connection with nature that I truly cherished.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
[语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好
友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。
解析:1.词汇积累
建议:suggestion→tip
提供:offer-~provide
开展:carry out-→conduct
主题:theme-topic
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the
theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
拓展句:Since you are planning a club activity with the
theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
L点睛][高分句型1]Hearing that you are planning a
club activity with the theme of"Green Beijing"and need my
help,I am writing to offer you my suggestions.(运用了
that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2]I think you can carry out this activity in an
interactive and experiential manner,which means students
can participate and have a better understanding of "Green
Beijing"through getting involved in different activities by
themselves..(运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[参考范文]
Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the
theme of "Green Beijing"and need my help,I am writing
to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive
and experiential manner,which means students can partici-
pate and have a better understanding of "Green Beijing"
through getting involved in different activities by them-
selves.You can showcase garbage classification on site,
plant trees and publicize sharing economy,which will all fit
into the theme of“Green Beijing'”
Hopefully,you will get some inspiration from my sug-
gestions.Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
2.通知
Hello,everyone!Would you like to learn about how
our school developed in the past and will have a big im-
provement in the future?Well,please come to watch the
short film called Growing Together,which we made.The
film will show in the school hall of the western side of
school at 10:00 am this Friday.This film which lasts for
two hours may have some shortcomings in it,so we really
hope you to offer some ideas and suggestions after watching
it so that we can fill in the content and have an overall and
exact introduction to our school.If you have any idea or ad-
vice,welcome to contact us by email or mobile phone
Thank you a lot!
School Union
(三)建议信十求助信十告知信十道歉信
十发言稿(演讲稿)十咨询信
1.建议信
Writing 1
[语篇解读]本篇书面表达是李华给外教Kate写的
邮件。外教Kate计划将班级英语作文汇编成册,李华在邮
件中提出配图的建议,并自荐承担画图工作。
[详解
1.词汇积累
帮助:help-assist
至关重要的:vita·crucial
增强:enhance~boost
各种各样的:various~a variety of
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2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays
more engaging.
拓展句:Pictures,which are an important visual element,
can play a vital role in making the essays more engaging.
[点睛][高分句型l]I have a suggestion that might en
hance the overall quality of this collection-adding rele
vant pictures,(运用了that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2]As I have been learning drawing for years
and have a good command of various drawing techniques,I
believe I can create pictures that perfectly match the themes
of the essays.(运用了As引导原因状语从句;省略引导词
that的宾语从句:that引导的定语从句)
[参考范文]
Dear Kate,
It's a great idea to make a collection of our English es-
says.This compilation will surely be a wonderful showcase
of our English learning achievements.I have a suggestion
that might enhance the overall quality of this collection
adding relevant pictures.
Pictures can play a vital role in making the essays more
engaging.For example,if an essay is about a travel experi-
ence,a vivid picture of the described scenery can bring the
story to life,helping readers better visualize the places and
emotions.
I'm quite interested in contributing to this project.As
I have been learning drawing for years and have a good
command of various drawing techniques,I believe I can cre
ate pictures that perfectly match the themes of the essays.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 2
[语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外
教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目,在“Fun at my
school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐,
并说明理由。
[详解]
1.词汇积累
表达:express,convey
利用:capitalize on→use
担当:serve as→act as
注意:pay heed to-take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Such an inviting column,adopting a“description
and guess"approach,must expose everyone to others
characteristics,thus strengthening mutual understand-
ing.
拓展句:Such an inviting column,which adopts a“de
scription and guess"approach,must expose everyone to
others'characteristics,thus strengthening mutual under-
standing.
[点睛][高分句型l]I'm writing to express that my
predilection goes to "Guess who I am",which capitalizes
on an object clue to signal its potential contents.(运用了
that引导的宾语从句,which引导的定语从句。)
[高分句型2]More importantly,more friendships will be
forged,since the column enables us to befriend someone on
the same wavelength,(运用了since引导的原因状语
从句。)
[参考范文]
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our
English newspaper.I'm writing to express that my predi-
lection goes to "Guess who I am",which capitalizes on an
object clue to signal its potential contents.
