全册单元写作辅导及参考范文（专项训练）-2026-2027学年闽教版英语五年级上册

**基本信息** 聚焦单元核心话题，通过“话题解读-审题指导-范文示范”三阶训练体系，系统培养语言表达与逻辑组织能力，融合文化意识与思维品质。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |Unit 1|3篇范文+1篇延伸短文|审题问题清单（5问）、“总-分-总”结构模板|季节/天气词汇→句型（It's.../I wear...）→场景迁移（城市天气）| |Unit 2|3篇对比范文|月份表达规范、“be going to”计划句型|月份词汇→节日/活动关联→一般将来时运用| |Unit 3|2篇不同类型范文|日期序数词用法、时间顺序叙事法|日期表达→家庭活动安排→情感融入| |Unit 4|2篇主题范文|职业名称冠词搭配、“want to be”梦想表达|职业词汇→工作内容描述→个人志向阐述|

闽教版英语新版 五年级上册 闽教版英语五年级上册 （2026秋季新版） 单元习作辅导及范文参考 福建专版 适合每日晨读默背、短语、语法句型熟悉、词汇积累 Unit 1 — Weather in Different Seasons 一、话题解读 核心话题：介绍季节与天气（My Favorite Season/The Weather in My City）可迁移的写作场景：介绍自己最喜欢的季节、描述某个城市的天气特点、介绍不同季节的着装和活动。 写作要求：①能正确使用季节、天气、活动等核心词汇。能运用句型"what season is it?" "It's " "We can .." "I wear ..." 进行描述。②内容涵盖季节名称、天气特征、着装及活动，条理清晰。③字数控制在60-80 词，语句通顺。拼写正确。④考试定位：该话题常见于看图写话、命题作文（如"My Favorite Season"），考查学生综合运用单元词汇与句型进行连贯表达的能力。 二、写作任务 请围绕“我最喜欢的季节”这一主题，写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的季节是什么，该季节的天气怎么样，你穿什么衣服，以及你在这个季节喜欢做什么活动？ 三、审题指导 ◎可延伸的常见命题： ➊ "My Favorite Season" ➋ "The Weather in My City" ➌ "Four Seasons in My Eyes" ➍ "A Nice Season" ◎写作内容问题清单： ➊ What is your favorite season? ➋ What is the weather like in this season? ➌ What do you wear in this season? ➍ What can you do in this season? ➎ Why do you like this season? ●注意事项：注意季节单词的首字母不需要大写（除非在句首）。正确使用"It's+天气形容词"描述天气。活动短语前使用"can"或"like to"，注意动词形式。 四、参考范文 范文一：My Favorite Season — Spring My favorite season is spring. In spring, the weather is warm and sunny. The trees are green and the flowers are beautiful. I wear a jacket and a pair of pants. It is not too hot or too cold. I can fly a kite with my friends in the park. I can also go for a walk with my family. I like spring because everything comes back to life. I love the birds singing in the trees. Spring is a wonderful season! 我最喜欢的季节是春天。在春天，天气温暖而晴朗。树木郁郁葱葱，花儿绽放得格外美丽。我穿着一件夹克和一条裤子，温度适中，既不太热也不太冷。我可以在公园里和朋友们一起放风筝，也可以和家人一起散步。我喜欢春天，因为万物复苏。我喜爱鸟儿在树上欢快地歌唱。春天真是一个美妙的季节！ 范文二：My Favorite Season — Summer My favorite season is summer. In summer, the weather is very hot and sunny. I wear a T-shirt, shorts and a pair of sandals. I also wear a hat to keep cool. I can swim in the swimming pool with my friends. I can also eat ice cream and watermelons. They are so yummy! Sometimes I go to the beach with my family. I like summer because I have no school and I can have a lot of fun. Summer is my best season! 我最喜欢的季节是夏天。夏天，天气炎热且阳光明媚。我穿着T恤、短裤和凉鞋。我还戴着一顶帽子来保持凉爽。我可以和朋友们在游泳池里游泳。我也可以吃冰淇淋和西瓜。它们太美味了！有时我和家人一起去海滩。我喜欢夏天，因为不用上学，我可以尽情享受乐趣。夏天是我最喜欢的季节！ 