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The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds be-
tween students.Redoubling efforts to boost academic perform-
ance,we pay little heed to other classmates'personalities,hob-
bies,strengths,and even aspirations.Such an inviting col-
umn,adopting a "description and guess"approach,must ex-
pose everyone to others'characteristics,thus strengthening
mutual understanding.More importantly,more friendships
will be forged,since the column enables us to befriend someone
on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column,I'm firmly convinced,
won't fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmos-
phere.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 3
审题分析
审体裁
应用文(建议信)
UN Proposal
审人称
以第一人称为主
Campaign
和时态
以一般现在时为主
提出的建议
审要点
建议的理由
[思路点拨]通过审题我们知道这是一篇建议信,要求给
参加联合国倡议征集活动的好友提建议,写作时需紧扣倡
议内容和理由,因此,这篇建议信的结构框架可以安排
如下:
开头:直接回应好友邮件,表明乐意提建议,并对朋友参加
这一活动表达祝福和鼓励。
主体:分点提出倡议并说明理由,理由要说明倡议的必要
性和青少年参与的可行性,做到思路清晰、逻辑缜密。
结尾:表达所提建议能被采用的期望。
[高级句式]
篇首句
1.With regard to the problem you mentioned in your letter,
my suggestions are as follows.
关于你在信中提到的问题,我的建议如下。
2.I'm glad to hear you're participating in the UN Proposal
Campaign!Here are my suggestions.
我很高兴听到你参加了联合国的倡议征集活动!以下
是我的建议。
篇中句
1.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to sug-
gest that...For one thing...For another...What's
more...
当涉及这种情况时,我建议……一方面…另一方
面……而且……
2.Suggest establishing online platforms where teens can
share stories and access professional guidance.
建议建立在线平台,让青少年可以分享故事并获得专业
指导。
篇尾句
1.I hope you will find my suggestions/advice helpful/use-
ful/practical/beneficial.
我希望你会认为我的建议是有帮助的/有用的/实用的
有益的。
2.I believe your voice will resonate!
我相信你的声音会引起共鸣!
「参考范文
Dear Jim,
I'm glad to hear you're participating in the UN Pro-
posal Campaign!Here are my suggestions.
1
First,focus on climate changes.Rising temperatures
and extreme weather affect everyone,especially the youth.
You could propose global school programs to teach eco-
friendly habits like recycling or planting trees.Such initia-
tives empower students to drive change locally.
Second,advocate mental health support.Academic
pressure is widespread.Suggest establishing online plat-
forms where teens can share stories and access professional
guidance.This builds a supportive community across bor-
ders.
Both topics address urgent global issues and highlight
youth's role in solving them.I believe your voice will reso-
nate!
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing 4
[语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。外国好友
Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得知今年新中
国成立75周年,他打算重,点介绍中国的发展成就,邀请考
生给他回复邮件,就此给予他建议。
解析:1.词汇积累
很好的:great·wonderful
成就:achievement→accomplishment
建议:suggestion→advice
此外:in addition→what's more
2.句式拓展
句式变换
原句:It's great to hear you're planning to write about
China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversa-
ry of the founding of this country.
拓展句:lt's great to hear what you're planning to write
about is China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th
anniversary of the founding of this country.
[点睛]L高分句型1]To begin with,talk about
China's economic growth and technological advancements,
which are the highlights in the past few decades.(运用了
which引导的非限定性定语从句)
[高分句型2]Then,projects like the Belt and Road Initi-
ative make a good topic to discuss because it showcases
China's determination to build a shared future with the
world.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
工参考范文]
Dear Jim,
It's great to hear you're planning to write about
China's achievements on the occasion of the 75th anniversa-
ry of the founding of this country.Here are a few sugges-
tions for your article.
To begin with,talk about China's economic growth
and technological advancements,which are the highlights
in the past few decades.Then,projects like the Belt and
Road Initiative make a good topic to discuss because it
showcases China's determination to build a shared future
with the world.In addition,you can also mention China's
role in helping solving global issues such as the global war-
ming,offering a more comprehensive view.
Looking forward to reading your article!
Yours,
Li Hua
2.求助信
[审题指导]
「审题
三审:人称,时态,题材
[人称]
第一人称
[时态]
将来时和一般现在时
[题材]求助信(征求意见)
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主旨大意]
介绍中国文化给外国朋友,发布在英文网站上,这是
班会的内容,因此求助外国友人,征求他们的意见。
[「参考范文]
Dear Chris,
How is everything going with you lately?A class
meeting will be held in my school about Chinese traditional
cultural and it will be displayed on the English website.I
am writing to ask some advice from you on what kind of
Chinese conventional cultural attracts the foreigners like
you most.
As we all know,Chinese traditional culture includes
calligraphy,Chinese knots,Chinese paintings,paper cutting
and so on.Besides,Chinese culture also includes various
cultural thoughts and spiritual concepts in the national his-
tory.How much do you want to know about each part,and
would you please tell me which part you are curious about?
What type of introduction will help foreigners to have a
much clearer knowledge of their interested section?
Your reply will be highly appreciated and thank you for
your help.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
3.告知信
「参考范文]
Dear Nancy,
I am very glad to receive your E-mail.I am very grate-
ful to you and your family for taking care of me during my
study tour in the UK.And wish you all the best.
Now that I have finished my high school studies,my
parents and I are going to travel to Beijing.I'm going to
Tian'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great
Wall.In addition,I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy
the elegant demeanor of famous universities.I have decided
to register for the computer major.With the rapid develop-
ment of the Internet industry,the high-paying employment
in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the In-
ternet tide.Before choosing,consult people engaged in this
major or go to training institutions for consultation.Only
with a clear goal,we will have targeted learning in the fu-
ture,which will be more efficient.
Yours,
Li Jin
4.道歉信
[解题]
「题材]道款信
人称]第一人称
L人物关系]同英国好友Jim
段落]1.简短寒暄2.表达歉意并说明原因
3.提出建议并给出理由
[参考范文
Dear Jim,
I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go out with you
this weekend.I've just been told that I have to go and visit
my sick grandfather in the countryside,who was suddenly
admitted to the hospital.I hope the change won't cause you
too much trouble.
How about going out next Saturday morning?If it's
convenient for you,let's meet at the school gate at 9:00.
Please let me know what time suits you best.I should be
available anytime next weekend.
In addition,next Saturday,there will be a flower
show in Beihai Park.Then we can go to see the flowers to-
gether.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
5.发言稿(演讲稿)
Writing l
「语篇解读]本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生针对
部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象陈述看法并
提出建议。
[详解]
1.词江积累
记录:record→document
缺,点:draw back-disadvantage
分散注意力:distract·divert
建议:suggest→propose
2.句式拓展
并列句变复合句
原句:In my opinion,it can be a fun way to record cam
pus life,but it also has its drawbacks.
拓展句:In my opinion,it can be a fun way that we can
use to record campus life,but it also has its drawbacks.
[点睛][高分句型l]Not only may it distract us from
our studies and even disrupt the school order,but it might
also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-es-
teem when the videos don't get the expected response.
用了not only.,,but also.,,并列结构和从属连词when引
导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2]I suggest we should limit the time for fil-
ming and choose proper places.(运用了省略连词that的
宾语从句和虚拟语气)
[参考范文]
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
Recently,some of us have been filming short videos on
campus.In my opinion,it can be a fun way to record cam-
pus life,but it also has its drawbacks.Not only may it dis-
tract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order,
but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect
our self-esteem when the videos don't get the expected re
sponse.
I suggest we should limit the time for filming and
choose proper places.Let's focus more on our academic
tasks and make good use of our time on campus.
Thank you!
Writing 2
[语篇解读]根据提供的关于共享单车、高铁和新能源汽
车的三幅图片,撰写一篇题目为“中国交通发展”的发言
稿,立足中国科技发展,培养学生创新意识和科学精神,彰
显时代发展,强化现代化人才建设,实现人才强国,引导学
生关注我国经济社会的发展变化,增强国家富强、民族复
兴的自豪感和自信心。
[参考范文]
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient trans-
port,Chinese transport has seen an enormous develop-
ment.Firstly,shared bicycles have become a popular choice
in cities,providing an eco-friendly and cost-effective way to
travel short distances.Secondly,the high-speed train net-
work has revolutionized long-distance travel,significantly
reducing travel time across the country.Finally,the rise of
new energy vehicles reflects China's commitment to sus
tainable development and reducing carbon emissions.These
advancements highlight China's progress in creating a mod-
ern,efficient,and environmentally friendly transport sys-
tem.