延伸短文 The Weather in My City — Zhangzhou我所在城市的天气——漳州 My city is Zhangzhou. It is in the southeast of Fujian Province. The weather here is warm and nice all year round. The average temperature is about 21℃. So people call it a "big greenhouse". 我的城市是漳州。它位于福建省东南部。这里全年天气温暖宜人，平均气温大约21℃，所以人们称它为"大温室"。 In spring, the weather gets warm. It often rains. Sometimes it is sunny, and sometimes it is cloudy. I wear a jacket and pants. The trees turn green and the flowers bloom. I can go for a walk in the park. 春天，天气变暖，经常下雨。有时晴朗，有时多云。我穿一件夹克和长裤。树木变绿，花儿盛开。我可以去公园散步。 In summer, it is very hot and sunny. The temperature can be over 35℃. There are often typhoons and thunderstorms in July and August. I wear a T-shirt, shorts and a hat. I can swim in the pool and eat ice cream. It is so cool! 夏天，天气非常炎热晴朗，气温可能超过35℃。七八月份常有台风和雷阵雨。我穿T恤、短裤，戴帽子。我可以去游泳池游泳、吃冰淇淋，太凉快了！ In autumn, the weather is cool and comfortable. The sky is blue and clear. I wear a long-sleeve shirt. I can fly a kite with my friends on the playground. 秋天，天气凉爽舒适，天空湛蓝清澈。我穿长袖衬衫。我可以和朋友们在操场上放风筝。 In winter, it is not very cold. The temperature is about 10℃ to 15℃. It seldom snows. I wear a thick coat. I can play basketball with my classmates. The sun is warm and nice. 冬天，天气不太冷，气温大约在10℃到15℃之间，很少下雪。我穿一件厚外套。我可以和同学打篮球，阳光温暖而舒适。 I love the weather in Zhangzhou. It is a beautiful city all year round! 我喜欢漳州的天气。这里一年四季都是座美丽的城市！ 短文要点解析 项目 内 容 主题 The Weather in My City — Zhangzhou 结构 总起 → 春夏秋冬分述 → 总结 核心句型 It is... / The weather is... / I wear... / I can... 漳州真实特色 年均温21℃（“大温室”）、夏季超35℃、有台风和雷阵雨、冬季温和少雪 词汇亮点 average temperature（平均气温）, typhoon（台风）, thunderstorm（雷阵雨）, comfortable（舒适的）, seldom（很少） ，greenhouse（温室），all year round（全年） 难度等级 适合五、六年级学生 Unit 2 — Months of the Year 一、话题解读 核心话题：介绍月份与计划（My Favorite Month/MyTraveling Plan）。可迁移的写作场景：介绍自己最喜欢的月份、描述某个月份的天气和活动、制定旅行计划、介绍节日所在月份。 写作要求：①能正确使用月份、天气、活动等核心词汇。②能运用句型"what's your favorite month?" "I'm going to ..." "It's ... in .." 进行表达。③内容涵盖月份名称、天气特征、可做活动或旅行计划，逻辑清晰。④字数控制在60-80 词，语句通顺，拼写正确。⑤考试定位：该话题常见于命题作文（如"My Favorite Month" "My Traveling Plan"），考查学生运用月份词汇和一般将来时（“be going to"）进行计划描述的能力。 二、写作任务 请围绕"我最喜欢的月份"这一主题，写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的月份是几月，这个月份的天气怎么样，有什么节日或特别之处，以及你在这个月份喜欢做什么或打算做什么。 三、审题指导 ◎可延伸的常见命题： ➊ "My Favorite Month" ➋"My Birthday Month* ➌"A Wonderful Month" ➍ "My Traveling Plan" ◎写作内容问题清单： ➊ What is your favorite month? ➋ what is the weather like in this month? ➌ Is there any holiday in this month? ➍ What do you like to do in this month? ➎ Why do you like this month? ●注意事项：月份单词的首字母要大写（如"January"，"February"）。正确使用“in+月份"表示"在几月"。描述计划时可用"I'm going to "或"I will"。 