6.咨询信
[语篇解读]本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给
外教Chis写一封邮件,询问他上个月答应写一篇介绍加
拿大体育运动的文章的进展,并提醒交稿时间。
[详解]
1.词汇积累
询问:inquire-→ask
理解:understanding→comprehension
此外:also-besides
肯定地:surely-certainly
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of
the article.
拓展句:As you know,I'm writing to politely inquire a-
bout the progress of the article.
[点睛][高分句型1]Would you mind letting me know
how it's going?(运用了how引导的宾语从句。)
L高分句型2]Your insights into Canadian sports will surely
enrich our readers'understanding of global sports culture,which
will be of benefit to us.(运用了which引导的非限制性定
语从句。)
[参考范文]
Dear Chris,
Hope this email finds you well!Last month,you
kindly agreed to write an article about sports in Canada,
and we're all looking forward to reading it.
I'm writing to politely inquire about the progress of
the article.Would you mind letting me know how it's go-
ing?Also,could I remind you that the deadline for submis-
sion is this Friday,June 14th?Your insights into Canadian
sports will surely enrich our readers'understanding of
global sports culture,which will be of benefit to us,
Thank you again for your support
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(四)致歉信十感谢信
1.致歉信
「写作思路]题目要求写一封道歉信,就不能如约一起去
书店,向Bob道款,使用第一人称和一般现在时进行写作。
写作内容包括:表示款意:说明原因:另约时间。注意使用
连接词,使作文内容连贯。
[参考范文]
Dear Bob,
I'm sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with
you on Friday afternoon.I have just found that I have to at-
tend an important class meeting that afternoon.I hope the
change will not cause you too much trouble.
Shall we go on Saturday morning?We can set out ear-
ly so that we'll have more time to read and select books.If
it's convenient for you,let's meet at 8:30 outside the school
gate.If not,let me know what time suits you best.I should
be available any time after school next week.
Yours,
Li Hua
[亮点]范文包括了所有要点内容,做到了语意连贯。范文
使用了宾语从句that I have to attend an important class meet-
ing that afternoon the change will not cause you too much
trouble;目的状语从句so that we'll have more time to read and
select books;条件句Ifit's convenient for you;省略句If not等,
长短句结合,使内容更加丰富。
2.感谢信
Dear Alex,
I've just learned you're leaving for the United States
soon.At this moment,I want to express my sincere thanks
to you for your help.
Honestly speaking,but for your help,I wouldn't have
made such great progress in English.With your help,I won
first prize in an English speech contest.Whenever I have
difficulties,you always cheer me up and help me out.Words
can't describe how thankful I am.
Wish you a pleasant journey home.
Yours,
Li Hua
(五)其他类:人物介绍十事件介绍十新闻报道十
网帖
1.人物介绍
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us.They
may be our teachers,parents or one of our elders.As for
me,my father is the person I respect most.My father is a
teacher who loves his work and his students very much.He
works very hard every day but he will also spare some time
to accompany me and share many funny things with me
about his work.
When I come across the problems of learning in my
study,my father will listen to me patiently and encourage
me to overcome the difficulties bravely.He achieved a lot
in his work,respected by his students.So,in my mind my
father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply.
2.事件介绍
Hello,everyone!Aiming at promoting Chinese cul-
ture,a students'traditional Chinese painting exhibition is
held by our school in the library from May 30th to
June 5th.
As someone who has visited the exhibition yesterday,I
personally thought it was amazing.It not only shows us dif-
ferent types of painting,but also various tools related to
painting,such as brush pens,papers and so on.Apart from
displaying,there are many other great activities like a paint-
ing knowledge quiz,lectures and games.
It is a visual feast that anyone who's interested in tra
ditional Chinese painting should no miss.
[范文亮点]宣传稿应着重于宣传该展览的亮点,以达到
吸引更多人来观展的目的。根据题目要求,先开门见山指
出该展览的基本信息(时间和地点),第二段在介绍观展感
受时应把展览的亮点一并写进去,如展览中有什么值得看
或者有哪些特别的活动等等;最后总结该展览并推荐更多
人来观展。在写作过程中,多使用高级句型和结构,如范
文中的定语从句,现在分词作状语和过去分词作后置定语
等,这样文章读起来不会显得索然无味。
3.新闻报道
[审题指导]本篇作文要求写一篇报道。考生需要运用
简洁精练的语言概述事件的主要内容,文章中应包含新闻
报道的五要素(5W:何时when,何地where,何人who,何
因why,何事what);在新闻报道中应避免使用第一人称,
应从第三视角进行客观描述;活动已经结束,因此应用一
般过去时。
考生要紧扣主题,展开想象,从参加人员、跑步路线、
活动反响等方面进行写作,使每一个要点都得到明确的
体现
[参考范文]
A Cross-Country Running Race
Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary cross-country
running race,which nearly drew the attention of every
student and teacher of our school.
The students selected from every class took part in the
competition.The route measured five kilometers,from our
school gate to the foot of Nanshan Mountain.Every runner
tried their best to finish the task,with their classmates
along the way giving them necessarily help as well as en-
couragement.At last,all the runners managed to arrive at
the finish line,receiving cheers from all the directions.
8
The activity was highly spoken of,because not only
did it provide chance for us to exercise,but also made us
more cohesive.
4.网帖
[审题分析]
审体裁
应用文(网帖)
以第一人称为主,
英文跟帖
审人称
第三人称为辅
和时态
以一般现在时为主
六项提名的概括
审要点
你的推荐
推荐理由
[思路点拨]
本题为应用文中的论坛跟帖写作,需符合论坛交流语境,
同时要提出围绕“人类文明音像资料收录”提出推荐。
开头:以论坛交流感的问候切入,快速概括六项提名共性
(如涵盖语言、建筑、艺术、自然、科技等维度,展现人类文
明的多元与独特),自然引出后续推荐内容。
主体:先点明所选内容(可从六项里选,或另推合理项),再
从“文明代表性”(体现文化独特性、科技/艺术成就等)
“外太空传播价值”(让外星文明/未来人类快速感知地球
魅力、善意等)展开理由阐述,结合具体细节(如高铁的速
度、技术突破:京剧的艺术形式、文化寓意)增强说服力。
结尾:总结推荐内容的意义,呼应“记录人类文明”的主题,
升华到对文明交流、共享的期待,让跟帖有情感共鸣与
深度。
[高级句式]
篇首句
1.Hi everyone!I'm Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School.
I am deeply fascinated by this initiative,and it strikes me
that..
大家好!我是晨光中学的李津。我对这一提议深深着
迷,并且突然意识到……
2.I'm glad to participate in the discussion on the forum.
From my perspective,the six proposed entries for the
cosmic-bound disc are..
很高兴能参与论坛的讨论。在我看来,这六份拟收录进
飞向宇宙的光盘的提名内容……
篇中句
1.I believe...stands out,they are not only...but also...,
which mirrors the very essence of human ambition to...
我认为…尤为突出,它们不仅……而且…,这反映
了人类…的雄心本质。
2.I'd pick...,an enduring icon of human perseverance,is
not merely a...it is a ...representing...
我会选择……,它作为人类毅力的不朽象征,不仅是一
个…,更是一个…,代表着…
篇尾句
1.In conclusion,while each nominated item holds intrinsic
value,...can serve as a powerful emblem,telling the
universe that we are a species capable of...
总之,尽管每一项提名都有其内在价值,但…可以作
为一个强有力的象征,向宇宙宣告我们是一个有能力
……的物种。
2.Ultimately,be it the ancient grandeur of the pyramids or
the futuristic vitality of high-speed trains,what truly
matters is that...
最终,无论是金字塔的古老宏伟,还是高铁的未来活力,
真正重要的是……
1
[参考范文]
Hi everyone!I'm Li Jin from Chenguang Middle
School.Glad to join the forum discussion!The six nomina-
ted entries for the cosmic-bound disc are impressively di-
verse,covering language ("hello"in various tongues),
iconic architecture (the Great Wall and pyramids),tradi-
tional art (Peking Opera),natural harmony (animal sounds),
and modern tech (China's high-speed trains).Together,they
mirror humanity's creativity,history,and bond with cul-
ture and nature.
I believe China's high-speed trains stand out.More
than advanced transport,they're bridges uniting cities and
people.With speeds up to 350km/h,they've revolutionized
travel,shrinking distances to hours.Their vast network
symbolizes human innovation and the drive to foster unity
and shared growth.For extraterrestrial civilizations,they'd
highlight our ambition to build a connected world.