四、参考范文 范文一：My Favorite Month There are twelve months in a year. My favorite month is October. In October, the weather is cool and comfortable. The leaves turn yellow and red, and it is very beautiful. National Day is in October. I have a seven-day holiday. I am going to visit Beijing with my parents. We are going to see the Great Wall and Tian'anmen Square. I am also going to eat Beijing Roast Duck. I think it will be a wonderful trip. I love October because it is a special month for our country and for me. What's your favorite month? 一年有十二个月。我最喜欢的月份是十月。在十月，天气凉爽舒适。树叶变黄变红，非常美丽。 国庆节在十月。我有七天的假期。我要和父母一起去北京。我们要去看长城和天安门广场。我还要吃北京烤鸭。我觉得这将是一次精彩的旅行。 我喜欢十月，因为对于我们的国家和对于我来说，这是一个特殊的月份。你最喜欢的月份是什么？ 范文二：My Favorite Month — December December is my favorite month of the year. It is very cold in December, but I like it because I can wear a warm coat and a scarf. Sometimes it snows, and everything turns white. It looks like a fairy tale world. Christmas is in December. It is a happy time. My family always decorates the Christmas tree together. I am going to make some Christmas cards for my friends and teachers. I am also going to have a big dinner with my family on Christmas Eve. December is the last month of the year. I am going to say goodbye to the old year and welcome the new year. I love December so much! 十二月是我一年中最喜欢的月份。虽然十二月天气很冷，但我很喜欢，因为我可以穿上暖和的外套，戴上围巾。有时还会下雪，万物都变得洁白无瑕。那景象宛如童话世界。 圣诞节在十二月。这是一个快乐的时节。我的家人总是会一起装饰圣诞树。我要为我的朋友和老师制作一些圣诞卡片。我还打算在圣诞前夜和家人共进一顿丰盛的晚餐。 十二月是一年的最后一个月。我要向旧的一年说再见，并迎接新的一年。我特别喜爱十二月！ 范文三：My Favorite Month — June June is my favorite month. It is the beginning of summer. The weather is warm and sunny. The flowers are blooming everywhere, and the birds are singing in the trees. I feel very happy in June. Children's Day is in June. It is a very special day for me. On that day, I am going to have a party with my classmates. We are going to sing, dance and play games together. My parents are also going to give me a gift. I am very excited. In June, the summer holiday is coming soon. I am going to swim with my friends and eat ice cream. June is a month full of joy and fun. I love it very much! 六月是我最喜欢的月份。它是夏天的开始。天气温暖而晴朗。到处鲜花盛开，鸟儿在树上歌唱。在六月，我感到非常快乐。 儿童节在六月。对我来说，这是一个非常特别的日子。那天，我要和同学们一起举办派对。我们要一起唱歌、跳舞、玩游戏。我的父母也会给我一份礼物。我非常兴奋。 六月，暑假即将来临。我要和朋友们一起去游泳，吃冰淇淋。六月是一个充满欢乐和乐趣的月份。我非常喜欢它！ 对比项 范文一 (October) 范文二 (December) 范文三 (June) 月份 October December June 天气 cool and comfortable cold, snowy warm and sunny 节日/活动 National Day Christmas Children's Day 计划 visit Beijing, see the Great Wall make cards, have a big dinner have a party, swim, eat ice cream 特色描写 leaves turn yellow and red a fairy tale world flowers blooming, birds singing Unit 3 — Plans and Dates 一、话题解读 核心话题：介绍日期与计划（My Birthday/Mother's Day Plans）。可迁移的写作场景：介绍自已的生日日期、描述母亲节或其他节日的计划、写寻物启事、写旅行计划。 写作要求：①能正确使用序数词（日期）和月份词汇。② 能运用句型"What's the date today?""lt's .." "I'll ." "We'll." 表达日期和计划。③内容涵盖日期、活动安排、人物等，条理清晰。④字数控制在 60-80 词，语句通顺，拼写正确。⑤考试定位：该话题常见于命题作文（如"My Birthday""Mother's Day Plan"）、应用文（如"Lost Notice"），考查学生表达日期和运用一般将来时（will）进行计划描述的能力。 二、写作任务 请围绕"母亲节的计划"这一主题，写一篇短文，介绍母亲节是哪一天，你和家人打算为妈妈做些什么（如做礼物、做家务、说祝福语等），以及你的感受。 三、审题指导 ◎可延伸的常见命题： ➊ "My Birthday" ➋"Mother's Day Plan" ➌"A Special Day”➍ "A Lost Notice" ◎写作内容问题清单： ➊ What is the date of Mother's Day? ➋ What will you do for your mom? ➌ What will your family members do? ➍ How do you feel? ●注意事项：日期表达要用序数词（如“May 8th"）。将来计划用“will"或"be going to"。注意人称和动词的一致性。 四、参考范文 范文一：应用记叙型 — Mother's Day Plan Mother's Day is on the second Sunday of May. It is a special day for our mothers. On this day, my father and I are going to do something nice for my mom. In the morning, I am going to make a beautiful card for her. I will draw some flowers and write "I love you, Mom!" on it. My father is going to cook breakfast for her. He will make eggs, bread and milk. In the afternoon, we are going to buy a big cake and some pink carnations. My mother loves carnations very much. In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner together. I think my mother will be very happy. I love my mother. She works very hard every day. I want to say "Thank you, Mom!" on Mother's Day. 母亲节在五月的第二个星期日。对于我们的母亲来说，这是一个特殊的日子。 这一天，我和父亲打算为妈妈做点好事。早上，我要为她制作一张精美的卡片。我会在上面画一些花朵，并写上“我爱你，妈妈！”。我父亲则打算为她做早餐。他会做鸡蛋、面包和牛奶。 下午，我们打算买一个大的蛋糕和一些粉红色的康乃馨。我妈妈非常喜欢康乃馨。晚上，我们打算一起享用一顿丰盛的晚餐。我想我妈妈会非常开心的。 我爱我的妈妈。她每天工作都很努力。我想在母亲节对她说：“谢谢您，妈妈！”。 类型特点： 以“母亲节的计划”为具体事件，按时间顺序（morning → afternoon → evening）展开，详细描写家庭活动安排，运用 be going to 和 will 两种将来时表达，同时融入情感表达。 范文二：日记自述型 — A Special Day A Special Day Sunday, May 12, 2026 Sunny Today is Mother's Day! It is a very special day for my family. In the morning, I got up early. I said "Happy Mother's Day!" to my mom. She was very surprised and happy. Then I gave her a card. I made it by myself. There was a big red heart on it. I also wrote "Mom, you are the best mother in the world!" After breakfast, my sister and I cleaned the house. My father washed the dishes. My mother didn't do anything. She just sat on the sofa and watched TV. She said, "This is the best Mother's Day ever!" In the evening, we had a big dinner together. My mother smiled all day. I felt very warm and happy. I love my mother. I want to make her happy every day. 