In conclusion,while all nominations are valuable,
high-speed trains powerfully represent our ability to turn
dreams into a unified future.
第二章读后续写
主题1个人成长
Writing 1
[语篇解读]本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者长
期熬夜导致心脏出现问题,医生警告后作者决定改变作息
习惯,最终成功调整并恢复健康的故事。
[详解]
1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句提示可知,本段应描述作者开始改变熬
夜习惯的具体行动和遇到的困难。
②由第二段首句提示可知,本段应描述改变带来的积极
效果和作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:
决定改变——晚上强制关机—一失眠挣扎—一坚
持—努力得到了回报一得到父母认可——感悟
3.词汇激活:
行为类:
关掉:switch off/turn off/shut off
处理:tackle/handle/deal with
消失:vanish/fade away
情绪类:
令人恐惧的:terrifying./hair-raising/horrifying
自豪地:proudly/with pride
欣慰的:relieved/gratified
[点睛][高分句型l]Just as my willpower was about
to crumble,the doctor's stern voice and that terrifying
sharp pain in my chest echoed in my mind,anchoring me
back to reality,(运用了as引导的时间状语从句和现在分
词短语作状语)
[高分句型2]Not only did the heavy burden on my chest
vanish,but an unprecedented sense of vitality also flowed
through my veins.(运用了部分倒装句)
[参考范文]
Struck by the doctor's warning,I knew I had to make
a change.That very night,I initiated my battle against my
deep-rooted habits.I forcibly switched off my laptop and
phone at 10 p.m.,placing them completely out of reach.
However,my rebellious biological clock refused to cooper-
ate.I tossed and turned in the darkness,the silence of the
room amplifying my anxiety.The urge to grab my phone
and drown in videos was overwhelmingly tempting.Just as
my willpower was about to crumble,the doctor's stern
voice and that terrifying sharp pain in my chest echoed in
9最新真题
分类特训
第五部分写作
第一章应用文写作
(一)短文投稿十邀请信(邮件)十申请信(邮件)
1.短文投稿
Writing1(2026全国一卷)
你校英文报“Opinion”栏目正在征稿,请同学们对未来大学生活中的学习(Study)、社交(Social--
ize)、睡眠(Sleep)这三件事按重要性进行排序,并阐述理由。
请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80左右;(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Ranking My College Life Essentials
Writing2(2026浙江1月卷)
假如你是李华,你发现校图书馆的书籍存在被勾画涂写的现象。请你向英文报投稿,内容包括:
(1)具体说明情况;(2)呼吁爱护书籍。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Treasure Library Books:Our Shared Responsibility
Writing3(2024浙江1月卷)
请你写一篇短文向校英文报“Sports and Health”栏目投稿,向同学们推荐一项适合课间开展的运
动,内容包括:
1.介绍这项运动;2.说明推荐理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
87
Stand Up and Exercise,Everybody!
2.邀请信(邮件)
Writing1(2022新高考I&.Ⅱ卷)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk'”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做
一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Caroline,
些
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Writing2(2022北京卷)
假定你是李华,请给外国学生Ji写一封邀请信,邀请其为自己的同学线上分享英语写作经验的
交流会。
1.交流会内容及邀请他的原因;2.时间及其他注意事项。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
…
------
Yours,
Li Hua
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3.申请信(邮件)
Writing1(2023天津卷)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,通过交换生项目在英国某中学就读,校方为加强中英文化交流,
将举办“中国工坊”活动。该活动主题涉及中华美食、中国传统手工艺、中国书法和绘画,拟招募学生
现场教授相关技能。请按照以下提示,写一封申请信:
(1)申请参加本次活动;
(2)阐述你对本次文化交流活动意义的理解;
(3)结合个人兴趣和特长,说明拟教授何种技能,并阐述原因
参考词汇:中国工坊Chinese Workshop
中华美食Chinese cuisine
整
手工艺handicraft
书法calligraphy
注意:(1)词数不少于100:
郑
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
典
辐
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin
Writing2(全国I卷)
假定你是李华,暑期在伦敦学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展览。请写一封信申请做志愿
者,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事情。
製
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.结束语已为你写好。
阳
的
Yours,
Li Hua
(二)普通信(邮件)+通知
1.普通信(邮件)
Writing1(2024新课标I&.Ⅱ卷)
假定你是李华,上周五你们班在公园上了一堂美术课。请你给英国朋友Chis写一封邮件分享这
次经历,内容包括:
(1)你完成的作品;(2)你的感想。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
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Dear Chris,
I'm writing to share with you an art class I had in a park last Friday.
--。-----…------------
---------------------------。-----
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2(2023北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团
活动,他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
(1)活动形式;(2)活动内容。
注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
------------。---------
-------------,-----------,------
Yours,
Li Hua
2.通知
(全国Ⅱ卷)
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英文短片Growing Togeth
er,内容包括:
1.短片内容:学校的发展;2.放映时间、地点;3.欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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(三)建议信十求助信十告知信十道款信十发言稿(演讲稿)十咨询信
1.建议信
Writing1(2026全国二卷)
假定你是李华,外教Kate计划将你们班的英语作文汇编成册。请给Kate写封邮件,内容包括:
(1)建议配图;(2)自荐承担画图工作。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;(2)请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Kate,
It's a great idea to make a collection of our English essays.
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing2(2025全国一卷)
假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教Jenny提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess
who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.你的选择;2.说明理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
Yours,
Li Hua
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Writing3(2025北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友
Jim打算参加,为此发来邮件,就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复,内容包括:
1.提出的建议;2.建议的理由。
提示词:倡议proposal
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
Writing4(2024北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的外国好友Jim准备给其校报的Asia Today栏目投稿。得
知今年新中国成立75周年,他打算重点介绍中国的发展成就,发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文
给他回复,内容包括:
1.建议投稿内容;2.就以上建议简要说明理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
2.求助信
行教程
Li Hua
(2021全国甲卷)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封
邮件给外国朋友Chs,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;2.征求建议;3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
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3.告知信
(2021天津卷)
假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chis家,他母亲Nancy通过电
子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业,并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复,内容包括:
1.表示感谢并问候;2.计划与家人一起做的事情;3.你决定选择哪个专业,为学好该专业做何
准备。
注意:1.词数不少于100;2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入
总词数。
Dear Nancy,
Yours,
Li Jin
4.道歉信
(2021北京卷)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。
请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因:2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours,
Li Hua
5.发言稿(演讲稿)
Writing1(2025浙江1月卷)
你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象
写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.陈述看法;2.提出建议
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答
My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus
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Writing2(2024全国甲卷)
英语课要求做课堂展示,请你根据所给图片,以Development of Transport in China为题写一篇
发言稿。
shared bicycle
high-speed train
new energy vehicle
注意:1.词数100左右;2.题目和首句已为你写好。
Development of Transport in China
From the vehicle of horses to today's convenient transport,Chinese transport has seen an
enormous development.
6.咨询信
(2025全国二卷)
假定你是校英文报编辑李华,外教Chis上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。请给
Chris写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.询问进展;2.提醒交稿时间。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(四)致款信十感谢信
1.致歉信
(全国Ⅲ卷)
假定你是李华,与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店,因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件,内容包括:
1.表示歉意;2.说明原因;3.另约时间。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.感谢信
(浙江卷)
假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alx即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内
容包括:
1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
(五)其他类:人物介绍十事件介绍十新间报道十网帖
1.人物介绍
(2020新课标I卷)》
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
The person I respect
We have a lot of respectable people around us.
2.事件介绍
(2021浙江卷)
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;2.观展感受;3.推荐观展。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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3.新闻报道
(2020山东卷)》
假定你是李华,上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道,内容
包括:
1.参加人员;2.跑步路线:从校门口到南山脚下;3.活动反响。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;2.请按如下格式作答。
A Cross-Country Running Race
4.网帖
(2025天津卷)
假如你是晨光中学的李津,你在宇航爱好者论坛“Space Awaits”看到一则英文讨论帖:一张记录
地球文明的光盘将随探测器飞向外太空,光盘拟收录具有代表性的音像资料。根据各国网友的提名,
图中六项人气较高。请你根据以下提示用英文跟帖:
(1)对提名的项目进行概括性评论;
(2)从中选取或另行推介一个你认为最值得收录的项目,并说明理由。
Space Awaits
Hello in different languages
the Great Wall
Posted on June 8th,2025 4:30
Peking Ope
pyramids
Li Jin
p.m.
animal sounds in nature
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China's high-speed train
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
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