一个特殊的日子 2026年5月12日 星期日 天气晴 今天是母亲节！对于我的家人来说，这是一个非常特殊的日子。 早上，我早早地起床了。我对妈妈说：“母亲节快乐！”她非常惊讶和开心。然后我送给她一张卡片。这张卡片是我自己做的，上面有一个大大的红色爱心。我还写道：“妈妈，你是世界上最好的妈妈！” 早餐后，我和妹妹打扫了房子。我爸爸洗了碗。我妈妈什么也没做。她只是坐在沙发上看电视。她说：“这是有史以来最好的母亲节！” 晚上，我们一起享用了一顿丰盛的晚餐。妈妈整天都笑容满面。我感到非常温暖和幸福。我爱我的妈妈。我想让她每天都开心。 类型特点： 以日记体形式呈现，包含日期、星期、天气等日记要素，采用一般过去时叙述已发生的事件，语言生动真实，情感细腻自然，侧重个人感受与家庭温馨氛围的描写。 Unit 4 — Our Dream Jobs 一、话题解读 核心话题：介绍职业与梦想（MyDream Job/Jobs in MyFamily）。可迁移的写作场景：介绍家人的职业、描述自己梦想的职业、介绍不同职业的工作内容。 写作要求： ①能正确使用职业名称和工作地点的词汇。② 能运用句型 "what does he/she do?" "He/She is a ." "I want to be a ..." 进行表达。③内容涵盖职业名称、工作内容、工作地点、个人梦想等，条理清晰。④字数控制在60-80词，语句通顺。拼写正确。⑤考试定位：该话题常见于命题作文（如"My Dream Job""My Family's Jobs"），考查学生运用职业词汇和表达意愿、描述工作内容的能力。 二、写作任务 请围绕“我的梦想职业”这一主题，写一篇短文，介绍你长大后想做什么工作，为什么想从事这个职业，这个职业有什么意义或有趣之处。 三、审题指导 ◎可延伸的常见命题： ➊"My Dream Job" ➋ "What Do You Want to Be?" ➌"Jobs in My Family" ➍ "A Great Job" ◎写作内容问题清单： ➊ What do you want to be? ➋ Where does this person work? ➌ What does this person do? ➍ Why do you want to be a ...? ➎ How do you feel about this job? ●注意事项：职业名词前要用冠词"a"或"an”（如"a doctor"，“an astronaut"）。描述工作内容时注意动词第三人称单数形式（如"He works"，"She helps"）。表达梦想时可用"I want to be ."。 四、参考范文 范文一：Jobs in My Family（家人的职业） There are three people in my family. My father is a doctor. He works in a big hospital. He helps sick people every day. He is very busy but he likes his job very much. My mother is a teacher. She works in a primary school. She teaches English. She loves her students and her students love her, too. I am a student. I study hard because I want to be a scientist in the future. I want to invent new things and help people live a better life. I think all jobs are great! 我家有三口人。我父亲是一名医生。他在一家大医院工作。他每天帮助病人。他虽然很忙，但非常喜欢自己的工作。我母亲是一名教师。她在小学任教。她教英语。她爱她的学生，她的学生也爱她。我是一名学生。我努力学习，因为我想将来成为一名科学家。我想发明新事物，帮助人们过上更好的生活。我认为所有的工作都很棒！ 范文二：My Dream Job（我的梦想职业） Everyone has a dream job. I want to be a pilot when I grow up. Why do I want to be a pilot? Because I think flying in the sky is very cool and exciting. A pilot works on a plane. He flies the plane to different cities and countries. He can see beautiful clouds and blue sky every day. This job is not easy. A pilot needs to be careful and strong. I will study hard and do more sports to be a good pilot. I hope my dream can come true one day. 每个人都有梦想中的工作。我长大后想当一名飞行员。我为什么想当飞行员呢？因为我觉得在天空中飞翔非常酷且令人兴奋。飞行员在飞机上工作。他驾驶飞机飞往不同的城市和国家。他每天都能看到美丽的云朵和蓝天。这份工作并不容易。飞行员需要细心且强壮。我会努力学习，多做运动，成为一名优秀的飞行员。我希望我的梦想有一天能成真。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $